Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBJ0N7G86BZPB9P6TRHHDXZ

Run Details

Duration:
32.9s
Cost:
$0.002087
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock came three sharp raps against the oak, a rhythm that vibrated through the thin walls of the apartment and up the spine of the hallway. Aurora didn’t move immediately. She stood in the kitchen, the smell of the curry house below lingering in her hair, a permanent fixture of life on Brick Lane. She stared at the wooden handle, her eyes narrowing as she listened. The floorboards were old, settling with groans, but the lock mechanism was new. Three deadbolts. She had insisted on them. It was safer this way. She wiped her hands on her apron before walking toward the door. On her left wrist, a small crescent-shaped scar caught the dim hallway light from the pendant bulb above. She flexed her fingers, feeling the familiar stiffness, then checked the peephole. Her bright blue eyes narrowed, but nothing changed. The visitor was dressed in a way that made the cramped, book-stuffed hallway feel suddenly smaller. He wore a tailored charcoal suit that cost more than her weekly food budget, and his platinum blond hair was slicked back with an arrogance that usually made her want to roll her eyes. Lucien. She hadn’t heard from him in six months. Not since the argument that had ended in him walking out into the rain of Manchester, and her driving off in the opposite direction with Eva’s car. They had parted on complicated terms, the kind that involved shouting and a sharp intake of breath that felt like regret. She didn’t open the door immediately. She waited to see if Ptolemy would object. The tabby cat, who usually slept in a sunbeam on the windowsill, was currently sprawled across a pile of ancient scrolls, purring softly. Ptolemy tolerated Lucien’s presence with the same weary indifference he offered everyone save for the few things that paid the rent. Aurora engaged the first deadbolt, then the second. Only when the third slid back did she turn the handle. She cracked the wood open so he could see her face, but remain on the threshold of the hallway. Lucien stood there, looking like he had stepped out of a high-end magazine, except for the slight tension at the corners of his mouth. His right eye was amber, his left black, and the dissonance of the colors seemed to track her as she shifted her weight. He held an ivory-handled cane in his right hand, leaning on it with that practiced elegance of a man who knew how to command a room without moving his feet. Aurora crossed her arms over her chest, leaning her back against the doorframe. She felt the rough fabric of her delivery uniform against her shoulder blades. It didn’t belong here, surrounded by the scrolls and research notes that covered every surface. "You’re not supposed to be here, Lucien," she said. Her voice was cool, a reflex to keep the heat of the past from rising in her throat. "Eva said the place was secure." "I can be very insistent," Lucien replied. His accent clipped his final vowels, rolling from the French tongue into English without losing its edge. He didn’t smile. "I came to ask you something. Just one thing." "And I’m supposed to let you in to ask it?" He tilted his head, the movement precise. "Is it safer to keep me out, or to let me in?" Aurora hesitated. The history between them was a knot in her chest. When they had met a year ago, in a quiet café off King’s Cross, he had been just another anomaly in her life. Then he had become her contact, her ally, then something far more dangerous. The attraction had been undeniable, the sharp edge of danger mixing with a magnetic pull she hadn’t known she needed. Until the fight. Until the things left unsaid had turned into things thrown with enough force to bruise. "The deadbolts are there for a reason," she said. "Evan taught me that. You remember Evan." Lucien’s jaw tightened imperceptibly. He knew Evan’s name. He knew about the abuse, about the flight, about what had brought her to London at Eva’s behest. It was one of the reasons he had been in her life—to guard her. He had been a fixer in the supernatural underworld, cleaning up the messes that human eyes couldn't see. "I remember," he said. He took a step forward, into the hallway. The smell of his cologne was sharp, synthetic, cutting through the savory scent of the curry below. "I need to know if you saw the mark." Aurora pushed off the doorframe. She stepped out, closing the gap between them in the narrow corridor. Ptolemy meowed from the pile of books, seemingly unbothered by the proximity of two adults who had once tried to tear the world open to save each other. "There is no mark," she said. "Yesterday," Lucien corrected. He raised the cane slightly. A thin blade glinted in the lamplight as he extended it, then he tucked it away. "From the realm of Avaros. You should have seen it." She looked at him, really looked at him. His hair was perfect, but there was a smudge of dust on his left shoulder. The suit was perfect, but the tie was loose. He had been moving. "I saw nothing," Aurora said. "Because