Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBHZATYV3FWN6GZN03P70QJ

Run Details

Duration:
52.0s
Cost:
$0.002709
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign hummed above the entrance to The Raven's Nest, casting a faint, sickly glow against the Soho rain. Inside, the air smelled of gin, old paper, and the copper tang of spilled beer. Maps lined the walls, tattered corners peeled away like dead skin, framing faded black-and-white photographs that held the eyes of people gone for decades. Aurora sat at the far end of the mahogany bar, her elbow resting on the cold wood. Her straight black hair fell over her eyes, obscuring the way she scanned the room. She picked up her glass, watched the ice shift against the amber liquid, and set it down without taking a sip. The silver signet ring on her left wrist glinted under the dim lights. She rubbed the crescent scar there, the memory of the ache dull but present. Silas Blackwood moved behind the counter. His knee clicked softly as he shifted his weight, the slight limp masking the speed in his hands as he wiped a glass. The grey-streaked auburn hair caught the light. He didn't look up at her, just polished the tumbler until it rang a clear note against the ceramic. The bell above the door jangled. A gust of wind swept the scent of wet pavement inside. A woman stepped out of the shadows. The coat she wore was expensive, tailored to fit a frame that had filled out since Cardiff. She shook a black umbrella, water pooling on the floorboards. She stopped just inside the threshold, scanning the bar with an expression that looked like hunger. Her gaze landed on the corner. Aurora didn't move, but she stopped breathing. The space between them held the weight of five years of silence. The woman walked forward. She wore a watch that flashed diamond light when the streetlamp outside hit it. Her face was sharper, harder than the one remembered from university lecture halls. Rory raised a hand. A small signal. The woman slid into the stool next to her. She smelled of tobacco and cheap perfume, a jarring contrast to the expensive coat. "You’re drinking alone." "I’m not alone, Eva." Silas slid a fresh glass across the counter and a bottle of whiskey in the other direction. His hazel eyes flicked to the new arrival, then back to the maps on the wall. He leaned on his cane, resting it against the polished wood. "Thanks, Si." Eva nodded, barely acknowledging the bartender. Her fingers gripped the stem of the glass. "You moved to London five years ago on my letter." Rory’s voice was steady, low. She turned her wrist, letting the scar catch the light. Eva’s eyes dropped to the mark. She swallowed hard. "I remember." "Where have you been, Eva?" "Paris. Brussels. A few other places." She took a sip of the whiskey. Her throat worked visibly. "I needed the change. I needed you to be where I told you to be." "And you stayed away." "I couldn't." Eva’s gaze darted toward the back room entrance. The heavy door hung ajar. "I knew I couldn’t go back to Cardiff. I knew Evan would find me if I walked into that bar." "Silas told me you vanished." Rory pointed toward the back with her chin. "He said a girl looked like me came in once. Asked about a friend." "I was the girl." She laughed, a dry sound that didn't reach her eyes. "You never came to London, Rory. Then you did. Then you stopped calling." "I started over. I got the job at the Empress. I moved in above here." Eva leaned in. Her perfume masked the tension in the room. "I saw the news about your ex. The restraining order." "Does that make us closer now?" "No." Silas poured water into a carafe and slid it toward Eva. He kept his movements slow, deliberate. The bar was quiet. The hum of the neon sign amplified the silence. "You look good." Rory said it flatly. "You look different." Eva gestured around the bar. "This place. It feels older." "The building hasn't changed." "She's working," Rory said, looking at the glass. "I know." Eva placed the glass down. "I'm working too. I have a flat in Canary Wharf. Corporate law. Something suits the old me." "You look like a lawyer," Rory observed. "Good lawyers know how to negotiate peace." "We aren't negotiating." Eva’s hand trembled, just once, before she gripped the stem again. "I sent you money. Through a friend." "I didn't receive it." "It was sent to Cardiff." Eva’s voice rose slightly. Silas looked up from the taps. "The post office lost it. I checked." "Did you check the records?" "I didn't have the time." "You always had time for the wrong things." Silas cleared his throat. The sound cut through the room like a match striking. "I’m closing early, love. The shift ends in ten." Rory ignored him. "Why are you here?" "To see if you survived." "And?" Eva stared at the ice. It melted, distorting