Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBG143CT9GGS8XEQJJCXR4V

Run Details

Duration:
37.4s
Cost:
$0.013785
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The sound of the first deadbolt sliding home was a heavy, metallic click that echoed through the cramped hallway. Then the second, a sharper rattle. Then the third, the final seal against the world. Aurora exhaled, the breath fogging briefly in the chill of the stairwell before she pushed the door open. She stepped into the flat, shaking the rain from her umbrella, and locked the door behind her. The smell of cumin and frying onions drifted up from the curry house below, a scent that usually comforted her but tonight felt cloying, trapping her in the stale air of Eva’s absence. She dropped her keys into the bowl by the entrance and moved toward the kitchen, her boots leaving wet prints on the floorboards. The flat was a labyrinth of paper. Stacks of books teetered on the coffee table, scrolls were pinned to the walls with thumbtacks, and research notes covered every available inch of the counters. It was Eva’s chaos, a stark contrast to the quiet order Aurora usually kept in her own life above Silas’ bar. But she had needed the distance. She needed to be somewhere Eva could find her if she needed protection, somewhere far from the shadow of her own apartment. Aurora reached for a mug, her fingers brushing the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. It was a reflex, a grounding touch. She hadn’t expected anyone to be here. Eva was in Bristol for the weekend. The doorbell rang. It wasn’t a polite chime. It was a single, insistent press that vibrated through the wood. Aurora froze, the mug halfway to the sink. No one knew she was here. She hadn’t told anyone. She moved to the door, her hand hovering over the deadbolt, her heart hammering a frantic rhythm against her ribs. She peered through the peephole. The distortion of the lens widened the figure standing on the landing, but there was no mistaking the silhouette. The tailored charcoal suit, the sharp line of the shoulders, the way he held the ivory-handled cane like an extension of his arm. Lucien. She didn’t want to open the door. She wanted to stand there until he left, until the rain washed him away like a bad memory. But curiosity, that fatal flaw she had inherited from her father, pulled her hand down. She slid the bolts back, one by one, the metal groaning in the silence. When she pulled the door open, the hallway light caught the platinum of his hair, slicked back and perfect, defying the damp London weather. Lucien Moreau stood there, his posture impeccable despite the late hour. He looked as though he had just stepped out of a boardroom in Marseille, not a stairwell in East London. His eyes met hers, the heterochromatic gaze unsettling as always—one amber, warm as old honey, the other black, depthless and cold. “Rory,” he said. The name was soft, a question wrapped in a statement. “Lucien.” She kept her hand on the door, ready to slam it. “You shouldn’t be here.” “I was in the neighborhood,” he lied smoothly. He didn’t step forward, respecting the threshold, but the air between them shifted, charged with static. “I heard you were moving. I wanted to ensure you were safe.” “I’m fine. Eva’s place is secure.” “Eva is in Bristol,” Lucien corrected, his voice dropping an octave. “And you are hiding.” Aurora felt the heat rise in her cheeks. She stepped back, gesturing for him to enter, though every instinct screamed at her to keep him out. He stepped inside, bringing the scent of rain, expensive cologne, and something faintly metallic, like ozone before a storm. He closed the door behind him, the lock clicking into place, sealing them in the cluttered sanctuary. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, wound himself around Lucien’s polished shoes, purring. Lucien didn’t look down, but his hand twitched toward the cat, a gesture of affection he rarely showed. “Why are you really here?” Aurora asked, leaning against the kitchen counter. She crossed her arms, trying to hide the tremor in her hands. Lucien turned to face her, leaning his weight on the cane. The ivory handle gleamed in the dim light. “We left things unfinished, Aurora. You walked away from London. You walked away from me without a word. That is not the protocol.” “Protocol?” She let out a sharp, humorless laugh. “We aren’t spies, Lucien. We aren’t partners in crime anymore. I’m just a delivery girl trying to stay out of Evan’s way.” “Evan is a ghost,” Lucien said, his voice hard. “And you are not a delivery girl. You are a woman who sees patterns no one else can. You are a woman I trust with my life.” He took a step closer. The space between them was small, intimate. She could see the flecks of gold in his amber eye, the faint sheen of sweat on his temple. “I came to bring you back.” “I don’t want to go back.” “Then why are you here?” He gestured to the room, the piles of books, the scrolls pinned to the walls. “You are researching. You are preparing. You are doing the work you promised you would do. But you are doing it in the dark, alone.” Aurora looked away, her gaze landing on the scar on her wrist. “I don’t need your help.” “I know,” Lucien said softly. “But you need my company.” The silence stretched, heavy and thick. The curry house below began to close up, the sounds of pans scraping and dishes clattering fading into the night. The flat felt smaller now, the walls pressing in. Aurora felt the pull of him, the magnetic force that had always drawn them together, even when they were trying to push apart. It was the same pull that had led them into danger before, the same gravity that had made her fall for a man who was half-demon and entirely dangerous. She pushed off the counter and walked toward him. She stopped inches away, close enough to feel the heat radiating from his body. He didn’t move, his eyes tracking her movement with predatory focus. “You hurt me, Lucien,” she whispered. “I know.” He didn’t flinch. “I know I did.” “Why did you come tonight?” “Because I cannot let you disappear again.” He reached out, his hand hovering near her face before he pulled back, gripping the cane tighter. “The underworld is changing. There are things hunting you, Rory. Things that do not care about your past with Evan. They care about what you know. And I am the only one who can keep you safe.” Aurora looked up at him, searching his face for the lie. She found only exhaustion and a fierce, burning protectiveness. The amber eye seemed to glow in the shadows. “I don’t want to be safe if it means being trapped,” she said. “Then be free,” Lucien countered. “Be free with me. Not as a prisoner. As a partner.” He reached into his jacket and pulled out a key. It was old, brass, and heavy. He held it out to her. “Silas’ bar,” he said. “It is compromised. You cannot go back there. Come with me to the safehouse in Soho. It is yours. It is where I will be.” Aurora looked at the key, then at him. The history between them was a tangled knot of betrayal and desire, of nights spent in the back of his car and mornings spent arguing over strategy. It was a mess. But it was *their* mess. She reached out and took the key. Her fingers brushed his, and the contact sent a jolt through her, sharp and electric. She felt the rough texture of his skin, the cool metal of the key. “Eva’s flat is messy,” she said, her voice steady. Lucien’s lips quirked into a faint smile. “I can clean it.” “No,” Aurora said. “I mean, I have to leave it. I can’t stay here.” “Good.” He took a breath, the tension in his shoulders easing slightly. “Then we go. Now.” Aurora looked around the flat one last time. The books, the scrolls, the cat sleeping at Lucien’s feet. It was a temporary shelter, a place of hiding. She turned back to him, her bright blue eyes meeting his mismatched gaze. “Lead the way, Lucien.” He nodded, straightening his jacket. He offered her his arm, a formal gesture that felt entirely wrong and entirely right. She took it, her fingers gripping the fabric of his suit. As they walked to the door, the deadbolt slid back with a heavy click, opening the way out into the rain, into the danger, into the life they had tried to outrun.
