Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBHTTPNBFJCF7B7DBWXHXFY

Run Details

Duration:
55.0s
Cost:
$0.002752
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt slid back with a sharp click, the metal groaning against the wood grain of the doorframe. Rory gripped the handle, her knuckles white against the polished brass. She adjusted the strap of her leather satchel, eyes narrowing at the chain lock still holding the door. She hadn't locked the chain. A mistake. Or a hope. The chain ratcheted open. The door swung inward to reveal the man standing in the hallway. Lucien Moreau leaned against the frame with effortless grace. His charcoal suit swallowed the dim light of the hall, the fabric tailored to hide the sharp angles of his frame and the blade hidden within the ivory cane resting by his knee. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, untouched by the humidity of a London evening. One amber eye stared into hers, the other black as a void in the low light. He smelled of expensive tobacco and ozone. Lucien. Rory’s throat tightened. She hadn’t seen him since Marseille. Since the night everything went wrong. She kept her arm close to her side, hidden the crescent scar on her left wrist beneath her sleeve. You look tired, he said. His voice was smooth, a baritone ripple that settled deep in her chest. You look like a mistake. Lucien stepped inside. He didn’t ask for permission. The smell of ozone intensified, sharp and metallic, filling the cramped space of the flat. Books and scrolls stacked in precarious towers around the room blocked the path to the kitchen. A tabby cat, Ptolemy, watched them from the top of the sofa, tail flicking once. It’s not your home, he said, his gaze scanning the clutter. It’s where I stay. You know the rules. I know you’re hiding. He walked past her, the ivory cane tapping against the floorboards. He moved to the window, peering through the gap in the curtains at the street below. The curry house lights buzzed behind the windowpane. Evan is still breathing? If you’re here to kill him, you can save the breath. Lucien turned, the black eye reflecting nothing, the amber one burning with a quiet intensity. He dropped his cane to the floor with a heavy thud. I’m here because you called the wrong people. He gestured to the stacks of papers on the table. The scrolls. The research. You think you’re in trouble because of the law? I’m in trouble because I don’t want you here. Lucien moved closer. He stopped inches from her. Rory could feel the heat radiating off him, unnatural, steady. No human heartbeat would feel that way. He reached out, his hand hovering near her shoulder. He didn’t touch her. He never touched her when the air got this heavy. You didn’t run, he said. I had to go somewhere. Eva put me up. I’m not running from you. You left without a word. You were a demon. You’re a fixer. I wanted a life, not a contract. Lucien laughed, a dry sound. He took her left wrist. His fingers were warm, calloused. He held her arm up, exposing the crescent scar on her skin. His grip tightened, just enough to press into the old wound. I saw the report, he said, his voice dropping. The hospital records in London. So you watched? I watched. He released her. Rory pulled her arm back, the skin burning where his fingers had been. She turned away, walking toward the table where the files were spread out. She needed a prop to stop her hands from shaking. Why did you find me? The address. The security was new. The deadbolts won’t stop a key from turning. The cat will tell me anyway. Ptolemy meowed from the sofa, a loud, demanding sound that cut through the silence. Lucien looked at the cat, then back to her. His face was an unreadable mask, but the heterochromatic eyes held a flicker of something raw. Hurt. Or regret. I have a job, Rory. For you. Or someone you know. Someone who needs to disappear. I’m not a criminal. You’re a student with a delivery job and a flat above a bar in East London. You can’t pay for the protection you need. I didn’t know you knew that. I know everything that moves. He stepped into her space again. The air pressure dropped. He picked up a file from the table, a document with a university seal. He flipped it open, scanning the text. You were at Cardiff? I told you I wouldn’t do it. You have talent. You don’t have a weapon. That’s why you brought me here. Lucien leaned in until his lips brushed the shell of her ear. His breath ghosted over her skin. She stopped breathing. The scent of ozone and him filled her lungs. I didn’t bring you here. I’m telling you this because you’re the only one who can handle the package. The package. A small box sat on the table. A heavy object wrapped in blue paper. Open it. Rory hesitated. She knew better than to touch anything Lucien offered. But the box sat there, waiting. She reached out, her fingers tracing the edge of the paper. The box didn't move. It felt like stone. What is it? It’s the only leverage you have. If you walk away from this, Evan comes back. Evan is gone. Lucien straightened. He picked up his cane and tested the weight on his palm. Then why are you shaking? Rory dropped the file. She pushed her hair back, her eyes burning. I hate you. You hate the situation. I hate the man who walked away while I was bleeding. He stepped closer. The distance between them was a hair’s breadth. He didn’t flinch at her accusation. He just looked at her, the amber eye softening. I didn’t walk away. I was sent. Avaros demanded retribution. I couldn’t risk you with the family. Avaros. It’s not my fault. Rory backed away until her hips hit the table. The files scattered, papers fluttering down like snow. I’m done with demons, Lucien. I’m not asking you to work for me. I don’t care what you’re doing. Lucien reached out and caught her wrist again. This time, he didn’t let go. He pulled her hand up to his chest. She could feel the rhythm of his heart, slow and powerful, the heat of it seeping through his suit jacket. If you stay, you die. If you leave, you get nothing. If I leave, I get my life. He tightened his grip. His grip was iron, binding her in place. The pain was sharp, a reminder of her fragility against him. You think I want