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Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBHZANXBZM170SH90XHR1FF
Run Details
Model:
Qwen 3.5 Flash
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
43.2s
Cost:
$0.002322
Provider:
Alibaba
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
76.28%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
66.67%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
13.89%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
66.67%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
33.01%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
53.33%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
16.27%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
4.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
84.3372%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
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The deadbolt slid home with
a heavy metallic click.
Aurora checked the second lock
by feel, thumb sliding over the cold brass keyway. She didn't turn the handle. Not until she heard the
footsteps
above her head.
Ptolemy the tabby hissed from
the top of the bookshelf, his fur expanding like a brush of static. Aurora stopped breathing. The third lock required effort.
She gripped the iron plate
and pulled. The wood groaned in protest.
She knew the sound of
Eva’s neighbours.
The landlord in 4B knocked
first at 1720 hours.
He knocked with the heel
of his boot. This tap was different. Sharp. Deliberate.
She unlocked the chain and
swung the door open.
Lucien Moreau stood on the
landing.
He wore a charcoal suit
that cost more than Aurora made in a year. The fabric didn't wrinkle.
His platinum blond hair had
not moved an inch despite the London wind.
He held the ivory handle
of his cane in one hand.
The metal tip dug exactly
two inches into the carpet.
The air smelled of curry
sauce and old paper.
It smelled of his cologne
too. Sandalwood and cold iron.
I told you not to
come here. Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes stared down at her. One amber, one black. He did not blink. The amber eye caught the dim light of the landing. The black one swallowed it.
I had a message for
you, Aurora. No. He didn't use her name.
He just looked at her
wrist. The crescent scar there stood out pale against her skin.
He remembered every inch of
her body.
Your father in Cardiff called
me, Lucien.
You know he would never
contact me directly. Lucien stepped forward. She did not move.
She did not close the
door. The hallway stretched behind her into the flat. Books were everywhere. Scrolls spilled from jars onto the floor. Ptolemy yowled from the shelves like a cat that had seen the end of the world.
He crossed the threshold without
asking. The door clicked shut behind him.
If you knew he would
call, why open it? I didn't hear the door open, Lucien said. He took off his gloves. Black leather. He dropped them on a pile of ancient maps. I heard the chain. You leave it unlocked. I don't open doors before I check them. You should
know
that by now. Evan. The name
hung in the air
. Thick. Heavy like smoke from the kitchen below. You
think
this is about Evan? Lucien asked. He walked to the small table in the corner. He ran a finger over the surface. It left no dust mark. The polish was
perfect
. It's not about Evan. It is always about Evan when I
see
you, Lucien replied. He held out a hand. His palm was open. I am holding the truth. Aurora didn't move toward him. She backed up one step. Her heel caught the edge of a rug. She steadied herself. There is no truth for you to hold. You vanished. You didn't call. You didn't even send a messenger. I sent a bird. The pigeon never made it to Cardiff. Lucien smiled. It was a small thing. Cold. The smile didn't reach his eyes. I lost the pigeon to a stray. A cat on a wall in Shoreditch. A stray cat with a demon's eye. I am a Half-Demon, Aurora. Not a cat. Not a pigeon. But I still lose things. He leaned on the cane. The blade inside it hummed a vibration that she felt in her teeth.
Then why are you here
now? The door
is supposed
to be the only barrier. Because the barrier is broken. Aurora froze. The flat
was supposed
to be secure. Eva had installed three deadbolts. She had a list of wards scrawled in chalk on the doorframe. She had checked them daily. What barrier? She kept her voice even. She did not raise it. Panic would help no one. The lock on the other door. The one in your father's flat. Lucien tapped his cane on the floor. He pointed it at her. It looked like a finger. You
think
you can hide from them in London. You
think
you can hide from anything. I moved to get away. I needed a new address. You
think
that changes nothing? Lucien laughed. The sound was sharp. Barking. It
echoed
down the stairs. He stepped closer. His height towered over her. He had to look down. Aurora had to look up. I don't need a lecture. I need you to leave. I have the contract. He reached into his jacket pocket. He pulled out a folded piece of paper. It was cream coloured. Text
was written
in ink that
shimmered
like oil on water. What contract? The one you signed. Lucien held it out. I didn't sign anything. You signed with blood. Your mother signed it too. Aurora's breath stopped. She didn't speak. Her heart hammered against her ribs. Jennifer Carter had died five years ago. The hospital said heart failure. Aurora had never questioned the paperwork. The death certificate was clean. The estate was empty. That's a lie. I am not a liar. I am a fixer. I fix what breaks. Lucien stepped into her personal space. He smelled of smoke and old magic. He reached out. Aurora dodged. She moved to the kitchen counter. She grabbed a sharp knife. The steel felt cool in her grip. She wasn't a soldier. She was a cook of sorts. A deliverer of food. But she knew how to use
weight
.
