Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBHT7R3N0T4SJJVD8BSSQJM

Run Details

Duration:
1m 40s
Cost:
$0.008849
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a heavy clank. Rory gripped the handle, knuckles white against the brass. She didn't expect anyone. The hallway smelled of damp wool and curry grease rising from the shop below. Lucien stood on the other side of the threshold, rain dripping from the brim of his hat onto the welcome mat. Water pooled around the polished toes of his dress shoes. He wore a charcoal suit tailored to perfection despite the London downpour. His platinum blond hair remained slicked back, not a strand out of place. One eye burned amber, the other swallowed darkness. He leaned the ivory-handled cane against his shoulder, the tip tapping the floorboards. Ptolemy the tabby cat arched his back from the armchair, fur bristling along his spine. The animal hissed, a low rumble vibrating through the cramped room. Rory stepped back to let him in, her movement stiff. She didn't offer a hand. She didn't offer a smile. The flat smelled of old paper and dust. Scrolls and books covered every surface, stacking against the walls like precarious towers. Lucien crossed the threshold, his cane clicking on the linoleum. He shook the rain from his coat, droplets flying onto the floorboards. He didn't look at the mess. He looked at her. "You locked the door," he said. "Three deadbolts," she replied. "Standard security." "You know the code." "Key under the mat." He stepped closer, invading the small space between the door and the kitchenette. The scent of expensive cologne cut through the smell of rain and curry. It was a sharp, clean smell that clashed with the clutter around them. Ptolemy jumped from the chair and darted under the sofa, tail twitching. "I need access," he said. "The restaurant?" "The files." Rory turned away and walked toward the kitchen table. She picked up a mug, checked for warmth, and set it down cold. Her left wrist flashed in the dim light, the crescent-shaped scar catching the glow from the streetlamp outside. She kept her hands visible. "You left," she said. "I was gone." "For six months." "Business required travel." "It required silence." He moved around the table, his cane resting against the wood. He didn't sit. He stood close enough that she could feel the heat radiating from his coat. The amber eye fixed on her face, the black one scanning the room. He knew the layout. He knew where she hid things. "Silence protects," he said. "Silence kills," she countered. He reached out, fingers hovering near her wrist. She didn't flinch. She watched the movement, tracked the intent. His hand stopped inches from the scar. The air between them grew heavy, charged with the static of things left unsaid. "I found the trail," he said. "Which one?" "The one that matters." She set the mug down harder than necessary. Ceramic clinked against the table. "You don't get to come back here and talk about trails." "I came to warn you." "About what?" "Evan." The name hung in the air, sharp and jagged. Rory's breath hitched, a microscopic betrayal of her composure. She looked at the window, where the rain blurred the streetlights into streaks of orange and grey. "He's dead," she said. "His associates aren't." "Then they aren't my problem." "They are if they come to this address." Lucien shifted his weight. The cane tapped the floor again, a rhythmic sound that matched the beating of her heart. He reached into his jacket pocket. She tensed, muscles coiling. He pulled out a folded piece of paper and slid it across the table. "Read it." She didn't touch it. "Put it in the bin." "Read it." He leaned in, his voice dropping an octave. The command vibrated in the small room. She looked down at the paper. Names. Dates. Locations. Her eyes scanned the ink, her mind connecting the dots. The Golden Empress delivery route. The back entrance of Silas' bar. "You tracked my deliveries," she said. "I tracked the threat." "You followed me." "I protected you." She grabbed the paper and crumpled it. The sound was loud in the quiet flat. She threw it into the bin. "I don't need a babysitter." "You need a fixer." "I need space." He stepped closer again. The distance vanished. She could see the flecks of gold in the amber eye. He smelled of rain and old money. He smelled like the night she ran away. "Space is a luxury," he said. "I have it." "Do you?" He reached out and touched her arm. His fingers were cold. She didn't pull away. The contact sent a jolt through her system, a spark that threatened to short-circuit her cool head. He traced the line of her sleeve, stopping at the wrist. "You still wear the watch," he said. "It keeps time." "It reminds you." "Of what?" "Of the night you ran." She pulled her arm back. The cold lingered on her skin. She walked to the window and looked out at Brick Lane. The rain hammered the glass. Cars splashed through puddles, headlights cutting through the gloom. "I ran because you lied," she said. "I lied to keep you alive." "To keep you safe." "To keep us apart." He moved behind her. She could feel his presence at her back. He didn't touch her again. He stood close enough that his breath warmed the back of her neck. The flat felt smaller now, the walls closing in. "We aren't apart," he said. "You're standing in my kitchen." "I'm standing in your life." She turned around. He met her gaze, unblinking. The heterochromatic eyes held a depth that made her stomach turn. She hated how she felt. She hated how her pulse sped up when he looked at her. "Get out," she said. "Tomorrow." "Tonight." "Tomorrow night." "Lucien." He raised a hand. The gesture stopped her. The cane leaned against the table, the blade hidden inside the ivory handle. He knew she knew. He knew she had seen the steel before. "I