this? You think I wanted to leave Marseille? We are the storm and the anchor. You don’t get to say you’re done. Rory pulled her hand, but he held firm. I am done. You are scared. I am tired. Lucien let go. He let his hand fall to his side, the cane supporting his weight. He looked at the door, then back at the window. The black eye stared into the darkness of the hallway. The chain is still on the door, he said. Rory turned and looked at the handle. She hadn’t noticed it until he pointed it out. The silence stretched between them. I’ll leave. Don’t. I’m leaving. He stepped aside. He didn't block her path. He just stood there, waiting. You should take the box anyway. It will protect you. Rory walked to the table and shoved the files into her satchel. She didn't take the box. She walked to the door. She pulled the chain off. She opened the door. The hallway was dark. The street outside hummed with traffic. Goodbye, Lucien. He didn't look at her. He stared at the back of the sofa where Ptolemy was sleeping. I’ll come back. Then I'll change the locks. He turned his head slightly. Good. Rory stepped out into the night. The door slammed shut behind her. She heard the heavy thud of the deadbolt sliding back into place. Lucien stood alone in the room, the cane in his hand, the box on the table. Ptolemy woke up. He looked at the man who had just left.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1367
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1367
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"effortless"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count2
2
word"intensity"
count1
3
word"could feel"
count2
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"weight"
count2
9
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"effortless"
1"scanning"
2"intensity"
3"could feel"
4"silence"
5"unreadable"
6"flicker"
7"tracing"
8"weight"
9"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences196
matches(empty)
77.26% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount9
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences196
filterMatches
0"look"
1"know"
2"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences196
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1367
ratio0
matches(empty)
56.82% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions3
matches
0"You look tired, he said."
1"I saw the report, he said, his voice dropping."
2"The chain is still on the door, he said."
80.50% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions61
wordCount1367
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.39
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
London3
Marseille2
Ptolemy4
Rory12
East1
Cardiff1
Lucien15
Evan3
You19
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Rory"
3"Lucien"
4"Evan"
5"You"
places
0"London"
1"Marseille"
2"East"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0.805
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences100
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1367
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences196
matches
0"feel that way"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs89
mean15.36
std14.91
cv0.971
sampleLengths
057
116
273
37
41
534
618
75
854
911
108
1139
124
1311
1426
1531
169
1748
185
1914
205
2114
2238
2314
243
252
2639
2711
2814
2914
3028
3116
324
3324
346
3536
364
377
388
396
4030
4119
422
4314
442
4536
463
4715
483
4914
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences196
matches
0"was slicked"
1"was sent"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs283
matches
0"was bleeding"
1"was sleeping"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences196
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1367
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.020482809070958303
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.002926115581565472
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences196
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences196
mean6.97
std4.48
cv0.643
sampleLengths
018
111
218
35
42
53
64
712
89
933
1015
1116
127
131
143
156
166
1719
185
1913
205
213
225
2315
2416
2515
2611
274
284
294
3011
3116
328
334
3411
3515
3611
378
3810
392
402
419
429
433
445
4510
467
479
484
4910
31.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats36
diversityRatio0.17857142857142858
totalSentences196
uniqueOpeners35
37.66% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences177
matches
0"Then why are you shaking?"
1"Then I'll change the locks."
ratio0.011
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount107
totalSentences177
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"She hadn't locked the chain."
2"His charcoal suit swallowed the"
3"His platinum blond hair was"
4"He smelled of expensive tobacco"
5"She hadn’t seen him since"
6"She kept her arm close"
7"You look tired, he said."
8"His voice was smooth, a"
9"You look like a mistake."
10"He didn’t ask for permission."
11"It’s not your home, he"
12"It’s where I stay."
13"You know the rules."
14"I know you’re hiding."
15"He walked past her, the"
16"He moved to the window,"
17"He dropped his cane to"
18"I’m here because you called"
19"He gestured to the stacks"
ratio0.605
5.20% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount161
totalSentences177
matches
0"The deadbolt slid back with"
1"Rory gripped the handle, her"
2"She adjusted the strap of"
3"She hadn't locked the chain."
4"The chain ratcheted open."
5"The door swung inward to"
6"Lucien Moreau leaned against the"
7"His charcoal suit swallowed the"
8"His platinum blond hair was"
9"He smelled of expensive tobacco"
10"Rory’s throat tightened."
11"She hadn’t seen him since"
12"She kept her arm close"
13"You look tired, he said."
14"His voice was smooth, a"
15"You look like a mistake."
16"Lucien stepped inside."
17"He didn’t ask for permission."
18"The smell of ozone intensified,"
19"Books and scrolls stacked in"
ratio0.91
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount5
totalSentences177
matches
0"If you’re here to kill"
1"If you walk away from"
2"If you stay, you die."
3"If you leave, you get"
4"If I leave, I get"
ratio0.028
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.4738%