Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBH3H04HXNBDDY3EHYX9YP3

Run Details

Duration:
54.0s
Cost:
$0.036735
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign buzzed overhead, casting a sickly emerald glow on the pavement outside. Aurora pushed through the heavy oak door, the bell above it jingling with a sharp, intrusive chime. The air inside smelled of stale stout, lemon polish, and the damp wool of a hundred coats. She paused just inside the threshold, her hand still on the brass handle. The Raven's Nest looked exactly as she remembered it from the few times she had visited as a university student, yet everything felt heavier now. The walls, plastered with faded maps of Europe and black-and-white photographs of men in trench coats, seemed to lean in closer. Silas stood behind the bar, wiping a glass with a rag that had seen better decades. His grey-streaked auburn hair was shorter than she recalled, pulled back from a face that had deepened in shadow. The neat beard covered the lower half of his face, but the hazel eyes remained sharp, scanning the room with the instinct of a man who spent too long watching corners. He moved with a deliberate slowness, his left leg dragging slightly as he shifted his weight. Aurora felt the familiar pull of the small crescent scar on her left wrist. She tucked her hand into the pocket of her coat. She had not seen him in five years. Five years since she packed a single bag and vanished from London, leaving a note that said nothing and meant everything. She had told herself she was running from Evan, from the law school that felt like a cage, from the expectations of a father who wanted a barrister and a mother who wanted a teacher. She had not told Silas. Silas stopped wiping the glass. He set it down on the mahogany counter with a soft clink. His gaze locked onto hers, the hazel irises narrowing. He did not smile. He did not look surprised. He looked resigned, as if he had been waiting for this specific moment for half a decade. "You look like you're about to bolt," Silas said. His voice was lower, rougher than the smooth baritone she remembered. Aurora walked further into the room. The floorboards creaked under her boots. She stopped at a stool near the end of the bar, far enough to keep her distance, close enough to hear. "I didn't think you'd be here. The landlord said you'd retired to the country." "The landlord talks too much." Silas picked up the glass again, polishing the rim with a circular motion. "And I don't retire. I just move the office." He glanced at her left wrist, where the coat sleeve had ridden up slightly. He saw the scar. His eyes flicked back to hers. "You kept the flat." "I did." "Without paying rent for the first six months." "I sent the money eventually." "You sent it three years late." Silas set the glass down hard. The sound echoed in the quiet room. "You left without a word, Rory. Not a phone call. Not a letter. Just gone." "I was in a bad place." "Everyone is in a bad place." Silas leaned forward, resting his forearms on the bar. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the dim light. "You were my student. My friend. You didn't owe me an explanation, but you owed me the truth that you were alive." "I was alive." "Was you?" He pushed a bottle of whiskey across the wood. The glass stopped inches from her hand. "You look tired. The city eats people who don't watch their backs." Aurora wrapped her fingers around the bottle neck. The glass was cold. She poured a measure, the amber liquid splashing into the waiting tumbler. She didn't drink. She just held the glass, feeling the weight of it. "I had to disappear. Evan... he found me. If I stayed, he would have found me here. He would have found you." Silas went still. The limp in his leg seemed to vanish as he straightened his spine. "The boy from Cardiff?" "The man." Aurora took a sip. The whiskey burned, sharp and clean. "He knows people. He knows how to track." "And you think hiding in a flat above my bar makes you safe?" Silas let out a short, dry laugh. "This is Soho. The walls have ears. The maps on the wall have eyes." "I didn't have anywhere else." "You had me." Silas tapped the silver ring against the wood. "You could have come to me. I have contacts. I have ways of making people disappear permanently." "I couldn't ask that of you." "Why not?" "Because you're not that man anymore." Aurora looked at the limp, the grey in the beard, the way his shoulders hunched slightly against an invisible weight. "You're a bar owner now. You have a business. A reputation." "I am still the Spymaster." Silas said the title with a flat, dangerous tone. "The title doesn't fade because I pour pints." "Does it?" Aurora set the glass down. "Then why didn't you find me? If you are still that man, why did it take me walking through that door to know you were here?" Silas turned away. He reached for a rag and began wiping a spot on the counter that was already clean. The movement was agitated, the cloth moving in sharp, jerky strokes. "Because I didn't know where to look. You left no trail. You cut the line." "I had to." "You did." Silas stopped wiping. He turned back to face her. "And now you are back. In my bar. In my flat. Above my head." "I'm leaving the flat." "No, you're not." Silas shook his head. "You have nowhere to go. Evan is gone?" "He's in prison." "For what?" "Assault. Attempted murder." Aurora stared at the whiskey. "I have a new job. Delivery. I don't need the flat." "You need the safety." Silas leaned in again. "You think I don't know what it looks like when someone is hunted? You have the look. The way you stand. The way you check the door every time it opens." Aurora looked up. Her bright blue eyes met his hazel ones. "I check the door because I'm careful." "You check the door because you're afraid." "I am afraid." "Good." Silas poured himself a drink. "Fear keeps you sharp. Complacency gets you killed." He took a long swallow, the liquid vanishing in one go. He set the glass down and looked at the maps on the wall. A map of Prague, marked with red pins in the corners. "You think you can just walk in here, five years later, and pretend nothing happened?" "I never