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Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBHZDVFY4EV6WANNZFZ6ZZ0
Run Details
Model:
Qwen 3.5 35B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
47.5s
Cost:
$0.013236
Provider:
Alibaba
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
88.71%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
84.95%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
66.67%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
69.23%
Sentence length variance
(details)
25.00%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
12.44%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
81.5666%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The key turned in the
lock with a sharp click. Aurora froze.
Her hand hovered inches from
the handle.
She knew the sound of
her own flat.
It was a heavy brass
mechanism. It had three deadbolts.
The first one was always
loose on a Tuesday. This was a Wednesday. The lock clicked
firmly
. It sounded professional. She did not call out.
She did not move her
feet.
Her eyes scanned the hallway
through the narrow gap in the door. Lucien Moreau stood there.
The corridor light glinted off
his platinum hair.
He wore a tailored charcoal
suit.
His ivory cane rested against
his shoulder. The cane did not move. He had not knocked. He had not texted.
He had not sent a
letter. He stepped forward. The heavy door opened fully. He filled the frame. The smell of ozone hit her face.
It was the scent of
his skin.
It was the scent of
magic.
It was the scent of
trouble.
I opened the door, she
thought. She opened the door. Rory closed the gap with a slow turn. She placed her back against the door. Her heart beat against her ribs. She counted the beat. One. Two. Three. You should not be here. You are
very
late. I told you not to come to London. I was already here. Lucien spoke in a low voice. His accent was soft but precise. He used the British pronunciation of his vowels. He tilted his head
slightly
. His heterochromatic eyes
scanned
the room. One eye was amber. The other was black. The eyes had not changed. The face had not changed. The suit had changed. The fabric looked new. The flat was crowded. Books stacked on the floor. Scrolls covered the table. Ptolemy sat on the sofa. The tabby cat watched them. The cat did not move. The cat did not hiss. It just watched the intruder. This is not your place. It is no longer yours. Rory took a step back. Her heel hit a pile of paper. She stepped over it. The paper rustled. It was an eviction
notice
. She had found it in the post that morning. She had not told him. He knew everything. You are watching me. I am managing you. Lucien moved forward. He did not use his cane to walk. He used it to balance. He walked into the room. The air felt heavier. The shadows lengthened in the corners. They belonged to him. I am not a project. You were never a person. You were a liability. Rory felt the anger rise in her throat. She swallowed it. It tasted like bile. She wanted to shut the door. She wanted to lock it. She wanted to scream. She did none of those things. My name is Laila. My name is Aurora. You changed it again. I am hiding. You are hunting. Lucien stopped near the sofa. He placed his cane on the floor. The tip clicked against the wood. The sound was sharp. It
echoed
in the small room. The cat blinked. Ptolemy stood up. The cat stretched. The cat ignored the demon. I need the box. You lost the box. It is not lost. It
is hidden
. I
know
where it is. Lucien looked at the wall. He looked at the map. It covered the wall. Pins stuck into the map. Red pins marked his targets. Blue pins marked her movements. He had marked her flat. Where is the box. In the oven. Lucien smiled. He did not smile with his eyes. He smiled with his mouth. It was a cruel expression. It was a warm expression. It was the face of a wolf. You are playing with fire. You are playing with demons. Lucien stepped closer. He smelled of expensive cologne. He smelled of leather. He smelled of blood. He held out his hand. He wanted the keys. He wanted the box. He wanted everything. Give it to me. I cannot. I will not ask twice. Rory looked at his hand. His fingers were long. They
were manicured
. They were clean. They
were bloodstained
in a dream. She remembered the dream. She woke up screaming. She woke up alone. I am not giving it to you. Then I will take it. Lucien reached for the wall. He pulled a photo from the frame. It was a picture of her mother. It was a picture of her father. It was a picture of her ex. Evan. The abusive ex. He let the photo drop. The picture fell to the floor. The glass cracked. He moved to the corner. He pulled a knife from his sleeve. The blade was thin. The blade was silver. He held the knife in his right hand. He held the cane in his left. This is not a negotiation. It is not. Lucien walked toward the kitchen. He walked
slowly
. He walked with purpose. His shoes did not make a sound. He walked on the carpet. He stepped over a book. He stepped over a box. He stepped over the knife. He opened the oven. He did not open the box. He opened the oven door. The light glowed inside. There is nothing inside. There is always something inside. Rory watched him. She watched his back. She watched the suit. She watched the cane. She watched the shadow. The shadow moved behind him. It was not his shadow. It was another shadow. Someone is in the hall. Lucien stopped. He closed the oven door. He turned around. He looked at the door. He looked at the window. He looked at the floor. The window is locked. The door is not. Lucien moved to the door. He moved to the lock. He moved to the handle. He did not open the handle. He did not touch the handle. He listened. He listened to the sound of feet. The feet were heavy. They
were running
. They
were stopping
. They
were waiting
. It is not me. It is them. Rory stepped away from the wall. She stepped toward him. She stood beside him. She stood in the shadow. She stood in the light. She stood in the middle. Who. The family. Lucien spoke quietly. He spoke to the wall. He spoke to the floor. He spoke to the cat. He spoke to her. They
know
I am here. They
know
you are here. Lucien turned. He looked at her. He looked at her eyes. He looked at her hair. He looked at her wrist. The crescent scar was visible. The scar was white. It stood out against her skin. They
know
about you. I
know
. Lucien raised his cane. He tapped the floor. The sound rang out. The cat jumped. The cat ran to the corner. The cat hid under the table. The table wobbled. The books fell. The scrolls unrolled. We leave now. We cannot leave. We must leave. Lucien grabbed her arm. He grabbed her wrist. He held her tight. He held her hard. He held her like a child. He held her like a weapon. He held her like a promise. They are coming up the stairs. They are breaking the door. Lucien pulled her toward the kitchen. He pulled her toward the window. He pulled her toward the roof. He pulled her toward the exit. We cannot go through the front. We must go through the back. Lucien pointed at the door. He pointed at the wall. He pointed at the ceiling. He pointed at the floor. He pointed at the knife. He pointed at the box. The knife is not in the oven. The box is in the oven. Lucien looked at her. He looked at the wall. He looked at the shadow. He looked at the floor. The shadow moved again. The shadow grew. The shadow reached for him. Lucien turned. He raised the cane. He raised the blade. He raised the arm. He raised the fist. He raised the knife. The door opened.