her reflection in the glass. "I thought you would be different. I thought you would call me." "I didn't need you." "That’s not true. You ran to me once." "Only because I had no other choice." "Is that why you work at the restaurant? Why you live above the bar? Did you choose this path, or did you choose it for me?" "I chose it for me." Eva turned her head. The diamond watch caught the light again. "You lied." "I told the truth." "You never told me about Evan." Eva’s hands tightened on the glass. "You told me it was over. You said you left him." "I left him. I moved." "You ran." "I escaped." Rory lifted her chin. "You weren't there." "I was at Cardiff University." "And you sat in a lecture hall." Rory stood up. Her chair scraped against the floorboards. She reached for her keys. "I’m not a project anymore, Eva. You were supposed to wait." "I waited." "You waited too long." Silas tapped his cane on the floor. The sound echoed off the old walls. "Drink your tea," he said to Eva. "And then go." Rory looked at him. "We're not finished." "Finish it on the street." Silas’s hazel eyes held a warning. "The rain doesn't stop." Eva stood too. Her heels clicked against the floor. She reached into her coat, pulling out a slip of paper. She set it on the bar top. "My number." Rory didn't move. "Take it back." "Keep it." Eva grabbed her glass. She poured the whiskey into the sink behind the bar. The liquid splashed against the porcelain. She didn't look at the liquid, just watched the stream run into the drain. "Five years," she whispered. "That’s enough time." "Plenty." "It’s not." Eva turned back to him. She didn't say goodbye. She grabbed the black umbrella from the rack near the door and pulled it open. "Wait." Eva froze under the black canopy. Rain dripped down the handle, pooling on the hem of her coat. "Aurora?" Rory didn't answer. She turned back to the mirror behind the bar, watching her own reflection. Her blue eyes were bright. "We aren't done." Eva nodded once, sharp and final. She stepped into the open door. The wind snatched the umbrella, and she fought it to close the glass behind her. The silence returned to the room. Silas stopped wiping the glass. He placed it in the rack. He leaned against the counter. His knee popped. "She looks tired." "She looks like me," Rory said, turning the scarred wrist over. "From Cardiff." "She thinks you made a choice." "I made a choice." Silas slid the carafe toward her. "Water is free." Rory picked up the glass. She didn't drink. She just held it. The warmth seeped into her fingertips. Outside, the neon sign flickered. A car horn blared in the distance, followed by the roar of an engine fading away. Rory set the water down. "Did you know she was here?" "I knew you knew she was in London." Silas straightened his tie. "I didn't know for sure." "She's back at the Nest now." "She's always back at the Nest. She just doesn't have a seat that fits anymore." Rory looked at the empty stool next to her. Eva had taken the space, the warmth had vanished. The air felt colder. "I need to lock up." "Go ahead." Rory walked to the bar door. She unlocked the chains. The metal groaned as it slid over the lock. She didn't look back at Silas. "Did anyone find the money?" "No." Silas nodded. He reached for the next glass. "I need to go eat." "There’s food in the kitchen." "I need to eat something that isn't the restaurant." She stepped out into the Soho night. The rain had stopped. The pavement steamed. She walked fast, her black hair whipping in the damp wind. She kept her head down. The street lights stretched out from the pavement like long fingers. She didn't look back at the Raven's Nest. Silas watched her walk away. He picked up the slip of paper. It had been left at the edge of the counter. He didn't touch it. He let the paper fall through the crack in the wood floor. He turned back to the taps. The neon sign buzzed one last time before going dark. The bar was empty. The water dripped down the inside of the sink. Silas turned off the lights. He walked into the shadows. Outside, a taxi pulled up. The driver tapped the horn. Rory didn't wave. She looked at the reflection in the window, then turned into the backseat. The engine revved. The bar stood dark behind them. No neon. No green light. Just the shadow of the building against the wet street. Silas stood in the doorway one last time. He watched the taillights disappear around the corner. The lock clicked behind him. He pulled his signet ring off his right hand and set it on the bar top. It spun once. The silence settled heavy in the room. Dust motes danced in the gloom. Silas walked back to the shelves in the back. He didn't check the maps. He didn't check the photos. He just stood in the dim light and listened to the rain begin again.
