| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 82.38% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1419 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lightly" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 15.43% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1419 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "rhythmic" | | 1 | "silk" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "reminder" | | 4 | "scanned" | | 5 | "familiar" | | 6 | "navigating" | | 7 | "chill" | | 8 | "shimmered" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "perfect" | | 12 | "etched" | | 13 | "silence" | | 14 | "flicked" | | 15 | "grave" | | 16 | "stomach" | | 17 | "beacon" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | matches | | |
| 70.71% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 119 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1418 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 41.50% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 64 | | wordCount | 1106 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 2.17 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 24 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Isolde | 10 | | Courts | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Shade | 3 | | Evan | 1 | | London | 2 | | December | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Veil | 2 | | Dymas | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Shade" | | 5 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "December" |
| | globalScore | 0.415 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 57.41% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "shadow that seemed to drink the fading light" | | 1 | "twilight that seemed to have no source" | | 2 | "carpet that seemed to ripple without wind" |
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| 58.96% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.41 | | wordCount | 1418 | | matches | | 0 | "not a warrior, but she had spent enough time running from Evan" | | 1 | "not the damp chill of London winter, but a sterile, ancient cold" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 39.39 | | std | 20.74 | | cv | 0.527 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 66 | | 2 | 68 | | 3 | 54 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 56 | | 6 | 39 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 70 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 57 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 65 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 47 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 59 | | 21 | 57 | | 22 | 61 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 42 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 38 | | 28 | 38 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 61 | | 31 | 77 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 42 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 53 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | |
| 94.18% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 189 | | matches | | 0 | "was radiating" | | 1 | "was reacting" | | 2 | "wasn't just reacting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 119 | | ratio | 0.05 | | matches | | 0 | "Her voice didn't carry on the wind; it seemed to arrive directly in Aurora's mind, soft as silk." | | 1 | "Aurora watched the ground carefully; the dirt remained undisturbed where the seer had walked." | | 2 | "Wildflowers bloomed in the undergrowth—poppies, bluebells, and orchids that shouldn't exist in December." | | 3 | "It wasn't the absence of sound; it was the absence of life." | | 4 | "The flower didn't wilt; it hissed, releasing a puff of silver spores that hung in the air." | | 5 | "It wasn't just reacting to the Veil; it was reacting to the altar." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 317 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 6 | | adverbRatio | 0.01892744479495268 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 119 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 119 | | mean | 11.92 | | std | 6.59 | | cv | 0.553 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 27 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 42.58% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.31092436974789917 | | totalSentences | 119 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 35.84% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the three of them" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 99.57% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced at the silver" | | 1 | "It had been silent since" | | 2 | "It was a warning, or" | | 3 | "Her voice didn't carry on" | | 4 | "She wore no boots, her" | | 5 | "It was always cold, even" | | 6 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 7 | "She was a delivery driver," | | 8 | "She moved without sound, her" | | 9 | "It was barely visible, a" | | 10 | "She stumbled, her boots sinking" | | 11 | "They were oaks, but their" | | 12 | "They glowed with a faint," | | 13 | "It was radiating heat, a" | | 14 | "She stopped before a cluster" | | 15 | "Her expression was ageless, serene," | | 16 | "She pointed a slender finger" | | 17 | "It wasn't the absence of" | | 18 | "She stepped forward, her boot" | | 19 | "She checked the pendant again." |
| | ratio | 0.301 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 87 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "The air at the edge" | | 1 | "Aurora pulled her collar up" | | 2 | "She glanced at the silver" | | 3 | "The Heartstone pendant, deep crimson" | | 4 | "It had been silent since" | | 5 | "It was a warning, or" | | 6 | "Her voice didn't carry on" | | 7 | "The Half-Fae seer stood before" | | 8 | "She wore no boots, her" | | 9 | "Aurora adjusted the grip on" | | 10 | "It was always cold, even" | | 11 | "Aurora asked, her voice steady" | | 12 | "Isolde replied, turning her pale" | | 13 | "Nyx materialized from the darkness" | | 14 | "The Shade coalesced into a" | | 15 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 16 | "Aurora nodded, feeling the familiar" | | 17 | "She was a delivery driver," | | 18 | "Nyx whispered, the sound carrying" | | 19 | "Isolde stepped forward." |
| | ratio | 0.935 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "To anyone else, this was" | | 1 | "To Aurora, it was a" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 84.55% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The Shade coalesced into a solid form, a humanoid silhouette of living shadow that seemed to drink the fading light." | | 1 | "They were oaks, but their bark shimmered with a pearlescent sheen, and the branches twisted in geometric patterns that hurt the eyes if she stared too long." | | 2 | "Wildflowers bloomed in the undergrowth—poppies, bluebells, and orchids that shouldn't exist in December." | | 3 | "It was radiating heat, a steady pulse that matched her own heartbeat." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora asked, her voice steady despite the sudden drop in temperature" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered, the sound carrying like a breeze through dry leaves" | | 2 | "Nyx’s voice came, though the Shade was now drifting like smoke, their form shifting between solid and incorporeal" | | 3 | "Nyx said, their voice dropping to a hush" | | 4 | "Isolde said, not turning around" | | 5 | "Aurora said, her voice low" | | 6 | "Nyx said, their violet eyes dimming slightly" | | 7 | "She turned, her lavender gaze piercing" |
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| 44.74% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Aurora murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "the Shade whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.368 | | leniency | 0.737 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.211 | |