Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBG5Y8YZE38JX22DQF8CFJ2

Run Details

Duration:
28.1s
Cost:
$0.001775
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock didn't rattle the door; it demanded it, a singular, authoritative rap against the wood that vibrated through Rory’s bare feet. She was crouched on the floor, a spreadsheet on her laptop screen reflecting the glow of her bright blue eyes, surrounded by a sea of open books and scattered parchment. The flat cramped around her, every inch of surface obscured by research notes and ancient texts that didn’t sit right with modern London plumbing. Somewhere beneath the floorboards, the hum of the curry house below drifted up, the heavy scent of cardamom and chili smoke seeping into the carpet, but here, the air smelled of old paper and dust. Rory stood, her muscles stiffening from hours of stillness. She moved to the door, her black shoes making no sound on the wooden floor. Her wrist caught the light—a small crescent scar visible against the pale skin. She hesitated. Eva’s security was a joke if the deadbolts could be bypassed, but she’d reinforced them all the same. Two deadbolts, a chain lock, and the habit of checking the mirror before touching the handle. She looked through the fishbowl lens. Lucien Moreau was standing there. He was too tall for the frame, charcoal suit swallowing the dim hallway light, his platinum hair slicked back with a precision that suggested a lifetime of grooming rather than chance. He leaned against the doorframe as if he owned the space, his posture relaxed, but the tension in his grip on the ivory handle of his cane was palpable. She kept her voice level. Who is it? It’s me, Laila. He said it in perfect English, though she knew he was tempted to drop to French just to see if the syllables tasted bitter still. She didn’t open the door wide immediately. She engaged the chain. Then the inner deadbolt. Finally, the main lock. The metal clacked and thunked, each sound emphasizing that barrier between them. When she finally yanked the door open, Lucien didn’t step back. He simply shifted his weight, his heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—locking onto hers. One of them was warm, the other was void. Together, they were unsettling. You look tired, he said. And you look like a funeral director, Rory countered. She crossed her arms, her elbow brushing the stack of books on the table behind her. A paperweight shifted dangerously. I didn’t invite you. You came to London for my invitation. Rory stepped back, giving him space. The flat was cluttered. A tabby cat named Ptolemy watched them from atop a pile of encyclopedias, unfazed by the demon fixer standing in his sanctuary. The smell of curry from the kitchen below washed over them as Lucien stepped inside. He didn’t take off his shoes. He didn’t take off his gloves. He stood in the middle of the room like a statue in a museum, out of place in this chaotic sanctuary of human knowledge. This isn’t your jurisdiction, she said. No. It’s not. He raised his hand, his index finger hovering over his chest. I’m here on personal business. Rory’s cool demeanor cracked. Her throat tightened. She moved to the small table where a pot of tea sat cold. I thought you went to Marseille. Back to the family. Back to Avaros, he corrected. His voice was smooth, a low counterpoint to the thump of the bass drum coming from the streetlights flickering outside. The demon blood in him was restless. It showed in the way his eyes seemed to catch the light differently. He was waiting for her to pour the tea. You know I said I’m done with the underworld. I know. He tapped the cane against the floorboard. The sound was sharp, like bone on tile. I told you I’d be waiting if you ever needed to be found. You found the wrong person. I’m a delivery person now. Golden Empress. I carry dumplings, not secrets. Lucien took a step closer. The distance between them shrank. She could smell the cold rain on his coat, the faint scent of ozone that lingered on a man who walked through dimensions that didn’t care about weather. I’m not here to ask about work, Rory. I’m here to say I’m sorry. The air in the room seemed to drop ten degrees. She gripped the teapot. The ceramic was hot against her palm. Sorry for what? Running away? Or leaving you standing in the lobby of the Savoy? Both. He reached out a gloved hand, then stopped himself, lowering it. He watched her wrist. She had worn the scarf that day. He remembered the shape of the hand that held him. He saw the scar now. It made her more human in a way that didn’t fit his life. The world saw him as a monolith. She saw the cracks. Why now? she asked. Her voice was steady, but her heart hammered against her ribs. I had a problem. You always have problems. This one is yours. Rory set the teapot down. It clinked, a fragile sound in the tension. She looked at the books surrounding them. Scrolls she had translated herself. Notes on the ley lines beneath London. She had built a life that excluded demons. Excluded Lucien. Excluded the half-demon who walked in a charcoal suit with a blade hidden behind ivory. You broke the terms. I did. He moved forward again, not touching her, just invading the sphere of her personal space. The heat radiating from him was intense. He smelled like old money, rain, and something metallic. You know why I left, she said softly. You told me to leave. You told me you couldn’t stop watching me. I can’t stop now. He reached into his pocket and pulled out a small, rectangular object. He held it out. A key. It’s for Silas’ bar. Above the flat. Rory stared at the key. I live above Silas’ bar. I know. I know you moved back to where you started. But this flat... Eva’s flat. It’s compromised. The deadbolts are a trick now. Someone knows. Rory’s breath hitched. She had heard the scratching at the door the night before. She thought it was the cat. Ptolemy meowed, arching his back, hissing at the empty corner of the room. How do you know? she whispered. Lucien’s gaze shifted to the window, then back to her. The amber eye caught the streetlight. The black eye absorbed it. I know everything, Rory. He stepped up to her, close enough for her to count the lashes on his one visible side. He didn’t touch her wrist. He didn’t have to. His presence was a claim. I didn’t show up because I owed you a debt. I showed up because I want you to know if I die, someone else comes for you. She looked up, her chin trembling. The memory of their last night together flashed. The rain. The silence. The way he had looked at her like she was already a ghost. Get out, she said. Rory, don’t. If I see you again, I call the police. Lucien smiled. It wasn’t quite a smile; it was a sharp, predatory curve of the lips that suggested danger. I’m not a civilian, Laila. There is no police service for the things I carry. He placed the key on the counter next to her hand. He turned to the door. Wait. He paused, his hand on the latch. Why did you come back? Because I’m tired of waiting. And because I’m not letting you die without telling you. He opened the door. The rain from the street washed into the room, carrying the scent of brick and exhaust. Who knows I’m here? she asked. No one. He stepped out, the cane scraping against the floorboards. He looked back one last time, the heterochromatic gaze holding her in the dark. I know you’re not the girl who runs. You never were. The door clicked shut. Rory stood in the center of the room, the smell of curry and dust heavy in the air. Her hands shook as she picked up the key. She looked at the door, then at the cat sleeping on the books. She felt the weight of the world change. She was never alone. That was the thing. The only constant in a life full of chaos was the man in the charcoal suit. And now he was just outside. Waiting.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.44% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1403
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.80% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1403
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"vibrated"
count1
1
word"tension"
count2
2
word"palpable"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"sanctuary"
count2
6
word"chaotic"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"vibrated"
1"tension"
2"palpable"
3"perfect"
4"weight"
5"sanctuary"
6"chaotic"
7"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences175
matches(empty)
36.73% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount11
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences175
filterMatches
0"look"
1"know"
2"see"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences175
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1400
ratio0
matches(empty)
28.85% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions5
matches
0"You look tired, he said."
