Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBHW7ZEN5BX902FSR6SWTV5

Run Details

Duration:
1m 33s
Cost:
$0.012207
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the abandoned Camden station tasted of rust and wet concrete. Harlow Quinn stepped over a coil of yellow caution tape, her boots crunching on loose gravel. The fluorescent lights overhead flickered, casting stuttering shadows against the grimy tiles. She adjusted the strap of her service weapon, the leather of her watch creaking against her wrist. Eighteen years on the force taught her to trust her gut, but this location tested every instinct she possessed. Eva stood near the platform edge, clutching a worn leather satchel against her chest. Her curly red hair escaped her round glasses, framing a face pale with exhaustion. She tucked a strand behind her left ear, a nervous tic she hadn't shed since Oxford. The smell of old paper and ozone clung to her coat. Quinn walked past her, stopping at the edge of the tracks. A sheet covered a shape lying on the sleepers. No blood stained the concrete. The victim wore a tailored suit, the fabric pristine despite the grime of the tunnel. Quinn knelt beside the body. She lifted the sheet with a gloved hand. The man's face remained slack, eyes open and fixed on the ceiling. No visible wounds marred his skin. No entry wound. No exit wound. She stood and brushed the dust from her knees. The silence in the tunnel pressed against her eardrums. Somewhere deep in the dark, water dripped in a steady rhythm. You said he was found here, Quinn said. Eva nodded. She shifted her weight from one foot to the other. The British Museum archives called this a restricted zone. Most people don't know it exists. Quinn turned to face the woman. How did he get past the perimeter? He didn't, Eva said. She pulled a book from her satchel, flipping past pages of handwritten notes. The Veil Market moves locations every full moon. The entrance requires a bone token. Quinn stared at the tunnel mouth. The metal gates stood rusted shut. No lock picked. No forced entry. So he walked through a wall, Quinn said. Not a wall. A threshold. Eva tapped the cover of her book. The sigils etched into the brickwork aren't decorative. They hold the space open. Quinn looked back at the body. She stepped closer, examining the man's shoes. Scuff marks on the toe caps. He walked here. But the gravel around the tracks remained undisturbed. No footprints led to the body. No footprints led away. He didn't walk, Quinn said. Eva adjusted her glasses. The glass slid down her nose. He was placed. By who? The clique. Eva closed the book with a soft thud. They use this place for transactions. Illegal alchemical substances. Information. People who disappear often end up here. Quinn pulled her flashlight from her belt. She swept the beam across the tunnel walls. The light caught a faint residue on the tiles near the platform edge. A greenish stain. Verdigris. She crouched again, scraping a sample into an evidence bag. The texture felt oily. This isn't rust, Quinn said. It's from the Compass, Eva said. She pointed to the stain. The Veil Compass points toward supernatural rifts. It leaves a trace when it moves through the physical plane. Quinn stood, pocketing the bag. She looked at the man's hand. His fingers curled inward, gripping nothing. A small brass object lay in his palm, half-hidden by his fingers. She pulled a pair of tweezers from her pocket. She extracted the object. A small brass compass. The casing bore a patina of verdigris. Protective sigils etched into the face. Quinn held it up to the light. The needle spun wildly before settling on the tunnel ahead. It points to the rift, Eva said. The market is shifting. The location changes tonight. Quinn looked at the needle. It didn't point to the exit. It pointed deeper into the dark, toward the maintenance shafts. The body is a marker, Quinn said. A warning, Eva corrected. Or a payment. Quinn tucked the compass into her pocket. The metal felt cold against her thigh. She looked at the man's face again. He looked like DS Morris. Not the features, but the stillness. The way the eyes refused to blink. Quinn shook the thought away. Morris was gone. Dead three years ago under circumstances that made no sense. She didn't have time for ghosts. Who found him? Quinn asked. A runner, Eva said. Someone who sells information to the highest bidder. He saw the body and called the authorities. He didn't stay to watch. Quinn walked to the edge of the platform. The wind picked up, whistling through the broken windows. It carried the scent of salt and ozone. We need to secure the perimeter, Quinn said. I want a full sweep of the tunnel. Eva stepped forward. You won't find anything else. The magic dissipates quickly. Quinn turned on her heel. She fixed Eva with a hard stare. You think I don't know what I'm looking at? I think you're looking for a mundane explanation, Eva said. She tucked her hair behind her ear again. This is a supernatural crime scene. Quinn walked past her, heading toward the stairs. She checked her watch. The time read 11:43 PM. The full moon rose in an hour. The market moves, Quinn said. We need to know where it goes. Eva followed her up the stairs. I can track the energy signature. But I need time. Quinn pushed open the heavy steel door at the top of the stairs. The street noise of Camden filtered in. Sirens wailed in the distance. You have until sunrise, Quinn said. She stepped out into the cool night air. The street lights buzzed overhead. She looked back at the dark mouth of the station. The shadows seemed to stretch, reaching for her boots. She touched the pocket where the compass rested. The metal hummed against her leg. Quinn pulled out her radio. Dispatch, this is Quinn. I need a unit at the north exit. She paused, listening to the static crackle. And bring the K-9 unit, Quinn said. I want to see what they pick up on the scent. She cut the connection. Eva stood behind her, the satchel heavy on her shoulder. They won't find anything, Eva said. They'll find the path, Quinn said. Quinn walked toward the patrol cars. The officers stood near the tape, smoking cigarettes. They looked up as she approached. Secure the area, Quinn said. No one in or out. She stopped at the back of her car. She opened the trunk and grabbed a fresh evidence kit. She looked at the station entrance one last time. The darkness inside seemed deeper than before. Eva walked up beside her. You believe me now. Quinn closed the trunk with a solid thud. I believe the evidence. She