Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBGYGWPN9DQFK6F3BMF1M68

Run Details

Duration:
53.1s
Cost:
$0.009503
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock came not as a sound, but as a vibration that traveled through the floorboards, rattling the stack of encyclopedias teetering on the radiator. Aurora froze, the mug of tea halfway to her lips. She knew the rhythm. Three sharp raps, a pause, then a heavier thud against the wood. It wasn’t the landlord. It wasn’t a delivery for the curry house below. She set the mug down on the table, careful not to spill the scalding liquid. Her hand trembled, just once, before she forced it still. The scar on her left wrist, a pale crescent against her skin, itched. A phantom sensation, or perhaps a warning. She moved to the door, her boots silent on the worn carpet. Three deadbolts. One, two, three. The metal clicked with satisfying finality, the only security she had in a city that breathed magic and malice in equal measure. She peered through the spyhole. The hallway light was dim, but she saw the glint of platinum hair and the sharp cut of a charcoal suit. Her breath hitched, a sharp intake that hurt her lungs. She hadn’t expected him. She hadn’t expected anyone, really, but the universe had a cruel sense of timing. Aurora turned the locks again, the sound echoing in the cramped one-bedroom flat. She opened the door. Lucien stood there, filling the frame. He looked exactly as he had the last time she’d seen him, which was six months ago and a lifetime of silence. His hair was slicked back, revealing the high, sharp cheekbones that made him look less human and more like a statue carved from cold stone. His eyes, one amber and one black, locked onto hers. The heterochromia was disorienting, like looking into a storm cloud and a sunset at the same time. “Rory,” he said. His voice was low, smooth, carrying the faint lilt of Marseille even after years in London. “Lucien.” She didn’t step aside. She didn’t invite him in. She just stood there, her hand resting on the doorframe, knuckles white. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, wound himself around her ankles, purring loudly enough to rattle the floorboards. He didn’t care about the tension in the air, only the warmth of her legs. “May I?” Lucien asked, gesturing to the room behind her. He didn’t move to enter, respecting the boundary she was drawing with her body. Aurora hesitated. The flat smelled of old paper, dust, and the lingering scent of cumin and cardamom drifting up from the curry house below. It was her sanctuary, the only place she felt safe since fleeing Cardiff. Since Evan. Since everything went wrong. But the air in the hallway was thinning, and the supernatural pressure rolling off him was undeniable. She stepped back. He moved past her with a fluid grace that made her want to turn and run. He didn’t walk; he glided. He stopped in the center of the room, his gaze sweeping over the chaos of books, scrolls, and research notes that covered every surface. His hand hovered over the ivory handle of his cane, a nervous tic she recognized. “You look tired,” he said. It wasn’t an accusation, but it felt like one. “I work double shifts at the Golden Empress,” Aurora said, her voice cooler than she felt. She crossed her arms, the fabric of her oversized sweater pulling tight. “Sleep is a luxury.” Lucien turned to face her. The amber eye seemed to glow in the dim light of the single overhead bulb. “I heard you were in London. I didn’t think you’d be staying here.” “Eva’s flat is the only place I can afford that doesn’t ask questions.” “Eva knows I’m coming?” “No.” She walked to the table and picked up her tea again, needing something to do with her hands. “I didn’t know you were coming either.” “Then why did you open the door?” Aurora took a sip, the heat grounding her. “Because I knew you wouldn’t leave until I did.” Lucien moved closer. He stopped just inside her personal space, close enough that she could smell him—sandalwood, rain, and something metallic, like ozone before a lightning strike. It was the scent of the demon blood in his veins, the half-breed nature he hid behind tailored suits and polite conversation. “I have information,” he said quietly. “About