Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBGNGJE00GF0GGHQ86MVH40

Run Details

Duration:
34.0s
Cost:
$0.011203
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hammered against the plate-glass window of The Raven’s Nest. Inside, the air smelled of stale beer, polish, and old paper. Rory stood behind the mahogany bar, wiping a glass with a rag that had lost its white sheen months ago. Her bright blue eyes scanned the room, catching the reflection of the green neon sign buzzing overhead. The dim light cast long shadows over the maps pinned to the walls. The bell above the door chimed. A gust of cold wind rushed in, swirling dust motes through the beams of the overhead lights. Silas didn’t look up from the ledger he was balancing. His silver signet ring glinted on his right hand as he dipped the pen. He only shifted his weight, the slight limp in his left leg protesting against the stone floor. A man in a grey coat stepped in. He shook the rain from his umbrella with a violent flick of the wrist. Water droplets scattered across the worn carpet. He paused near the table where Rory usually ate her lunch. She froze. The rag slipped from her fingers. It couldn’t be him. Not here. Not tonight. The man turned. Time had etched deep lines around his mouth. His hair had thinned at the temples, revealing a scalp that caught the bar lights. He wore the same posture she remembered from university, shoulders hunched slightly as if expecting a blow. Rory felt the scar on her left wrist throb. She rubbed it with her thumb, hiding her hand beneath the bar counter. You look tired. The voice was deeper than she recalled. Roughened by smoke. She stepped out from behind the polished wood. David. He didn’t smile. He didn’t reach out. He just stared, his eyes scanning her face like she was a blueprint he had forgotten how to read. His gaze lingered on the short black hair she used to wear longer, then moved to the flat-top t-shirt beneath her cardigan. The delivery uniform. I didn’t know you were back in London. I live above the bar. David nodded slowly. He scanned the room again, looking for a place to sit that wasn’t the high stool. Silas finally looked up. Hazel eyes met David’s over the ledger. Silas tilted his head. He wiped his hands on his apron and limped forward, holding a fresh cloth in his right hand. The old Spymaster knew the look in a stranger’s eyes. The desperation of a return. Silas stopped three paces from David. He didn’t speak. He just waited, his beard framing a mouth set in a permanent line. David ignored the bar owner. He focused on Rory. I saw a flyer. For the reunion. Cardiff University. I thought you might be coming. The reunion. She hadn’t known about it. She hadn’t planned to return. The flat above Silas was her fortress. I’m not from the department anymore. I left after the second year. David shifted his weight. He looked at his shoes. I was the one who stayed. I graduated. I have a job now. In Cardiff. A decent position. Teaching. The admission hung in the air between them. David had stayed. Rory had run. The weight of the unspoken choice pressed against her chest. Teaching. That’s good. Your mother would be happy. She didn’t mention the letter she received three months ago. She didn’t mention the hospital call. She didn’t mention the silence that had filled her phone since the day she fled Cardiff. My mother isn’t here anymore, David. David flinched. He reached into his coat pocket. His hand shook. He pulled out a bottle of whisky. He didn’t ask for money. He didn’t ask for a loan. He just placed the bottle on the counter. I bought this for us. Two years ago. I found it in a box. I thought maybe I would open it on the day I found you. Silas stepped in. He leaned his weight on his bad knee. His presence made the space feel smaller. He poured two fingers of the whisky into the glass without being asked. The amber liquid sloshed against the glass. We don’t accept outside drinks in here. David flinched again. He looked at Silas, then back at Rory. The authority in the older man’s voice wasn’t a threat. It was a boundary. It was a gift. For the reunion. I thought... I thought maybe we could make it work. Make up for lost time. Rory picked up the glass. Her fingers trembled. The condensation dampened her palm. She didn’t drink. She just held the warmth of the glass against her skin. You’re different. You look older. Time moves differently depending on where you stand. That’s a good answer. It wasn’t. It was an excuse. David knew it. He knew it as well as she did. He had stayed. He had built a life that looked solid on paper. Rory had fled. She had built a life out of survival and delivery shifts. Why did you come? I wanted to see you. I wanted to know if you were happy. Rory laughed. A sharp sound that cut through the low hum of the bar. She set the glass down. The liquid rippled. Happy. That was a word that didn’t fit. It didn’t fit the scars she hid under her sleeves. It didn’t fit the nights she woke up sweating. It didn’t fit the fear that followed her from the city she fled. I am happy, David. It wasn’t true. But it was a defense. You don’t look it. Silas moved closer. The smell of pipe tobacco lingered on his clothes. He placed a clean glass on the counter. He didn’t pour. He just waited. He wanted to know if this was a security issue or a personal one. He needed to know the threat level. David didn’t look at the bar owner. He looked at Rory. You left everything. You left him. The ex. You left your family. You left everything for London. She thought of Evan. She thought of the bruises that weren’t there anymore. She thought of the freedom she bought with a ticket and a lie. I had to leave. I know. David’s voice dropped. He leaned in. The scent of rain and old wool clung to him. I saw the news. I saw the article about the incident. What incident? The one in your hometown. The police report. Rory stiffened. She hadn’t expected him to know. She hadn’t expected him to care. But he had been watching. I didn’t mean to come here to bring that up. You aren’t here to catch up. David looked at the floor. He pulled his coat tighter around his body. The fabric creaked in the quiet room. I just thought... maybe we could start over. Start over. The phrase sounded heavy. It felt like carrying a brick in your chest. We can’t. The words came out flat. David absorbed the impact. He looked at the bottle. He looked at the glass. He picked up the bottle and put it back on the counter. I understand. He didn’t say goodbye. He didn’t offer a hand. He just turned. He pulled his coat back on. He walked to the door. The bell chimed again. The wind rushed in, cold and wet. He stepped out into the rain and the door swung shut. Silence filled the room. Silas stared at the closed door. He looked at the bottle on the counter. He reached for the glass. He poured a drink. He handed it to Rory. Drink it. She took the glass. She looked at the amber liquid. She looked at the green neon sign. It buzzed, a low frequency hum that vibrated in her teeth. He