Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBGP7YTQNX5J8MQJGMR80A2

Run Details

Duration:
1m 19s
Cost:
$0.018013
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement of Camden High Street, turning the asphalt into a slick mirror reflecting the neon signs. Detective Harlow Quinn pushed off the brick wall, water streaming down her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair. Her lungs burned with the cold air, each breath a ragged gasp. Ahead, a shadow moved through the alley mouth. Tomás Herrera. He knew these streets better than she did. He knew where the cameras died and where the patrol cars turned away. Quinn checked her watch. The worn leather strap felt slick against her wrist. 11:42 PM. The city emptied out at this hour, leaving only the neon hum and the sound of tires on wet asphalt. She tightened her grip on the baton at her hip. Eighteen years on the force taught her patience, but this chase demanded speed. Her boots splashed through puddles, the rhythm steady. Military precision. Herrera vaulted a dumpster, his olive skin glistening under the streetlamp. He glanced back. His eyes held a warning. Quinn saw the Saint Christopher medallion flash against his chest before he turned into the darkness of the old Tube entrance. The Camden Town station had been closed for years, condemned after a structural failure in the nineties. Now it served a different purpose. She didn't hesitate. Gravity pulled her down the metal stairs. The air changed instantly. The smell of rain vanished, replaced by damp concrete and ozone. Her boots slapped against the grating, echoing in the hollow shaft. She descended into the belly of the city. The light from the street faded, swallowed by the gloom of the tunnel. Dust motes danced in her flashlight beam, swirling like tiny stars in a void. Herrera waited at the bottom. He stood before a heavy steel door painted with faded transport signs. He leaned against the frame, breathing hard. His left forearm hung limp, the scar from a knife attack pale against his skin. "Turn back, Quinn." She stopped ten feet away. Water dripped from her coat collar. Her sharp jaw set. "You're under arrest, Tomás. Step away from the door." "It's not a door. It's a threshold." Herrera pushed off the frame. He held up a small object. A bone token. It glowed with a faint, sickly light. "You don't have the key." "I have a warrant." She took a step forward. The flashlight beam cut through the gloom, revealing graffiti that didn't match the spray paint on the walls above. The symbols writhed. "Warrants don't work down here." Herrera tapped the token against the steel. A lock clicked. The sound resonated in Quinn's skull. "Morris didn't make it out because he didn't listen." The name hit her like a physical blow. DS Morris. Three years ago. The case file remained open, but the coroner listed it as a gas leak. Quinn knew the truth. She saw the way the shadows moved that night. She saw the way Morris looked at her before he vanished. "Where is he?" Quinn's voice stayed level. "Gone." Herrera shook his head. "Just like you will be if you cross that line." She ignored the warning. The Veil Market. She'd heard whispers from informants. A black market for things that shouldn't exist. Enchanted goods. Banned alchemy. If Morris was here, she needed to find him. "Open it." Herrera hesitated. The medallion around his neck swung. "You think you can handle what's inside? You think your badge protects you from this?" "I handle it every day." She holstered her baton. Her hand hovered over her service revolver. "This isn't a robbery." Herrera stepped closer. The smell of ozone grew stronger. "It's a hunt. And you're the prey." The door groaned. Rust flakes fell from the hinges. Quinn saw the darkness beyond. It wasn't empty space. It breathed. "Move." Herrera didn't move. He watched her with warm brown eyes. He knew her type. Military precision. Stubborn to a fault. He knew she wouldn't walk away. "Last chance." Quinn stepped past him. The air pressure dropped. Her ears popped. The rain above sounded distant, muffled by layers of earth and stone. The bone token in Herrera's hand dimmed. "You're making a mistake." "I'm doing my job." She reached the threshold. The floor changed from concrete to stone tiles etched with runes. The light from her flashlight flickered. She saw stalls in the distance. Shadows moved between them. Figures haggled over items that shimmered with unnatural light. Quinn paused. The weight of the decision settled on her shoulders. She could retreat. She could call for backup. She could report the location and let the Met handle it. She looked at the scar on Herrera's arm. She looked at the door behind her, the way out. Then she looked deeper into the market. "Stay behind me," she ordered. Herrera shook his head. "I can't follow you into that." "Then stay here." She adjusted her grip on her gun. Her fingers found the cold metal. The leather watch on her wrist felt heavy. She took a breath. The air tasted like copper. Quinn stepped across the threshold. The door slammed shut behind her. The sound of the rain vanished. The only sound was the hum of the market and her own heartbeat. She walked forward into the dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.364