what?” “About why you’re running. About the things following you.” Aurora’s grip on the mug tightened. She looked down at the tea, watching the steam curl away. “I’m not running from anything anymore, Lucien. I’m just living.” “Are you?” He reached out, his fingers brushing the air near her left wrist. He didn’t touch her, not yet. The heat radiating from his hand was palpable. “You have the look of someone waiting for the other shoe to drop.” She looked up, meeting his gaze. The hurt from their last encounter flared hot in her chest. They hadn’t ended with a fight. They had ended with a silence that had stretched across continents, a mutual agreement to survive by staying apart. But seeing him now, seeing the way his jaw tightened when he thought she wasn’t looking, broke the dam. “Why are you really here?” she asked. “You don’t do charity work.” Lucien’s expression softened, the mask of the fixer slipping just enough to show the man beneath. “Because I saw a name on a list. A name that shouldn’t be on a list.” “Evan?” “No.” He shook his head. “Someone else. Someone who knows about your father. About the case he was working on before he died.” The room seemed to tilt. Her father, Brendan, had died in a car accident, or so the police report said. But the rumors in the legal circles had always been murkier. Aurora felt the blood drain from her face. “Who?” “I can’t tell you here.” Lucien tapped the ivory handle of his cane against the floor. “There are ears in this building. Even in the walls.” Aurora glanced at the window. Brick Lane was dark, the streetlamps flickering. “Then tell me this. Why come to me? Why not just send a message?” “Because I needed to see if you were real.” The admission hung in the air, heavy and dangerous. Aurora stepped closer, closing the distance between them. She could feel the heat of him, the unnatural stillness of his posture. “And?” Lucien’s gaze dropped to her mouth, then back up to her eyes. “And I was wrong. You’re more real than I remember.” He reached out then, his fingers finally finding the scar on her wrist. His touch was calloused but gentle, a stark contrast to the violence that had marked her past. He traced the crescent shape, his thumb pressing lightly against the pale skin. “I missed you, Rory,” he said. The words were simple, stripped of the French flourishes he usually employed. Aurora closed her eyes for a second, leaning into his touch despite her better judgment. “You know I can’t do this, Lucien. You know what happens when we get close.” “Then don’t get close.” His voice was a whisper. “Just listen. Let me help you finish what your father started. Let me help you stop running.” Ptolemy jumped up onto the table, knocking a stack of notes onto the floor. The sound broke the spell. Aurora opened her eyes. Lucien was still looking at her, waiting. The amber eye seemed to burn, the black one an abyss. She pulled her hand away, the loss of contact sending a phantom shock through her arm. She walked over to the deadbolts and checked them again, a nervous habit. “Sit down,” she said, gesturing to the only chair that didn’t have a pile of books on it. “If you’re going to tell me about my father, you’re going to do it here. And you’re going to tell me everything.” Lucien smiled, a small, crooked thing that didn’t quite reach his eyes. He sat, placing his cane across his knees. “Everything.” Aurora poured another cup of tea, her hand steady now. The fear was still there, coiled in her stomach, but it was mixed with something else. Something dangerous and bright. She set the cup in front of him. “Start talking,” she said. “And don’t leave out the parts that hurt.” Lucien took the cup, his fingers brushing hers again. This time, he didn’t pull away. “There is no part of this story that doesn’t hurt, Aurora. But it starts with the night you left Cardiff.” The air in the flat grew heavy, the scent of curry fading beneath the smell of rain and old magic. Aurora sat on the edge of the bed, watching him. The door was locked, the deadbolts thrown. For the first time in months, she didn’t feel the urge to check the locks. She just watched the man who had walked back into her life, and wondered if she would survive the night, or if she would finally stop running.