If you touch me, I
scream. There is no one to scream at. Lucien's hand closed around her wrist. The other hand held the knife still. The blade caught the light from the window. He didn't cut her. He just held the hand. The room felt hot. The air pressure dropped. The cat on the shelf went silent. Even the curry smell faded. The
silence
was absolute. You
think
you can hide forever. You
think
your little delivery job protects you. Lucien pulled her hand closer to his face. He
traced
the scar with his thumb. I am protecting what belongs to my employer. My father was not yours. Your father paid for the
silence
. He is not the one who owes you now. Lucien released her wrist. He turned away. He walked to the door again. He checked the lock. Then he turned back. The
silence
is gone. Aurora dropped the knife. It clattered on the tiles. Lucien looked at the door handle. He didn't touch it. He looked at her. They
know
I came to
see
you. He said the words flatly. He didn't look at her face. He looked at the window. Who knows? The ones in the basement building on Brick Lane. The ones who own the curry house. Aurora's
stomach
dropped. She looked at the floor. The smell returned. Curry. Oil. Why are you telling me this? Because the door is open. A heavy thud came against the door from the outside. It wasn't a knock. It was a impact. The frame shook. Dust fell from the ceiling. Ptolemy leaped from the shelf and vanished into a pile of books. They found us. Lucien didn't move. He stood by the door. He placed his hand on the cane. The blade inside
began to
rise. Metal against ivory. It didn't scrape. It whistled. Get behind me, Aurora. I didn't hire you. The thud came again. The wood splintered. A sliver of oak flew across the room and stuck into a bookshelf with a thud. You can't leave. Not today. Aurora took a breath. Her blue eyes were wide. She stared at the cane. It was an extension of himself now. A piece of his arm. If I stay, I die. If you leave, you die. Lucien turned the cane. The tip pointed at the door. I protect you. I am the only one who can. Who? The voices. The ones who come at night. They are already in the walls. The door
began to
bend inward. Aurora reached for the bookshelf. She grabbed a heavy tome. It
was bound
in leather. She held it like a shield. The handle turned on its own. The metal twisted in Lucien's grip. The lock screamed like a dying animal. He stepped forward. The blade was visible now. Thin. Silver. Go to the back room. I'm not running. Then stand and die. The door burst open. Darkness poured into the hallway. Shapes moved. Long shadows stretched across the books. They didn't have faces. They had eyes in the dark. Lucien didn't wait. He raised his hands. The cane swung low. The blade caught the air. It left a trail of light. One shape lunged. Lucien parried it. The clash was silent. Metal against shadow. Shadow against metal. Aurora didn't run. She grabbed the cane from his pocket. It was heavy. She gripped the ivory. The energy hummed. She threw the heavy book at the shadow. It hit the thing. The shadow recoiled like boiling water hitting ice. Lucien turned. His eyes burned. Amber and black. He saw the book. He saw the shadow. It works. The shadows swarmed. They came from the kitchen. From the window. From the floor. Lucien grabbed her arm. He pulled her toward the window. We climb out. The window was open. The wind howled. The rain had
started to
fall. It beat against the glass. Lucien threw the window open. The metal screamed as it dragged against the frame. The rain splashed into the room. He pushed her. Go. I can't. The shadows touched her hair. They were cold. They smelled of copper. Then I will kill it. Lucien ran to the shadows. He swung the cane high. The blade caught one of the dark things. He sliced downward. The thing didn't bleed. It unraveled into smoke. Aurora backed to the window. The drop was three stories down. She held the railing. The iron was cold. It burned her palm. Lucien turned. He stood against the swarm. He raised the cane high. His silhouette filled the doorway. Jump, Aurora. The shadows
were closing
in on her. They reached for her throat. I can't. You have no choice. Lucien thrust his cane into the floor. The ground shook. A circle of blue fire lit up around him. He spoke words. They weren't English. They were deep and guttural. The shadows recoiled. They hissed. Aurora looked down at the street. It was wet. Puddles reflected the neon lights. If I jump, I live. If I stay, I die. Lucien didn't look at her. He looked at the doorway. He held the shape back alone. Jump. Aurora stepped onto the ledge. Her boots left muddy prints on the wood. She gripped the window frame. She looked at Lucien one last time. He looked tired. The suit
was torn
now. Blood splattered on his sleeve. She stepped off the ledge. She fell through the rain. The wind roared in her ears. She hit the roof of the flat below. It was hard. She rolled and hit the pavement. She got up. The street was empty. She looked up at the window on the third floor. Lucien stood there. The fire
was gone
. The shadows were back. He raised the cane. He pointed at her. Wait, he mouthed the words. Aurora turned. She looked at the dark alleyway. Shadows moved in the corner. They were not from the building. They
were following
her. They had followed her down. She ran. The rain soaked her clothes. It didn't feel cold anymore. It felt like oil. She ran past the bakery on the corner. The owner shouted. She didn't hear him. She turned down the next street. A dead end. She stopped. The shadows closed in from both sides. Lucien's voice came from behind her. You shouldn't have jumped. Aurora turned. Lucien stood in the rain. The cane
was glowing
again. The shadows recoiled. Then come down here. I will not come down. They need you in the building. They need you at the door. Why? Because you are the key. Aurora stepped forward. She didn't speak. She didn't move. Lucien didn't speak. The shadows grew closer. They touched her shoes. If you want to live, she said. You must come get me. Now. The shadows touched her hands. They were cold. They were tight. Lucien looked at his cane. He looked at her. No. He turned. He walked back into the building. He closed the door. The door clicked shut. Aurora stood alone in the rain. The shadows tightened. They pulled her forward.
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provider_name
"Alibaba"
status
200
api_type
"completions"
id
"gen-1772061960-jf1XfSrtgCOCw8AmYGFZ"
upstream_id
"chatcmpl-21cd795a-f462-9778-90c9-c5e8549967d6"
total_cost
0.0023221
cache_discount
(null)
upstream_inference_cost
0
provider_name
"Alibaba"
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
0
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
2108
totalAiIsmAdverbs
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
76.28%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
2108
totalAiIsms
10
found
0
word
"footsteps"
count
1
1
word
"perfect"
count
1
2
word
"echoed"
count
1
3
word
"shimmered"
count
1
4
word
"weight"
count
1
5
word
"silence"
count
3
6
word
"traced"
count
1
7
word
"stomach"
count
1
highlights
0
"footsteps"
1
"perfect"
2
"echoed"
3
"shimmered"
4
"weight"
5
"silence"
6
"traced"
7
"stomach"
66.67%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"stomach dropped/sank"
count
1
1
label
"hung in the air"
count
1
highlights
0
"stomach dropped"
1
"hung in the air"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
418
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
9
hedgeCount
3
narrationSentences
418
filterMatches
0
"know"
1
"think"
2
"see"
hedgeMatches
0
"began to"
1
"started to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
418
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
18
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
2108
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
13.89%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
9
unquotedAttributions
4
matches
0
"It is always about Evan when I see you, Lucien replied."
1
"If you touch me, I scream."
2
"Wait, he mouthed the words."
3
"If you want to live, she said."
