Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBHB8MDVXF95HADRN0VYEDA

Run Details

Duration:
59.7s
Cost:
$0.003565
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the glass of the hallway window, distorting the neon glow of the pub sign across the street into a smear of red and green. Aurora pressed her back against the painted white wood, her knuckles white. She knew the rhythm of the building. Heavy footsteps. Two distinct thuds followed by the rhythmic click of metal on concrete. She turned the lock. She pushed the door inwards. Lucien Moreau stood in the gap between the frame and the wall. His charcoal suit swallowed the grey light of the corridor, the tailored fabric absorbing the damp air of the East End. He had dried off the rain, but the scent of ozone and wet stone clung to him. He held an umbrella in his left hand, the ivory handle gleaming against the dark wool. One amber eye, one black eye locked onto hers. The heterochromia looked like two different worlds colliding against the grey hall. He didn’t smile. He didn’t move the umbrella. Aurora shifted her weight. The scar on her left wrist pulled tight under the cuff of her shirt. She moved a hand to the doorframe for balance, her fingers brushing the peeling paint. "You aren’t supposed to be here," Aurora said. Her voice stayed steady. Heat didn’t rise in her chest like it used to when he looked at her like that. She stepped into the room to make space. Lucien didn’t step back. The cane remained planted on the floor, the metal tip grounded against the timber. "The deadbolts won’t stop me. They never do." She reached for a curtain rod to lean on. Her shoulder brushed the plaster. Dust motes danced in the beam from the ceiling light. The flat smelled of old paper, curry spices, and the faint tang of the curry house below. Rows of books and scrolls lined the shelves, spilling onto the floor in precarious piles. "I didn’t hear you come up." "I wasn’t on the walkway," Lucien said. He tilted his head. The movement was liquid, calculated. "I was on the fire escape." He gestured with the umbrella tip toward the stairs. "Do you always leave the door unlocked at three in the morning?" "I was working." "Working on what? The contract for the warehouse?" Lucien stepped forward. His face filled the space. He smelled like rain and expensive tobacco. "Or just breathing?" "I told you to stay away after Marseille." Lucien didn't flinch. He moved to the desk where the research notes lay scattered. His fingers brushed the top of the paper. "You didn't listen to the warnings in Lisbon. And you didn't listen when I said Evan wouldn't stop just because you packed a bag." "Evan is history." She crossed her arms. Her eyes burned. She looked at the stacks of books on the side table. Scrolls spilling out of a cylinder lay in a fan on the floor. "I’m not going back." "History leaves you a bruised shoulder. It leaves you a bruised conscience." Lucien dropped the arm. He looked down at the floor where the rainwater dripped down his coat hem. "You ran to London to forget. You ran to Cardiff to hide. Now you are running again." "I live here." "This flat is not a home. It is a hiding place." He took another step. The air tightened in the room. The books on the shelves rattled in the stillness. "I can smell the fear." "Don't stand there and analyze me." The urge to move surged. She wanted to walk out. She wanted to slam the door. She wanted to keep him in the frame. She stayed still. "I am a customer. I am a worker." "You are Aurora Carter." His voice dropped an octave. The amber eye narrowed. "And you have a debt in the underworld. The debt is not paid." Aurora gripped her own arm. The pulse in her wrist throbbed against the pale skin of her scar. "I pay my bills." "Not that bill." He closed and opened his hand. "The other debt." The room seemed to shrink. The stacks of paper blocked her path. A tabby cat named Ptolemy jumped from the top shelf. The cat sat on the desk and watched with yellow irises. The tabby swished his tail against the leg of a desk, knocking a pen onto the floor. "Why are you really here?" Aurora asked. She set the umbrella down on the table. Cold water splashed onto the floor. "I wanted to see if you were still alive. It would have made the paperwork easier." "I am very much alive. Look at me." Aurora gestured to her face. "Look at the rest of me." He scanned the room. He looked at the stack of books with the broken spines. He looked at the calendar marking dates in red ink on the wall. He looked at her again. "You are here. You are safe." "Not for long." "I have the location." He pushed the cane against the table. The metal tip clicked against the wood. "Of him." "No." He shook his head. "Of the thing you are hunting." "I am not hunting anything." "You are." Lucien tilted his head. The black eye caught the light differently than the amber one. The slit pupil dilated. "You are running from shadows. You know you are." "I am running from the man who beat me half to death." "Evan is a dog. He bites but he does not burn." Lucien pushed off the desk. He moved to the window. He looked out at the neon light bleeding through the rain. "The demon blood in the veins of the city smells fear like perfume. You smell like blood even when you wash." "I smell like curry." "You smell like danger." He turned back. His hand drifted to his chest. He reached inside his jacket, but he did not pull out a weapon. His hand closed around something hidden in the inner pocket. "Why didn't you send a message?" "I wanted to see the look on your face." "I hate to look at you." A step closer. He moved to the window, the rain smudging his reflection. "I told you to move to London. I told you to run." "I did." "And you are still running." "I am standing still." Aurora looked at the coin he had placed on the table. She could feel the electricity in his hand. The static of his presence made the hair on her arms stand up. Lucien held up the coin. It caught the light from the street. "I am not leaving." "You should." "I am not leaving." He straightened his jacket. The button dug into the fabric. "I have to stop." "What?" "Stop." He looked back at her. The amber eye seemed to glow. "Stop running. It ends tonight." "You think I want it to end?" "I think you have to." He took a step toward the door. "Or you will be the one to die." Aurora looked at the coin. She looked at him. The humidity in the room spiked. Her fingers gripped the edge of the doorframe. "I need to know why you came back." Lucien paused with his hand on the handle. "Because I am not done." "You left me in Marseille." "I had to." "Because of the blade." She