Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBG3VSWK3F9101XB1RQ4STZ

Run Details

Duration:
48.9s
Cost:
$0.009147
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a heavy metallic clunk that echoed through the cramped hallway. Aurora did not turn from the window. She kept her back to the door, fingers pressing against the cold glass as Ptolemy the tabby rubbed against her ankle. She heard the floorboard creak under a weight far heavier than the usual delivery boots. You should not be here. I am where I am needed. The voice was smooth, like velvet dragged over gravel. Lucien stepped into the room, bringing with him the scent of rain and expensive tobacco. He wore a tailored charcoal suit that fit like a second skin, his platinum blond hair slicked back to reveal the sharp line of his jaw. One eye burned amber, the other remained a void of black. He leaned on an ivory-handled cane that tapped against the wooden floorboards. Aurora turned slowly. She kept her left hand in her pocket, fingers curling around the handle of a kitchen knife she had grabbed on instinct. The flat smelled of old paper and curry from the shop below. Books covered every surface, spines cracked and titles faded. The locks were supposed to keep people out. They were never designed to keep me out. Lucien tilted his head, his gaze dropping to the scar on her left wrist. A small crescent mark from a childhood accident. He reached out, the tip of his cane hovering inches from the skin. Do not touch me. I am not touching you. I am observing. You look tired, Rory. She dropped her hand from her pocket. The knife was useless against him. He had killed men with a look. He had killed men with that cane. Why are you here, Lucien. Business. The amber eye narrowed. And you. I am not part of your business. You never were. Yet here you are, hiding in a flat that belongs to a woman who thinks she is safe. Aurora walked past him to the small table cluttered with scrolls and notes. She picked up a pen and tapped it against the wood. Ptolemy jumped onto the table and knocked a stack of papers to the floor. The cat hissed at the Frenchman. The cat has more sense than you. Ptolemy is a good judge of character. Lucien moved deeper into the room. The shadows in the corners seemed to stretch toward him. He did not look at the mess of research notes. He looked only at her. Evan knows where you are. Aurora stopped tapping the pen. The silence stretched tight between them. How do you know that name. I know everything. Lucien stopped three feet from her. He placed the cane on the floor and rested his hands on the handle. The ivory gleamed under the dim light. He knows where you are because you left a trail. You think you are clever. You think you can outrun what you are. I am not what I am. I am who I chose to be. You chose to run. That is the only difference. Aurora set the pen down. She walked until she stood directly in front of him. She had to look up to meet his gaze. He smelled of danger and something ancient, like stone dust and blood. If you are here to warn me, you are late. If you are here to take me, you are mistaken. I am here to offer a deal. I do not want your deals. You do not have a choice. Lucien leaned forward. His voice dropped to a whisper that vibrated in her chest. The thing hunting you is not human. It is not even from this realm. It is from Avaros. Aurora felt the air leave the room. The name hung heavy in the cluttered space. You know about Avaros. I know about demons. I know about the bloodlines. I know about you. The scar on her wrist itched. She rubbed it with her thumb. What do you want. Protection. Lucien straightened up. He took the cane in his right hand and twirled it once. A thin blade slid from the shaft with a sharp hiss. He caught it before it hit the floor. You want me to work for you. I want you to survive. There is a difference. Aurora looked at the blade. It was black steel, etched with runes that hurt her eyes. She looked back at his face. The amber eye glowed faintly in the low light. And if I say no. Then Evan finds you. And he does not stop at the door. Lucien stepped back. He gestured to the window. The street below was dark, but a figure stood under the flickering streetlamp. A silhouette that shifted and writhed like smoke. He is already here. Aurora looked out the window. The figure raised a hand. The glass in the window pane cracked with a spiderweb pattern. She turned back to Lucien. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic bird trapped in a cage. Get him out. He is not the problem. He is the bait. Aurora grabbed a heavy book from the table and hurled it at the window. The glass shattered inward. Rain lashed into the room. The figure on the street looked up. It had no face, only a void where features should be. Lucien raised the cane. The blade hummed. Run. No. I am not running. Then fight. Lucien stepped aside. He pointed the blade at the door. They are coming through the front. I will hold the window. Aurora grabbed a chair and wedged it under the deadbolt. She could hear the scratching at the door. It sounded like fingernails on wood, long and sharp. Why help me. Because I like you. Lucien smiled. It was a cold expression that did not reach his eyes. And because you are useful. The door handle turned. The wood groaned under the pressure. Aurora pulled her knife from her pocket. She stood beside him, shoulder to shoulder. The rain soaked the floor, mixing with the dust of the books. Tell me when to strike. When I say. Lucien gripped the cane tighter. His knuckles turned white. The door splintered. A hand reached through the wood, fingers elongated and black. Now.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