66.67%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
96
wordCount
2108
uniqueNames
15
maxNameDensity
1.61
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
3
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva
2
Moreau
1
Aurora
25
London
2
Cardiff
2
Lucien
34
Evan
4
Shoreditch
1
Half-Demon
1
Carter
1
Brick
1
Lane
1
English
1
Ptolemy
3
You
17
persons
0
"Eva"
1
"Moreau"
2
"Aurora"
3
"Lucien"
4
"Evan"
5
"Carter"
6
"Ptolemy"
7
"You"
places
0
"London"
1
"Cardiff"
2
"Shoreditch"
3
"Brick"
4
"Lane"
globalScore
0.694
windowScore
0.667
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
141
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
2108
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
418
matches
0
"think that changes"
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
136
mean
15.5
std
12.31
cv
0.794
sampleLengths
0
55
1
3
2
47
3
9
4
58
5
19
6
7
7
30
8
19
9
17
10
15
11
47
12
12
13
9
14
32
15
14
16
15
17
33
18
4
19
25
20
21
21
19
22
39
23
7
24
34
25
15
26
5
27
31
28
17
29
45
30
10
31
35
32
10
33
33
34
2
35
8
36
4
37
9
38
39
39
3
40
29
41
41
42
6
43
7
44
30
45
24
46
29
47
8
48
5
49
36
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
6
totalSentences
418
matches
0
"is supposed"
1
"was supposed"
2
"was written"
3
"was bound"
4
"was torn"
5
"was gone"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
3
totalVerbs
444
matches
0
"were closing"
1
"were following"
2
"was glowing"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
418
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
2109
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
41
adverbRatio
0.01944049312470365
lyAdverbCount
6
lyAdverbRatio
0.002844950213371266
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
418
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
418
mean
5.04
std
2.42
cv
0.48
sampleLengths
0
9
1
14
2
5
3
9
4
18
5
3
6
5
7
7
8
5
9
7
10
9
11
8
12
4
13
1
14
1
15
9
16
6
17
14
18
4
19
13
20
11
21
10
22
9
23
6
24
4
25
7
26
7
27
4
28
4
29
10
30
5
31
7
32
1
33
5
34
6
35
10
36
7
37
7
38
8
39
3
40
4
41
6
42
8
43
3
44
7
45
16
46
6
47
6
48
9
49
8
33.01%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
71
diversityRatio
0.15550239234449761
totalSentences
418
uniqueOpeners
65
53.33%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
6
totalSentences
375
matches
0
"Then why are you here"
1
"Even the curry smell faded."
2
"Then he turned back."
3
"Then stand and die."
4
"Then I will kill it."
5
"Then come down here."
ratio
0.016
16.27%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
191
totalSentences
375
matches
0
"She didn't turn the handle."
1
"She gripped the iron plate"
2
"She knew the sound of"
3
"He knocked with the heel"
4
"She unlocked the chain and"
5
"He wore a charcoal suit"
6
"His platinum blond hair had"
7
"He held the ivory handle"
8
"It smelled of his cologne"
9
"I told you not to"
10
"He did not blink."
11
"I had a message for"
12
"He didn't use her name."
13
"He just looked at her"
14
"He remembered every inch of"
15
"Your father in Cardiff called"
16
"You know he would never"
17
"She did not move."
18
"She did not close the"
19
"He crossed the threshold without"
ratio
0.509
4.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
342
totalSentences
375
matches
0
"The deadbolt slid home with"
1
"Aurora checked the second lock"
2
"She didn't turn the handle."
3
"Ptolemy the tabby hissed from"
4
"Aurora stopped breathing."
5
"The third lock required effort."
6
"She gripped the iron plate"
7
"The wood groaned in protest."
8
"She knew the sound of"
9
"The landlord in 4B knocked"
10
"He knocked with the heel"
11
"This tap was different."
12
"She unlocked the chain and"
13
"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
14
"He wore a charcoal suit"
15
"The fabric didn't wrinkle."
16
"His platinum blond hair had"
17
"He held the ivory handle"
18
"The metal tip dug exactly"
19
"The air smelled of curry"
ratio
0.912
100.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
10
totalSentences
375
matches
0
"If you knew he would"
1
"Because the barrier is broken."
2
"If you touch me, I"
3
"Because the door is open."
4
"If I stay, I die."
5
"If you leave, you die."
6
"If I jump, I live."
7
"If I stay, I die."
8
"Because you are the key."
9
"If you want to live,"
ratio
0.027
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
17
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
0
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
0
84.3372%