| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 82.05% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 557 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 10.23% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 557 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "resonated" | | 1 | "shimmered" | | 2 | "throbbed" | | 3 | "rhythmic" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "scanned" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "echoed" | | 8 | "scanning" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 58 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 22 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 34.83% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 12 | | markdownWords | 46 | | totalWords | 557 | | ratio | 0.083 | | matches | | 0 | "We did not pay the toll," | | 1 | "The gate remembers names," | | 2 | "But doors remember hands." | | 3 | "The gate opens," | | 4 | "We are already inside." | | 5 | "Don't get ahead of yourself." | | 6 | "Sweetness," | | 7 | "Smells like rotting honey," | | 8 | "It breathes," | | 9 | "The air tastes of old wine." | | 10 | "You drew steel," | | 11 | "Better ready than sorry," |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.16% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 557 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.26 | | worstName | "Isolde" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | Nyx | 4 | | Shade | 1 | | Aurora | 6 | | London | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.872 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 87.50% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like wind caught in a cavern, vibr" |
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| 20.47% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.795 | | wordCount | 557 | | matches | | 0 | "not like settling soil, but like breathing skin" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 16 | | mean | 34.81 | | std | 20.74 | | cv | 0.596 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 75 | | 2 | 38 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 40 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 71 | | 8 | 38 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 48 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 21 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 105 | | matches | | |
| 93.60% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 58 | | ratio | 0.017 | | matches | | 0 | "One moment they were standing in a London street corner near the park; the next, a sprawling vineyard opened before them." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 563 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 13 | | adverbRatio | 0.023090586145648313 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008880994671403197 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 58 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 58 | | mean | 9.6 | | std | 5.7 | | cv | 0.593 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 51.15% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.3793103448275862 | | totalSentences | 58 | | uniqueOpeners | 22 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 94.07% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Her left wrist throbbed where" | | 1 | "It smelled of roasted spices," | | 2 | "Her silver hair floated as" | | 3 | "She did not touch the" | | 4 | "*We did not pay the" | | 5 | "*We are already inside.*" | | 6 | "She looked at the pendant." | | 7 | "They pushed past Isolde." | | 8 | "They looked ripe, heavy with" | | 9 | "Her ankles hovered inches above" | | 10 | "She walked toward a low-hanging" | | 11 | "It passed through the material." | | 12 | "*It breathes,* Nyx whispered." | | 13 | "She drew the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 14 | "*You drew steel,* Isolde said," | | 15 | "She did not swallow." | | 16 | "She merely held the fruit" |
| | ratio | 0.315 | |
| 15.56% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "The iron gate groaned as" | | 1 | "Aurora stepped forward, her boot" | | 2 | "Her left wrist throbbed where" | | 3 | "The Heartstone Pendant resting against" | | 4 | "Nyx trailed half a step" | | 5 | "Violet eyes scanned the horizon" | | 6 | "The sky above stretched wide" | | 7 | "It smelled of roasted spices," | | 8 | "Isolde stood at the gate’s" | | 9 | "Her silver hair floated as" | | 10 | "She did not touch the" | | 11 | "The half-fae raised a hand," | | 12 | "*We did not pay the" | | 13 | "The seer’s pale lavender eyes" | | 14 | "*The gate remembers names,* she" | | 15 | "*The gate opens,* Nyx whispered." | | 16 | "The voice sounded like wind" | | 17 | "The Shade’s shoulders broadened, shadow" | | 18 | "*We are already inside.*" | | 19 | "Aurora swallowed the taste of" |
| | ratio | 0.889 | |
| 92.59% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "*But doors remember hands.*" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 28.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 25 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The iron gate groaned as the hinges twisted, metal grinding against metal in a sound that resonated deep within the bone marrow." | | 1 | "Aurora stepped forward, her boot crunching on gravel that shimmered like crushed amethyst." | | 2 | "No wind moved the tall, twisted vines that draped over the wrought-iron archway, but the scent drifted through immediately." | | 3 | "She walked toward a low-hanging branch that held a cluster of dark grapes." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |