NC Bench
Overview
About
Tests
Categories
Models
Vendors
Compare
Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBGXRR0N9PANG1FW8MJ9CHH
Run Details
Model:
Qwen 3.5 Flash
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
29.2s
Cost:
$0.002203
Provider:
Alibaba
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
88.32%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
29.91%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
66.67%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
38.64%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
51.02%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
48.57%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
46.73%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
88.9951%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The deadbolt slid back. The handle turned.
Aurora stared at the iron
frame, her heart hammering a frantic rhythm against her ribs.
The chain lock held for
one more second before she pulled it down. The door swung inward.
Lucien Moreau filled the narrow
hallway without stepping across the threshold.
He wore a tailored charcoal
suit that swallowed the dim light.
His right hand gripped an
ivory-handled cane.
The left remained buried in
his pocket. Platinum blond hair slicked back,
perfectly
still. Not a speck of dust on him, despite the rotting curry smell drifting from the restaurant downstairs. He did not blink.
Amber eye and black eye
locked onto hers. One warm, one void.
I thought you burned out
of London. He stepped into the flat.
His polished shoes squeaked on
the cracked tiles.
He closed the door behind
him and engaged all three deadbolts himself.
The clicks sounded like gunshots
in the cramped space.
The cat Ptolemy hissed from
the back sofa and vanished into the bookshelf.
You were in Cardiff when
Evan went missing. Evan was never in Cardiff. Lucien took a step forward.
He moved with the fluid
grace of a
predator
that knew no other terrain existed.
He smelled of ozone and
expensive tobacco. Cold and clean.
It clashed with the warm
grease of the curry house and the old paper scent of her books.
I heard the name in
the wrong streets. The same ones you fled. Aurora gripped the door handle. Her
knuckles turned white
. The crescent scar on her left wrist itched, a phantom memory of childhood cuts that felt trivial compared to the
weight
of him now.
I told you never to
find me. He stopped three feet away. Tall. 5ft 11 of controlled violence. He tilted his head. The heterochromatic gaze swept her from black shoulder-length hair to worn trainers. He did not smile. Lies are hard to keep when the underworld speaks in riddles. He reached into his pocket. Aurora tensed, expecting a weapon.
He pulled out a small
silver envelope and dropped it onto the small, scarred wooden table. Scrolls and research notes jumped. Inkbottles rolled. The air smelled of copper. Blood. Recent. What is that? Evidence. About your father. Brendan didn't leave Ireland because of a custody dispute.
He fled a debt he
owed to people who don't forgive. People like me. Aurora picked up the envelope. The paper felt slick. Heavy like lead. She did not open it. Her
eyes narrowed
.
Bright blue irises contracted until
the white of her irises surrounded them almost entirely. You are lying. Try finding the truth in a ledger of lies. She threw the envelope back. It skidded across the table and landed near Ptolemy's hiding spot. Lucien watched it fall. He did not move to retrieve it. His expression remained flat, but the
silence
stretched tight. I need the name. She turned her back. A tactical error. She walked toward the kitchenette. The space smelled of stale coffee and rain she could not escape. She opened the fridge. Cold air hit her face. It had
been shut
for a week. Only the humming compressor remained. You are not just a fixer, Lucien. You are a
predator
. He followed her into the kitchen. His cane tapped the floor. He leaned against the doorframe. The wood creaked under his
weight
. He crossed his ankles. The cane rested on his shoulder, ivory tip clicking against the metal fridge. The realm of Avaros does not care about titles. It cares about outcomes. What outcome do you want? Survival. Your survival. And yours. Your bloodline connects to things I cannot easily hide. Aurora laughed. Hard and sharp. She grabbed a chipped mug from the counter. She did not fill it. Just held it for
warmth
. My father is human. A barrister. Not a demon. Brendan Carter married a human mother from Wales. A shield. That shield is crumbling. Look at the envelope. She stared at him. The room
seemed to
close in. Books lined every wall. Scrolls spilled from baskets on the floor. She stood trapped in a circle of paper and history. Lucien stood in the only open space. The only place of safety. Or the only place of danger. Why come back now? Because the hunt has begun. For real. He pushed off the doorframe. He walked closer. Aurora did not step back. She refused to show fear. He stopped inches from her. He smelled of danger. He smelled of home. The scent of him unraveled the knots in her
stomach
. Who is hunting us? The ones you left behind. Evan is not a ghost. He is a man with a knife in his pocket. He does not believe in the supernatural. He believes in blood for blood. Aurora gripped the mug. Her knuckles strained. The ceramic groaned. I have no blood. Your blood sings a song I can hear. Even through the rain. Even through the London smog. Lucien lifted the cane. He tapped it against her shoulder. Not a threat. A claim. She flinched. He noticed. His expression did not change. He knew her better than she knew herself. He knew she was a liar. He knew she
was scared
. He knew she was still there. Take it. He held the silver envelope again. He pressed it into her hand. His fingers brushed hers. Cold against warm. The contact sent a shock up her arm that made her teeth ache.