95.21% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1043
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1043
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"velvet"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"vibrated"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"weight"
2"velvet"
3"silence"
4"whisper"
5"vibrated"
6"etched"
7"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences146
matches(empty)
45.01% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount9
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences146
filterMatches
0"look"
1"know"
2"think"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences146
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1043
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount1043
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.25
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy3
Rory1
Lucien13
Frenchman1
Avaros2
Evan2
Aurora11
You9
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Rory"
2"Lucien"
3"Evan"
4"Aurora"
5"You"
places
0"Frenchman"
1"Avaros"
globalScore0.877
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like fingernails on wood, long and"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1043
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences146
matches
0"know that name"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean17.98
std16.42
cv0.913
sampleLengths
059
15
26
373
446
58
643
74
812
927
105
117
127
1321
1444
157
1638
175
1811
196
2053
2113
229
2336
2420
257
266
2738
2815
294
3013
3112
324
3335
347
359
3631
375
3812
3929
404
4139
423
439
4441
457
461
475
4823
4927
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences146
matches
0"were supposed"
1"are mistaken"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs213
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences146
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1044
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.014367816091954023
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005747126436781609
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences146
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences146
mean7.14
std4.17
cv0.584
sampleLengths
016
17
221
315
45
56
69
715
826
911
1012
113
1222
1312
149
158
168
1714
188
1913
204
215
223
234
247
256
267
277
285
291
304
312
327
333
3418
3513
3611
3714
386
397
407
416
4210
4310
445
455
465
476
486
493
39.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.2465753424657534
totalSentences146
uniqueOpeners36
24.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences138
matches
0"Then Evan finds you."
ratio0.007
34.49% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount64
totalSentences138
matches
0"She kept her back to"
1"She heard the floorboard creak"
2"You should not be here."
3"I am where I am"
4"He wore a tailored charcoal"
5"He leaned on an ivory-handled"
6"She kept her left hand"
7"They were never designed to"
8"He reached out, the tip"
9"I am not touching you."
10"I am observing."
11"You look tired, Rory."
12"She dropped her hand from"
13"He had killed men with"
14"He had killed men with"
15"I am not part of"
16"You never were."
17"She picked up a pen"
18"He did not look at"
19"He looked only at her."
ratio0.464
25.22% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount120
totalSentences138
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"Aurora did not turn from"
2"She kept her back to"
3"She heard the floorboard creak"
4"You should not be here."
5"I am where I am"
6"The voice was smooth, like"
7"Lucien stepped into the room,"
8"He wore a tailored charcoal"
9"He leaned on an ivory-handled"
10"Aurora turned slowly."
11"She kept her left hand"
12"The flat smelled of old"
13"Books covered every surface, spines"
14"The locks were supposed to"
15"They were never designed to"
16"Lucien tilted his head, his"
17"A small crescent mark from"
18"He reached out, the tip"
19"I am not touching you."
ratio0.87
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences138
matches
0"If you are here to"
1"If you are here to"
2"Because I like you."
ratio0.022
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He leaned on an ivory-handled cane that tapped against the wooden floorboards."
1"His voice dropped to a whisper that vibrated in her chest."
2"It was black steel, etched with runes that hurt her eyes."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.3813%