Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBHGYQVC2B1M0EMV0SEP7H3

Run Details

Duration:
1m 59s
Cost:
$0.035418
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Thinking Process: 1. **Analyze the Request:** * **Role:** Expert fiction writer. * **Rules:** Past tense, General English (UK spelling), active voice, show don't tell, avoid adverbs/clichés, convey through dialogue, mix sentence length, skip "he/she said" tags (use action/expression), avoid mushy dialogue, dialogue on own paragraph, reduce uncertainty indicators ("trying", "maybe"). * **Constraints:** NEVER conclude the scene, NEVER end with foreshadowing, NEVER write further than prompted, STOP EARLY if requirements met. * **Length:** At least 1000 words. * **Genre:** Literary fiction. * **Plot:** Two old friends run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One has changed significantly. Reveal weight of time and unspoken regret. * **Codex:** Use Aurora Carter (Rory), Silas Blackwood, The Raven's Nest. * **Output:** Prose only, no markdown/commentary. 2. **Character & Setting Integration:** * **Protagonist:** Aurora Carter (Rory). 25, black hair, blue eyes, scar on left wrist, delivery girl. * **Setting:** The Raven's Nest (Soho, dimly lit, green neon sign, maps/photos). * **Conflict:** Unexpected reunion with an old friend. * **Challenge:** The codex only provides Aurora and Silas. Silas is her mentor and bar owner (she lives above). An "unexpected" meeting with Silas contradicts the backstory. I must introduce a new character (an old friend from Cardiff/University) to satisfy the "Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years" instruction while keeping Aurora and the setting central. I will ensure Silas is present in the background to ground the scene in the codex. * **New Character:** Julian. Old friend from Cardiff University. Successful, polished. * **Change:** Julian is a lawyer/suit. Rory is a delivery girl. The contrast highlights the "weight of time and unspoken regret." 3. **Drafting Plan:** * **Word Count:** Aim for 1100+ words to be safe. * **Style:** Literary, dense description, active voice, no adverbs. * **Dialogue:** Sharp, revealing history without exposition dumps. * **Ending:** Stop mid-action or mid-conversation, no resolution, no foreshadowing. * **Spelling:** UK English (colour, centre, favour, etc.). * **Formatting:** Dialogue on separate paragraphs. No "he said". 4. **Step-by-Step Writing:** * *Opening:* Establish the bar atmosphere (Raven's Nest). Aurora is there (maybe finishing a shift or taking a break). * *Inciting Incident:* Julian enters. Recognition. * *Interaction:* They talk. The contrast in their lives becomes clear. * *Silas:* Mention him behind the bar to validate the codex. * *Tension:* Unspoken regrets about paths taken. * *Ending:* A moment of tension or action that doesn't resolve the conflict. 5. **Constraint Checklist:** * Past tense? Yes. * UK Spelling? Yes. * Active voice? Yes. * Show, don't tell? Yes. * No adverbs? (Scan for -ly). * No clichés? (Scan for "heart sank", "time flew"). * Dialogue on own paragraph? Yes. * No "he/she said"? Yes. * No uncertainty ("trying", "maybe")? Yes. * No conclusion/foreshadowing? Yes. * Word count > 1000? Yes. * Codex details used? (Aurora's scar, eyes, hair; Silas's ring, limp; Raven's Nest sign). 6. **Writing Phase:** * Focus on sensory details: the smell of the bar, the neon light, the scar on the wrist. * Focus on physical reactions: gripping a glass, shifting weight. * Ensure sentence variety. *(Self-Correction during drafting)*: I need to make sure I don't accidentally use "said". I will use actions like "He leaned forward," "She looked down." *(Self-Correction)*: Check for adverbs. "Quietly" -> "in a low voice". "Slowly" -> "at a measured pace". *(Self-Correction)*: Check for uncertainty. "Maybe" -> "Perhaps" (Wait, "perhaps" is also uncertainty). Remove both. "Trying" -> "Attempting" or just describe the action. *(Self-Correction)*: Word count. I need to expand descriptions to ensure I hit 1000. I will describe the bar's interior more thoroughly. *(Let's start writing.)* The green neon sign above the entrance buzzed with a low hum, casting a sickly emerald glow onto the wet pavement of Soho. Aurora pulled her collar up against the damp chill and stepped inside the Raven's Nest. The air within smelled of stale tobacco and polished wood. Maps covered the walls, faded black-and-white photographs pinned between them like evidence in a case file. She loosened the strap of her delivery bag and set it on the floor near the entrance. Silas stood behind the bar, polishing a glass with a rag that had seen better decades. He moved with a slight limp in his left leg, the old knee injury betraying him with every shift of weight. His grey-streaked auburn hair caught the dim light. He did not look up as she entered. He knew her schedule. He knew the rhythm of her footsteps. Aurora walked to the small table in the corner, the one tucked behind a stack of old encyclopedias. She sat and rubbed her left wrist. The small crescent-shaped scar from a childhood accident rubbed against the fabric of her sleeve. She watched the door. The bell above the entrance chimed. A man stepped out of the rain, shaking a black umbrella. He wore a tailored coat that cost more than her monthly rent. He scanned the room, his eyes adjusting to the low light. He stopped when he saw her. Julian. He looked different. The university student who shared cheap wine in Cardiff was gone. His hair was cut short and neat. His face held the sharp angles of a man who slept well. He walked toward her table, ignoring the other patrons. He stopped at the edge of her table. Aurora kept her hands on the table. She did not stand. Julian placed a hand on the back of the empty chair. Rory. She looked at him. Her bright blue eyes held his gaze without blinking. Julian. He pulled the chair out and sat. He did not ask. He knew the layout of this place. He knew where the shadows fell. You look the same. Aurora touched her hair. Straight shoulder-length black strands fell over her shoulder. Time moves differently for some. He laughed. The sound was dry, devoid of warmth. I was told you were in London. I did not think I would find you here. Silas turned from the bar. He wiped his hands on his apron. He watched them from across the room. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the light. This is my home. Julian nodded toward the bar. I know. He ordered a drink without looking at the menu. Silas poured a whiskey and slid it across the counter. Julian paid with a crisp note. You work here? I live above. Julian took a sip. He held the glass with two fingers. I heard you left Cardiff. I left. Why? Aurora looked down at her wrist. The scar stood out against her skin. The past does not matter. It matters to me. She looked back up. Her expression remained flat. You were going to be a barrister. I was. And now? Now I deliver food. Julian set the glass down. The liquid rippled in the crystal. You have talent. You were the best in your year. The law changed. Or you changed. She leaned forward. The wood of the table creaked under her elbows. I did what I had to do. Julian shifted in his seat. The leather of his coat squeaked. Evan? Aurora's hand tightened on the edge of the table. Do not say his name. Julian held up his hands. I only know what people say. People talk. They talk about the court case. They talk about the escape. I am not here for gossip. Julian looked around the bar. The maps on the wall seemed to close in around them. You could have come to me. I did not want charity. It was not charity. It felt like pity. Julian stared at her. The silence stretched between them, heavy and thick. Silas leaned against the bar. He picked up a bottle and began to dust the shelf. He watched the interaction with the calm detachment of a man who had seen too many endings. Aurora stood up. She picked up her delivery bag. I have a shift. Julian stood with her. He was taller than her, but she did not shrink. I am in London for a week. I know. We should meet. She looked at him. Her eyes were hard. There is nothing to meet about. Julian stepped closer. He smelled of expensive cologne and rain. You were my friend. Friends change. Not like this. Aurora slung the bag over her shoulder. The strap dug into her neck. Like this is exactly how it happened. Julian reached out. His hand hovered near her arm. He did not touch her. I can help you. She stepped back. I do not need help. You need a lawyer. I need distance. Julian dropped his hand. He looked at the floor. I am sorry. For what? For not knowing. Aurora turned toward the door. The green neon light from outside washed over her face. You knew enough. Julian watched her back. He did not follow. Wait. She stopped. Her hand gripped the door handle. Why did you come here? To find you. And now you have. He looked at Silas. The older man met his gaze. Is this safe? Aurora turned her head. Safe is a relative term. Julian took a breath. He looked at the scar on her wrist again. That scar. It is old. It looks fresh. She pulled her sleeve down to cover it. It is just a scratch. Julian shook his head. It is a story. It is mine. Silas walked toward them. His limp was more pronounced now. He stopped beside Julian. The bar is closing. Julian looked at Silas. I see. Silas did not blink. You should go. Julian looked back at Aurora. I will see you around. Aurora opened the door. The cold air rushed in, smelling of exhaust and rain. I doubt it. She stepped out into the night. The bell chimed behind her. Julian stood alone in the corner of the bar. He picked up his glass. He took a long drink. Silas returned to the bar. He began to wipe down the counter. Julian set the glass down. You know her. I know the rent is due. Julian laughed again. It was a short, sharp sound. You are a hard man. I am a landlord. Julian stood up. He adjusted his coat. She will come back. Silas looked at the door. She is not the one who comes back. Julian walked to the exit. He pushed the door open. The neon light buzzed. Julian stepped out. The door swung shut behind him. Silas picked up the glass Julian left behind. He held it up to the light. He turned it in his hand. He set it on the counter. He picked up the rag. He began to polish the glass. The bar was quiet. The maps on the wall watched the room. The photographs remained pinned in place. Silas walked to the back room. He pushed the bookshelf aside. The hidden door creaked open. He stepped inside. The light flickered. He closed the door. The room went dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.357
leniency0.714
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1784
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.34% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1784
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"weight"
count4
1
word"unspoken"
count3
2
word"output"
count1
3
word"ensure"
count3
4
word"tension"
count2
5
word"resolve"
count1
6
word"measured"
count1
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"footsteps"
count1
9