created_at
"2026-02-25T23:26:04.152Z"
2/25/2026, 11:26:04 PM
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4556
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6154
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4417
native_tokens_completion
6066
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
0
88.71%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1329
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"very"
count
1
1
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
2
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
highlights
0
"very"
1
"slightly"
2
"slowly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
84.95%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1329
totalAiIsms
4
found
0
word
"firmly"
count
1
1
word
"scanned"
count
2
2
word
"echoed"
count
1
highlights
0
"firmly"
1
"scanned"
2
"echoed"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
282
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
6
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
282
filterMatches
0
"notice"
1
"know"
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
282
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
12
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1329
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
0
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
66.67%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
43
wordCount
1329
uniqueNames
10
maxNameDensity
1.43
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
3
worstWindowName
"You"
discoveredNames
Tuesday
1
Wednesday
1
Moreau
1
London
1
British
1
Laila
1
Aurora
2
Lucien
19
Rory
6
You
10
persons
0
"Moreau"
1
"Laila"
2
"Aurora"
3
"Lucien"
4
"Rory"
5
"You"
places
0
"London"
globalScore
0.785
windowScore
0.667
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
67
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1329
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
282
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
89
mean
14.93
std
15.03
cv
1.006
sampleLengths
0
57
1
53
2
14
3
38
4
10
5
28
6
5
7
4
8
8
9
4
10
57
11
38
12
5
13
5
14
41
15
4
16
4
17
35
18
5
19
9
20
36
21
4
22
4
23
4
24
6
25
42
26
4
27
4
28
7
29
5
30
34
31
4
32
3
33
31
34
5
35
5
36
32
37
4
38
2
39
5
40
33
41
7
42
5
43
37
44
14
45
35
46
5
47
3
48
39
49
19
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
3
totalSentences
282
matches
0
"is hidden"
1
"were manicured"
2
"were bloodstained"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
3
totalVerbs
284
matches
0
"were running"
1
"were stopping"
2
"were waiting"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
282
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1329
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
19
adverbRatio
0.014296463506395787
lyAdverbCount
6
lyAdverbRatio
0.004514672686230248
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
282
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
69.23%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
282
mean
4.71
std
1.52
cv
0.323
sampleLengths
0
10
1
2
2
7
3
8
4
6
5
4
6
9
7
4
8
4
9
3
10
5
11
6
12
12
13
4
14
8
15
6
16
7
17
5
18
4
19
4
20
6
21
3
22
5
23
4
24
7
25
7
26
6
27
6
28
6
29
4
30
8
31
7
32
6
33
4
34
1
35
1
36
1
37
5
38
4
39
8
40
4
41
6
42
6
43
8
44
5
45
6
46
4
47
4
48
5
49
5
25.00%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
117
diversityRatio
0.11347517730496454
totalSentences
282
uniqueOpeners
32
12.44%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
1
totalSentences
268
matches
0
"Then I will take it."
ratio
0.004
0.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
180
totalSentences
268
matches
0
"Her hand hovered inches from"
1
"She knew the sound of"
2
"It was a heavy brass"
3
"It had three deadbolts."
4
"It sounded professional."
5
"She did not call out."
6
"She did not move her"
7
"Her eyes scanned the hallway"
8
"He wore a tailored charcoal"
9
"His ivory cane rested against"
10
"He had not knocked."
11
"He had not texted."
12
"He had not sent a"
13
"He stepped forward."
14
"He filled the frame."
15
"It was the scent of"
16
"It was the scent of"
17
"It was the scent of"
18
"I opened the door, she"
19
"She opened the door."
ratio
0.672
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
259
totalSentences
268
matches
0
"The key turned in the"
1
"Her hand hovered inches from"
2
"She knew the sound of"
3
"It was a heavy brass"
4
"It had three deadbolts."
5
"The first one was always"
6
"This was a Wednesday."
7
"The lock clicked firmly."
8
"It sounded professional."
9
"She did not call out."
10
"She did not move her"
11
"Her eyes scanned the hallway"
12
"Lucien Moreau stood there."
13
"The corridor light glinted off"
14
"He wore a tailored charcoal"
15
"His ivory cane rested against"
16
"The cane did not move."
17
"He had not knocked."
18
"He had not texted."
19
"He had not sent a"
ratio
0.966
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
268
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
2
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
0
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
0
81.5666%