If I walk out that
door, Evan will be waiting.
If I stay, the ones
from Cardiff could burn this place down. You are choosing my location? I am choosing your life. The
silence
returned. Heavy and
oppressive
. A book fell in the pile behind them. No one turned. The floorboards creaked as a third
weight
settled on the stairs outside. Aurora froze. She did not turn. She gripped the mug tighter. Lucien's cane shifted. The ivory handle cracked under his grip. A hairline fracture appeared. He held the blade hidden inside the cane with his thumb. Who is that? Evan. The
footsteps
stopped. Three stairs from the landing. A heavy step. Deliberate. Lucien did not draw the weapon. He stepped sideways, positioning himself between her and the door. His suit remained
perfect
. His posture remained relaxed. You said Evan is a man with a knife. I said he is a man with a knife. The door handle
began to
turn. Slowly. The metal scraped against the frame. A sound like nails on glass. Lucien raised his cane. The blade slid out with a sharp metallic sound. The steel caught the light of the hallway lamp. It hummed with a low frequency that
vibrated
in Aurora's chest. You have five seconds to call the police. Lucien shook his head
slowly
. The movement was smooth.
If you call them, he
will shoot first. If I
open that door
, I have to kill him. The handle stopped turning. The
silence
that followed was worse than the noise. They both heard a breath. The person outside held it. They waited. Aurora looked at the door. It shook. A small impact. Then another. The deadbolts held. Why are we still here? He did not look at her. His eyes focused on the door. The blade
flickered
in his grip.
Because I have not finished
telling you the truth. The door buckled inward. The wood splintered with a sharp crack that
echoed
through the room. Lucien raised the cane. Aurora dropped the mug. It
shattered
on the tiles. Ceramics flew across the floor,
glinting
like broken teeth. Lucien stepped forward. He grabbed her wrist. He pulled her into his chest. The blade rose. Get down. The door gave way.
created_at
"2026-02-25T23:07:41.192Z"
2/25/2026, 11:07:41 PM
model
"qwen/qwen3.5-flash-20260224"
app_id
182717
external_user
(null)
streamed
true
cancelled
false
latency
570
moderation_latency
(null)
generation_time
29120
tokens_prompt
4556
tokens_completion
4613
native_tokens_prompt
4417
native_tokens_completion
4404
native_tokens_completion_images
(null)
native_tokens_reasoning
2698
native_tokens_cached
0
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
(null)
origin
"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byok
false
finish_reason
"stop"
native_finish_reason
"stop"
usage
0.0022033
router
(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id
"5f6b71b5-8672-4b27-8b2d-f674429f9e63"
id
"chatcmpl-07dc3925-215f-9d7d-b660-4c99bb07b7a0"
is_byok
false
latency
570
model_permaslug
"qwen/qwen3.5-flash-20260224"
provider_name
"Alibaba"
status
200
api_type
"completions"
id
"gen-1772060861-LmQwYBpSwdkUGT8DAMYM"
upstream_id
"chatcmpl-07dc3925-215f-9d7d-b660-4c99bb07b7a0"
total_cost
0.0022033
cache_discount
(null)
upstream_inference_cost
0
provider_name
"Alibaba"
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
0
88.32%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1284
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"perfectly"
count
1
1
adverb
"slowly"
count
2
highlights
0
"perfectly"
1
"slowly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
29.91%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1284
totalAiIsms
18
found
0
word
"predator"
count
2
1
word
"weight"
count
3
2
word
"silence"
count
3
3
word
"warmth"
count
1
4
word
"stomach"
count
1
5
word
"oppressive"
count
1
6
word
"footsteps"
count
1
7
word
"perfect"
count
1
8
word
"vibrated"
count
1
9
word
"flickered"
count
1
10
word
"echoed"
count
1
11
word
"shattered"
count
1
12
word
"glinting"
count
1
highlights
0
"predator"
1
"weight"
2
"silence"
3
"warmth"
4
"stomach"
5
"oppressive"
6
"footsteps"
7
"perfect"
8
"vibrated"
9
"flickered"
10
"echoed"
11
"shattered"
12
"glinting"
66.67%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
1
label
"knuckles turned white"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
1
"knuckles turned white"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
1
narrationSentences
220
matches
0
"was scared"
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
2
narrationSentences
220
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"began to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