changed. Silas set the cloth back in his hand. He went back to the ledger. He wrote something down. His hand moved steady. He didn’t look up. People change, Rory. Some run. Some stay. Some come back. She drank. The whisky burned her throat. It tasted like smoke and regret. It tasted like the past she had tried to wash away. She set the glass down. The ice cracked. I didn’t think I’d see him again. Silas nodded. He looked at the clock above the bar. It was ticking. Loud. Heavy. Sometimes the past comes knocking. She didn’t answer. She wiped the glass again. Her hands were steady now. The shock had passed. The silence in the room felt heavier than before. She watched the door through the glass. The street outside was empty. No grey coat. Just the rain washing the cobblestones clean. Silas turned the page. The sound of paper turning filled the space. Finish the drink. You have work tomorrow. She picked up the glass again. She didn’t finish it. She set it down. The ice had melted. The water was warm. She looked at Silas. He didn’t ask why. He didn’t ask what happened. He just turned the page. The sound of the pen on paper was the only sound in the room. She looked at her wrist. The scar was visible in the light. She turned her hand over and hid it under the bar. Outside, a siren wailed. The sound grew louder, then faded. The rain continued to fall. The neon sign flickered, a brief pause in the hum, then returned to its green glow. She stared at the light until her eyes watered. Silas closed the ledger. He walked to the back room. His limp was more pronounced now. The door closed softly behind him. The lock clicked. The sound echoed. She was alone with the silence. She looked at the empty glass. She looked at the door. She picked up the rag and started wiping the bar. One inch at a time. The wood shone under the dim light.
created_at"2026-02-25T23:03:10.679Z" 2/25/2026, 11:03:10 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
90.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1636
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.93% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1636
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"scanned"
count2
1
word"weight"
count4
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"throb"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"unspoken"
count1
6
word"silence"
count4
7
word"trembled"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"vibrated"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"weight"
2"etched"
3"throb"
4"scanning"
5"unspoken"
6"silence"
7"trembled"
8"warmth"
9"vibrated"
10"flickered"
11"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences271
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences271
filterMatches
0"look"
1"feel"
2"know"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences271
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1636
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions63
wordCount1636
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.98
worstName"David"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"David"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory13
London2
David16
Spymaster1
University1
Silas14
Cardiff3
Evan1
You10
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"David"
3"Spymaster"
4"Silas"
5"Evan"
6"You"
places
0"London"
1"University"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore0.667
63.79% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences116
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"as if expecting a blow"
1"felt like carrying a brick in your ches"
2"tasted like smoke and regret"
3"tasted like the past she had tried to was"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1636
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences271
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs74
mean22.11
std17.35
cv0.785
sampleLengths
072
164
240
38
48
543
622
73
818
91
1051
118
125
1352
1437
1524
1619
1712
1828
1924
208
2132
226
2337
2427
2538
267
2725
2822
2932
308
314
3244
334
3413
3562
364
378
384
3947
4028
4126
424
432
4427
452
468
4719
4810
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences271
matches
0"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs333
matches
0"was balancing"
1"was ticking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences271
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1638
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.026251526251526252
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.005494505494505495
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences271
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences271
mean6.04
std3.84
cv0.636
sampleLengths
011
111
220
317
413
56
617
710
814
917
108
1114
127
1311
142
156
164
172
182
193
208
2115
2217
239
2413
253
267
273
288
291
303
314
3219
3322
343
358
365
373
3816
394
407
414
4218
4310
445
456
463
4713
485
494
25.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats69
diversityRatio0.16974169741697417
totalSentences271
uniqueOpeners46
41.84% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences239
matches
0"maybe we could start over."
1"Sometimes the past comes knocking."
2"Just the rain washing the"
ratio0.013
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount143
totalSentences239
matches
0"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
1"His silver signet ring glinted"
2"He only shifted his weight,"
3"He shook the rain from"
4"He paused near the table"
5"It couldn’t be him."
6"His hair had thinned at"
7"He wore the same posture"
8"She rubbed it with her"
9"You look tired."
10"She stepped out from behind"
11"He didn’t smile."
12"He didn’t reach out."
13"He just stared, his eyes"
14"His gaze lingered on the"
15"I didn’t know you were"
16"I live above the bar."
17"He scanned the room again,"
18"He wiped his hands on"
19"He didn’t speak."
ratio0.598
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount222
totalSentences239
matches
0"The rain hammered against the"
1"Rory stood behind the mahogany"
2"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
3"The dim light cast long"
4"The bell above the door"
5"A gust of cold wind"
6"Silas didn’t look up from"
7"His silver signet ring glinted"
8"He only shifted his weight,"
9"A man in a grey"
10"He shook the rain from"
11"Water droplets scattered across the"
12"He paused near the table"
13"The rag slipped from her"
14"It couldn’t be him."
15"The man turned."
16"Time had etched deep lines"
17"His hair had thinned at"
18"He wore the same posture"
19"Rory felt the scar on"
ratio0.929
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences239
matches(empty)
ratio0
94.16% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He wore the same posture she remembered from university, shoulders hunched slightly as if expecting a blow."
1"She didn’t mention the silence that had filled her phone since the day she fled Cardiff."
2"It buzzed, a low frequency hum that vibrated in her teeth."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.8073%