Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBGG7DTN728491RXXY371WS

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29.9s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The brass handle turned cold in Aurora’s grip. She shoved the door open before the knock finished echoing through the hallway. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing, a study in charcoal silk against peeling cream paint, one ivory-handled cane resting heavily on his hip. He didn’t smile. The air in the stairwell grew thick, smelling of stale curry and old books from downstairs. Aurora kept the door half-shut, body braced against the frame like a soldier behind a barricade. Her scarred left wrist twitched at her side, fingers curling into her palm until the crescent mark dug into her skin. Lucien’s gaze swept the corridor, then locked onto her. Heterochromatic eyes caught the dim light, one amber wheeling in the shadow, one black as spilled ink. You shouldn’t be here. It’s been three weeks since I asked you to stay away. I’m not here to ask for permission. He stepped past her shoulder. His coat smelled of rain and gun oil, a sharp contrast to the vanilla tea that usually hung in the flat. He moved inside, eyes already scanning the stacks of books lining the walls. The flat was cramped, every inch conquered by scrolls, research notes, and the scattered papers of Aurora’s unfinished law degree. You know the rules. The flat is secure. Three deadbolts. Security means nothing against a man who knows the code. Lucien tapped his cane on the floorboards. A click sounded from the handle, then the mechanism inside the head slid open. He withdrew a thin, curved blade, grey as steel, before she could blink the movement. I didn’t come here to hurt you. You came here because you’re desperate. She crossed her arms, eyes dropping to the blade before meeting his gaze again. Evan’s gone. You know that. We’re done with this life. We are not. The flat was quiet save for the distant sizzle of frying chips from the curry house below. A tabby cat slunk from behind the sofa, tail high, and circled Lucien’s polished boot. Who told Evan you were safe? Lucien ignored the cat, stepping closer, invading the space she had left open. He smelled like winter air and expensive cologne. No one. She held him there. The silence stretched, heavy and suffocating. You came back to burn it down. To burn it down, I needed the key. Lucien held out his palm. Aurora took a step forward. Her shoes were silent on the rug. She had not slept in two nights. The flat was a fortress built by her friends while her mind rotted away with every unanswered phone call. I don’t have it. Then he has her. Lucien’s voice dropped an octave. Darker. More dangerous. Who? She felt the blood drain from her face, leaving her cold. A figure appeared in the hallway mirror at the end of the room. She hadn’t registered the sound of the window latch being forced. It moved too fast for Aurora’s eyes to track, but the reflection was too large for anyone standing in the corridor. Someone who knows you’re hiding the ledger. Lucien didn’t move towards the mirror. He shifted his weight, cane poised in his right hand like a sword hilt. If you brought them here, you’re dead. I didn’t. He flicked the blade closed with a snap. The sound cut through the dark air. Someone followed me. The cat hissed, arching its back, fur bristling against the sofa. Ptolemy darted out the open door into the hallway. The figure in the mirror stepped forward. A man in a grey hoodie. The reflection moved in sync with the physical man standing just outside her door frame. He raised a hand. A flash of silver flashed in the air. Lock it. Lucien moved. Aurora spun towards the handle, but the figure was already inside the room. The air pressure dropped. Lucien intercepted him before he took a second step, driving the cane into the intruder’s gut. The man doubled over, air rushing out in a wheezing gasp. Lucien didn’t stop. He twisted the blade in his cane and slashed the air. The intruder crumpled to the floor. Lucien turned slowly. His amber eye glowed. You were right. The room was silent again. Dust motes danced in the sudden light from the hallway. The intruder groaned, clutching his stomach, struggling to draw breath. The door remainedajar, letting in the smell of the curry house below. Aurora stared at the man on the floor. He wasn’t wearing a mask. She had seen him before. In the background of a case file. In the corner of a police station report. That’s a Detective from the Met. She stepped around the body on the floor. She had seen the badge before, tucked in a pocket during a raid she had been forced to attend. He’s got something on me. Lucien leaned his cane against the wall, checking the edge for blood. He didn’t look at her. His focus was on the door, hand hovering near the brass knob. He’s got something on you. She moved towards the intruder, then stopped. He was reaching for something in his pocket. A phone. No, a wire. He’s broadcasting. Lucien kicked the phone out of reach. The metal casing crumpled under his boot. Aurora grabbed her phone from the table. The screen was dark, but the battery drained instantly. A red light blinked on the device. She tapped it. Someone is tracing the signal. A text message appeared. *He knows.* The name above the message was unknown. Lucien grabbed her wrist. His grip was iron, fingers wrapping around the scar on her left wrist. He knew exactly where she was most vulnerable. The pain flared, sharp and sudden, grounding her. We leave now. Not the door. The window. He pointed to the balcony. The railing was rusted, painted black. It led down to the alleyway behind the curry house. A fire escape ladder dangled two floors down. It’s too dark. It’s safer than the police. Lucien didn’t let go of her wrist. His grip tightened. The pressure forced her to look at him. The black in his eye seemed to swallow the light. I can handle the police. No. You can’t. He leaned close. His breath was warm, smelling faintly of the copper smell of magic he carried in his blood. He had a demon’s patience and a demon’s hunger. The air hummed with energy around him. Lucien’s phone buzzed in his pocket. He didn’t check it. A knock came on the front door. Firm, heavy. Not the Detective on the floor. Three deadbolts weren’t enough. The sound of a crowbar scraping against the wood rang out. Screws screamed in protest. They found me. They found us. Lucien released her wrist and picked up the cane. The blade extended with a sharp hiss. He grabbed her. The movement was fluid, a predator carrying prey. He shoved her towards the window. The night air rushed in, cold and biting. The rain lashed against the brickwork. The alleyway below looked like a river of black oil. You don’t have time to cry. Aurora scrambled onto the windowsill. Her boots scuffed the wood. Lucien followed, the crowbar outside the door echoing a second later. A dull thud hit the frame. The door shuddered. Who else is out there? She yelled over the sound of the