Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBJ2RHHMR4DT4MN03NGYSDF

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44.8s
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$0.017588
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt clicked back with a heavy, metallic thud. Aurora pulled the chain loose and swung the door open before the knock could finish its second rhythm. Lucien stood on the landing, his silhouette cutting through the dim light of the hallway. He wore a charcoal suit that fit too perfectly for a man who dealt in shadows, and the ivory handle of his cane gleamed under the flickering bulb. "You have a habit of breaking into places," Aurora said. She kept her hand on the door, ready to slam it. "I knocked," Lucien replied. His voice carried the smooth, clipped cadence of Marseille. He did not wait for an invitation. He stepped forward, forcing her to retreat into the hallway of her flat. The smell of stale beer from Silas' bar below drifted up through the floorboards, mixing with his scent of old paper and gun oil. "I told you to stay away." "You told me a lot of things," Lucien said. He stopped just inside the threshold. His eyes caught the light, one amber, one black. They fixed on her with predatory precision. "And you still live here. Above a pub. A bold choice for a woman on the run." Aurora crossed her arms over her chest. The movement pulled her sleeve back, exposing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. Lucien's gaze dropped to it, then returned to her face. "I am not on the run," she lied. "Of course not." Lucien tapped his cane against the wooden floor. *Click. Click.* "Then why do you keep the curtains drawn? Why do you check the locks three times before bed?" "Because I like privacy." "Privacy is for the guilty." He moved past her, into the main room. The space was cramped, cluttered with delivery bags and unpaid bills. He ignored the mess, his boots silent on the floor. He stopped by the small window, peering out at the London street below. "You look tired, Rory." "Go home, Lucien." "I cannot." He turned to face her. The heterochromatic eyes narrowed. "I found something. Something you need to see." Aurora walked to the kitchen counter. She needed to put distance between them. Her fingers curled around the handle of a knife hidden beneath a chopping board. "I don't want your help." "I did not ask for your permission." Lucien reached into his jacket. Aurora tensed, her grip tightening on the knife. He produced a folded photograph and tossed it onto the counter. It slid across the wood, stopping inches from her hand. She looked down. It was a picture of Evan. He stood outside a building she recognised. The old solicitor's office in Cardiff. He looked older, harder. The photo was fresh. "How did you get this?" Aurora asked. Her voice shook, just once. "Connections." Lucien leaned against the wall, crossing his ankles. "He is not staying in Cardiff. He moved to London last week." Aurora's heart hammered against her ribs. She pushed the photo away. "He doesn't know I'm here." "He knows," Lucien said. "He knows you work for the Golden Empress. He knows you live above Silas." Aurora dropped the knife. It clattered onto the counter. "You told him." "I told no one." Lucien pushed off the wall. He closed the distance between them in two long strides. He stopped inches from her. She could see the fine lines around his eyes, the tension in his jaw. "I am the only reason he has not found you yet. But my protection has an expiration date." "Why?" "Because the debt is coming due." He reached out, his hand hovering near her face. She flinched. He paused, then withdrew his hand. "You owe me, Aurora. For what I did in Marseille." "I never asked you to intervene." "You did not have to." Lucien's expression hardened. "You think you are safe because you changed your name? Because you cut your hair? He is a barrister. He knows how to find people. He knows how to break them." Aurora turned away. She walked to the small table and poured a glass of water. Her hands trembled as she lifted it. "What do you want?" "Information." Lucien took a step closer. "There is a shipment moving through the docks tonight. Illegal. Supernatural. I need a delivery driver who knows the streets." "You want me to drive a truck?" "I want you to deliver a package." Lucien's voice dropped low. "It is dangerous. But it is the only way to keep Evan away. If I have leverage, I have power. If I have power, I keep you safe." Aurora set the glass down. The water rippled. "And if I say no?" "Then you are on your own." Lucien turned toward the door. He reached for the handle. "I will be at the docks in an hour. The warehouse on the Isle of Dogs. Come if you want to survive." "Lucien." He stopped. He did not turn around. "Why did you come back?" He looked over his shoulder. The amber eye glowed in the dim light. "Because I made a mistake once. I will not make it twice." He opened the door. The noise from the bar below surged up, a roar of laughter and clinking glass. He stepped out into the hallway. "Wait," Aurora said. Lucien paused. His hand rested on the cane. "I need to pack." "Ten minutes." Lucien closed the door. The lock clicked. Aurora stood alone in the silence. She looked at the photograph of Evan on the counter. The ink seemed to bleed into the paper. She grabbed her coat. She grabbed the knife. She grabbed the keys. She opened the door to leave. A figure stood in the hallway. A man in a grey hood. He did not speak. He held a gun. Aurora froze. The man raised the weapon. "Lucien," she whispered. The man smiled. It was not a friendly smile. "Lucien is not here," the man said. "He is dead." Aurora's hand went to her pocket. She pulled out the phone. She dialled the number she had memorised. "Pick up," she hissed. The gun cocked. The man stepped forward. The phone rang once. Twice. Aurora threw the phone at the man's face. He flinched. She grabbed the knife from her pocket and slashed at his hand. The gun clattered to the floor. She kicked it away. The man roared and lunged. Aurora ran. She ran into the flat and slammed the door. She locked the deadbolt. She locked the chain. She heard the wood splinter on the other side. She ran to the window. The street below was dark. A car idled at the curb. The engine purred. She opened the window. The cold air hit her face. She looked down. Three storeys. The door handle turned. The lock gave way. Aurora climbed onto the sill. She looked back at the door. It burst open. The man stood there. He raised his hand. Aurora jumped. She fell into the darkness. The car door opened. A hand reached out. Lucien caught her. He pulled her into the car. He slammed the door. "Drive," he said. The car sped away. Aurora looked at Lucien. His suit was torn. Blood stained his collar. "You said he was