| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.773 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.19% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1312 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 31.40% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1312 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "scanned" | | 5 | "tension" | | 6 | "throbbed" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "reminder" | | 9 | "vibrated" | | 10 | "flickered" | | 11 | "warmth" | | 12 | "loomed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 180 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 180 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 185 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 23 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1312 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.37% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 1235 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 1.05 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Wildflowers | 1 | | Rory | 13 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.974 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 75.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 100 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like it belonged to a funeral from" | | 1 | "felt like water turned to concrete" | | 2 | "sounded like dry leaves skittering on pave" |
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| 47.56% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.524 | | wordCount | 1312 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a snap or a rustle, but a wet tearing sound, like fabric ripping under tension" | | 1 | "not a sound but a pressure behind her eyes" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 185 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 58 | | mean | 22.62 | | std | 15.6 | | cv | 0.69 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 68 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 50 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 42 | | 10 | 47 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 46 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 39 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 35 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 48 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 51 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 45 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 40 | | 31 | 30 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 41 | | 37 | 28 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 34 | | 41 | 25 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 35 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 26 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 29 | | 49 | 23 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 180 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 242 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 185 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "The light did not illuminate the space; it carved it, revealing edges that shouldn't exist." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1238 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.017770597738287562 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0024232633279483036 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 185 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 185 | | mean | 7.09 | | std | 3.95 | | cv | 0.557 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 28.92% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 39 | | diversityRatio | 0.15675675675675677 | | totalSentences | 185 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 162 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 76.79% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 162 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood before the circle" | | 1 | "She checked her watch." | | 2 | "She touched the silver chain" | | 3 | "she told the darkness" | | 4 | "They did not sway." | | 5 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 6 | "She did not flinch." | | 7 | "She scanned the perimeter, her" | | 8 | "She walked toward the center" | | 9 | "Her boots crunched on dry" | | 10 | "She pulled the chain free" | | 11 | "She looked down." | | 12 | "She stepped back." | | 13 | "She ignored it." | | 14 | "She did not drop the" | | 15 | "She tightened her grip." | | 16 | "She held the gem steady." | | 17 | "It had no distinct shape," | | 18 | "It drifted toward her." | | 19 | "It spoke of hunger and" |
| | ratio | 0.358 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 160 | | totalSentences | 162 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped past the final" | | 1 | "The scent of damp earth" | | 2 | "She stood before the circle" | | 3 | "Richmond Park lay behind her," | | 4 | "She checked her watch." | | 5 | "The hands spun counter-clockwise before" | | 6 | "The words hung in the" | | 7 | "The Heartstone pendant pressed against" | | 8 | "The crimson gem pulsed with" | | 9 | "She touched the silver chain" | | 10 | "The metal burned cold against" | | 11 | "she told the darkness" | | 12 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground, their" | | 13 | "They did not sway." | | 14 | "The silence pressed against her" | | 15 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 16 | "A twig snapped to her" | | 17 | "Nothing moved in the shadows" | | 18 | "The darkness there pooled like" | | 19 | "She did not flinch." |
| | ratio | 0.988 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 162 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 87.91% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground, their petals a vivid violet that defied the season." | | 1 | "The light did not illuminate the space; it carved it, revealing edges that shouldn't exist." | | 2 | "Her boots crunched on dry grass that felt brittle as glass." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 17 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.773 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.059 | | effectiveRatio | 0.059 | |