Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBGAGWRD0CCW5ZSGCWK8PTA

Run Details

Duration:
1m 30s
Cost:
$0.020447
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped onto the platform of the abandoned Camden station. Dust coated the floor, thick enough to muffle the click of her boots. She scanned the darkness, her eyes adjusting to the low hum of emergency lights strung across the vaulted ceiling. The air smelled of damp concrete and ozone, a sharp tang that clung to the back of her throat. A body lay near the edge of the tracks. Quinn pulled a flashlight from her belt and clicked it on. The beam cut through the gloom, landing on the victim. A man in a tailored suit, face pale as chalk. No blood pooled beneath him. The wound on his chest looked like a tear in fabric rather than flesh. Eva Kowalski stood a few feet away, clutching her worn leather satchel. Green eyes widened behind round glasses. She tucked a strand of curly red hair behind her left ear, a nervous tic that betrayed her composure. "You see it, don't you?" Eva asked. Quinn walked closer, boots crunching on gravel. She knelt, inspecting the wound without touching the skin. The edges of the tear shimmered with a faint violet light. "I see a dead man," Quinn replied. She stood, brushing dust from her trousers. "I see a homicide. I don't see magic." "Magic doesn't leave a signature like this." Eva stepped forward, her satchel thumping against her hip. "This is a breach. The Veil Market moved tonight. The full moon shifted the coordinates." Quinn ignored the mention of the Market. She focused on the body. "Cause of death?" "Energy drain," Eva said. "Look at the skin. It's desiccated. Dehydrated in seconds." "Dehydration takes time." Quinn checked her watch. The worn leather strap creaked. "This body is cold. Rigor mortis hasn't set in, but the skin temperature is below ambient. That's impossible." "Impossible for your forensics team." Eva pulled a notebook from her bag. "For the archives, it's standard procedure when a Shade artisan loses control." Quinn turned on her heel. "I need a report, Kowalski. Not folklore." "This isn't folklore." Eva snapped the notebook shut. "This is the Veil. You're standing in a black market for banned alchemical substances. The entry requirement is a bone token. Did you check the victim's pockets?" Quinn reached into the suit jacket. Her fingers brushed against cold metal. She pulled out a small brass object. A compass. The casing bore a patina of verdigris. "Found this." Quinn held it up. The needle spun wildly, defying magnetic north. "It points to the rift," Eva said. "Not the exit. The rift." Quinn examined the face of the compass. Protective sigils etched into the brass glowed faintly under her flashlight. She flipped it over. The back bore a maker's mark she didn't recognize. "Who made this?" "Shade artisan." Eva moved closer, her voice dropping. "They craft tools for the Market. This one tracks supernatural energy. It shouldn't be here." "It was in his pocket." Quinn pocketed the compass. "He bought it. Or he stole it." "He sold it." Eva pointed to the platform wall. Graffiti scrawled in glowing ink marked a transaction zone. "The Market moves every full moon. Tonight was the shift. The victim was a broker. He got caught in the transition." Quinn walked to the wall. The glowing ink faded as she approached. She rubbed a finger against the residue. It felt like ash. "Transition implies movement," Quinn said. "He's dead on the tracks. No movement." "He moved through the wall." Eva gestured to the concrete. A crack ran vertically down the surface, pulsing with the same violet light as the wound. "The rift opened here. He tried to cross. The compass locked him in place." Quinn stared at the crack. The light pulsed in rhythm with a sound she couldn't hear, a vibration in her teeth. She looked back at the body. The wound on the chest matched the crack in the wall perfectly. "You're saying he didn't die from a knife or a bullet." "He died from displacement." Eva leaned against a pillar. "His physical form couldn't sustain the shift between realms. He unraveled." Quinn walked back to the body. She crouched again, ignoring the smell of ozone. She traced the line of the wound with her eyes. The fabric of the suit remained intact, but the skin beneath vanished. "Where did he go?" "Nowhere." Eva's voice remained steady. "He's gone. The Veil took him." "The Veil doesn't take people." Quinn stood, her posture rigid. "People take people." "Not this time." Quinn looked at the compass in her hand. The needle stopped spinning. It pointed directly at the crack in the wall. "He didn't sell it." Quinn tightened her grip on the brass casing. "He used it." "Used it for what?" "To find something." Quinn walked toward the crack. The vibration grew stronger. "A broker doesn't carry a tool that tracks rifts unless he's hunting a specific opening." "Or hiding from one." Quinn ignored Eva. She shone the light into the crack. Darkness pooled there, deeper than the rest of the station. The violet light flickered. "If he was hunting," Quinn said, "he found it. And it killed him." "The Market protects its own." Eva stepped back. "You shouldn't go closer." Quinn ignored the warning. She reached into her pocket and pulled out her notebook. She sketched the sigils on the compass face. "DS Morris died three years ago," Quinn said. "Unexplained circumstances." Eva froze. "That was a different case." "Was it?" Quinn looked up. "Morris had a compass in his bag. Brass. Verdigris." "You