have information on the demon council," he said. "Then give it to me." "I give it to you when you agree to the terms." "There are no terms." "There are always terms." She walked to the door and unlocked the deadbolts. The metal clicked, loud and final. She opened the door. The hallway light spilled in, harsh and yellow. "Leave," she said. He didn't move. He stood in the doorway, rain dripping from his shoulders. He looked at the street, then back at her. "Three days," he said. "Three hours." "Three days." He pushed off the doorframe and stepped back into the hallway. He didn't look back. He walked down the corridor, his cane clicking against the floor. The sound faded into the hum of the city. Rory closed the door. She locked the first bolt. She locked the second. She locked the third. She stood in the dark, listening to the rain. The paper in the bin crinkled when the wind hit the window. She didn't pick it up. She walked to the table and sat down. Ptolemy emerged from under the sofa. He rubbed against her leg. She stroked his fur, her hand trembling slightly. She looked at her wrist. The scar itched. She knew he would be back. She knew she would open the door. The flat remained silent. The rain continued to fall. She waited.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.246
leniency0.492
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1227
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
30.73% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1227
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"standard"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"silence"
count3
3
word"could feel"
count2
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"charged"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
8
word"vibrated"
count1
9
word"scanned"
count1
10
word"traced"
count1
11
word"gloom"
count1
12
word"stomach"
count1
13
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"standard"
1"warmth"
2"silence"
3"could feel"
4"scanning"
5"charged"
6"weight"
7"rhythmic"
8"vibrated"
9"scanned"
10"traced"
11"gloom"
12"stomach"
13"pulse"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
1"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences139
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences139
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences187
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen21
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1227
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount998
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.5
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
London1
Rory5
Lucien3
Golden1
Empress1
Brick1
Lane1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Ptolemy"
places
0"London"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"smelled like the night she ran away"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1227
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences187
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs87
mean14.1
std17.07
cv1.21
sampleLengths
057
156
246
353
46
56
64
74
851
95
102
112
1245
134
143
153
163
173
1851
194
204
2139
226
232
244
2524
265
272
281
2935
304
313
325
338
3444
352
369
372
3845
396
404
413
423
4326
444
453
4633
476
483
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences139
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs198
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences187
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount617
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.019448946515397084
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences187
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences187
mean6.56
std3.92
cv0.597
sampleLengths
09
19
24
314
421
510
612
713
88
913
1015
1111
1210
135
145
158
1613
1710
1812
196
204
216
224
232
244
254
2613
2713
2813
2912
305
312
322
339
3413
3518
365
374
383
393
403
413
4211
433
4414
4513
464
476
484
494
32.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats33
diversityRatio0.22459893048128343
totalSentences187
uniqueOpeners42
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount74
totalSentences118
matches
0"She didn't expect anyone."
1"He wore a charcoal suit"
2"His platinum blond hair remained"
3"He leaned the ivory-handled cane"
4"She didn't offer a hand."
5"She didn't offer a smile."
6"He shook the rain from"
7"He didn't look at the"
8"He looked at her."
9"He stepped closer, invading the"
10"It was a sharp, clean"
11"She picked up a mug,"
12"Her left wrist flashed in"
13"She kept her hands visible."
14"He moved around the table,"
15"He didn't sit."
16"He stood close enough that"
17"He knew the layout."
18"He knew where she hid"
19"He reached out, fingers hovering"
ratio0.627
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount116
totalSentences118
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"Rory gripped the handle, knuckles"
2"She didn't expect anyone."
3"The hallway smelled of damp"
4"Lucien stood on the other"
5"Water pooled around the polished"
6"He wore a charcoal suit"
7"His platinum blond hair remained"
8"He leaned the ivory-handled cane"
9"Ptolemy the tabby cat arched"
10"The animal hissed, a low"
11"Rory stepped back to let"
12"She didn't offer a hand."
13"She didn't offer a smile."
14"The flat smelled of old"
15"Scrolls and books covered every"
16"Lucien crossed the threshold, his"
17"He shook the rain from"
18"He didn't look at the"
19"He looked at her."
ratio0.983
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The contact sent a jolt through her system, a spark that threatened to short-circuit her cool head."
1"The heterochromatic eyes held a depth that made her stomach turn."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.231
leniency0.462
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.8557%