leniency0.727
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount873
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.73% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount873
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"streaming"
count1
1
word"glistening"
count1
2
word"echoing"
count1
3
word"gloom"
count2
4
word"resonated"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"shimmered"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"streaming"
1"glistening"
2"echoing"
3"gloom"
4"resonated"
5"etched"
6"flickered"
7"shimmered"
8"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences110
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences124
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen21
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords873
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
71.16% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount761
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.58
worstName"Herrera"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden2
High1
Street1
Harlow1
Quinn10
Herrera12
Saint1
Christopher1
Tube1
Town1
Morris3
Veil1
Market1
Met1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Herrera"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Morris"
6"Met"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"Town"
4"Market"
globalScore0.712
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount873
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences124
matches
0"moved that night"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean26.45
std20.82
cv0.787
sampleLengths
078
168
263
371
439
53
624
733
831
930
1051
117
1215
1333
142
1523
1616
1720
1820
191
2026
212
2230
234
244
2540
2630
2725
285
2910
303
3130
3236
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences110
matches
0"been closed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs128
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences124
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount763
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.01703800786369594
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007863695937090432
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences124
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences124
mean7.04
std4.25
cv0.604
sampleLengths
019
116
212
38
42
58
613
74
89
92
1020
1110
1213
138
142
1511
163
175
1821
1917
206
213
227
234
2411
2511
268
2713
2814
295
3012
317
3215
333
345
356
364
379
3812
396
403
417
425
439
4419
453
4612
473
486
499
45.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.3467741935483871
totalSentences124
uniqueOpeners43
33.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"Then she looked deeper into"
ratio0.01
58.38% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences99
matches
0"Her lungs burned with the"
1"He knew these streets better"
2"He knew where the cameras"
3"She tightened her grip on"
4"Her boots splashed through puddles,"
5"He glanced back."
6"His eyes held a warning."
7"She didn't hesitate."
8"Her boots slapped against the"
9"She descended into the belly"
10"He stood before a heavy"
11"He leaned against the frame,"
12"His left forearm hung limp,"
13"She stopped ten feet away."
14"Her sharp jaw set."
15"He held up a small"
16"It glowed with a faint,"
17"She took a step forward"
18"She saw the way the"
19"She saw the way Morris"
ratio0.404
5.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount90
totalSentences99
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn pushed off"
1"Her lungs burned with the"
2"He knew these streets better"
3"He knew where the cameras"
4"Quinn checked her watch."
5"The worn leather strap felt"
6"The city emptied out at"
7"She tightened her grip on"
8"Her boots splashed through puddles,"
9"Herrera vaulted a dumpster, his"
10"He glanced back."
11"His eyes held a warning."
12"Quinn saw the Saint Christopher"
13"The Camden Town station had"
14"She didn't hesitate."
15"Gravity pulled her down the"
16"The air changed instantly."
17"The smell of rain vanished,"
18"Her boots slapped against the"
19"She descended into the belly"
ratio0.909
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences99
matches
0"Now it served a different"
1"If Morris was here, she"
ratio0.02
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The flashlight beam cut through the gloom, revealing graffiti that didn't match the spray paint on the walls above."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she ordered (order)"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.045
leniency0.091
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.091
88.5697%