never told me that." "I didn't know." Quinn pocketed the compass. "This isn't a murder scene. It's a hunting ground." "For what?" "For the thing that took Morris." Quinn turned back to the crack. The light pulsed faster. "And it's here." Eva gripped her satchel tighter. "Quinn, you need to leave. The Market shifts again soon. If you're not out, you won't be able to leave." Quinn didn't move. She stared into the darkness of the crack. The needle on the compass vibrated in her pocket. "I'm not leaving until I know who sold him the compass." "It's not about who sold it." Eva's voice trembled. "It's about what he bought with it." Quinn stepped closer to the wall. The vibration hummed in her bones. She raised her hand, palm open, toward the crack. "Show me," she said. The violet light flared, blinding her for a second. When her vision cleared, the crack had widened. A shape moved inside the darkness. "Quinn," Eva warned. Quinn ignored her. She reached for her radio. "I need backup," she said. "And bring a containment team." "You can't contain this." "Watch me." Quinn stepped forward, one foot over the threshold of the crack. The air grew cold. Her breath misted in the beam of her flashlight. "Wait," Eva said. Quinn paused. She looked back at Eva. "The compass," Eva said. "It's not pointing at the rift anymore." Quinn checked the compass. The needle pointed at Eva. "What?" "It points to the nearest supernatural rift or portal." Eva's face drained of color. "It's not the wall." Quinn looked at the compass. She looked at Eva. "Explain." "I am the rift." Quinn's hand hovered over her holster. "Don't," Eva said. "I didn't know. I just found the body." Quinn lowered her hand. She looked at the compass again. The needle swung back to the wall. "It was a distraction." Quinn said. "The body. The crack." "What is?" "The evidence." Quinn turned back to the body. "Someone wanted me here." "Why?" "To find the compass." Quinn walked back to the body. She checked the pockets again. "There's a second one." "Where?" "Under the body." Quinn pulled a second brass compass from beneath the suit. This one had no verdigris. The needle pointed north. "A fake," Quinn said. "To lead me to the real one." "Or to lead you to me." Eva stepped back. Quinn looked at Eva. She looked at the wall. She looked at the compass in her hand. "You're right," Quinn said. "It's not about the body." "Then what is it about?" "The Market." Quinn put the compass in her pocket. "It's not moving tonight." "It moves every full moon." "Not if someone anchors it." Quinn looked at the crack. "Someone kept it here. To catch me." "Catch you for what?" "For what I know." Quinn holstered her flashlight. "Morris didn't die by accident. He died because he knew." "Knew what?" "That the Market is a trap." Eva stared at her. "You're making this up." "Am I?" Quinn walked to the edge of the platform. "Check the train schedule." "There are no trains." "Check the tracks." Eva looked down. The tracks glowed. "Quinn," she said. "The tracks are moving." "They aren't." Quinn turned. "The station is." The lights flickered. The walls groaned. The concrete shifted beneath their feet. "Run," Quinn said. "Where?" "Out." They ran. The station stretched, the platform elongating like taffy. The crack in the wall widened, swallowing the darkness. Quinn reached the stairs. She grabbed Eva's arm. "Move." They climbed. The sound of the shifting station followed them, a grinding roar. Quinn reached the surface. The air smelled of rain and exhaust. She turned back. The entrance to the station was gone. A brick wall stood where the stairs had been. "Where did it go?" Eva panted. "It moved." Quinn checked her watch. "Full moon." "But we're out." "Are we?" Quinn looked at the compass in her pocket. It hummed. "Quinn." "I know." "What do we do?" "We wait." "For what?" "For the Market to come back." Quinn turned away from the wall. She walked down the street. Eva followed. "You're not making sense." "I'm making a plan." "What plan?" "To find the broker." "He's dead." "Not him." Quinn stopped. "The one who sold him the compass." "How do you find him?" "I have his name." "Where?" "On the compass." "It's a tool." "It's a ledger." Quinn opened her pocket. She held the compass up. The brass face reflected the streetlights. "Look." Eva leaned in. The sigils shifted. They formed letters. "A name?" "A location." "Where?" "The British Museum." Eva froze. "That's where I work." "I know." "You knew?" "I suspected." "Why?" "Because the archives hold the records of the Shade artisans." "And the Market?" "They sell the records." "To who?" "To people like you." "I'm not a criminal." "You're an occult researcher." "There's a difference." "Not here." Quinn started walking again. "Where are we going?" "To the Museum." "Now?" "Now." "It's closed." "Not for us." "Why?" "Because I have a badge." "That won't open the archives." "It will open the doors." "And the rest?" "The rest is up to you." "Me?" "You know the codes." "I don't know the codes." "You do." "I don't." "Why are you saying that?" "Because you're the one who found the body." "I found the body." "Who called you?" "I don't know." "Who called me?" "You don't know." "I don't know." "Then how did we get here?" "We followed the compass." "The compass didn't tell us to come here." "It told us to find the broker." "The broker is dead." "The broker is a title." "Who is the broker?" "You." "No." "Yes." "I'm a researcher." "You're a broker." "I don't sell things." "You sell information." "That's research." "That's the same thing." "No." "Yes." "Stop it." "Why?" "Because you're wrong." "Am I?" "Yes." "Prove it." "I can't." "Then I'm right." "Maybe." "No maybe." "Okay." "Okay." "Let's go." "Where?" "To the Museum." "Now." "Now." They walked. The street stretched ahead. The lights flickered. The compass hummed. Quinn didn't look back. She kept walking.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags50
