Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBFV8AA7PFGRDBGZZCJQM0K

Run Details

Duration:
47.3s
Cost:
$0.009702
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The smell of spiced lamb and cumin hung heavy in the air, seeping through the floorboards and into the walls of the cramped flat. Rory stood with her back to the counter, her fingers brushing the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. It was a grounding touch, a reminder of the past she was still running from, though running had never quite worked. The curry house below churned on, the rhythmic clatter of pots and the low murmur of the chef serving as a soundtrack to her own restless thoughts. She turned toward the door, the only exit besides the kitchen window. The lock clicked, not with the finality of a key turning in the night, but with the slow, deliberate scrape of metal on metal. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, hissed from the armchair, where he had been curled atop a stack of scrolls. Three deadbolts. They had taken her twenty minutes to engage tonight. She hated the feeling of being trapped inside her own sanctuary, but the city demanded vigilance. She had been expecting Eva, or perhaps Yu-Fei’s delivery driver. She had not expected him. The chain rattled. The door swung open. He stood in the narrow hallway, a silhouette cut from shadow and charcoal wool. Lucien Moreau adjusted the ivory handle of his cane, the material gleaming like bone under the dim hallway light. His platinum hair was slicked back, pristine despite the evening rain that dampened the London air around him. He looked impossibly composed, a predator in a tailored suit. Rory did not move. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic bird in a cage. She recognized the heterochromatic gaze immediately—one amber eye catching the light like polished honey, the other a void of inky black. You shouldn’t be here, she thought. She did not say it out loud. Lucien stepped inside, closing the door with a soft click that sounded like a gunshot. He did not look at the cat, nor at the mountains of books that choked every available surface of the room. His eyes locked on hers, bright blue eyes that seemed to have seen too much of him. Rory, Rory, he said, the syllables rolling off his tongue with that French lilt she remembered from the nights before the end. She remembered the nights before the fire. He didn’t offer to take off his coat. He just stood there, leaning his weight on the cane, his posture relaxed but his gaze calculating. I told you to stay away, she said. Her voice sounded steadier than she felt. It is not possible, he replied. He stepped closer, and she caught the scent of him—old paper, expensive cologne, and something metallic underneath, like ozone before a storm. It was the scent of the underworld he navigated for information. Why now? she asked. Why Brick Lane? You live in Mayfair, or wherever you go when you are not fixing people for money. I am not here to fix you, he said. He was standing in the space where she would have sat on the sofa, invading her perimeter without a touch. The air between them felt charged, static. It had been two years since the last time they had seen each other. Two years since the argument that had sent him packing, since the secrets she had kept while he had tried to protect her. Then what are you here for? To warn you, he said simply. He gestured with the cane toward the window. There is a problem. A problem you are part of now whether you admit it or not. Rory’s stomach tightened. She knew the tone. He didn’t lie. He was fixer, broker, survivor. If he said she was part of the problem, she was the problem. What kind of problem? A demon’s eye is opening in the East End, he said. His voice dropped lower, the amber eye narrowing slightly. A gathering. A council. And the only reason they know you are here is because you are carrying blood that does not belong to you. Rory stepped back, her heel bumping against the kitchen counter. The scar on her wrist throbbed. She knew he was talking about the magic she had absorbed, the thing that had made her an outlier in a world that kept secrets. She had run from Evan in Cardiff because of what he was. She had run to London because of what she was. I thought you were done, she whispered. I thought you were done helping people like me. I am not helping you, Lucien said. He took a step forward, closing the distance until the space between them was nothing but breath. I am stopping you from being hunted. He reached out, and for a second, she thought he might touch her face. But his hand went to his pocket, producing a small envelope, a slip of paper. He didn’t hand it to her. He just held it out, waiting. Take it, he said. She hesitated. Every instinct told her to keep her distance, to slam the door, to run. But she didn’t run. She stepped forward and took the paper. If you are not here to fix me, she asked. If you are not helping. Why are you here? He looked down at her, his expression unreadable. Because I am the only one who can keep you alive. And because... He stopped. The silence stretched, heavy and thick with everything they hadn’t said. Because you look good in the dark, he finished. The air left Rory’s lungs. It was a clumsy, human thing, that remark. But it was the truth. She had spent years trying to be invisible, to fade into the background of her own life. He saw her. He always had. Lucien turned to leave, the cane tapping a rhythmic beat against the wood floor. Wait, she said. He paused, but didn’t turn. Are you coming back? He didn’t answer. He opened the door. The smell of the curry house below rushed in, mixing with his scent. He paused again. If I see your face again, he said without turning, do not open the door. He stepped out into the hallway. The door clicked shut. Rory stood alone in the flat, the envelope in her hand, the cat hissing from the armchair, the smell of spices clinging to the walls. She looked down at the scar on her wrist, the one from childhood, the one that made her human. But the envelope was heavy with magic, and the silence of the flat was heavy with the promise of a war she had only just begun to understand. She knew, with a certainty that settled in her bones, that he hadn’t just left. He had just moved to the next block. She was not alone anymore. Not really. And for the first time in two years, the fear in her chest was mixed with something else. Something sharp and dangerous. She exhaled, the sound loud in the quiet room. She would not open the door if he came back. But she knew he would. And she knew she would not be ready. Not until the sun came up. And by then, the darkness would have already begun to spread. She moved to the window, peering through the gap in the books on the sill. The street below was empty, save for a shadow standing near the curb, watching the flat with the stillness of a statue. Rory pulled the curtains shut. She locked the deadbolts. She didn’t turn off the lights.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
92.08% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1262
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
28.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1262
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"reminder"
count1
1
word"churned"
count1
2
word"rhythmic"
count2
3
word"sanctuary"
count1
4
word"gleaming"
count1
5
word"pristine"
count1
6
word"predator"
count1
7
word"lilt"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"calculating"
count1
10
word"navigated"
count1
11
word"charged"
count1
12
word"stomach"
count1
13
word"throbbed"
count1
14
word"unreadable"
count1
15
word"silence"
count2
highlights
0"reminder"
1"churned"
2"rhythmic"
3"sanctuary"
4"gleaming"
5"pristine"
6"predator"
7"lilt"
8"weight"
9"calculating"
10"navigated"
11"charged"
12"stomach"
13"throbbed"
14"unreadable"
15"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung heavy in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences125
matches(empty)
85.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences125
filterMatches
0"know"
1"look"
2"see"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1260
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions11
matches
0"Rory, Rory, he said, the syllables rolling off his tongue with that French lilt she remembered from the nights before th…"
1"I told you to stay away, she said."