pretended." "You ignored the silence." Silas pointed the bottle at her. "I sent letters. To the university. To the flat you rented in Cardiff. To the address of your mother. They all came back. Unopened." "I didn't want to be found." "Then why come here?" Aurora hesitated. The silence stretched, thick and heavy, filled only by the hum of the neon sign and the distant traffic on the street. She ran her thumb over the scar on her wrist. "Because I didn't know where else to go. And because I needed to know if you were still the man who taught me how to pick a lock." Silas stared at her. The anger seemed to drain out of his posture, replaced by a weary exhaustion. He reached into the pocket of his waistcoat and pulled out a small, metal key. He tossed it onto the bar. It slid across the wood, stopping in front of her. "That opens the back room," Silas said. "The one behind the bookshelf." Aurora looked at the key. It was old, tarnished brass. "Why?" "Because if you are going to stay, you need to know the rules." Silas turned back to the taps, his hand gripping the handle. "And because you need to know that I never stopped looking for you." He pulled the lever, and the sound of beer rushing into a glass filled the silence. He didn't turn around. "Drink your whiskey, Rory." Aurora picked up the key. The metal was warm from the bar. She looked at the door, then at the bookshelf in the corner, hidden in the shadows. She took another drink of the whiskey, the burn settling in her chest. "I'm not staying forever," she said. "Everyone stays forever in the end," Silas replied, his voice barely audible over the pour. "Some of us just take longer to get there."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Silas turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.313
leniency0.627
rawRatio0.048
effectiveRatio0.03
89.44% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1421
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1421
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"silence"
count3
highlights
0"scanning"
1"weight"
2"familiar"
3"flicked"
4"echoed"
5"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
93.02% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences86
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences132
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1421
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount868
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.42
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Europe1
London1
Evan1
Silas21
Aurora12
Prague1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Evan"
3"Silas"
4"Aurora"
places
0"Europe"
1"London"
2"Prague"
globalScore0.29
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a cage, from the expectations"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1421
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences132
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean25.84
std23.64
cv0.915
sampleLengths
0108
182
293
352
420
547
627
728
82
98
105
1134
126
1349
143
1530
1659
1720
1820
1934
205
2128
226
232
2437
2522
2633
2746
283
2925
304
3115
323
332
3419
3539
3618
377
383
3914
4050
413
4234
436
444
4562
4649
4712
4811
4937
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"was agitated"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs143
matches
0"was running"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences132
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount871
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.029850746268656716
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008036739380022962
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences132
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences132
mean10.77
std6.95
cv0.645
sampleLengths
015
117
217
313
425
521
616
719
831
916
1014
1110
128
1321
1435
155
165
1712
189
194
205
2117
229
2311
246
256
2621
2714
2818
299
3014
314
326
334
342
358
365
3712
387
3915
406
4115
4212
4322
443
4511
467
4712
488
494
36.36% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.2196969696969697
totalSentences132
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
49.27% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences82
matches
0"She paused just inside the"
1"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
2"He moved with a deliberate"
3"She tucked her hand into"
4"She had not seen him"
5"She had told herself she"
6"She had not told Silas."
7"He set it down on"
8"His gaze locked onto hers,"
9"He did not smile."
10"He did not look surprised."
11"He looked resigned, as if"
12"His voice was lower, rougher"
13"She stopped at a stool"
14"He glanced at her left"
15"He saw the scar."
16"His eyes flicked back to"
17"He pushed a bottle of"
18"She poured a measure, the"
19"She didn't drink."
ratio0.427
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences82
matches
0"The green neon sign buzzed"
1"Aurora pushed through the heavy"
2"The air inside smelled of"
3"She paused just inside the"
4"The Raven's Nest looked exactly"
5"The walls, plastered with faded"
6"Silas stood behind the bar,"
7"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
8"The neat beard covered the"
9"He moved with a deliberate"
10"Aurora felt the familiar pull"
11"She tucked her hand into"
12"She had not seen him"
13"She had told herself she"
14"She had not told Silas."
15"Silas stopped wiping the glass."
16"He set it down on"
17"His gaze locked onto hers,"
18"He did not smile."
19"He did not look surprised."
ratio0.988
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"His grey-streaked auburn hair was shorter than she recalled, pulled back from a face that had deepened in shadow."
1"The neat beard covered the lower half of his face, but the hazel eyes remained sharp, scanning the room with the instinct of a man who spent too long watching c…"
2"He reached for a rag and began wiping a spot on the counter that was already clean."
77.38% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Silas turned back, his hand gripping the handle"
1"Silas replied, his voice barely audible over the pour"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.075
leniency0.149
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.7876%