Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBHNDBJR18BST7DJY36TM6B

Run Details

Duration:
52.0s
Cost:
$0.012018
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid home with a heavy, metallic clunk that vibrated through the soles of Rory’s boots. She exhaled, a sharp sound in the quiet hallway, and pulled the door open. The smell of Brick Lane drifted up from the curry house below, a thick, cloying wave of turmeric and frying oil that usually comforted her. Tonight, it felt suffocating. She expected the empty corridor. She expected the shadow of the streetlamp flickering against the peeling wallpaper. She did not expect Lucien Moreau. He stood on the threshold, occupying the narrow space with an ease that suggested he owned the building, the street, and the city itself. The overhead light caught the platinum of his hair, slicked back so severely it looked like armor. He wore a charcoal suit tailored to the inch, the fabric absorbing the dim light rather than reflecting it. In his right hand, he held the ivory-handled cane, the tip resting lightly on the floorboards. Rory’s hand froze on the doorknob. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic bird trapped in a cage. She hadn’t seen him in six months. Not since the night in Marseille, not since the deal went sideways and she’d run. “Lucien,” she said. The name felt foreign on her tongue, like a word she’d forgotten how to pronounce. “Rory.” He didn’t move to enter, but he didn’t leave, either. His eyes were a disorienting mismatch—one amber like old honey, the other a void of black. They tracked her movement, assessing, calculating. “I was told you might be here.” “Eva’s place isn’t a hotel.” Rory stepped back, the door still open. The air between them felt charged, static electricity prickling the fine hairs on her arms. She was acutely aware of the crescent scar on her left wrist, the skin tight and sensitive. It throbbed when he looked at her. “You didn’t call.” “Calling is for people who have nothing to hide.” Lucien stepped forward. The cane clicked once against the wood. “May I?” It wasn’t a request. It was a statement of fact. Rory gripped the doorframe, her knuckles white. She should slam it. She should lock the bolts again and call the police, or Silas, or anyone who knew how to handle a half-demon with a blade hidden in a walking stick. But her feet stayed rooted. The pull was magnetic, a gravity she had tried to escape when she fled Cardiff, when she fled Evan, when she fled the life that had tried to consume her. She stepped aside. Lucien moved past her, bringing the scent of sandalwood and cold rain into the cramped flat. The space was a chaotic archive of Eva’s research. Books were stacked in precarious towers on the sofa; scrolls were unrolled across the coffee table, weighted down by coffee mugs. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, was asleep on the radiator. He opened one eye, saw Lucien, and immediately hopped down, disappearing under the armchair with a low hiss. “Ptolemy doesn’t like strangers,” Rory said, closing the door. She turned the bolts again, the sound final. “Ptolemy has good instincts,” Lucien said. He didn’t take off his coat. He didn’t take off his gloves. He walked to the center of the room, the cane tapping a slow rhythm. “He knows what I am.” Rory leaned against the door, crossing her arms. “And what are you, Lucien? Tonight, you’re an inconvenience.” “I am a complication you cannot afford to ignore.” He stopped in front of her. He was tall, 5’11” to her 5’6”, but he didn’t loom. He leaned on the cane, tilting his head. The amber eye seemed to glow in the dim light. “You look tired, Rory.” “I work deliveries for a living. I don’t sleep much.” “Not that kind of tired.” He reached out, his gloved hand hovering near her face. She flinched, just a fraction, but he saw it. He lowered his hand. “You ran. You left without a word. You think I didn’t notice the silence?” “I had to leave London.” “You left *me*.” The correction was soft, devoid of anger, which made it worse. It sounded like a fact of physics, like gravity. Rory looked away, focusing on a stack of books on the side table. The paper edges were yellowed, the titles in languages she didn’t speak. “We weren’t... we weren’t anything. You’re a fixer. I’m a delivery girl. You have a blade in your cane. I have a scar on my wrist.” She lifted her left hand, showing him the mark. “We don’t fit.” Lucien’s gaze dropped to her wrist. For a moment, the mask of the impeccably dressed broker slipped. Something raw flickered behind the black eye. “The scar is old. The danger is new.” “Why are you here?” Rory asked. Her voice was steady, cool-headed. It was the voice she used in law school, the voice she used when Evan raised his voice. It was a shield. “Information,” Lucien said. “And a warning. There are people looking for the girl who stole the ledger from the Avaros embassy. They found you in Cardiff. They found you in London.” Rory’s stomach dropped. “I didn’t steal anything. I was just there.” “Does it matter?” Lucien took a step closer. The heat radiating off him was unnatural, a dry warmth that smelled of ozone. “They don’t care about the truth, Rory. They care about the asset.” “I’m not an asset.” “You are to them.” He reached out again, this time not to her face, but to the collar of her jacket. He brushed a speck of dust from the fabric, his fingers lingering near her neck. His touch was gentle, terrifyingly intimate. “And to me.” The air in the room seemed to vanish. Rory could hear the hum of the refrigerator, the distant traffic on Brick Lane, the rapid thud of her own pulse. She wanted to step back, to put the door between them again. Instead, she leaned in, just an inch. “You left me in Marseille,” she whispered. “I saved you.” “You left me.” “I had to.” Lucien’s jaw tightened. The amber eye flared. “If I stayed, they would have taken you. If I left, you could run. It was the only way.” “It was a lie.” “It was a necessity.” He dropped his hand. The moment broke, the tension snapping back into place like a rubber band. He straightened his cuffs, the romantic moment buried under layers of protocol and survival. “I am here to tell you that running is over. You can stay in this flat. You can go back to your delivery routes. But you cannot hide.” Rory looked at him, really looked at him. She saw the exhaustion etched into the lines around his eyes, the way his grip on the cane was a little too tight. He was tired too. They were both trapped in the same orbit, spinning around a gravity neither could escape. “Eva’s flat is safe,” Rory said, her voice quiet. “For now.” “For now,” Lucien agreed. He turned toward the