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Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBFWNR6J93HAF5GPD0GR90F
Run Details
Model:
Qwen 3.5 27B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
49.4s
Cost:
$0.010923
Provider:
Alibaba
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
86.62%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
66.56%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
66.67%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
15.51%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
41.67%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
21.65%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
43.38%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
81.2015%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
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Meta
AI
The third deadbolt slid back
with a heavy metallic clunk.
The sound echoed through the
cramped hallway, louder than the curry house sizzling below.
Aurora did not move from
her position by the bookshelf.
She kept her back to
the door, her fingers
tracing
the spine of a leather-bound grimoire.
The air smelled of turmeric
and old paper.
Ptolemy, the tabby cat, arched
his back and let out a low rumble from the top of the wardrobe. "I did not come to hurt you, Rory."
Lucien's voice cut through the
room, smooth as polished
marble
.
He stepped inside, closing the
door behind him with a soft click that felt far too final. The lock engaged. Aurora turned
slowly
.
She let the book drop
onto the pile of scrolls on the desk.
The impact was dull, absorbed
by the clutter. "You broke into a secure flat."
She kept her voice level
.
Her hand drifted to her
left wrist, fingers brushing the small crescent-shaped scar. "That is not exactly a friendly gesture." Lucien leaned against the doorframe.
His charcoal suit absorbed the
dim light from the single desk lamp.
He looked immaculate, as if
he had stepped out of a tailor's shop and not through the damp London rain.
His heterochromatic eyes scanned the
room. One amber, one black. "The lock was a suggestion. A polite request for permission."
He pushed off the frame
and walked into the room.
His cane tapped against the
floorboards. Ivory handle, thin blade concealed within. "I needed to see you. In person." "You have a phone." "Phones are for people who trust the network."
He stopped three feet away
. The scent of ozone and expensive tobacco clung to him. "And I do not trust the network." Aurora crossed her arms. The movement was defensive, but she refused to step back. "What do you want, Lucien?" "Information."
He tilted his head
. "You know where the ledger is."
She felt the air leave
the room. The ledger was the reason they had parted ways six months ago.
It was the reason she
had fled Cardiff and why she worked deliveries for Yu-Fei now. "It is gone." Lucien smiled.
It was not a warm
expression. "Gone. Or hidden." "Buried."
She gestured to the stacks
of books surrounding them. "Underneath the research. Like everything else." He took another step. The distance between them shrank to an uncomfortable intimacy.
She could see the flecks
of gold in his amber eye. He smelled of danger. "You lie poorly, Aurora."
He reached out
. His hand hovered near her shoulder but did not touch. "You lie because you are afraid." "I am not afraid of you." "Good." He withdrew his hand. "Because I am not the one hunting you." The
silence
stretched tight. Ptolemy jumped down from the wardrobe and rubbed against Lucien's polished shoe. The cat ignored the threat. "Who is hunting me?" Aurora asked. "The same people who wanted the ledger." Lucien tapped his cane against the floor. A sharp rap. "They found your flat above the bar. They left a message." Aurora's
stomach
dropped. "A message?" "Blood on the doorframe." He paused. "A circle. With a line through it." She knew the symbol. It meant the end of a contract. It meant the debt was due. "Why tell me?" She moved to the window, peering through the slats of the blind. The street below was dark. "You could have taken me in. Sold me out." "I did not come to sell you." Lucien walked to the desk. He picked up a quill from the clutter. He examined the nib. "I came to offer a trade." "I have nothing you want." "You have access." He turned the quill over in his fingers. "You know the layout of the Golden Empress. You know the delivery routes." "Yu-Fei trusts me." "Yu-Fei trusts everyone." Lucien set the quill down. "Trust is a currency that devalues
quickly