metal scraping. Lucien jumped after her. He caught her arm, halting her descent. The ladder swung below them. He didn’t look down. The person who sent the intruder. Lucien’s eyes met hers. The amber eye burned. The black one watched the shadows. I’ll be there. A text message pinged on her phone, vibrating against the glass. She didn’t have to read it. The signature on the file. Lucian Moreau. He’s dead. The message came from a number she hadn’t seen in three years. The number on the screen belonged to Evan. Evan’s dead. She whispered. She knew it was a lie. Evan’s alive. Lucien pushed her onto the ladder. The cold metal bit into her legs. He stepped back, blade drawn. The crowbar broke through the wood. Then he’s dead now. Lucien raised the cane. The door burst open. Darkness poured in. Lucien didn’t shout. He moved into the light, the only light in the room. He was a silhouette against the intruders. The man on the floor groaned. He reached for the crowbar on the floor. Aurora gripped the ladder. Her legs shook. She looked down at the alley, then back at Lucien. He stood between them and the room, a barrier of steel and magic. I’m coming down, she said. Don’t. Lucien’s voice was a command. The intruder lunged. Lucien slashed. The blade cut the air, but no blood came. The man fell back. He wasn’t human. His skin shimmered, like smoke caught in a jar. The demon inside him. Lucien turned his head. A smile touched his lips. It wasn’t kind. Come back. He said. Lucien didn’t wait for the answer. He grabbed the ladder and climbed down. The shadows lengthened behind him. He vanished into the darkness of the alley. Aurora stayed on the balcony for a moment, listening. The sound of the fight stopped. But the crowbar hit the door one more time. Aurora turned around. The door was open. The man she knew as Detective was gone. The intruder on the floor was gone. Only the phone remained. The red light blinked faster. Lucien was waiting. The text message arrived. *You should have run.*
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.84% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1584
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1584
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"echoing"
count2
1
word"silk"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"flicked"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"predator"
count1
9
word"shimmered"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"silk"
2"scanning"
3"silence"
4"weight"
5"flicked"
6"stomach"
7"tracing"
8"predator"
9"shimmered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences231
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences231
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences231
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords6
totalWords1584
ratio0.004
matches
0"He knows."
1"You should have run."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions62
wordCount1584
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.89
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Aurora12
Moreau2
Lucien30
Evan5
Detective3
Met1
You9
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Evan"
4"You"
places
0"Met"
globalScore0.553
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences125
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"smelled like winter air and expensive colo"
1"looked like a river of black oil"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1584
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences231
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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mean21.12
std15.96
cv0.756
sampleLengths
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311
466
510
646
77
830
935
1027
1119
1213
1338
144
1512
1612
1745
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197
2020
2148
2212
234
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257
2640
2733
2833
2934
3025
3116
3226
3318
3433
353
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373
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395
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4319
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4641
476
4830
4914
96.15% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences231
matches
0"was cramped"
1"being forced"
2"been forced"
3"was rusted"
4"was gone"
5"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs301
matches
0"wasn’t wearing"
1"was reaching"
2"was waiting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences231
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1586
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.022068095838587643
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.005044136191677175
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences231
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences231
mean6.86
std4.3
cv0.628
sampleLengths
08
113
223
33
416
516
621
79
817
94
1011
117
125
1321
1413
1520
164
174
182
1910
207
2114
2215
237
246
2514
262
273
285
293
3017
3115
326
3313
348
352
364
376
387
398
405
415
427
437
4419
454
464
475
481
492
43.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.16883116883116883
totalSentences231
uniqueOpeners39
48.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences207
matches
0"Then he has her."
1"Then he’s dead now."
2"Only the phone remained."
ratio0.014
59.61% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount83
totalSentences207
matches
0"She shoved the door open"
1"He didn’t smile."
2"Her scarred left wrist twitched"
3"You shouldn’t be here."
4"It’s been three weeks since"
5"I’m not here to ask"
6"He stepped past her shoulder."
7"His coat smelled of rain"
8"He moved inside, eyes already"
9"You know the rules."
10"He withdrew a thin, curved"
11"I didn’t come here to"
12"You came here because you’re"
13"She crossed her arms, eyes"
14"You know that."
15"We’re done with this life."
16"We are not."
17"He smelled like winter air"
18"She held him there."
19"You came back to burn"
ratio0.401
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount192
totalSentences207
matches
0"The brass handle turned cold"
1"She shoved the door open"
2"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
3"He didn’t smile."
4"The air in the stairwell"
5"Aurora kept the door half-shut,"
6"Her scarred left wrist twitched"
7"Lucien’s gaze swept the corridor,"
8"You shouldn’t be here."
9"It’s been three weeks since"
10"I’m not here to ask"
11"He stepped past her shoulder."
12"His coat smelled of rain"
13"He moved inside, eyes already"
14"The flat was cramped, every"
15"You know the rules."
16"The flat is secure."
17"Security means nothing against a"
18"Lucien tapped his cane on"
19"A click sounded from the"
ratio0.928
48.31% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences207
matches
0"To burn it down, I"
1"If you brought them here,"
ratio0.01
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The intruder groaned, clutching his stomach, struggling to draw breath."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.3636%