you told me to forget it." "I told you to stay alive." "That’s what you call it." She gestured toward the flat behind him. "Come in. Or don't. Your choice." He nodded once and crossed the threshold. The three deadbolts clicked shut behind him as she re-engaged them. The sound was a period at the end of a sentence. She moved to the small table in the center of the living space and poured two glasses of water from a chipped ceramic jug. Lucien didn’t take one. He walked past the table, the cane tapping lightly against the floorboards. He inspected a stack of research notes on the sofa, his amber and black eyes scanning the handwriting. "You’re working on the ward spells again." "I have to be careful," she said, handing him a glass that he ignored. "Someone told me that Avaros demons don’t leave marks. I should know that." Lucien finally turned to face her. He leaned the cane against the nearest chair, a gesture of trust she didn’t recognize. He took a step closer, close enough that she could count his eyelashes. His presence pressed against her, an invisible force like gravity. "I did not think you would remember the spell," he said softly. "Not after the last time." "I remember everything you touch, Lucien." His eyes searched hers. The heterochromia seemed to swirl as he blinked, a flash of amber and a flash of black. It was a disorienting sight, and yet, it was the only thing that felt real in the room. He reached out a hand, his fingers hovering just above her wrist, near the scar she wore like a medal of survival. "Why did you leave me?" he asked. The question had been waiting in the silence of London, the heat of the curry, and the cold night air for months. "Because I was a liability," she said, her voice dropping. "And you were the only person who knew how to make it worse." "And now?" "Now we are together again." She looked past him, at the tabby cat shifting on the pile of books, then back to his face. "Is that enough?" Lucien’s gaze dropped to her mouth, then back to her eyes. He closed the distance. His free hand came up, brushing a stray strand of straight black hair from her cheek. His touch was warm, contrasting the steel of his demeanor. "It is a start." "We are in a flat on Brick Lane, Lucien. Above a curry house. There are books on the floor and a cat that thinks he owns the place. There are no spells. No marks." Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic rhythm she couldn't suppress. "We just... we just have to figure out how to sit still." He smiled then. It was a small, tight thing, but it softened the hardness of his jaw. "I know how to sit still." He looked at the door, checking the handles one last time. "We will be careful." "I am always careful," Aurora said. "No," Lucien countered, his voice low, resonating in the small space between them. "You are never careful when you are with me." He reached out again, not to touch her skin, but to hover his hand near her arm. The air between them felt charged, heavy with the scent of rain and old paper and that sharp, expensive cologne. It was the kind of moment that had kept them apart, and the kind of moment that had pulled them together from the very beginning. "Stay," he said, though he didn't ask her to stay here. "Stay." Aurora nodded once. She turned to check the locks again, her eyes lingering on the black and amber colors of him. "I am already here." The door was open, the deadbolts secure, and for the first time in months, the silence didn't feel like silence at all. It felt like a breath held at the edge of a blade, waiting to be drawn. Ptolemy meowed again, and the flat seemed to exhale.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.415
leniency0.829
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.049
74.39% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1562
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count2
2
adverb"very"
count2
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
5
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"softly"
2"very"
3"slightly"
4"really"
5"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.39% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1562
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"vibrated"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"magnetic"
count1
5
word"synthetic"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count2
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"silence"
count3
9
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"vibrated"
1"familiar"
2"tension"
3"weight"
4"magnetic"
5"synthetic"
6"perfect"
7"scanning"
8"silence"
9"charged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences106
matches(empty)
75.47% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences106
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1561
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount1287
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.78
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Manchester1
Eva2
Ptolemy4
Lucien10
French1
English1
King1
Cross1
Evan1
London2
Aurora8
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Lucien"
3"King"
4"Cross"
5"Evan"
6"Aurora"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Manchester"
3"French"
4"English"
5"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
52.60% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like regret"
1"pile of books, seemingly unbothered by the p"
2"felt like a breath held at the edge of"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.641
wordCount1561
matches
0"not to touch her skin, but to hover his hand near her arm"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences130
matches
0"notes that covered"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean34.69
std25.37
cv0.731
sampleLengths
067
125
2100
31
456
558
619
796
841
933
1036
1110
1219
1386
1416
1558
1638
1745
186
1934
2036
2112
226
2318
2487
257
2627
2744
2817
296
3061
3129
3223
332
3427
3545
3658
3723
3815
396
4022
4162
4212
4325
4447
98.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences106
matches
0"was dressed"
1"was slicked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs213
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences130
ratio0.008
matches
0"It was one of the reasons he had been in her life—to guard her."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1292
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"cramped, book-stuffed hallway"
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.03637770897832817
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.014705882352941176
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean12.01
std7.65
cv0.637
sampleLengths
027
14
224
312
413
52
65
75
812
918
1012
118
1216
1334
141
158
1627
1721
186
198
2023
2121
228
2311
2419
2524
2623
2730
2813
2913
3015
319
3218
336
347
3517
363
379
3810
397
4012
412
4210
4323
4413
4520
463
4715
489
497
41.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.27692307692307694
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners36
70.92% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences94
matches
0"Only when the third slid"
1"Then he had become her"
ratio0.021
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount58
totalSentences94
matches
0"She stood in the kitchen,"
1"She stared at the wooden"
2"She had insisted on them."
3"It was safer this way."
4"She wiped her hands on"
5"She flexed her fingers, feeling"
6"Her bright blue eyes narrowed,"
7"He wore a tailored charcoal"
8"She hadn’t heard from him"
9"They had parted on complicated"
10"She didn’t open the door"
11"She waited to see if"
12"She cracked the wood open"
13"His right eye was amber,"
14"He held an ivory-handled cane"
15"She felt the rough fabric"
16"It didn’t belong here, surrounded"
17"Her voice was cool, a"
18"His accent clipped his final"
19"He didn’t smile."
ratio0.617
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences94
matches
0"The knock came three sharp"
1"Aurora didn’t move immediately."
2"She stood in the kitchen,"
3"She stared at the wooden"
4"The floorboards were old, settling"
5"She had insisted on them."
6"It was safer this way."
7"She wiped her hands on"
8"She flexed her fingers, feeling"
9"Her bright blue eyes narrowed,"
10"The visitor was dressed in"
11"He wore a tailored charcoal"
12"She hadn’t heard from him"
13"They had parted on complicated"
14"She didn’t open the door"
15"She waited to see if"
16"The tabby cat, who usually"
17"Ptolemy tolerated Lucien’s presence with"
18"Aurora engaged the first deadbolt,"
19"She cracked the wood open"
ratio0.926
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
ratio0
46.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences59
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The knock came three sharp raps against the oak, a rhythm that vibrated through the thin walls of the apartment and up the spine of the hallway."
1"The visitor was dressed in a way that made the cramped, book-stuffed hallway feel suddenly smaller."
2"Not since the argument that had ended in him walking out into the rain of Manchester, and her driving off in the opposite direction with Eva’s car."
3"They had parted on complicated terms, the kind that involved shouting and a sharp intake of breath that felt like regret."
4"Ptolemy tolerated Lucien’s presence with the same weary indifference he offered everyone save for the few things that paid the rent."
5"He held an ivory-handled cane in his right hand, leaning on it with that practiced elegance of a man who knew how to command a room without moving his feet."
6"Ptolemy meowed from the pile of books, seemingly unbothered by the proximity of two adults who had once tried to tear the world open to save each other."
7"It was the kind of moment that had kept them apart, and the kind of moment that had pulled them together from the very beginning."
66.18% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, her voice dropping"
1"Lucien countered, his voice low, resonating in the small space between them"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Lucien corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.317
leniency0.634
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.049
79.0711%