." Aurora walked around the desk. She stood between him and the door. She needed to control the space. "If I help you, they leave me alone." "They leave you alone." Lucien confirmed. "For a time." "And then what?" "Then we see if the debt is
truly
paid." He reached into his jacket pocket. His fingers closed around something small. He placed it on the desk. A silver lighter. Engraved with a crest. Aurora recognised it immediately. It belonged to her father. Brendan Carter. He had lost it years ago. "Where did you get this?" "From the man who killed him." Lucien's voice remained calm, but the air in the room grew cold. "He dropped it. I picked it up." Aurora stared at the lighter. Her breath hitched. "You have been keeping this." "I have been waiting." Lucien leaned forward. "You ran. You hid. You changed your name. But you did not forget." "I survived." "Survival is not living." He pushed the lighter toward her. "Take it. Use it." She looked up at him. The history between them
hung heavy in the air
. The nights they had spent in safe houses, the blood on his hands, the way he had looked at her when she left. "Why now?" "Because they know where Eva is." Lucien tapped the lighter. "And if they know where Eva is, they know where you sleep." Aurora's heart hammered against her ribs. Eva was her only friend. Her only anchor. "They have Eva?" "They have a lead." Lucien straightened up. "I can stop them. But I need you to open the back door of the restaurant." "The restaurant is closed." "Yu-Fei opens for the night shift." Lucien checked his
watch
. "In twenty minutes." Aurora looked at the lighter. Then at the door. The three deadbolts. "If I do this, you guarantee Eva's safety." "I guarantee nothing." Lucien turned toward the door. "I guarantee your survival. The rest is up to you." He reached for the handle. "Wait." Lucien paused. He did not turn around. "What?" "If we do this, you owe me." He turned his head
slightly
. One eye caught the light. "Name your price." "Truth." Aurora stepped closer. "The truth about the ledger. The truth about my father." Lucien looked at her for a long moment. The
silence
stretched, taut as a wire. "Get your coat." He said finally. "We do not have time for ghosts." He opened the door. The hallway light flooded the room, casting long shadows against the bookshelves. Aurora grabbed her coat from the hook. She shoved the silver lighter into her pocket. The metal was cold against her thigh. Ptolemy meowed from the floor. "Stay," Aurora told the cat. She looked at Lucien. "If you lie to me, Lucien." "I never lie." He stepped into the hallway. "I just omit." She followed him out. The door clicked shut behind them. The smell of curry faded, replaced by the damp
chill
of the corridor. Lucien walked toward the stairs. He did not wait for her. Aurora checked the lock behind her. She turned the key. She locked the door. Three clicks. She followed him down the stairs. The wooden steps groaned under their
weight
. They emerged onto Brick Lane. The street was empty, save for a few stray cats and the glow of neon signs. Lucien stopped at the edge of the pavement. He looked down the road. "Car is two blocks down." "Where is Eva?" "Safe." "Prove it." Lucien reached into his pocket again. He pulled out a phone. He held it out to her. A video played. Eva sat on a sofa in a room Aurora did not recognise. She looked tired, but unharmed. "Who has her?" "A contact." Lucien pocketed the phone. "Get in the car, Rory." Aurora looked at the video one last time. She saw Eva nod. A signal. Aurora turned away from the screen. She walked to the car. Lucien opened the passenger door. She slid inside. The leather seat was cold. Lucien got into the driver's seat. He started the engine. The car hummed to life. "Where are we going?" "To the Empress." "And then?" "Then we find the ledger." Lucien put the car in gear. "And we finish this." The car pulled away from the curb. The streetlights blurred past the window. Aurora looked at her hands. Her fingers were white around the edge of the lighter in her pocket. She did not look at Lucien. She did not trust him. But she had nowhere else to go. The car sped up. The engine roared. Ahead, the road curved into darkness. Something moved in the rearview mirror. Lucien saw it too. His hand tightened on the wheel. "They followed us." "Who?" "The debt collectors." Lucien accelerated. The tires screeched against the wet asphalt. "Brace yourself." The car swerved. A bullet
shattered
the rear window. Glass sprayed across the back seat. Aurora ducked. She clutched the lighter. "Drive!" she screamed. Lucien grinned. "I prefer to run." He slammed the gear stick. The car surged forward. The chase had begun.
