Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBH4GBQ8NXVMYG6EBJP9SJR

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Duration:
41.8s
Cost:
$0.016589
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The lock clicked. Not the tumblers of the deadbolt, but the subtle click of a pick sliding into place. Aurora dropped the takeaway box onto the counter. Gravy splashed onto the chipped laminate. She did not turn around. She reached under the counter, fingers finding the cold steel of the chef's knife she kept taped there. The door swung open. Lucien Moreau stepped inside. He smelled of expensive cologne and old paper. Rain did not follow him, but the damp chill of the East End clung to his charcoal suit. He closed the door with a soft click and locked it behind him. You do not knock, she said. He leaned his ivory-handled cane against the wall. The blade inside hummed with a low vibration only she could feel. Knocking invites conversation. I require action. Aurora gripped the knife handle. Her knuckles turned white. You are trespassing. I am preserving an asset. She stepped forward. The scar on her left wrist throbbed, a phantom reminder of the last time he walked into her life without permission. I am not an asset. I am a person. You are a person who knows too much about the Avaros trade routes. You are a person who smells like the blood of a demon you did not kill. He took a step closer. The room narrowed. The narrow hallway felt like a cage. I killed nothing. I delivered a box of dumplings. The dumplings contained a tracking rune. Aurora laughed. It came out sharp, brittle. You are joking. Lucien did not smile. His heterochromatic eyes caught the dim light of the kitchen. One amber, one black. They looked like a storm trapped in glass. Do not test my patience, Aurora. She turned and walked into the living area. She needed space. She needed to see the exits. The flat above Silas' bar was small. One room served as kitchen, dining, and bedroom. A single window looked out onto the alley. The walls were thin. She could hear the muffled bass of the bar downstairs. The thumping beat vibrated through the floorboards. Lucien followed. He moved silently. No creak of leather, no scuff of shoe. He stopped behind the sofa. Why are you here? The man you delivered to. He is dead. Aurora froze. She kept her back to him. Her hand stayed near the knife. Evan? No. The client. She turned. Her bright blue eyes narrowed. I know who I delivered to. I know what I was paid. You were paid in currency that does not exist on Earth. She crossed her arms. The kitchen light flickered overhead. I was paid in cash. British pounds. The cash is cursed. It burns the skin. It whispers names. Lucien picked up a glass from the table. He turned it over in his long fingers. He inspected it for dust. I do not like dust. This is not a cleaning service. It is a retrieval service. He set the glass down. It made a sharp clink. You need to move. Tonight. I have a shift tomorrow. The shift does not matter. The people hunting you do not care about your schedule. Aurora felt the heat rise in her chest. Anger. Fear. The familiar cocktail. I can handle myself. I left Cardiff for a reason. You left Cardiff because you ran. You are still running. She threw the knife. It did not fly true. It bounced off the wall near his head. The blade stuck in the plaster. Lucien did not flinch. He looked at the knife. Then at her. That was a poor throw. You are arrogant. I am accurate. He walked to the window. He peered through the gap in the curtains. The alley below was dark. Shadows stretched long across the pavement. They are already here. Who? The ones who own the currency. Aurora moved to the window. She looked down. Two figures stood at the end of the alley. They wore long coats. Their faces were obscured by hoods. They did not move. They did not speak. They simply waited. How long? Minutes. She grabbed her coat from the chair. She grabbed her phone. We go out the back. There is no back. The fire escape is welded shut. Then we go through the bar. Silas will not let you pass. He is a man of order. You are chaos. I am his employee. You are his liability. Lucien turned from the window. He drew the cane from the wall. The ivory handle clicked. The blade extended with a sharp hiss. Stay behind me. I do not take orders from you. You take orders from survival. He walked to the door. He placed his hand on the handle. The wood groaned. They are knocking. Aurora looked at the door. The wood did not move. But the sound came from the other side. Three heavy thuds. Open up. The voice was deep. It vibrated through the wood. Lucien looked at her. Do you trust me? Aurora looked at the knife in the wall. She looked at the men in the alley. She looked at the demon in the room. No. Then hold on. He kicked the door. Not the lock. The frame. The wood splintered. Dust flew. The hinges screamed. The men outside shouted. Lucien stepped into the hallway. He raised the blade. Aurora ran. She followed him into the dark corridor. The stairs were steep. The air smelled of stale beer and urine. She slipped on the third step. Her hand grabbed the railing. Lucien grabbed her arm. His grip was iron. Do not fall. They reached the bottom. The bar was empty. The lights were off. The silence was heavy. Silas stood behind the counter. He held a shotgun. He did not aim at the door. He aimed at Lucien. Get out. Not tonight, Silas. The shotgun buckled. Lucien moved faster than a human should. He lunged. The blade flashed. The shotgun fired. Aurora ducked. The sound was deafening. Wood chips flew from the ceiling. Lucien was already behind the counter. He kicked Silas. The bar owner fell. Run. They ran for the back door. The alley was blocked. The two figures in coats stood there. They held weapons. Not guns. Staves. Black metal. Lucien stopped. He stood between Aurora and the men. You should not have come here. The