1"Back to Avaros, he corrected."
2"You know why I left, she said softly."
3"Get out, she said."
4"If I see you again, I call the police."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1396
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Rory12
London3
Moreau1
Laila2
English1
French1
Lucien7
Ptolemy2
Marseille1
Avaros1
Empress1
Savoy1
You10
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Laila"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
5"You"
places
0"London"
1"French"
2"Marseille"
3"Avaros"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
95.05% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences91
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"smelled like old money, rain, and somethin"
1"quite a smile; it was a sharp, predatory curve of the lips that suggested danger"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1400
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences175
matches
0"emphasizing that barrier"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean25
std24.23
cv0.969
sampleLengths
0111
173
26
365
48
528
667
75
833
97
1083
116
1219
1330
1454
159
1630
1717
1852
1936
201
2161
2215
234
244
254
2657
274
282
2931
3021
314
3218
337
3410
3526
3633
376
3825
3959
4031
414
422
439
4434
4516
461
477
485
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences175
matches
0"was crouched"
1"was tempted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs269
matches
0"was standing"
1"was waiting"
77.55% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences175
ratio0.023
matches
0"The knock didn't rattle the door; it demanded it, a singular, authoritative rap against the wood that vibrated through Rory’s bare feet."
1"Her wrist caught the light—a small crescent scar visible against the pale skin."
2"He simply shifted his weight, his heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—locking onto hers."
3"It wasn’t quite a smile; it was a sharp, predatory curve of the lips that suggested danger."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount971
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"below washed over them"
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.024716786817713696
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.008238928939237899
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences175
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences175
mean8
std6.36
cv0.795
sampleLengths
022
130
224
335
49
515
613
72
818
916
106
115
1231
1329
145
153
163
1725
187
194
204
214
2212
2311
2412
259
264
275
289
2916
304
314
327
336
344
3522
3615
376
386
3924
406
411
422
4311
445
454
463
4713
486
494
35.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats26
diversityRatio0.2571428571428571
totalSentences175
uniqueOpeners45
67.11% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences149
matches
0"Somewhere beneath the floorboards, the"
1"Then the inner deadbolt."
2"Finally, the main lock."
ratio0.02
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount85
totalSentences149
matches
0"She was crouched on the"
1"She moved to the door,"
2"Her wrist caught the light—a"
3"She looked through the fishbowl"
4"He was too tall for"
5"He leaned against the doorframe"
6"She kept her voice level."
7"It’s me, Laila."
8"He said it in perfect"
9"She didn’t open the door"
10"She engaged the chain."
11"He simply shifted his weight,"
12"You look tired, he said."
13"She crossed her arms, her"
14"I didn’t invite you."
15"You came to London for"
16"He didn’t take off his"
17"He didn’t take off his"
18"He stood in the middle"
19"He raised his hand, his"
ratio0.57
43.89% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount124
totalSentences149
matches
0"The knock didn't rattle the"
1"She was crouched on the"
2"The flat cramped around her,"
3"Rory stood, her muscles stiffening"
4"She moved to the door,"
5"Her wrist caught the light—a"
6"Eva’s security was a joke"
7"She looked through the fishbowl"
8"Lucien Moreau was standing there."
9"He was too tall for"
10"He leaned against the doorframe"
11"She kept her voice level."
12"It’s me, Laila."
13"He said it in perfect"
14"She didn’t open the door"
15"She engaged the chain."
16"The metal clacked and thunked,"
17"He simply shifted his weight,"
18"You look tired, he said."
19"She crossed her arms, her"
ratio0.832
67.11% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences149
matches
0"If I see you again,"
1"Because I’m tired of waiting."
ratio0.013
55.39% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The knock didn't rattle the door; it demanded it, a singular, authoritative rap against the wood that vibrated through Rory’s bare feet."
1"The flat cramped around her, every inch of surface obscured by research notes and ancient texts that didn’t sit right with modern London plumbing."
2"He leaned against the doorframe as if he owned the space, his posture relaxed, but the tension in his grip on the ivory handle of his cane was palpable."
3"It made her more human in a way that didn’t fit his life."
4"Excluded the half-demon who walked in a charcoal suit with a blade hidden behind ivory."
5"Ptolemy meowed, arching his back, hissing at the empty corner of the room."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
81.3804%