Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBFT9EDEMVQEDR8ME8X39E4

Run Details

Duration:
26.6s
Cost:
$0.001380
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The iron gate groaned as the hinges twisted, metal grinding against metal in a sound that resonated deep within the bone marrow. Aurora stepped forward, her boot crunching on gravel that shimmered like crushed amethyst. Her left wrist throbbed where the crescent-shaped scar marked the skin. The Heartstone Pendant resting against her sternum warmed, a rhythmic pulse syncing with the beat of her own heart. Nyx trailed half a step behind, their form flickering between solid shadow and the misty air. Violet eyes scanned the horizon without a blink. The sky above stretched wide in a warm amber glow, devoid of clouds yet heavier than a storm. No wind moved the tall, twisted vines that draped over the wrought-iron archway, but the scent drifted through immediately. It smelled of roasted spices, fermented fruit, and something underlying that tasted of ash. Isolde stood at the gate’s edge. Her silver hair floated as if submerged in water, though the air remained stagnant. She did not touch the latch. The half-fae raised a hand, palm outward, blocking the path behind them. *We did not pay the toll,* Isolde said. Aurora turned. The seer’s pale lavender eyes held no movement. *The gate remembers names,* she continued. *But doors remember hands.* *The gate opens,* Nyx whispered. The voice sounded like wind caught in a cavern, vibrating through the chest rather than the ear. The Shade’s shoulders broadened, shadow stretching out to touch the gravel at their feet. *We are already inside.* Aurora swallowed the taste of copper. She looked at the pendant. The crimson gem glowed, a faint inner light battling the amber dust in the air. *Don't get ahead of yourself.* They pushed past Isolde. The stone archway dissolved into light. One moment they were standing in a London street corner near the park; the next, a sprawling vineyard opened before them. The stalks were thick as human arms, leaves dark red and curling at the edges like clawed fingers. Fruit hung low. They looked ripe, heavy with juice that dripped onto the soil below, sizzling where the liquid met the earth. Isolde moved without planting her feet. Her ankles hovered inches above the ground, leaving no footprints on the dirt. She walked toward a low-hanging branch that held a cluster of dark grapes. A single drop of juice fell. *Sweetness,* Isolde murmured. *Smells like rotting honey,* Aurora said, stepping carefully around a root that writhed slightly under her weight. The ground shifted, not like settling soil, but like breathing skin. Nyx reached out a hand to touch a wall of shadow that stretched high above the vineyard. It passed through the material. *It breathes,* Nyx whispered. *The air tastes of old wine.* The sound of chewing echoed through the clearing. Not wind. Not insects. A rhythmic crunch. Aurora froze. She drew the Fae-Forged Blade from her belt, the silver glowing faintly as she unsheathed the leaf-shaped dagger. The metal hummed against the heat radiating from the gemstone in their midst. *You drew steel,* Isolde said, plucking a grape from the branch. *Better ready than sorry,* Aurora replied, scanning the perimeter. The amber light seemed to come from everywhere. Shadows were too sharp, defined by angles rather than soft diffusion. Isolde popped the grape into her mouth. No sound of chewing followed. She did not swallow. She merely held the fruit
created_at"2026-02-25T22:48:18.642Z" 2/25/2026, 10:48:18 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
82.05% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount557
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
10.23% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount557
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"resonated"
count1
1
word"shimmered"
count1
2
word"throbbed"
count1
3
word"rhythmic"
count2
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"scanning"
count1
highlights
0"resonated"
1"shimmered"
2"throbbed"
3"rhythmic"
4"pulse"
5"scanned"
6"weight"
7"echoed"
8"scanning"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences58
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
34.83% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans12
markdownWords46
totalWords557
ratio0.083
matches
0"We did not pay the toll,"
1"The gate remembers names,"
2"But doors remember hands."
3"The gate opens,"
4"We are already inside."
5"Don't get ahead of yourself."
6"Sweetness,"
7"Smells like rotting honey,"
8"It breathes,"
9"The air tastes of old wine."
10"You drew steel,"
11"Better ready than sorry,"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
87.16% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount557
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.26
worstName"Isolde"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Isolde7
Nyx4
Shade1
Aurora6
London1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Nyx"
2"Shade"
3"Aurora"
places
0"Pendant"
1"London"
globalScore0.872
windowScore1
87.50% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like wind caught in a cavern, vibr"
20.47% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.795
wordCount557
matches
0"not like settling soil, but like breathing skin"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs16
mean34.81
std20.74
cv0.596
sampleLengths
065
175
238
38
420
540
631
771
838
93
1028
1132
1248
1311
1428
1521
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs105
matches
0"were standing"
93.60% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences58
ratio0.017
matches
0"One moment they were standing in a London street corner near the park; the next, a sprawling vineyard opened before them."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount563
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.023090586145648313
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.008880994671403197
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences58
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences58
mean9.6
std5.7
cv0.593
sampleLengths
022
113
211
319
416
58
618
719
814
96
1014
116
1212
138
142
158
166
174
185
1917
2014
214
226
235
2415
255
264
276
2821
2918
303
3119
326
3313
3413
356
363
3717
3811
3917
405
414
426
438
442
452
463
472
4818
4913
51.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3793103448275862
totalSentences58
uniqueOpeners22
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
94.07% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences54
matches
0"Her left wrist throbbed where"
1"It smelled of roasted spices,"
2"Her silver hair floated as"
3"She did not touch the"
4"*We did not pay the"
5"*We are already inside.*"
6"She looked at the pendant."
7"They pushed past Isolde."
8"They looked ripe, heavy with"
9"Her ankles hovered inches above"
10"She walked toward a low-hanging"
11"It passed through the material."
12"*It breathes,* Nyx whispered."
13"She drew the Fae-Forged Blade"
14"*You drew steel,* Isolde said,"
15"She did not swallow."
16"She merely held the fruit"
ratio0.315
15.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences54
matches
0"The iron gate groaned as"
1"Aurora stepped forward, her boot"
2"Her left wrist throbbed where"
3"The Heartstone Pendant resting against"
4"Nyx trailed half a step"
5"Violet eyes scanned the horizon"
6"The sky above stretched wide"
7"It smelled of roasted spices,"
8"Isolde stood at the gate’s"
9"Her silver hair floated as"
10"She did not touch the"
11"The half-fae raised a hand,"
12"*We did not pay the"
13"The seer’s pale lavender eyes"
14"*The gate remembers names,* she"
15"*The gate opens,* Nyx whispered."
16"The voice sounded like wind"
17"The Shade’s shoulders broadened, shadow"
18"*We are already inside.*"
19"Aurora swallowed the taste of"
ratio0.889
92.59% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"*But doors remember hands.*"
ratio0.019
28.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The iron gate groaned as the hinges twisted, metal grinding against metal in a sound that resonated deep within the bone marrow."
1"Aurora stepped forward, her boot crunching on gravel that shimmered like crushed amethyst."
2"No wind moved the tall, twisted vines that draped over the wrought-iron archway, but the scent drifted through immediately."
3"She walked toward a low-hanging branch that held a cluster of dark grapes."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
79.9260%