word"scanned"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"crystal"
count1
12
word"silence"
count1
13
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"unspoken"
2"output"
3"ensure"
4"tension"
5"resolve"
6"measured"
7"chill"
8"footsteps"
9"scanned"
10"warmth"
11"crystal"
12"silence"
13"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences309
matches(empty)
96.63% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount6
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences309
filterMatches
0"look"
1"know"
2"see"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences309
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans37
markdownWords53
totalWords1825
ratio0.029
matches
0"Analyze the Request:"
1"Role:"
2"Rules:"
3"Constraints:"
4"Length:"
5"Genre:"
6"Plot:"
7"Codex:"
8"Output:"
9"Character & Setting Integration:"
10"Protagonist:"
11"Setting:"
12"Conflict:"
13"Challenge:"
14"New Character:"
15"Change:"
16"Drafting Plan:"
17"Word Count:"
18"Style:"
19"Dialogue:"
20"Ending:"
21"Spelling:"
22"Formatting:"
23"Step-by-Step Writing:"
24"Opening:"
25"Inciting Incident:"
26"Interaction:"
27"Silas:"
28"Tension:"
29"Ending:"
30"Constraint Checklist:"
31"Writing Phase:"
32"(Self-Correction during drafting)"
33"(Self-Correction)"
34"(Self-Correction)"
35"(Self-Correction)"
36"(Let's start writing.)"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions148
wordCount1772
uniqueNames41
maxNameDensity1.75
worstName"Julian"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Julian"
discoveredNames
Process1
Expert1
Past2
General1
English2
Literary2
Two1
Use1
Aurora18
Carter2
Rory4
Silas19
Blackwood1
Raven5
Nest5
Prose1
Setting2
Soho2
Unexpected1
Julian31
Cardiff4
University2
Aim1
Sharp1
Stop1
Dialogue3
Establish1
Mention1
Unspoken1
Spelling2
Active1
Show1
Word3
Codex2
Focus2
Ensure1
Check2
Wait2
Remove1
London2
You12
persons
0"Past"
1"Aurora"
2"Carter"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
5"Blackwood"
6"Raven"
7"Julian"
8"Unspoken"
9"Show"
10"Codex"
11"You"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"University"
3"Dialogue"
4"Ensure"
5"London"
globalScore0.625
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences123
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1825
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences309
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs143
mean12.76
std21.03
cv1.648
sampleLengths
02
1119
2148
357
470
576
635
783
884
964
1044
1146
121
1342
148
1511
1611
171
1813
191
2024
214
2212
235
249
2516
2630
274
285
292
3025
313
323
3311
345
352
361
3713
385
394
408
417
422
432
444
4511
4610
473
483
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences309
matches
0"was gone"
1"was told"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs337
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences309
ratio0.003
matches
0"(Aurora's scar, eyes, hair; Silas's ring, limp; Raven's Nest sign)."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1738
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"outside washed over her"
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.017836593785960874
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.00805523590333717
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences309
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences309
mean5.91
std4.36
cv0.739
sampleLengths
02
11
23
35
439
520
66
74
813
94
107
1111
126
131
144
155
1611
1712
188
199
2010
218
2232
2316
244
255
262
276
285
2910
301
312
3210
339
348
3510
368
376
383
391
402
418
4211
435
441
454
467
4711
487
4913
39.77% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats31
diversityRatio0.297029702970297
totalSentences303
uniqueOpeners90
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences263
matches(empty)
ratio0
51.18% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount111
totalSentences263
matches
0"I must introduce a new"
1"I will ensure Silas is"
2"I will use actions like"
3"I need to expand descriptions"
4"I will describe the bar's"
5"She loosened the strap of"
6"He moved with a slight"
7"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
8"He did not look up"
9"He knew her schedule."
10"He knew the rhythm of"
11"She sat and rubbed her"
12"She watched the door."
13"He wore a tailored coat"
14"He scanned the room, his"
15"He stopped when he saw"
16"He looked different."
17"His hair was cut short"
18"His face held the sharp"
19"He walked toward her table,"
ratio0.422
70.27% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount205
totalSentences263
matches
0"* **Plot:** Two old friends"
1"**Character & Setting Integration:**"
2"Silas is her mentor and"
3"An meeting with Silas contradicts"
4"I must introduce a new"
5"I will ensure Silas is"
6"Rory is a delivery girl."
7"The contrast highlights the"
8"* **Word Count:** Aim for"
9"Aurora is there (maybe finishing"
10"The contrast in their lives"
11"* UK Spelling?"
12"* Dialogue on own paragraph?"
13"* Word count > 1000?"
14"* Codex details used?"
15"(Aurora's scar, eyes, hair; Silas's"
16"*(Self-Correction during drafting)*: I need"
17"I will use actions like"
18"-> (Wait, is also uncertainty"
19"-> or just describe the"
ratio0.779
38.02% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences263
matches
0"Now I deliver food."
1"To find you."
ratio0.008
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Silas stood behind the bar, polishing a glass with a rag that had seen better decades."
1"He watched the interaction with the calm detachment of a man who had seen too many endings."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.9800%