| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.68% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1366 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 19.47% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1366 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "scanned" | | 4 | "grave" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "loomed" | | 7 | "beacon" | | 8 | "vibrated" | | 9 | "could feel" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "dancing" | | 12 | "footsteps" | | 13 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 221 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 221 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 221 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 22 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1366 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 15 | | wordCount | 1346 | | uniqueNames | 3 | | maxNameDensity | 0.97 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Rory | 13 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 64.77% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "trunks that seemed to lean inward, closing the circle tight" | | 1 | "sounded like wet skin dragging over stone" | | 2 | "sounded like something heavy being pulled" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1366 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 221 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 60 | | mean | 22.77 | | std | 17.05 | | cv | 0.749 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 56 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 52 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 42 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 31 | | 11 | 51 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 51 | | 14 | 53 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 47 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 47 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 45 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 53 | | 25 | 31 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 35 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 33 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 38 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 30 | | 37 | 39 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 41 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 29 | | 43 | 23 | | 44 | 36 | | 45 | 24 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 31 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 97.32% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 221 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "were blurred" | | 2 | "being pulled" | | 3 | "was gone" | | 4 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 251 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 221 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1347 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.025241276911655532 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005196733481811433 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 221 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 221 | | mean | 6.18 | | std | 4.18 | | cv | 0.676 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 33.26% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 37 | | diversityRatio | 0.16289592760180996 | | totalSentences | 221 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 52.91% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 189 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the pendant remained bright," | | 1 | "Just trees and grass." | | 2 | "Just the black void." |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 67.62% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 189 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped into the clearing" | | 1 | "She checked her watch." | | 2 | "Her voice sounded flat, swallowed" | | 3 | "They glowed with a faint" | | 4 | "She touched the silver chain" | | 5 | "It radiated a dull heat," | | 6 | "she whispered to the stone" | | 7 | "She walked toward the center" | | 8 | "Her boots crunched on gravel" | | 9 | "She scanned the tree line." | | 10 | "She waited for the rustle" | | 11 | "She took a step forward." | | 12 | "She pulled it out from" | | 13 | "She tucked the stone back" | | 14 | "She walked faster now, keeping" | | 15 | "It sounded like wet skin" | | 16 | "Her voice stayed steady, though" | | 17 | "She turned back to the" | | 18 | "She placed her hand on" | | 19 | "It vibrated under her fingers," |
| | ratio | 0.381 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 181 | | totalSentences | 189 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory pushed through the gap" | | 1 | "The oak bark felt slick" | | 2 | "She stepped into the clearing" | | 3 | "The wind died." | | 4 | "The city hum of Richmond" | | 5 | "She checked her watch." | | 6 | "The second hand spun counter-clockwise" | | 7 | "Her voice sounded flat, swallowed" | | 8 | "The wildflowers bloomed around her" | | 9 | "Bluebells and foxgloves pushed through" | | 10 | "They glowed with a faint" | | 11 | "Rory pulled her coat tighter." | | 12 | "The cold bit through the" | | 13 | "She touched the silver chain" | | 14 | "The Heartstone pendant pressed against" | | 15 | "It radiated a dull heat," | | 16 | "she whispered to the stone" | | 17 | "The crimson gem flared once," | | 18 | "The pulse grew stronger, a" | | 19 | "She walked toward the center" |
| | ratio | 0.958 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 189 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The boundary markers loomed tall, ancient oak trunks that seemed to lean inward, closing the circle tight." | | 1 | "It vibrated under her fingers, a low hum that traveled up her arm and settled in her teeth." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 59.09% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.182 | | effectiveRatio | 0.182 | |