Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBH0T9W8229ZSQ05WH7QSFS

Run Details

Duration:
58.1s
Cost:
$0.011216
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora turned the first deadbolt. The metal latch clicked with a heavy, final sound. She slid the second bolt home, then the third. Only then did she reach for the handle. She peered through the peephole. The distorted fisheye view showed a tall figure in a charcoal suit standing under the flickering hallway light. She opened the door. Lucien Moreau stood on the welcome mat, his platinum blond hair slicked back against the damp London air. He held his ivory-handled cane in his right hand, the tip tapping once against the worn floorboards of the hallway. His eyes, one amber and one black, locked onto hers. "You know I have three locks, Rory." Aurora stepped back, letting the door swing wide. "I know you have a key, Luc. You lost it months ago." He pushed past her before she could finish the thought. The scent of expensive cologne and rain followed him into the cramped space. He navigated the clutter of books and scrolls without looking down, stepping over a pile of papers near the entryway. "I didn't come for the key." Ptolemy, the tabby cat, wound himself around Lucien's ankles. The cat hissed, then rubbed his head against the charcoal fabric of Lucien's trousers. Lucien looked down, his expression unreadable. He reached out a gloved hand to stroke the cat's head. The movement was slow, deliberate. "I need a place to stand," Lucien said. "The bar is too loud. Your flat above Silas' place is too... exposed." Aurora closed the door behind him. She leaned her back against the wood, feeling the vibration of the curry house kitchen below. The smell of cumin and chili drifted up through the floorboards, mixing with the dust of old paper in the room. "You don't get to show up here," she said. "Not after Cardiff." Lucien turned. He placed the cane against the wall, the blade hidden within the ivory handle. He walked to the small table in the center of the room, where a stack of legal texts sat next to a half-eaten plate of samosas. He picked up a pen, twirled it between his fingers, and set it down. "Cardiff was a mistake." "It was a lie." He stopped twirling the pen. The silence stretched tight between them, heavy with the weight of the unsaid. Aurora watched the way his throat moved when he swallowed. She remembered the way his hands felt on her neck that night in the university library. She remembered the blood on his knuckles the next morning. "I came to London to fix things," Lucien said. "You know I don't make mistakes." "You made one with me." Aurora pushed off the door. She walked toward the kitchenette, her left wrist brushing against the sleeve of her shirt. The crescent-shaped scar on her skin itched in the humidity. She filled a kettle at the sink, the water roaring as it rushed into the metal container. "Put the kettle on," Lucien said. "I'm not leaving until we talk." "I don't want tea." "Then coffee." "I don't want anything from you." She turned around. Lucien stood by the bookshelf, running a finger along the spines of the books. He knew this place. He knew where Eva kept the research notes on the Avaros realm. He knew which scrolls contained the binding spells she used to keep the demons at bay. "You're staying here," he said. It wasn't a question. "I'm staying with Eva." "Eva is at the university." Aurora gripped the edge of the counter. "How do you know that?" "I know things." Lucien turned to face her. The light from the single bulb above the table caught the heterochromatic split of his eyes. One side burned like a warning, the other swallowed the light. "I know you're running from Evan. I know you're sleeping in the spare room because your own flat is compromised." Aurora's grip tightened on the counter. "Who told you that?" "No one tells me anything." Lucien stepped closer. He stopped just outside her reach. "I watched. I saw you leave the bar at three in the morning. I saw you come here at dawn. I saw you lock the three bolts." "You followed me." "I protected you." The word hung in the air, sharp and ugly. Aurora walked around the table, cutting off his path to the exit. She stopped inches from him. He didn't flinch. He smelled of ozone and old money. "You don't protect people, Luc. You fix them. You break them. You fix them." He reached out, his hand hovering near her wrist. He didn't touch the scar, but the heat of his palm radiated against her skin. "I fixed you once," he said. "I can do it again." "You cut my wrist in Cardiff." "I cut the contract." Aurora pulled her arm away. She walked to the window, looking out at the brick wall of the alley. The rain streaked the glass, blurring the streetlights below. "You left me," she said. "You walked away." "I had to." Lucien moved behind her. She could feel the heat of his body through her shirt. He leaned over the table, resting his hands on the wood. "The demons know your name, Rory. They know your face. If I stay with you, they come for me. If they come for me, they kill you." "I can handle myself." "You can handle a delivery run. You can handle a bar fight. You can't handle the things that live in the shadows." Aurora turned around. Lucien was close enough that she could count the lashes on his eyelids. The amber eye glowed faintly in the dim light. "I'm not a child." "No," Lucien agreed. "You're a liability." The word struck her harder than a blow. She stepped forward, invading his space. He didn't retreat. "I work for Yu-Fei. I know the streets. I know the rules." "You know the rules of the surface," Lucien said. "You don't know the rules of the deep." He reached for the cane. He didn't draw the blade, but he held it like a weapon. "I need you to trust me." "I don't trust you." "Then trust the fact that I'm here." Lucien tapped the cane against the floor. "Evan isn't the only thing hunting you. There are others. They found the ledger. They know you have the key." Aurora's breath hitched. "The ledger is gone." "Nothing is gone. It's just hidden." Lucien stepped back, giving her space. He walked to the sofa, which was covered in more books. He sat down, crossing his legs. He looked small in the massive chair, a predator resting in a den of paper. "I need the ledger, Rory." "You can't have it." "I need it to stop the bleeding." "What bleeding?" Lucien looked at his hands. The gloves were black leather, immaculate. "The barrier between our worlds is thinning. If Evan finds you, he won't just hurt you. He'll tear the hole open." Aurora stared at him. The room felt smaller, the air thinner. She looked at the scar on her wrist. The skin was pale, the crescent mark stark against the white. "Why tell me now?" "Because I'm out of time." Lucien stood up. He walked to the door, his hand hovering over the handle. He didn't turn the lock. "I'm not leaving." "You can't stay here." "I can." Lucien turned back to her. "I have a room. I have a key." "You lost your key." "I picked the lock." Aurora walked to the door. She placed her hand on the wood, feeling the vibration of the building. The curry house below was quieting down. The kitchen staff was packing up. "You're a demon, Luc." "I'm a man." "You're a lie." Lucien smiled. It was a cold expression, devoid of warmth. "I'm the only truth you have." He turned the handle. The door clicked open. He stepped into the hallway, then stopped. He looked back at her. "Lock the door," he said. "Don't open it for anyone but me." Aurora watched him walk down the corridor. The light from the hallway swallowed him. She stood alone in the doorway, the rain drumming against the window. She reached up and touched the scar on her wrist. The skin was warm. She closed the door. She turned the first deadbolt. She turned the second. She turned the third. She walked back to the table. The pen Lucien had touched sat on the wood. She picked it up. The ink was dry. She looked at the window. A shadow moved across the brick wall outside. She didn't move. She didn't breathe. The shadow vanished. Aurora set the pen down. She walked to the kettle. The water had stopped boiling. The silence in the flat was absolute. She poured the water into a cup. The steam rose in a thin column. She took a sip. The tea was bitter. She looked at the door. The three deadbolts held. She looked at the window. The rain fell harder. She sat down at the table. She opened a book. The pages were old, the paper brittle. She read the first line. She read the second line. She didn't hear the floorboard creak behind her.
created_at"2026-02-25T23:09:21.091Z" 2/25/2026, 11:09:21 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Lucien stepped back [back]"
1"Lucien turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.243
leniency0.486
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.057
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1535
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1535
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"navigated"
count1
1
word"unreadable"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"roaring"
count1
5
word"could feel"
count1
6
word"predator"
count1
7
word"stark"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"navigated"
1"unreadable"
2"silence"
3"weight"
4"roaring"
5"could feel"
6"predator"
7"stark"
8"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences141
matches
0"was bitter"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences141
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences194
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1535
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1075
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.05
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
London1
Lucien22
Aurora15
Eva1
Avaros1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Aurora"
3"Eva"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.477
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1535
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences194
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs89
mean17.25
std15.78
cv0.915
sampleLengths
054
14
248
37
420
543
66
745
821
943
1012
1156
124
134
1454
1515
165
1747
1812
194
202
216
2249
239
244
255
2612
2755
2810
2941
303
313
3236
3314
3424
3511
366
374
3828
398
4056
414
4222
4325
444
456
4617
4712
4817
4917
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences141
matches
0"was covered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs194
matches
0"was quieting"
1"was packing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences194
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1078
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.01948051948051948
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0027829313543599257
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences194
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences194
mean7.91
std5.01
cv0.634
sampleLengths
05
19
29
38
45
518
64
718
820
910
107
118
1212
1310
1413
1520
166
179
1814
196
2011
215
228
2313
246
2516
2621
279
283
292
3014
3126
3214
334
344
355
3613
3710
3816
3910
409
416
425
435
4415
4510
4617
476
486
494
34.02% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats31
diversityRatio0.14432989690721648
totalSentences194
uniqueOpeners28
25.84% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences129
matches
0"Only then did she reach"
ratio0.008
12.25% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount67
totalSentences129
matches
0"She slid the second bolt"
1"She peered through the peephole."
2"She opened the door."
3"He held his ivory-handled cane"
4"His eyes, one amber and"
5"He pushed past her before"
6"He navigated the clutter of"
7"He reached out a gloved"
8"She leaned her back against"
9"He placed the cane against"
10"He walked to the small"
11"He picked up a pen,"
12"He stopped twirling the pen."
13"She remembered the way his"
14"She remembered the blood on"
15"She walked toward the kitchenette,"
16"She filled a kettle at"
17"She turned around."
18"He knew this place."
19"He knew where Eva kept"
ratio0.519
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount127
totalSentences129
matches
0"Aurora turned the first deadbolt."
1"The metal latch clicked with"
2"She slid the second bolt"
3"She peered through the peephole."
4"The distorted fisheye view showed"
5"She opened the door."
6"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
7"He held his ivory-handled cane"
8"His eyes, one amber and"
9"Aurora stepped back, letting the"
10"He pushed past her before"
11"The scent of expensive cologne"
12"He navigated the clutter of"
13"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, wound"
14"The cat hissed, then rubbed"
15"Lucien looked down, his expression"
16"He reached out a gloved"
17"The movement was slow, deliberate."
18"Aurora closed the door behind"
19"She leaned her back against"
ratio0.984
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences129
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Lucien agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.029
81.8734%