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2/25/2026, 10:49:36 PM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
30
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"He said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences
92
tagDensity
0.326
leniency
0.652
rawRatio
0.033
effectiveRatio
0.022
86.62%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1495
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
1
adverb
"quickly"
count
1
2
adverb
"truly"
count
1
3
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
highlights
0
"slowly"
1
"quickly"
2
"truly"
3
"slightly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
66.56%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1495
totalAiIsms
10
found
0
word
"echoed"
count
1
1
word
"tracing"
count
1
2
word
"marble"
count
1
3
word
"scanned"
count
1
4
word
"silence"
count
2
5
word
"stomach"
count
1
6
word
"chill"
count
1
7
word
"weight"
count
1
8
word
"shattered"
count
1
highlights
0
"echoed"
1
"tracing"
2
"marble"
3
"scanned"
4
"silence"
5
"stomach"
6
"chill"
7
"weight"
8
"shattered"
66.67%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"stomach dropped/sank"
count
1
1
label
"hung in the air"
count
1
highlights
0
"stomach dropped"
1
"hung heavy in the air"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
166
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
166
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
228
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
23
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1495
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
9
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
15.51%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
59
wordCount
1041
uniqueNames
10
maxNameDensity
2.69
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
4.5
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
London
1
Cardiff
1
Yu-Fei
1
Lucien
28
Aurora
19
Carter
1
Brick
1
Lane
1
Eva
3
Ptolemy
3
persons
0
"Lucien"
1
"Aurora"
2
"Carter"
3
"Eva"
4
"Ptolemy"
places
0
"London"
1
"Cardiff"
2
"Brick"
3
"Lane"
globalScore
0.155
windowScore
0.167
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
77
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1495
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
228
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
108
mean
13.84
std
10.99
cv
0.794
sampleLengths
0
58
1
19
2
8
3
30
4
24
5
31
6
47
7
39
8
4
9
30
10
19
11
11
12
35
13
3
14
11
15
16
16
28
17
23
18
6
19
13
20
21
21
6
22
28
23
5
24
13
25
17
26
29
27
30
28
5
29
24
30
3
31
15
32
26
33
9
34
3
35
34
36
17
37
5
38
25
39
13
40
20
41
2
42
14
43
37
44
2
45
22
46
14
47
3
48
23
49
4
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
166
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
186
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
228
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1044
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar."
adverbCount
20
adverbRatio
0.019157088122605363
lyAdverbCount
6
lyAdverbRatio
0.005747126436781609
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
228
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
228
mean
6.56
std
3.9
cv
0.595
sampleLengths
0
10
1
14
2
10
3
16
4
8
5
19
6
8
7
10
8
17
9
3
10
3
11
13
12
8
13
11
14
13
15
7
16
5
17
12
18
20
19
6
20
4
21
20
22
6
23
6
24
7
25
4
26
13
27
10
28
7
29
4
30
10
31
5
32
5
33
6
34
7
35
12
36
16
37
3
38
2
39
6
40
3
41
10
42
6
43
4
44
9
45
11
46
4
47
7
48
10
49
6
41.67%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
19
diversityRatio
0.2543859649122807
totalSentences
228
uniqueOpeners
58
21.65%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
1
totalSentences
154
matches
0
"Then at the door."
ratio
0.006
43.38%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
68
totalSentences
154
matches
0
"She kept her back to"
1
"He stepped inside, closing the"
2
"She let the book drop"
3
"She kept her voice level"
4
"Her hand drifted to her"
5
"His charcoal suit absorbed the"
6
"He looked immaculate, as if"
7
"His heterochromatic eyes scanned the"
8
"He pushed off the frame"
9
"His cane tapped against the"
10
"He stopped three feet away"
11
"He tilted his head"
12
"She felt the air leave"
13
"It was the reason she"
14
"It was not a warm"
15
"She gestured to the stacks"
16
"He took another step."
17
"She could see the flecks"
18
"He smelled of danger."
19
"He reached out"
ratio
0.442
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
148
totalSentences
154
matches
0
"The third deadbolt slid back"
1
"The sound echoed through the"
2
"Aurora did not move from"
3
"She kept her back to"
4
"The air smelled of turmeric"
5
"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, arched"
6
"Lucien's voice cut through the"
7
"He stepped inside, closing the"
8
"The lock engaged."
9
"Aurora turned slowly."
10
"She let the book drop"
11
"The impact was dull, absorbed"
12
"She kept her voice level"
13
"Her hand drifted to her"
14
"Lucien leaned against the doorframe."
15
"His charcoal suit absorbed the"
16
"He looked immaculate, as if"
17
"His heterochromatic eyes scanned the"
18
"He pushed off the frame"
19
"His cane tapped against the"
ratio
0.961
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
154
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
24
technicalSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"He stepped inside, closing the door behind him with a soft click that felt far too final."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
30
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
5
fancyCount
2
fancyTags
0
"Lucien confirmed (confirm)"
1
"she screamed (scream)"
dialogueSentences
92
tagDensity
0.054
leniency
0.109
rawRatio
0.4
effectiveRatio
0.043
81.2015%