handed the kit to the nearest officer. Bag the compass. Seal it in a lead-lined container, Quinn said. The officer took the kit. He looked at the compass, then at Quinn. Lead container? Yes. Quinn turned back to Eva. If that thing points to a rift, I don't want it leading us into a trap. Eva nodded. She looked down at her shoes. The light from the street lamp caught the freckles on her nose. The Compass was crafted by a Shade artisan, Eva said. It doesn't just point. It remembers. Quinn opened her car door. She paused with one foot on the pavement. What does it remember? The last person who held it, Eva said. The last person who died holding it. Qulinn looked at the body in the tunnel. The man in the suit. Morris, Quinn said. Eva shook her head. Not him. Someone else. Quinn closed the car door. The metal rang in the quiet street. She didn't have the answer. She had a compass, a dead man, and a market that moved with the moon. She got into the driver's seat. She started the engine. The radio crackled with static. Quinn put the car in gear. She looked at Eva through the side mirror. Stay with me, Quinn said. Eva opened the passenger door. She climbed inside. The market moves, Eva said. Quinn pulled out into traffic. The city lights blurred past the window. She kept her eyes on the road. She kept her hand near the pocket with the compass. It hummed again. Quinn gripped the wheel. She drove toward the next full moon.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.44% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1404
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
78.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1404
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"pristine"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"etched"
count2
highlights
0"flickered"
1"pristine"
2"silence"
3"weight"
4"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences211
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences211
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"think"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences211
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen19
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1404
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions17
matches
0"You said he was found here, Quinn said."
1"So he walked through a wall, Quinn said."
2"It points to the rift, Eva said."
3"The body is a marker, Quinn said."
4"A warning, Eva corrected."
5"A runner, Eva said."
6"We need to secure the perimeter, Quinn said."
7"The market moves, Quinn said."
8"You have until sunrise, Quinn said."
9"And bring the K-9 unit, Quinn said."
10"Secure the area, Quinn said."
11"Seal it in a lead-lined container, Quinn said."
12"The Compass was crafted by a Shade artisan, Eva said."
13"The last person who held it, Eva said."
14"Morris, Quinn said."
15"Stay with me, Quinn said."
16"The market moves, Eva said."
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions87
wordCount1404
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.99
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden2
Quinn42
Oxford1
British1
Museum1
Eva25
Veil2
Market1
Compass3
Morris3
Shade1
You5
persons
0"Camden"
1"Quinn"
2"Museum"
3"Eva"
4"Market"
5"Morris"
6"You"
places
0"Oxford"
globalScore0.004
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences127
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed deeper than before"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.712
wordCount1404
matches
0"Not the features, but the stillness"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences211
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs78
mean18
std12.71
cv0.706
sampleLengths
077
155
240
331
46
529
68
727
813
931
1018
118
1225
1340
145
1513
162
1727
1832
1914
205
2129
2229
2330
2417
2515
2621
277
287
2939
3024
315
3225
3325
3416
3512
3621
3724
3824
3912
4016
4125
426
4332
4414
4517
467
4718
4814
496
98.61% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences211
matches
0"was found"
1"was placed"
2"was gone"
3"was crafted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs262
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences211
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1406
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.01209103840682788
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.002844950213371266
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences211
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences211
mean6.65
std3.2
cv0.481
sampleLengths
013
116
212
317
419
514
614
716
811
911
109
115
1215
135
148
1512
166
173
183
199
209
2111
228
232
2410
259
266
276
287
294
3013
318
326
336
346
353
363
378
383
392
407
418
425
436
447
456
463
478
486
494
40.05% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.22274881516587677
totalSentences211
uniqueOpeners47
16.84% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences198
matches
0"Somewhere deep in the dark,"
ratio0.005
70.51% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount74
totalSentences198
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"Her curly red hair escaped"
2"She tucked a strand behind"
3"She lifted the sheet with"
4"She stood and brushed the"
5"You said he was found"
6"She shifted her weight from"
7"He didn't, Eva said."
8"She pulled a book from"
9"They hold the space open."
10"She stepped closer, examining the"
11"He walked here."
12"He didn't walk, Quinn said."
13"He was placed."
14"They use this place for"
15"She swept the beam across"
16"She crouched again, scraping a"
17"It's from the Compass, Eva"
18"She pointed to the stain."
19"It leaves a trace when"
ratio0.374
38.28% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount167
totalSentences198
matches
0"The air in the abandoned"
1"Harlow Quinn stepped over a"
2"The fluorescent lights overhead flickered,"
3"She adjusted the strap of"
4"Eva stood near the platform"
5"Her curly red hair escaped"
6"She tucked a strand behind"
7"The smell of old paper"
8"Quinn walked past her, stopping"
9"A sheet covered a shape"
10"The victim wore a tailored"
11"Quinn knelt beside the body."
12"She lifted the sheet with"
13"The man's face remained slack,"
14"She stood and brushed the"
15"The silence in the tunnel"
16"You said he was found"
17"She shifted her weight from"
18"The British Museum archives called"
19"Quinn turned to face the"
ratio0.843
25.25% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences198
matches
0"If that thing points to"
ratio0.005
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.1535%