men did not speak. They raised the staves. Aurora reached into her pocket. She pulled out the lighter. She flicked it. The flame danced. Lucien looked at the flame. He looked at the men. Fire. The men hesitated. They did not like the flame. Lucien smiled. It was a cold smile. Run. Aurora ran. She did not look back. She heard the clash of metal. She heard the crackle of fire. She heard the scream of something dying. She reached the street. The rain started. It fell hard. Cold. She turned. The alley was empty. The fire was out. The men were gone. Lucien stood in the doorway. He wiped blood from his cheek. You are late. She ran to him. Where did they go? They are dead. She looked at his cane. The blade was clean. You lied. I lied about the currency. I lied about the shift. I did not lie about the danger. She grabbed his collar. She pulled him close. Do not come to my flat again. He looked at her. The amber eye glowed in the dark. I will not need to. They know where you live now. He stepped back. He turned the blade back into the cane. I will pick you up at six. She stood alone in the rain. The street was quiet. The bar was silent. She looked at her wrist. The scar burned. She turned and walked into the night. The door behind her slammed shut. A car engine roared to life. She did not wait. She ran.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1315
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.98% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1315
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"could feel"
count1
2
word"throbbed"
count1
3
word"reminder"
count1
4
word"vibrated"
count2
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"could feel"
2"throbbed"
3"reminder"
4"vibrated"
5"flickered"
6"familiar"
7"silence"
8"flicked"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences267
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences267
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences267
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen21
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1315
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"You do not knock, she said."
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions63
wordCount1311
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.22
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
East1
End1
Avaros1
Aurora14
One2
Earth1
Cardiff2
Lucien16
Silas4
You16
Do4
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Aurora"
2"Lucien"
3"Silas"
4"You"
places
0"East"
1"End"
2"One"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0.89
windowScore0.5
90.48% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a cage"
1"looked like a storm trapped in glass"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.76
wordCount1315
matches
0"Not the tumblers of the deadbolt, but the subtle click of a pick sliding into place"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences267
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs129
mean10.19
std9.06
cv0.889
sampleLengths
019
137
24
343
46
520
66
79
83
95
1024
119
1229
1315
149
156
167
173
1826
196
2061
2118
224
238
2414
251
263
277
2812
2911
309
317
3211
3321
345
356
365
3710
385
395
4015
4113
4210
4310
4423
4512
465
473
483
4924
96.06% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences267
matches
0"was paid"
1"were paid"
2"was paid"
3"were obscured"
4"is welded"
5"was blocked"
6"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs279
matches
0"was deafening"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences267
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount307
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount6
adverbRatio0.019543973941368076
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.003257328990228013
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences267
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences267
mean4.93
std2.77
cv0.563
sampleLengths
03
116
28
36
45
518
64
74
88
918
1013
116
128
1312
143
153
165
174
183
195
203
2121
225
234
2413
2516
265
273
287
293
306
316
322
335
343
354
3610
374
388
396
408
413
426
437
448
458
464
4710
487
492
33.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats43
diversityRatio0.18726591760299627
totalSentences267
uniqueOpeners50
43.10% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences232
matches
0"Then at her."
1"Then we go through the"
2"Then hold on."
ratio0.013
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount129
totalSentences232
matches
0"She did not turn around."
1"She reached under the counter,"
2"He smelled of expensive cologne"
3"He closed the door with"
4"You do not knock, she"
5"He leaned his ivory-handled cane"
6"I require action."
7"Her knuckles turned white."
8"You are trespassing."
9"I am preserving an asset."
10"She stepped forward."
11"I am not an asset."
12"I am a person."
13"You are a person who"
14"You are a person who"
15"He took a step closer."
16"I killed nothing."
17"I delivered a box of"
18"It came out sharp, brittle."
19"You are joking."
ratio0.556
5.26% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount211
totalSentences232
matches
0"The lock clicked."
1"Aurora dropped the takeaway box"
2"Gravy splashed onto the chipped"
3"She did not turn around."
4"She reached under the counter,"
5"The door swung open."
6"Lucien Moreau stepped inside."
7"He smelled of expensive cologne"
8"Rain did not follow him,"
9"He closed the door with"
10"You do not knock, she"
11"He leaned his ivory-handled cane"
12"The blade inside hummed with"
13"I require action."
14"Aurora gripped the knife handle."
15"Her knuckles turned white."
16"You are trespassing."
17"I am preserving an asset."
18"She stepped forward."
19"The scar on her left"
ratio0.909
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences232
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences12
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
81.5814%