2"It is not possible, he replied."
3"I am not here to fix you, he said."
4"To warn you, he said simply."
5"I thought you were done, she whispered."
6"I am not helping you, Lucien said."
7"Take it, he said."
8"If you are not here to fix me, she asked."
9"Wait, she said."
10"If I see your face again, he said without turning, do not open the door."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount1260
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.71
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva1
Yu-Fei1
Moreau1
London2
Rory9
French1
Brick1
Lane1
Mayfair1
East1
End1
Evan1
Cardiff1
Lucien4
persons
0"Eva"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Moreau"
3"Rory"
4"Evan"
5"Lucien"
places
0"London"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"Mayfair"
4"East"
5"End"
6"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
91.18% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sounded like a gunshot"
1"eyes that seemed to have seen too much of him"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.794
wordCount1260
matches
0"not with the finality of a key turning in the night, but with the slow, deliberate scrape of metal on metal"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean31.5
std25.06
cv0.795
sampleLengths
091
154
242
37
461
537
613
753
829
925
1015
1139
1223
1373
146
1531
1628
174
1845
1963
2016
2131
2241
234
2427
2519
2621
2713
289
2941
3014
313
325
334
3423
3515
36105
3729
3886
3915
94.04% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences125
matches
0"been curled"
1"was slicked"
2"being hunted"
3"was mixed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs224
matches
0"was still running"
1"was standing"
2"was talking"
97.14% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences125
ratio0.016
matches
0"She recognized the heterochromatic gaze immediately—one amber eye catching the light like polished honey, the other a void of inky black."
1"He stepped closer, and she caught the scent of him—old paper, expensive cologne, and something metallic underneath, like ozone before a storm."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1264
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.022151898734177215
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007120253164556962
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean10.08
std6.67
cv0.662
sampleLengths
024
119
221
327
412
524
618
72
89
916
1010
115
123
134
1414
1519
1618
1710
184
1912
2021
216
227
2315
2421
2517
2622
277
288
2917
308
317
326
3322
3411
352
362
373
3816
399
4020
417
4214
4323
446
456
468
474
4813
493
37.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.24
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners30
28.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences116
matches
0"Then what are you here"
ratio0.009
2.76% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount63
totalSentences116
matches
0"It was a grounding touch,"
1"She turned toward the door,"
2"They had taken her twenty"
3"She hated the feeling of"
4"She had been expecting Eva,"
5"She had not expected him."
6"He stood in the narrow"
7"His platinum hair was slicked"
8"He looked impossibly composed, a"
9"Her heart hammered against her"
10"She recognized the heterochromatic gaze"
11"You shouldn’t be here, she"
12"She did not say it"
13"He did not look at"
14"His eyes locked on hers,"
15"She remembered the nights before"
16"He didn’t offer to take"
17"He just stood there, leaning"
18"I told you to stay"
19"Her voice sounded steadier than"
ratio0.543
72.07% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount90
totalSentences116
matches
0"The smell of spiced lamb"
1"Rory stood with her back"
2"It was a grounding touch,"
3"The curry house below churned"
4"She turned toward the door,"
5"The lock clicked, not with"
6"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, hissed"
7"They had taken her twenty"
8"She hated the feeling of"
9"She had been expecting Eva,"
10"She had not expected him."
11"The chain rattled."
12"The door swung open."
13"He stood in the narrow"
14"Lucien Moreau adjusted the ivory"
15"His platinum hair was slicked"
16"He looked impossibly composed, a"
17"Rory did not move."
18"Her heart hammered against her"
19"She recognized the heterochromatic gaze"
ratio0.776
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount7
totalSentences116
matches
0"To warn you, he said"
1"If he said she was"
2"If you are not here"
3"If you are not helping."
4"Because I am the only"
5"Because you look good in"
6"If I see your face"
ratio0.06
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"His platinum hair was slicked back, pristine despite the evening rain that dampened the London air around him."
1"He just stood there, leaning his weight on the cane, his posture relaxed but his gaze calculating."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.1198%