created_at"2026-02-25T23:26:01.062Z" 2/25/2026, 11:26:01 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Eva nodded barely [barely]"
1"Eva gestured around [around]"
2"Eva turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences92
tagDensity0.217
leniency0.435
rawRatio0.15
effectiveRatio0.065
94.18% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1718
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.52% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1718
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"silence"
count4
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"trembled"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"porcelain"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count2
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"gloom"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"weight"
2"scanning"
3"silence"
4"flicked"
5"tension"
6"trembled"
7"echoed"
8"porcelain"
9"warmth"
10"flickered"
11"gloom"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences157
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences157
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences227
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1718
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions61
wordCount1208
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.57
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Soho2
Blackwood1
Cardiff1
Eva19
Rory18
Silas16
persons
0"Nest"
1"Blackwood"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
places
0"Raven"
1"Soho"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.714
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences96
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like hunger"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1718
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences227
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs115
mean14.94
std13.82
cv0.925
sampleLengths
060
180
255
317
450
56
619
731
87
923
103
1148
1216
1325
1411
155
1632
174
1835
1927
2027
2115
2221
236
241
2530
267
2713
284
298
3024
317
327
333
3418
354
3622
375
385
398
4023
417
425
431
4425
454
468
477
4826
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences157
matches
0"been left"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs220
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences227
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1211
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.028075970272502065
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.00495458298926507
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences227
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences227
mean7.57
std4.77
cv0.63
sampleLengths
021
115
224
317
415
521
613
714
86
923
107
1119
126
1311
147
1517
1610
1716
186
197
2012
214
2214
2313
244
253
269
2714
283
2921
3016
3111
328
338
3415
3510
366
373
382
395
4013
414
4215
434
4410
455
4620
4713
4814
4914
37.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats28
diversityRatio0.2026431718061674
totalSentences227
uniqueOpeners46
21.79% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences153
matches
0"Just the shadow of the"
ratio0.007
63.14% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount60
totalSentences153
matches
0"Her straight black hair fell"
1"She picked up her glass,"
2"She rubbed the crescent scar"
3"His knee clicked softly as"
4"He didn't look up at"
5"She shook a black umbrella,"
6"She stopped just inside the"
7"Her gaze landed on the"
8"She wore a watch that"
9"Her face was sharper, harder"
10"She smelled of tobacco and"
11"His hazel eyes flicked to"
12"He leaned on his cane,"
13"Her fingers gripped the stem"
14"She turned her wrist, letting"
15"She swallowed hard."
16"She took a sip of"
17"Her throat worked visibly."
18"She laughed, a dry sound"
19"Her perfume masked the tension"
ratio0.392
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount148
totalSentences153
matches
0"The green neon sign hummed"
1"Maps lined the walls, tattered"
2"Aurora sat at the far"
3"Her straight black hair fell"
4"She picked up her glass,"
5"The silver signet ring on"
6"She rubbed the crescent scar"
7"Silas Blackwood moved behind the"
8"His knee clicked softly as"
9"The grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
10"He didn't look up at"
11"The bell above the door"
12"A gust of wind swept"
13"A woman stepped out of"
14"The coat she wore was"
15"She shook a black umbrella,"
16"She stopped just inside the"
17"Her gaze landed on the"
18"Aurora didn't move, but she"
19"The space between them held"
ratio0.967
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
ratio0
90.59% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Maps lined the walls, tattered corners peeled away like dead skin, framing faded black-and-white photographs that held the eyes of people gone for decades."
1"She stopped just inside the threshold, scanning the bar with an expression that looked like hunger."
2"She wore a watch that flashed diamond light when the streetlamp outside hit it."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
1"Rory observed (observe)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences92
tagDensity0.076
leniency0.152
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.065
81.9295%