220
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
24
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1284
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
0
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
51
wordCount
1284
uniqueNames
13
maxNameDensity
0.93
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
2
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau
1
London
2
Ptolemy
2
Cardiff
3
Evan
6
Ireland
1
Lucien
12
Avaros
1
Carter
1
Wales
1
Aurora
11
You
7
Cold
3
persons
0
"Moreau"
1
"Ptolemy"
2
"Evan"
3
"Lucien"
4
"Avaros"
5
"Carter"
6
"Aurora"
7
"You"
places
0
"London"
1
"Cardiff"
2
"Ireland"
3
"Wales"
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
85
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"sounded like gunshots in the cramped space"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1284
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
2
totalSentences
220
matches
0
"out that door"
1
"open that door"
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
69
mean
18.61
std
14.66
cv
0.788
sampleLengths
0
39
1
60
2
16
3
7
4
34
5
13
6
8
7
5
8
48
9
13
10
33
11
7
12
31
13
11
14
40
15
3
16
27
17
34
18
3
19
9
20
36
21
4
22
45
23
11
24
39
25
13
26
5
27
14
28
23
29
9
30
18
31
49
32
4
33
7
34
41
35
4
36
33
37
10
38
4
39
17
40
49
41
2
42
32
43
22
44
5
45
5
46
29
47
36
48
3
49
1
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
220
matches
0
"been shut"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
247
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
220
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1286
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
22
adverbRatio
0.017107309486780714
lyAdverbCount
9
lyAdverbRatio
0.006998444790046656
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
220
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
220
mean
5.84
std
3.49
cv
0.597
sampleLengths
0
4
1
3
2
15
3
13
4
4
5
11
6
11
7
7
8
7
9
7
10
17
11
4
12
8
13
4
14
7
15
5
16
8
17
12
18
9
19
13
20
8
21
5
22
5
23
15
24
7
25
3
26
18
27
8
28
5
29
5
30
4
31
24
32
7
33
5
34
1
35
5
36
4
37
12
38
4
39
11
40
5
41
5
42
16
43
5
44
2
45
5
46
1
47
1
48
3
49
1
38.64%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
25
diversityRatio
0.2636363636363636
totalSentences
220
uniqueOpeners
58
51.02%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
3
totalSentences
196
matches
0
"Bright blue irises contracted until"
1
"Only the humming compressor remained."
2
"Just held it for warmth."
ratio
0.015
48.57%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
84
totalSentences
196
matches
0
"He wore a tailored charcoal"
1
"His right hand gripped an"
2
"He did not blink."
3
"I thought you burned out"
4
"He stepped into the flat."
5
"His polished shoes squeaked on"
6
"He closed the door behind"
7
"You were in Cardiff when"
8
"He moved with the fluid"
9
"He smelled of ozone and"
10
"It clashed with the warm"
11
"I heard the name in"
12
"Her knuckles turned white."
13
"I told you never to"
14
"He stopped three feet away."
15
"He tilted his head."
16
"He did not smile."
17
"He reached into his pocket."
18
"He pulled out a small"
19
"He fled a debt he"
ratio
0.429
46.73%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
162
totalSentences
196
matches
0
"The deadbolt slid back."
1
"The handle turned."
2
"Aurora stared at the iron"
3
"The chain lock held for"
4
"The door swung inward."
5
"Lucien Moreau filled the narrow"
6
"He wore a tailored charcoal"
7
"His right hand gripped an"
8
"The left remained buried in"
9
"Platinum blond hair slicked back,"
10
"He did not blink."
11
"Amber eye and black eye"
12
"I thought you burned out"
13
"He stepped into the flat."
14
"His polished shoes squeaked on"
15
"He closed the door behind"
16
"The clicks sounded like gunshots"
17
"The cat Ptolemy hissed from"
18
"You were in Cardiff when"
19
"Evan was never in Cardiff."
ratio
0.827
100.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
8
totalSentences
196
matches
0
"Because the hunt has begun."
1
"Even through the rain."
2
"Even through the London smog."
3
"If I walk out that"
4
"If I stay, the ones"
5
"If you call them, he"
6
"If I open that door,"
7
"Because I have not finished"
ratio
0.041
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
30
technicalSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"The contact sent a shock up her arm that made her teeth ache."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
0
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
0
88.9951%