| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.59% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1350 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 44.44% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1350 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gloom" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "almost alive" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "could feel" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "fragmented" | | 11 | "rhythmic" | | 12 | "silk" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | matches | | |
| 58.82% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 98 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1350 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 71.44% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 73 | | wordCount | 1082 | | uniqueNames | 20 | | maxNameDensity | 1.57 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 17 | | London | 1 | | October | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Veil | 8 | | Nyx | 11 | | Fae | 6 | | Isolde | 11 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Earth | 2 | | Hel | 2 | | Prince | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Rory | 2 | | Aria | 1 | | Seer | 1 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Blade" | | 2 | "Veil" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Isolde" | | 6 | "Prince" | | 7 | "Belphegor" | | 8 | "Rory" | | 9 | "Aria" | | 10 | "Seer" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "October" |
| | globalScore | 0.714 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "chill that seemed to seep through wool and bone" | | 1 | "looked like heat distortion above an asph" | | 2 | "robes that seemed to be woven from the shadows of the trees themselves" | | 3 | "looked like vines and mouths" | | 4 | "vineyards that seemed to stretch on forever, and a horizon that hummed with the promise of excess" | | 5 | "looked like a creature of pure memory" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.222 | | wordCount | 1350 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the biting cold of London winter, but a deep, damp chill" | | 1 | "not where we were,\" Isolde said, her voice melodic but distant" | | 2 | "neither warm nor" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 91.57% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 50 | | std | 23.52 | | cv | 0.47 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 73 | | 1 | 86 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 99 | | 4 | 79 | | 5 | 53 | | 6 | 76 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 64 | | 9 | 38 | | 10 | 34 | | 11 | 51 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 72 | | 14 | 73 | | 15 | 35 | | 16 | 43 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 53 | | 20 | 54 | | 21 | 33 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 33 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 76 | | 26 | 65 |
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| 97.01% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "was replaced" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 165 | | matches | | 0 | "was watching" | | 1 | "was thinning" |
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| 84.55% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 98 | | ratio | 0.02 | | matches | | 0 | "They did not walk; Nyx drifted forward on the current of the Veil, their feet making no sound on the grass." | | 1 | "The silence wasn't empty; it was watching." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1086 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.02302025782688766 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010128913443830571 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 98 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 98 | | mean | 13.78 | | std | 7.69 | | cv | 0.558 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 31 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 31 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 46.94% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.336734693877551 | | totalSentences | 98 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Their eyes were not eyes" | | 1 | "It smelled of iron and" | | 2 | "She kept her hand hovering" | | 3 | "They were deep within the" | | 4 | "It looked like heat distortion" | | 5 | "They did not walk; Nyx" | | 6 | "She could feel the weight" | | 7 | "It was a promise that" | | 8 | "She reached the center of" | | 9 | "Her eyes were pale lavender," | | 10 | "She wore robes that seemed" | | 11 | "She smiled without showing teeth." | | 12 | "It pulsed faintly with warmth," | | 13 | "It reacted to the Veil," | | 14 | "She hadn't intended to speak," | | 15 | "She knew the name now." | | 16 | "She extended a hand, her" | | 17 | "She could hear it then," | | 18 | "It was a sensory overload." | | 19 | "She checked the grip on" |
| | ratio | 0.296 | |
| 3.21% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain outside the perimeter" | | 1 | "Nyx was already there, a" | | 2 | "Their eyes were not eyes" | | 3 | "Aurora pulled the collar of" | | 4 | "It smelled of iron and" | | 5 | "Nyx whispered, their voice sounding" | | 6 | "Aurora moved past the first" | | 7 | "The flowers blooming around the" | | 8 | "Highborn tulips intertwined with waxy" | | 9 | "She kept her hand hovering" | | 10 | "The Fae-Forged Blade rested there," | | 11 | "The moonsilver material drank the" | | 12 | "They were deep within the" | | 13 | "The Veil shimmered here, visible" | | 14 | "It looked like heat distortion" | | 15 | "Nyx slipped through the shimmer," | | 16 | "They did not walk; Nyx" | | 17 | "Aurora followed her own path," | | 18 | "She could feel the weight" | | 19 | "It was a promise that" |
| | ratio | 0.914 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 26.24% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx was already there, a ripple in the darkness that coalesced into a humanoid silhouette, their skin the deepest shade of charcoal." | | 1 | "Aurora moved past the first standing stone, her boots sinking into moss that felt spongy, almost alive." | | 2 | "It looked like heat distortion above an asphalt road, a faint shimmering distortion that rippled the air." | | 3 | "Nyx slipped through the shimmer, their form turning solid shadow for a heartbeat before solidifying back into a human-sized mass of living darkness." | | 4 | "She could hear it then, the distant sound of a feast, laughter that overlapped with the rustle of wind, and low, rhythmic chanting." | | 5 | "The flowers around them seemed to lean in, their petals unfurling with a sound like breaking glass." | | 6 | "In that distortion, she saw the colors of another world: a sky painted in warm amber, sprawling vineyards that seemed to stretch on forever, and a horizon that …" | | 7 | "They were alone in the ancient clearing, standing before the threshold of a realm that demanded entry in exchange for survival." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, her voice melodic but distant" | | 1 | "Rory said, her voice tight" | | 2 | "Nyx said, their voice drifting" | | 3 | "Aurora asked, the word tasting bitter" | | 4 | "Aurora said, her hand steady" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.385 | | leniency | 0.769 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.077 | |