door, the movement fluid, predatory. “I will be in the pub downstairs. If they come, you come to me. Do not engage.” “Lucien.” He paused, hand on the latch. He didn’t turn around. “Don’t disappear again.” He looked back over his shoulder. The light caught the heterochromasia of his eyes, making him look like a statue carved from shadow and gold. “I don’t have that luxury, Rory. But I won’t leave you alone.” He opened the door and stepped out into the hallway. The door clicked shut. Rory stood there for a long moment, listening to the sound of his cane tapping down the stairs, fading into the noise of the city. She walked to the window and looked down. The street was empty, save for a shadow detaching itself from the wall and moving toward the pub entrance. She touched the scar on her wrist again. It didn’t throb this time. It just felt like a memory. She turned back to the room, to the books and the cat and the smell of curry. She wasn’t alone. Not anymore. And that was the most dangerous thing of all.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.413
leniency0.826
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.043
92.66% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1363
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.64% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1363
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"vibrated"
count1
1
word"calculating"
count1
2
word"charged"
count1
3
word"throbbed"
count1
4
word"magnetic"
count1
5
word"chaotic"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"tension"
count1
12
word"etched"
count1
13
word"throb"
count1
highlights
0"vibrated"
1"calculating"
2"charged"
3"throbbed"
4"magnetic"
5"chaotic"
6"silence"
7"flickered"
8"stomach"
9"warmth"
10"pulse"
11"tension"
12"etched"
13"throb"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences105
matches(empty)
88.44% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences105
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences131
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1362
ratio0.001
matches
0"me"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
87.74% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount1044
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.25
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory13
Brick2
Lane2
Lucien10
Moreau1
Marseille1
Silas1
Cardiff1
Evan2
Eva1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
5"Eva"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Marseille"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0.877
windowScore1
51.32% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like armor"
1"sounded like a fact of physics, like gravi"
2"felt like a memory"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.734
wordCount1362
matches
0"not to her face, but to the collar of her jacket"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean31.67
std22.87
cv0.722
sampleLengths
061
123
276
341
418
540
654
721
885
93
1073
1117
1237
1317
1448
1510
1642
175
1823
1963
2032
2133
2231
2311
2434
254
2645
2748
287
293
303
3129
324
3363
3450
3511
3630
371
3810
393
4037
4166
4250
98.58% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences105
matches
0"were stacked"
1"were unrolled"
2"were yellowed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs193
matches(empty)
99.24% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences131
ratio0.015
matches
0"His eyes were a disorienting mismatch—one amber like old honey, the other a void of black."
1"Books were stacked in precarious towers on the sofa; scrolls were unrolled across the coffee table, weighted down by coffee mugs."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1048
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.035305343511450385
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007633587786259542
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences131
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences131
mean10.4
std6.83
cv0.657
sampleLengths
018
114
225
34
45
512
66
724
817
919
1016
116
1213
137
1415
153
1615
1711
1816
196
207
2112
2215
2317
247
253
2612
277
282
294
306
317
324
3329
345
3530
363
3716
389
3921
409
4118
429
438
446
456
466
4714
485
498
38.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.22900763358778625
totalSentences131
uniqueOpeners30
34.01% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"Instead, she leaned in, just"
ratio0.01
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount54
totalSentences98
matches
0"She exhaled, a sharp sound"
1"She expected the empty corridor."
2"She expected the shadow of"
3"She did not expect Lucien"
4"He stood on the threshold,"
5"He wore a charcoal suit"
6"Her heart hammered against her"
7"She hadn’t seen him in"
8"He didn’t move to enter,"
9"His eyes were a disorienting"
10"They tracked her movement, assessing,"
11"She was acutely aware of"
12"It throbbed when he looked"
13"It wasn’t a request."
14"It was a statement of"
15"She should slam it."
16"She should lock the bolts"
17"She stepped aside."
18"He opened one eye, saw"
19"She turned the bolts again,"
ratio0.551
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences98
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid home"
1"She exhaled, a sharp sound"
2"The smell of Brick Lane"
3"Tonight, it felt suffocating."
4"She expected the empty corridor."
5"She expected the shadow of"
6"She did not expect Lucien"
7"He stood on the threshold,"
8"The overhead light caught the"
9"He wore a charcoal suit"
10"Rory’s hand froze on the"
11"Her heart hammered against her"
12"She hadn’t seen him in"
13"The name felt foreign on"
14"He didn’t move to enter,"
15"His eyes were a disorienting"
16"They tracked her movement, assessing,"
17"Rory stepped back, the door"
18"The air between them felt"
19"She was acutely aware of"
ratio0.939
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
ratio0
86.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She should lock the bolts again and call the police, or Silas, or anyone who knew how to handle a half-demon with a blade hidden in a walking stick."
1"The heat radiating off him was unnatural, a dry warmth that smelled of ozone."
2"Rory stood there for a long moment, listening to the sound of his cane tapping down the stairs, fading into the noise of the city."
46.05% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Rory stepped back, the door still open"
1"He reached out, his gloved hand hovering near her face"
2"Rory said, her voice quiet"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"Lucien agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.174
leniency0.348
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.087
79.0565%