dead," she said. "I lied," Lucien said. He looked at her. "He is not dead. He is worse." The car turned a corner. The streetlights blurred. "Where are we going?" "Somewhere safe," Lucien said. "Is there such a thing?" Lucien did not answer. He looked out the window. The city lights reflected in his eyes. "Drive faster," he said. The driver nodded. The engine roared. Aurora looked at her wrist. The scar throbbed. She looked at Lucien. He looked at her. "We are not safe," she said. "No," Lucien agreed. "We are not." He reached into his pocket. He pulled out a small box. He opened it. Inside was a ring. A silver band with a black stone. "Put this on," he said. Aurora looked at the ring. "Why?" "It will hide you." "Hide me from what?" "From him." Aurora took the ring. She slid it onto her finger. It fit perfectly. "Who is he?" Lucien looked at her. The amber eye burned. "Your father," he said. Aurora's breath caught. "What?" "He is not your father," Lucien said. "He is your maker." The car hit a bump. The ring glowed. Aurora looked at her hand. The skin turned grey. "What did you do to me?" "I saved you," Lucien said. "From what?" "From yourself." The car stopped. The door opened. "Get out," Lucien said. Aurora looked at him. "I am not going anywhere." Lucien smiled. It was a cruel smile. "You have no choice." He pushed her out of the car. She fell onto the pavement. The door slammed. The car drove away. She stood up. She looked at the ring. It pulsed. She looked at the building in front of her. It was a church. The doors were open. She walked inside. A voice spoke from the shadows. "Welcome home, daughter." Aurora turned. A figure stood in the light. He looked like Evan. But not Evan. He smiled. "Come here," he said. Aurora stepped forward. The door closed behind her. The light went out. The end.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags34
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences80
tagDensity0.425
leniency0.85
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1545
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count2
highlights
0"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
83.82% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1545
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"tension"
count1
1
word"trembled"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"throbbed"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"tension"
1"trembled"
2"silence"
3"throbbed"
4"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences207
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences207
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences251
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords2
totalWords1545
ratio0.001
matches
0"Click. Click."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions27
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions61
wordCount1070
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.52
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Marseille1
Lucien27
London1
Aurora27
Evan4
Cardiff1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Aurora"
2"Evan"
places
0"Marseille"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.238
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1545
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences251
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs117
mean13.21
std13.35
cv1.011
sampleLengths
070
121
257
36
448
532
68
731
84
951
103
1119
1232
1341
1430
1512
1621
1716
1818
1912
2056
211
2233
236
2439
2526
2626
277
2839
2913
3038
311
327
335
3425
3525
363
378
384
399
4036
416
4220
437
443
459
4610
4718
484
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences207
matches
0"was torn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs234
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences251
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount421
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.026128266033254157
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.007125890736342043
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences251
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences251
mean6.16
std4.54
cv0.737
sampleLengths
09
118
215
328
410
511
64
79
87
913
1024
116
129
136
149
157
1617
177
1815
1910
208
2111
221
2319
244
2513
2611
2710
2813
294
303
317
324
338
346
357
3614
375
3812
398
4011
4110
423
436
447
456
464
474
487
495
35.66% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats36
diversityRatio0.18725099601593626
totalSentences251
uniqueOpeners47
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences169
matches(empty)
ratio0
30.65% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount80
totalSentences169
matches
0"He wore a charcoal suit"
1"She kept her hand on"
2"His voice carried the smooth,"
3"He did not wait for"
4"He stepped forward, forcing her"
5"He stopped just inside the"
6"His eyes caught the light,"
7"They fixed on her with"
8"He moved past her, into"
9"He ignored the mess, his"
10"He stopped by the small"
11"He turned to face her"
12"She needed to put distance"
13"Her fingers curled around the"
14"He produced a folded photograph"
15"It slid across the wood,"
16"She looked down."
17"It was a picture of"
18"He stood outside a building"
19"He looked older, harder."
ratio0.473
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount167
totalSentences169
matches
0"The deadbolt clicked back with"
1"Aurora pulled the chain loose"
2"Lucien stood on the landing,"
3"He wore a charcoal suit"
4"She kept her hand on"
5"His voice carried the smooth,"
6"He did not wait for"
7"He stepped forward, forcing her"
8"The smell of stale beer"
9"He stopped just inside the"
10"His eyes caught the light,"
11"They fixed on her with"
12"Aurora crossed her arms over"
13"The movement pulled her sleeve"
14"Lucien's gaze dropped to it,"
15"Lucien tapped his cane against"
16"He moved past her, into"
17"The space was cramped, cluttered"
18"He ignored the mess, his"
19"He stopped by the small"
ratio0.988
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences169
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences19
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He wore a charcoal suit that fit too perfectly for a man who dealt in shadows, and the ivory handle of his cane gleamed under the flickering bulb."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags34
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He reached out, his hand hovering near her face"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags22
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she lied (lie)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"she hissed (hiss)"
3"Lucien agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences80
tagDensity0.275
leniency0.55
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.1
81.4552%