| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 0 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.44% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1403 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 60.80% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1403 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "vibrated" | | 1 | "tension" | | 2 | "palpable" | | 3 | "perfect" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "sanctuary" | | 6 | "chaotic" | | 7 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 175 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 36.73% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 11 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 175 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 175 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1400 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 28.85% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "You look tired, he said." | | 1 | "Back to Avaros, he corrected." | | 2 | "You know why I left, she said softly." | | 3 | "Get out, she said." | | 4 | "If I see you again, I call the police." |
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| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 1396 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.86 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "You" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 12 | | London | 3 | | Moreau | 1 | | Laila | 2 | | English | 1 | | French | 1 | | Lucien | 7 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Marseille | 1 | | Avaros | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Savoy | 1 | | You | 10 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Laila" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Ptolemy" | | 5 | "You" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "French" | | 2 | "Marseille" | | 3 | "Avaros" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 95.05% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "smelled like old money, rain, and somethin" | | 1 | "quite a smile; it was a sharp, predatory curve of the lips that suggested danger" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1400 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 175 | | matches | | 0 | "emphasizing that barrier" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 56 | | mean | 25 | | std | 24.23 | | cv | 0.969 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 111 | | 1 | 73 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 65 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 67 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 83 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 54 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 52 | | 19 | 36 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 61 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 57 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 31 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 33 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 59 | | 40 | 31 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 34 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 175 | | matches | | 0 | "was crouched" | | 1 | "was tempted" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 269 | | matches | | 0 | "was standing" | | 1 | "was waiting" |
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| 77.55% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 175 | | ratio | 0.023 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock didn't rattle the door; it demanded it, a singular, authoritative rap against the wood that vibrated through Rory’s bare feet." | | 1 | "Her wrist caught the light—a small crescent scar visible against the pale skin." | | 2 | "He simply shifted his weight, his heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—locking onto hers." | | 3 | "It wasn’t quite a smile; it was a sharp, predatory curve of the lips that suggested danger." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 971 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "below washed over them" |
| | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.024716786817713696 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008238928939237899 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 175 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 175 | | mean | 8 | | std | 6.36 | | cv | 0.795 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 35.14% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 26 | | diversityRatio | 0.2571428571428571 | | totalSentences | 175 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 67.11% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 149 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere beneath the floorboards, the" | | 1 | "Then the inner deadbolt." | | 2 | "Finally, the main lock." |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 85 | | totalSentences | 149 | | matches | | 0 | "She was crouched on the" | | 1 | "She moved to the door," | | 2 | "Her wrist caught the light—a" | | 3 | "She looked through the fishbowl" | | 4 | "He was too tall for" | | 5 | "He leaned against the doorframe" | | 6 | "She kept her voice level." | | 7 | "It’s me, Laila." | | 8 | "He said it in perfect" | | 9 | "She didn’t open the door" | | 10 | "She engaged the chain." | | 11 | "He simply shifted his weight," | | 12 | "You look tired, he said." | | 13 | "She crossed her arms, her" | | 14 | "I didn’t invite you." | | 15 | "You came to London for" | | 16 | "He didn’t take off his" | | 17 | "He didn’t take off his" | | 18 | "He stood in the middle" | | 19 | "He raised his hand, his" |
| | ratio | 0.57 | |
| 43.89% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 124 | | totalSentences | 149 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock didn't rattle the" | | 1 | "She was crouched on the" | | 2 | "The flat cramped around her," | | 3 | "Rory stood, her muscles stiffening" | | 4 | "She moved to the door," | | 5 | "Her wrist caught the light—a" | | 6 | "Eva’s security was a joke" | | 7 | "She looked through the fishbowl" | | 8 | "Lucien Moreau was standing there." | | 9 | "He was too tall for" | | 10 | "He leaned against the doorframe" | | 11 | "She kept her voice level." | | 12 | "It’s me, Laila." | | 13 | "He said it in perfect" | | 14 | "She didn’t open the door" | | 15 | "She engaged the chain." | | 16 | "The metal clacked and thunked," | | 17 | "He simply shifted his weight," | | 18 | "You look tired, he said." | | 19 | "She crossed her arms, her" |
| | ratio | 0.832 | |
| 67.11% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 149 | | matches | | 0 | "If I see you again," | | 1 | "Because I’m tired of waiting." |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 55.39% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock didn't rattle the door; it demanded it, a singular, authoritative rap against the wood that vibrated through Rory’s bare feet." | | 1 | "The flat cramped around her, every inch of surface obscured by research notes and ancient texts that didn’t sit right with modern London plumbing." | | 2 | "He leaned against the doorframe as if he owned the space, his posture relaxed, but the tension in his grip on the ivory handle of his cane was palpable." | | 3 | "It made her more human in a way that didn’t fit his life." | | 4 | "Excluded the half-demon who walked in a charcoal suit with a blade hidden behind ivory." | | 5 | "Ptolemy meowed, arching his back, hissing at the empty corner of the room." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |