Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBH24XT9F7780Z3G6F6WPXR

Run Details

Duration:
1m 11s
Cost:
$0.015093
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air tasted of copper and burnt sugar. Aurora stepped through the shimmer, the distortion rippling like oil on water before snapping shut behind her back. Heat washed over her skin, heavy and suffocating. The sky above burned a deep amber, devoid of sun or moon, casting long, distorted shadows that seemed to breathe. She touched the silver chain at her throat. The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against her collarbone, a rhythmic thrumming that matched the beat in her ears. The gemstone felt warm, almost feverish. Isolde walked ahead, silver hair drifting as though underwater. The woman left no mark on the soil. Her bare feet made no sound against the rich earth. The ground beneath Aurora's boots felt spongy, rich with decay and fertility. Vines thick as pythons coiled around stone pillars that rose from the earth like broken teeth. Leaves the size of dinner plates unfurled in the stagnant air, dripping sap that smelled of wine and old blood. Nyx materialized from the darkness of the tree line. Their form solidified into a humanoid silhouette, violet eyes glowing against the gloom. The Shade moved without sound, gliding over the roots. Aurora tightened her grip on the Fae-Forged Blade. The moonsilver hilt remained cold despite the oppressive heat. She sheathed the weapon at her hip and scanned the horizon. Grand structures loomed in the distance, palaces built from marble and bone. Tables stretched for miles, laden with fruit that rotted and ripened in the same breath. "We aren't here for the feast," Aurora said. She kept her eyes on the pendant. The crimson gem glowed brighter. Nyx drifted closer to the vines. The shadow form rippled, testing the boundary of the plant life. A tendril of shadow reached out, brushing a leaf. The leaf turned black and crumbled to dust. "The shadows here taste of ash," Nyx whispered. The sound drifted like wind through dry grass. Aurora crouched. She examined the soil. Black worms writhed beneath the surface, avoiding her fingers. She stood, wiping her hand on her trousers. The dirt came off sticky. "Keep moving. The stone pulls us north." Isolde stopped. She turned, pale lavender eyes locking onto Aurora. The wind did not touch the Seer's hair. "The path bends where the hunger grows," Isolde spoke. Her voice carried no echo. Aurora frowned. She didn't wait for a translation. The pendant vibrated violently against her chest. "North leads to the throat," Isolde said. "South leads to the grave." Aurora ignored the riddle. She pointed toward a gap in the stone pillars. "That way. The light is stronger." They moved forward. The heat intensified. Sweat stung Aurora's eyes. She blinked it away. The vines watched them pass. Leaves turned slowly, tracking their movement. Nyx flickered. The Shade's edges blurred, then sharpened. "Something watches from the dark," Nyx said. "We know," Aurora replied. She didn't look back. The ground shifted. Roots rose from the earth, forming a bridge over a fissure that opened beneath them. The chasm dropped into darkness, exhaling a breath of cold air that smelled of sulfur. Aurora stepped onto the root bridge. The wood felt warm, pulsing with a faint heartbeat. Isolde stepped onto the root without hesitation. The plant held her weight. Nyx passed through the root as if it were smoke. Aurora placed her boot down. The bridge groaned. She held her breath. "Careful," Aurora said. "The bridge knows," Isolde replied. Aurora took another step. The vibration traveled up her leg. She reached the other side and stepped onto solid ground. The air here smelled of spices, cumin and saffron, mixed with the scent of something rotting. A massive table stood ahead. It stretched into the distance, covered in a white cloth that looked like bone. Silver platters held meat that twitched. Fruit piled high, bursting with juice that pooled on the cloth. Aurora drew the blade. The moonsilver hummed. "Don't touch the food," Aurora said. Nyx floated over the table. They extended a hand. A shadowy tendril reached out toward a grape. The fruit turned black and withered instantly. "It is poisoned," Nyx said. "Everything here is poisoned," Isolde added. Aurora walked around the table. She kept the blade low. The pendant burned hotter. "The source is closer," Aurora said. She spotted a door at the far end of the hall. It stood alone, carved from obsidian. The Heartstone glowed red, hot enough to burn skin if she touched it. "That door," Aurora said. Isolde walked toward it. The silver chain of the pendant pulled Aurora's neck. "The door waits for the key," Isolde said. "I have the key," Aurora said. She tapped the pendant. "The key opens the lock," Isolde said. "But the lock opens the cage." Aurora ignored the warning. She walked to the door. The obsidian surface reflected her face. Her blue eyes looked tired. The scar on her wrist throbbed. She placed her hand on the stone. It felt cold, biting through her glove. "Open," Aurora said. The door did not move. Nyx stepped forward. The Shade pressed a hand against the obsidian. The surface rippled like water. "It resists," Nyx said. "Then we break it," Aurora said. She raised the blade. The Fae-Forged Blade caught the amber light. "Wait," Isolde said. Aurora paused. "The stone speaks," Isolde said. Aurora listened. A low hum vibrated through the floor. "It says no," Aurora said. "It says not yet," Isolde corrected. Aurora lowered the blade. The hum faded. The pendant cooled. "We need to find the source," Aurora said. "The pull is too strong." "The source is the hunger," Isolde said. Aurora looked at the tables. The food twitched. The meat curled. "Then we starve it," Aurora said. She turned away from the door. The path led deeper into the hall. Shadows lengthened, stretching toward them. Nyx moved to the front. The Shade became solid, a wall of darkness. "I will lead," Nyx said. Aurora nodded. She followed. The hall ended in a garden. Vines grew thick, blocking the path. Flowers bloomed in the center, petals the color of dried blood. Aurora stepped into the garden. The ground felt soft. "Do not touch the flowers," Isolde warned. "Why?" Aurora asked. "They bite," Isolde said. Aurora stopped. She looked at the flowers. They pulsed. "We go around," Aurora said. They moved along the edge of the garden. The heat increased. Sweat soaked Aurora's shirt. "The air is thick," Aurora said. "It breathes," Isolde said. Aurora wiped her brow. The pendant pulsed again. "It's close," Aurora said. "It is here," Nyx said. They stopped. The shadows deepened. The amber sky dimmed. "Something comes," Aurora said. "Something always comes," Isolde said. Aurora tightened her grip on the blade. She waited. The silence stretched. Then a sound broke the quiet. A low growl vibrated through the ground. Aurora raised the blade. "Ready," Aurora said. Nyx shifted. The shadow form expanded. "Ready," Nyx said. Isolde stood still. "Ready," Isolde said. The ground shook. Dust fell from the vines. Aurora took a step forward.
created_at"2026-02-25T23:10:04.738Z" 2/25/2026, 11:10:04 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags40
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.889
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.72% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1167
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
22.88% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1167
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"pulsed"
count3
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"oppressive"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"loomed"
count1
6
word"marble"
count1
7
word"echo"
count1
8
word"vibrated"
count3
9
word"grave"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"throbbed"
count1
13
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"rhythmic"
2"gloom"
3"oppressive"
4"scanned"
5"loomed"
6"marble"
7"echo"
8"vibrated"
9"grave"
10"flickered"
11"weight"
12"throbbed"
13"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences182
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences182
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences187
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen20
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1167
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions36
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions92
wordCount1005
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity4.48
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity9.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Aurora45
Shade4
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Seer1
Isolde20
Nyx15
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Pendant"
2"Aurora"
3"Shade"
4"Blade"
5"Seer"
6"Isolde"
7"Nyx"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
79.58% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"shadows that seemed to breathe"
1"looked like bone"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1167
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences187
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs94
mean12.41
std11.22
cv0.904
sampleLengths
054
131
227
348
431
555
620
734
816
928
107
1118
1214
1315
147
155
1613
176
1825
198
207
218
2233
2315
2412
2510
2612
273
285
2936
3036
317
326
3324
345
356
3614
376
3830
394
4013
418
4210
4313
4426
4514
463
475
4816
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences182
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs220
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences187
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1007
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.016881827209533268
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0029791459781529296
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences187
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences187
mean6.24
std3.45
cv0.553
sampleLengths
08
118
28
320
48
517
66
79
88
910
1012
1116
1220
139
1413
159
168
179
1811
1912
2015
218
227
235
246
2511
269
278
288
298
302
314
329
338
345
357
362
378
388
399
405
412
426
437
447
455
464
479
486
493
42.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.21390374331550802
totalSentences187
uniqueOpeners40
25.84% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences129
matches
0"Then a sound broke the"
ratio0.008
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences129
matches
0"She touched the silver chain"
1"Her bare feet made no"
2"Their form solidified into a"
3"She sheathed the weapon at"
4"She kept her eyes on"
5"She examined the soil."
6"She stood, wiping her hand"
7"She turned, pale lavender eyes"
8"Her voice carried no echo."
9"She didn't wait for a"
10"She pointed toward a gap"
11"They moved forward."
12"She blinked it away."
13"She didn't look back."
14"She held her breath."
15"She reached the other side"
16"It stretched into the distance,"
17"They extended a hand."
18"She kept the blade low."
19"She spotted a door at"
ratio0.233
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount122
totalSentences129
matches
0"The air tasted of copper"
1"Aurora stepped through the shimmer,"
2"The sky above burned a"
3"She touched the silver chain"
4"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against"
5"The gemstone felt warm, almost"
6"Isolde walked ahead, silver hair"
7"The woman left no mark"
8"Her bare feet made no"
9"The ground beneath Aurora's boots"
10"Vines thick as pythons coiled"
11"Leaves the size of dinner"
12"Nyx materialized from the darkness"
13"Their form solidified into a"
14"The Shade moved without sound,"
15"Aurora tightened her grip on"
16"The moonsilver hilt remained cold"
17"She sheathed the weapon at"
18"Tables stretched for miles, laden"
19"She kept her eyes on"
ratio0.946
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences129
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The sky above burned a deep amber, devoid of sun or moon, casting long, distorted shadows that seemed to breathe."
1"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against her collarbone, a rhythmic thrumming that matched the beat in her ears."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags40
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
87.50% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags40
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"Isolde spoke (speak)"
2"Isolde added (add)"
3"Isolde corrected (correct)"
4"Isolde warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.889
leniency1
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.125
81.0649%