Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBG2RQQPE4NTD6FY0ZTCJ3A

Run Details

Duration:
1m 33s
Cost:
$0.016251
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked into place with a heavy thud. Rory turned the handle and pulled the door inward. Lucien stood on the threshold, his silhouette framed by the dim hallway light of the building. He wore a tailored charcoal suit that cost more than Rory made in a month. The ivory handle of his cane rested against his shoulder, the wood polished to a mirror shine. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, wound between Rory’s ankles, purring loud enough to vibrate the floorboards. Lucien didn’t flinch. His gaze locked onto hers, the amber eye clashing with the black one, creating a disorienting effect that made her stomach drop. He stepped inside before she could close the door. The scent of expensive cologne and rain cut through the smell of old paper and curry that clung to the flat. "You left the deadbolts undone," Lucien said. His voice remained smooth, devoid of the accent he usually hid when working the London underworld. Rory leaned her hip against the doorframe. She crossed her arms over her chest, hiding the small crescent scar on her left wrist. "I was in the middle of a delivery. I didn't think you'd come." "I didn't think you'd answer." He moved into the room, his cane tapping softly against the wooden floor. The sound echoed in the cramped space. Books and scrolls covered every surface, stacked precariously on the desk and the sofa. Lucien navigated the clutter with practiced ease, his movements fluid. He stopped near the window, looking out at the brickwork of the building across the alley. Rory pushed off the doorframe and walked toward the kitchen counter. She picked up a mug, checked for water, and set it down again. Her fingers trembled, just once. "What do you want, Luc?" He turned. The light from the streetlamp outside caught the platinum blond hair slicked back from his forehead. "Evan is dead." Rory froze. The mug slipped from her grip, shattering on the linoleum. Water pooled around the shards, soaking her socks. She didn't move to clean it up. "Dead?" "Found in a canal in Camden. No ID. Just a knife in his ribs." Lucien walked toward her, his eyes scanning her face for a reaction she refused to give. "I thought you should know. He was the one who chased you out of Cardiff." "I know who he was." Rory wiped her hand on her jeans. "Why are you telling me this?" "Because the knife had a mark on the hilt. A demon sigil." Lucien stopped inches from her. The heat radiating from his body was palpable. "My father's people. Avaros." Rory stepped back. Her shoulder hit the edge of the table. "You think I killed him?" "I think he found something he shouldn't have. Something that led back to you." Lucien reached out, his hand hovering near her arm. He didn't touch her. "You have a target on your back, Rory. I'm here to move you." "I'm not moving." "You're staying in a flat above a curry house with three deadbolts and a cat." Lucien gestured to Ptolemy, who was now batting at a stack of papers on the floor. "This isn't a fortress." "It's better than your safe houses." "Is it?" Lucien tilted his head. "We had a deal. You disappear, I handle the loose ends. You didn't disappear. You stayed." "I had to finish the research." Rory pointed to the scrolls scattered across the desk. "Evan wasn't the only one looking for that information." Lucien's expression tightened. The smooth facade cracked, revealing the sharp edge of the demon blood running through his veins. "You're digging too deep. You always do." "And you always clean up the mess." "I clean up because I have to." He took a step closer. The distance between them vanished. Rory could see the flecks of gold in the amber eye, the darkness in the other. "We were good at this, you and I. Before you ran." "I didn't run." "You walked away from the only person who could keep you alive." Lucien's voice dropped. "Don't lie to me." Rory looked down at his hand. The fingers were long, elegant, resting on the cane. She remembered those hands holding hers in the back of a taxi in Marseille. She remembered the heat of his skin, the promise of a future that never happened. "I walked away because you lied." "I lied to keep you breathing." "Same thing." Rory lifted her chin. "Tell me the truth, Luc. Is this about Evan? Or is this about you needing to know where I am?" Lucien's jaw worked. He gripped the cane tighter, the knuckles turning white. "Both. The Avaros are hunting. They know you're here." "Then let them come." "They won't come for you. They'll come for Eva." The name hung in the air. Rory's breath hitched. She looked past Lucien, toward the bedroom door where Eva's notes were stacked. "Stay away from her." "I can't promise that." Lucien leaned in, his face inches from hers. "But I can promise you safety. If you come with me." Rory stared at him. The silence stretched, filled only by the hum of the refrigerator and the rain tapping against the window. She saw the desperation in his eyes, the fear he hid behind the tailored suit. He wasn't here to command her. He was here to beg. "I'm not going anywhere." Lucien exhaled, a sharp sound. He stepped back, the tension in his shoulders releasing. He adjusted his cufflinks, the silver catching the light. "You have twenty-four hours. Then I'm coming back. And next time, I won't ask." "Then you won't be welcome." Lucien smiled. It was a cold expression, devoid of warmth. "You know I don't care about welcome." He turned toward the door. Ptolemy yowled, arching his back as the man passed. Lucien didn't look at the cat. He reached for the handle. "Wait." Rory's voice stopped him. Lucien paused, his hand on the brass knob. He didn't turn around. "The knife." Rory walked toward him. She stopped behind him, close enough to feel the heat of his back. "Did you find the body?" "No." Lucien turned his head slightly. "I found the knife." "Where is it now?" "Safe." He opened the door. The hallway light spilled in, cutting across the floor. "Don't look for it, Rory. Some things are better left buried." "I'm not afraid of the dark." Lucien looked at her then, his heterochromatic eyes locking onto hers one last time. "You should be." He stepped out into the hallway. The door clicked shut, the three deadbolts sliding home into place. Rory stood alone in the kitchen, the smell of rain and cologne lingering in the air. She looked down at the shattered mug on the floor. The water had soaked into the grout, darkening the tiles. Ptolemy rubbed against her leg again, seeking comfort. Rory knelt and scratched the cat behind the ears. Her fingers brushed the scar on her wrist, the skin rough and raised. She stood up and walked to the desk, pulling a drawer open. Inside, a stack of photographs lay face down. She flipped them over. Evan's face stared back at her. The eyes were closed. She picked up a pen and wrote a note on a scrap of paper. She folded it and tucked it into her pocket. The