created_at"2026-02-25T23:08:05.916Z" 2/25/2026, 11:08:05 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.048
89.96% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1494
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1494
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"trembled"
count1
1
word"glint"
count1
2
word"sense of"
count1
3
word"echoing"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"lilt"
count1
6
word"tension"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"sanctuary"
count1
9
word"palpable"
count1
10
word"encounter"
count1
11
word"could feel"
count1
12
word"stark"
count1
13
word"traced"
count1
14
word"whisper"
count1
15
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"trembled"
1"glint"
2"sense of"
3"echoing"
4"silence"
5"lilt"
6"tension"
7"warmth"
8"sanctuary"
9"palpable"
10"encounter"
11"could feel"
12"stark"
13"traced"
14"whisper"
15"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences111
matches(empty)
91.38% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences111
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences138
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1493
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1190
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.09
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Marseille1
London1
Cardiff1
Evan1
Aurora13
Lucien10
Brendan1
Lane1
French1
Ptolemy2
persons
0"Evan"
1"Aurora"
2"Lucien"
3"Brendan"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"Marseille"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"Lane"
globalScore0.954
windowScore0.833
89.02% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like one"
1"quite reach his eyes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.67
wordCount1493
matches
0"not as a sound, but as a vibration"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences138
matches
0"notes that covered"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean29.86
std20.68
cv0.693
sampleLengths
064
184
254
317
480
519
622
731
824
960
103
1160
1214
1332
1433
1513
164
1726
187
1917
2049
216
222
239
2427
2541
2661
2712
2832
291
3023
3139
321
3326
3426
359
3631
3722
3843
3918
4030
4126
4241
4329
4440
4521
4638
4712
4835
4979
92.62% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences111
matches
0"was slicked"
1"was calloused"
2"was mixed"
3"was locked"
35.80% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs203
matches
0"was disorienting"
1"was drawing"
2"was thinning"
3"wasn’t looking"
4"was still looking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences138
ratio0.014
matches
0"He didn’t walk; he glided."
1"He stopped just inside her personal space, close enough that she could smell him—sandalwood, rain, and something metallic, like ozone before a lightning strike."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1193
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.03520536462699078
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.010058675607711651
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences138
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences138
mean10.82
std6.03
cv0.557
sampleLengths
025
110
24
312
44
59
615
710
813
97
1012
112
123
1322
145
1521
1610
174
1814
1913
204
216
2222
2325
2410
2517
263
2716
285
295
3012
3116
3215
3310
3414
352
3622
3713
382
394
4017
413
4216
435
4424
4515
465
479
4816
4912
42.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.2971014492753623
totalSentences138
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
ratio0
21.94% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences103
matches
0"She knew the rhythm."
1"It wasn’t the landlord."
2"It wasn’t a delivery for"
3"She set the mug down"
4"Her hand trembled, just once,"
5"She moved to the door,"
6"She peered through the spyhole."
7"Her breath hitched, a sharp"
8"She hadn’t expected him."
9"She hadn’t expected anyone, really,"
10"She opened the door."
11"He looked exactly as he"
12"His hair was slicked back,"
13"His eyes, one amber and"
14"His voice was low, smooth,"
15"She didn’t step aside"
16"She didn’t invite him in."
17"She just stood there, her"
18"He didn’t care about the"
19"He didn’t move to enter,"
ratio0.495
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount96
totalSentences103
matches
0"The knock came not as"
1"Aurora froze, the mug of"
2"She knew the rhythm."
3"It wasn’t the landlord."
4"It wasn’t a delivery for"
5"She set the mug down"
6"Her hand trembled, just once,"
7"The scar on her left"
8"A phantom sensation, or perhaps"
9"She moved to the door,"
10"The metal clicked with satisfying"
11"She peered through the spyhole."
12"The hallway light was dim,"
13"Her breath hitched, a sharp"
14"She hadn’t expected him."
15"She hadn’t expected anyone, really,"
16"Aurora turned the locks again,"
17"She opened the door."
18"Lucien stood there, filling the"
19"He looked exactly as he"
ratio0.932
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The knock came not as a sound, but as a vibration that traveled through the floorboards, rattling the stack of encyclopedias teetering on the radiator."
1"Her breath hitched, a sharp intake that hurt her lungs."
2"His hair was slicked back, revealing the high, sharp cheekbones that made him look less human and more like a statue carved from cold stone."
3"They had ended with a silence that had stretched across continents, a mutual agreement to survive by staying apart."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Aurora said, her voice cooler than she felt"
1"He reached out, his fingers brushing the air near her left wrist"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.8198%