created_at"2026-02-25T22:52:02.545Z" 2/25/2026, 10:52:02 PM
model"qwen/qwen3.5-122b-a10b-20260224"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency525
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time36955
tokens_prompt808
tokens_completion4499
native_tokens_prompt806
native_tokens_completion4207
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning2280
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
usage0.0137848
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"33d466d1-d2f7-45ed-8ff3-fda7d2e32351"
id"chatcmpl-2d57f92b-e163-9624-ba58-18d6420102f0"
is_byokfalse
latency525
model_permaslug"qwen/qwen3.5-122b-a10b-20260224"
provider_name"Alibaba"
status200
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1772059922-r8o49G9BvOV8WxWXl2ZF"
upstream_id"chatcmpl-2d57f92b-e163-9624-ba58-18d6420102f0"
total_cost0.0137848
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"Alibaba"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
97.44% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he lied smoothly [smoothly]"
1"Lucien said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.487
leniency0.974
rawRatio0.105
effectiveRatio0.103
89.67% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1452
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"softly"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.90% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1452
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"vibrated"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"perfect"
count1
6
word"charged"
count1
7
word"ensure"
count1
8
word"sanctuary"
count1
9
word"affection"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"magnetic"
count1
12
word"desire"
count1
13
word"electric"
count1
14
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"chill"
2"stark"
3"vibrated"
4"silence"
5"perfect"
6"charged"
7"ensure"
8"sanctuary"
9"affection"
10"weight"
11"magnetic"
12"desire"
13"electric"
14"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
99.13% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences98
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
2"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1451
ratio0.001
matches
0"their"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1136
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.06
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Aurora12
Bristol1
London2
Moreau1
Marseille1
East1
Lucien11
persons
0"Eva"
1"Aurora"
2"Moreau"
3"Lucien"
places
0"Bristol"
1"London"
2"Marseille"
3"East"
globalScore0.972
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1451
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean33.74
std26.54
cv0.787
sampleLengths
0102
1105
237
33
459
543
678
752
813
916
1036
116
1215
1362
1429
1524
1642
1730
1873
196
2045
2117
2210
2387
2434
256
269
275
2861
2929
3013
3116
3222
3329
3444
3536
369
3711
3814
3916
4040
414
4263
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"were pinned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs192
matches
0"were trying"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences118
ratio0.008
matches
0"His eyes met hers, the heterochromatic gaze unsettling as always—one amber, warm as old honey, the other black, depthless and cold."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount417
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount9
adverbRatio0.02158273381294964
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.011990407673860911
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean12.3
std7.68
cv0.624
sampleLengths
019
16
29
318
417
533
623
77
826
921
106
1122
1216
137
147
157
163
175
1811
198
206
214
2220
235
2419
2523
261
277
2818
2915
3014
3124
3211
3320
3421
353
3610
3712
384
398
4016
4112
426
4311
444
458
4618
4719
4817
4911
37.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.2457627118644068
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners29
73.26% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences91
matches
0"Then the second, a sharper"
1"Then the third, the final"
ratio0.022
9.01% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences91
matches
0"She stepped into the flat,"
1"She dropped her keys into"
2"It was Eva’s chaos, a"
3"She needed to be somewhere"
4"It was a reflex, a"
5"She hadn’t expected anyone to"
6"It wasn’t a polite chime."
7"It was a single, insistent"
8"She hadn’t told anyone."
9"She moved to the door,"
10"She peered through the peephole."
11"She didn’t want to open"
12"She wanted to stand there"
13"She slid the bolts back,"
14"He looked as though he"
15"His eyes met hers, the"
16"She kept her hand on"
17"he lied smoothly"
18"He didn’t step forward, respecting"
19"She stepped back, gesturing for"
ratio0.527
3.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount83
totalSentences91
matches
0"The sound of the first"
1"Aurora exhaled, the breath fogging"
2"She stepped into the flat,"
3"The smell of cumin and"
4"She dropped her keys into"
5"The flat was a labyrinth"
6"Stacks of books teetered on"
7"It was Eva’s chaos, a"
8"She needed to be somewhere"
9"Aurora reached for a mug,"
10"It was a reflex, a"
11"She hadn’t expected anyone to"
12"Eva was in Bristol for"
13"The doorbell rang."
14"It wasn’t a polite chime."
15"It was a single, insistent"
16"Aurora froze, the mug halfway"
17"She hadn’t told anyone."
18"She moved to the door,"
19"She peered through the peephole."
ratio0.912
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The sound of the first deadbolt sliding home was a heavy, metallic click that echoed through the cramped hallway."
1"She moved to the door, her hand hovering over the deadbolt, her heart hammering a frantic rhythm against her ribs."
2"It was the same pull that had led them into danger before, the same gravity that had made her fall for a man who was half-demon and entirely dangerous."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"She kept, ready to slam it"
1"Lucien corrected, his voice dropping an octave"
2"Lucien said, his voice hard"
3"He gestured, the piles of books, the scrolls pinned to the walls"
4"she said, her voice steady"
73.08% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he lied smoothly (lie)"
1"Lucien corrected (correct)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.282
leniency0.564
rawRatio0.273
effectiveRatio0.154
80.2099%