rain intensified against the window, blurring the view of the street below. Rory moved to the window and pressed her hand against the glass. The cold seeped through her skin. She waited. The silence of the flat pressed against her ears. She listened for the sound of footsteps in the hallway, the click of a cane on the stairs. Nothing. Rory turned back to the room. The shadows stretched across the books, elongating the spines. She walked to the sofa and sat down. The cushions dipped under her weight. She picked up a scroll, unrolling it carefully. The ink was faded, the symbols shifting under the light. She traced the lines with her finger. The pattern matched the description of the knife Lucien mentioned. Avaros markings. A knock came at the door. Rory froze. She hadn't heard anyone come up the stairs. The knock was soft, polite. Three raps. She stood up. Her heart hammered against her ribs. She walked to the door and looked through the peephole. The hallway was empty. She turned the handle. The door swung open. No one stood there. Just the empty corridor and the flickering lightbulb above. Rory stepped out. She called out a name. Her voice echoed down the stairs. No answer. She walked back inside and locked the deadbolts. She checked the windows. They were secure. She returned to the sofa. The scroll lay open on her lap. The symbols seemed to move when she looked away. She closed her eyes and listened to the rain. A shadow moved in the corner of the room. Rory opened her eyes. The shadow was gone. She stood up and walked to the corner. Nothing but a stack of boxes. She returned to the sofa. The silence returned, heavy and thick. She picked up the pen again. She wrote another note. She folded it and put it in her pocket. The phone on the table rang. Rory stared at it. The vibration shook the surface of the wood. She let it ring. It stopped. She picked up the phone. The screen was blank. She set it down. The rain stopped. The silence was absolute. Rory sat in the dark, waiting for the morning.
created_at"2026-02-25T22:52:56.445Z" 2/25/2026, 10:52:56 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.296
leniency0.593
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.59% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1594
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.40% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1594
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count2
2
word"navigated"
count1
3
word"practiced ease"
count1
4
word"trembled"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"palpable"
count1
7
word"facade"
count1
8
word"silence"
count4
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"shattered"
count1
12
word"footsteps"
count1
13
word"weight"
count1
14
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"echoed"
2"navigated"
3"practiced ease"
4"trembled"
5"scanning"
6"palpable"
7"facade"
8"silence"
9"tension"
10"warmth"
11"shattered"
12"footsteps"
13"weight"
14"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences155
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences155
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences193
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1594
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions53
wordCount1219
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.05
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory25
London1
Lucien21
Ptolemy4
Marseille1
Eva1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Eva"
places
0"London"
1"Marseille"
globalScore0.475
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences97
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1594
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences193
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs72
mean22.14
std15.71
cv0.71
sampleLengths
067
140
230
323
436
55
660
729
85
921
1027
111
1245
1318
1429
1516
1640
173
1835
196
2022
2124
2226
237
2444
253
2619
2744
286
296
3026
3121
324
339
3422
354
3623
3748
384
3937
405
4117
4225
435
4412
4524
4610
474
4825
496
98.47% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences155
matches
0"were stacked"
1"was faded"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs229
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences193
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1219
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.02461033634126333
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.004922067268252666
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences193
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences193
mean8.26
std5.09
cv0.617
sampleLengths
010
19
216
315
417
515
63
722
89
921
107
1116
127
1316
1413
155
1613
177
1814
1910
2016
2111
2213
235
245
252
2616
273
282
2910
308
317
321
3330
3415
3512
366
3717
388
394
403
418
425
4323
444
4513
463
4731
484
496
43.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.22279792746113988
totalSentences193
uniqueOpeners43
23.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences144
matches
0"Just the empty corridor and"
ratio0.007
56.11% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount59
totalSentences144
matches
0"He wore a tailored charcoal"
1"His gaze locked onto hers,"
2"He stepped inside before she"
3"His voice remained smooth, devoid"
4"She crossed her arms over"
5"He moved into the room,"
6"He stopped near the window,"
7"She picked up a mug,"
8"Her fingers trembled, just once."
9"She didn't move to clean"
10"Her shoulder hit the edge"
11"He didn't touch her."
12"He took a step closer"
13"She remembered those hands holding"
14"She remembered the heat of"
15"He gripped the cane tighter,"
16"She looked past Lucien, toward"
17"She saw the desperation in"
18"He wasn't here to command"
19"He was here to beg."
ratio0.41
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount141
totalSentences144
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked into"
1"Rory turned the handle and"
2"Lucien stood on the threshold,"
3"He wore a tailored charcoal"
4"The ivory handle of his"
5"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, wound"
6"Lucien didn’t flinch."
7"His gaze locked onto hers,"
8"He stepped inside before she"
9"The scent of expensive cologne"
10"His voice remained smooth, devoid"
11"Rory leaned her hip against"
12"She crossed her arms over"
13"He moved into the room,"
14"The sound echoed in the"
15"Books and scrolls covered every"
16"Lucien navigated the clutter with"
17"He stopped near the window,"
18"Rory pushed off the doorframe"
19"She picked up a mug,"
ratio0.979
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences144
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"His gaze locked onto hers, the amber eye clashing with the black one, creating a disorienting effect that made her stomach drop."
93.75% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Lucien reached out, his hand hovering near her arm"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.019
leniency0.037
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.0974%