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"Eva stepped back [back]"
1"Quinn turned back [back]"
2"Quinn turned back [back]"
3"Quinn walked back [back]"
4"Eva stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences220
tagDensity0.227
leniency0.455
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.045
97.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1941
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.94% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1941
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"shimmered"
count1
3
word"standard"
count1
4
word"magnetic"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count2
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count3
9
word"vibrated"
count1
10
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"gloom"
2"shimmered"
3"standard"
4"magnetic"
5"etched"
6"pulsed"
7"traced"
8"flickered"
9"vibrated"
10"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences176
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences176
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences345
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1941
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions96
wordCount1021
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity5.58
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity9.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn57
Camden1
Kowalski1
Market1
Eva34
Graffiti1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Eva"
4"Graffiti"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a tear in fabric rather than"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1941
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences345
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs216
mean8.99
std9.9
cv1.101
sampleLengths
063
19
250
337
47
527
622
731
815
913
1030
1124
1212
1335
1428
1513
1612
1731
183
1923
2016
2139
2223
2312
2440
2539
2611
2720
2836
294
3011
3113
323
3321
3415
354
3627
374
3824
3913
4012
4122
4210
437
4414
455
4616
472
4819
4925
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences176
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs206
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences345
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1021
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.024485798237022526
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005876591576885406
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences345
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences345
mean5.63
std3.94
cv0.7
sampleLengths
012
113
219
319
49
511
610
710
85
914
1012
116
1219
137
147
159
1611
177
187
198
2016
2115
227
235
243
254
269
277
285
2918
3012
3112
325
337
348
3527
366
376
387
392
407
416
427
437
445
457
4611
474
489
493
41.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats28
diversityRatio0.2289855072463768
totalSentences345
uniqueOpeners79
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences146
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences146
matches
0"She scanned the darkness, her"
1"She tucked a strand of"
2"She knelt, inspecting the wound"
3"She stood, brushing dust from"
4"She focused on the body."
5"Her fingers brushed against cold"
6"She pulled out a small"
7"She flipped it over."
8"She rubbed a finger against"
9"It felt like ash."
10"She looked back at the"
11"She crouched again, ignoring the"
12"She traced the line of"
13"It pointed directly at the"
14"She shone the light into"
15"She reached into her pocket"
16"She sketched the sigils on"
17"She stared into the darkness"
18"She raised her hand, palm"
19"She reached for her radio."
ratio0.226
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount142
totalSentences146
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped onto"
1"Dust coated the floor, thick"
2"She scanned the darkness, her"
3"The air smelled of damp"
4"A body lay near the"
5"Quinn pulled a flashlight from"
6"The beam cut through the"
7"A man in a tailored"
8"The wound on his chest"
9"Eva Kowalski stood a few"
10"She tucked a strand of"
11"Quinn walked closer, boots crunching"
12"She knelt, inspecting the wound"
13"The edges of the tear"
14"She stood, brushing dust from"
15"Eva stepped forward, her satchel"
16"Quinn ignored the mention of"
17"She focused on the body."
18"Quinn checked her watch"
19"The worn leather strap creaked."
ratio0.973
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences146
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She tucked a strand of curly red hair behind her left ear, a nervous tic that betrayed her composure."
95.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags50
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Eva stepped, her satchel thumping against her hip"
1"Eva moved, her voice dropping"
2"Quinn stood, her posture rigid"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags20
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Eva snapped (snap)"
1"Eva warned (warn)"
2"Eva panted (pant)"
dialogueSentences220
tagDensity0.091
leniency0.182
rawRatio0.15
effectiveRatio0.027
83.2748%