pointed to the cane. "Because of the blood." "Because the world is not safe for you." He gripped the handle. "Because I am." Aurora took a step forward. The sound of the siren outside rose in pitch. She looked at the coin. "I am a human." "You are Aurora Carter." "That is not enough." "I know what you are." He pulled his hand from the door. He turned back to her. "And I will not let them hurt you." "I didn't ask for a savior." "You wanted one. You just didn't know how to ask." He leaned against the table. The silence stretched, thin and brittle. "Ptolemy is hungry. You are not." "Go away." "I told you not to look for me." "I am not looking." "You will." "You will leave." "I will stay." The silence between them tightened. The rain slowed but the dripping continued against the sill. Aurora gripped her wrist where the cut mark scarred her skin. Lucien watched her hand. "Why?" she asked. "Because you are the only one who saw the truth." "I saw nothing." "I saw you see." He picked up the umbrella. He held it by the shaft, the handle pointing down. "Come with me." "Where?" "Anywhere but here." "The work." "I will do the work." "You will not." He leaned forward. He put the umbrella in the corner of the room. He walked to her. Close enough to touch. He did not touch. He stopped inches away. "You are shaking." "I am not." "I know." He reached out. He stopped. He turned his head away. "Go." "I cannot." "Go." "One last thing." "Tell me." "I am not coming alone." "Who is with you?" "Everyone." "Everyone dies." "Not in this city." "I am not in this city for long." "Where are you going?" "East." "Why?" "I do not know." He looked at her. His hand dropped. He looked at the door. "I will wait." "Wait for what?" "Tonight." He stepped toward the door. He hesitated. His hand tightened on the handle. "Rory." She froze. She looked at him. "Don't make it easy." The hallway filled with the sound of his breathing. The door stayed open. The room felt empty. She held her breath. She held the coin. She waited.
created_at"2026-02-25T23:15:03.445Z" 2/25/2026, 11:15:03 PM
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native_tokens_prompt1002
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native_tokens_reasoning6512
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num_input_audio_prompt(null)
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provider_responses
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences115
tagDensity0.209
leniency0.417
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.73% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1594
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1594
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"gleaming"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"calculated"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"throbbed"
count1
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"could feel"
count1
9
word"silence"
count2
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"rhythmic"
2"gleaming"
3"weight"
4"calculated"
5"pulse"
6"throbbed"
7"scanned"
8"could feel"
9"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences140
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences140
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences230
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1594
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount992
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.11
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
East1
End1
Lucien11
Ptolemy1
Aurora10
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Aurora"
places
0"East"
1"End"
globalScore0.946
windowScore0.833
75.37% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like two different worlds collidin"
1"smelled like rain and expensive tobacco"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1594
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences230
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs116
mean13.74
std14.76
cv1.074
sampleLengths
060
19
266
329
433
537
626
756
86
943
103
1126
128
1346
1438
1547
163
1735
1841
1926
2022
2112
2250
2321
2416
2519
2633
276
283
2920
3011
315
3230
3312
3453
354
364
3732
386
399
406
4125
422
435
4436
4516
462
4718
481
4917
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences140
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs176
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences230
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount992
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.012096774193548387
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0010080645161290322
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences230
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences230
mean6.93
std4.59
cv0.662
sampleLengths
027
112
27
32
412
54
65
712
821
917
1016
119
1212
133
145
154
1614
1715
188
194
2017
218
224
2314
248
259
265
2710
2817
2915
306
317
324
335
3415
3512
363
3711
385
397
403
418
423
4311
448
4524
467
473
4811
4913
32.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats41
diversityRatio0.21739130434782608
totalSentences230
uniqueOpeners50
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount74
totalSentences131
matches
0"She knew the rhythm of"
1"She turned the lock."
2"She pushed the door inwards."
3"His charcoal suit swallowed the"
4"He had dried off the"
5"He held an umbrella in"
6"He didn’t smile."
7"He didn’t move the umbrella."
8"She moved a hand to"
9"Her voice stayed steady."
10"She stepped into the room"
11"She reached for a curtain"
12"Her shoulder brushed the plaster."
13"He tilted his head."
14"He gestured with the umbrella"
15"His face filled the space."
16"He smelled like rain and"
17"He moved to the desk"
18"His fingers brushed the top"
19"She crossed her arms"
ratio0.565
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount127
totalSentences131
matches
0"Rain lashed against the glass"
1"Aurora pressed her back against"
2"She knew the rhythm of"
3"She turned the lock."
4"She pushed the door inwards."
5"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
6"His charcoal suit swallowed the"
7"He had dried off the"
8"He held an umbrella in"
9"The heterochromia looked like two"
10"He didn’t smile."
11"He didn’t move the umbrella."
12"Aurora shifted her weight."
13"The scar on her left"
14"She moved a hand to"
15"Her voice stayed steady."
16"Heat didn’t rise in her"
17"She stepped into the room"
18"Lucien didn’t step back."
19"The cane remained planted on"
ratio0.969
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences115
tagDensity0.035
leniency0.07
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.6701%