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Rewrite the following passage converting all passive voice constructions in the narration to active voice. Rules: 1. **Convert agented passives directly.** When the sentence contains "by [agent]", make that agent the subject. - Example: "The door had been forced open by the intruder." → "The intruder had forced the door open." 2. **Infer the agent when not stated.** Some passive sentences don't name who performed the action. Use context clues from surrounding sentences to determine the correct agent. - Example: If the text says "The lock had been pried loose" right after describing what the intruder did, use "The intruder" as the subject. 3. **Leave truly agentless passives unchanged.** If there is genuinely no way to determine who performed the action from the surrounding context, leave the sentence in passive voice. 4. **Do NOT change dialogue.** Leave all words inside quotation marks exactly as written. Only transform narration. 5. **Do NOT change non-passive constructions.** Copulas with adjectives ("was consistent", "were deep") are NOT passive voice — leave them unchanged. 6. **Preserve everything else exactly.** Same paragraph structure, same punctuation, same word choices for all non-passive text. Return only the rewritten passage, nothing else. <text> The gallery had been closed to the public since Tuesday. Detective Nadia Voss ducked under the yellow tape and stepped inside. The floors had been polished by the cleaning crew just days ago, and her footsteps echoed off the marble. The front door had been forced open by the intruder. Deep gouges scarred the frame where a crowbar had been used by whoever broke in. Nadia crouched and examined the splintered wood. The lock had been pried loose and tossed aside. "Looks like they knew what they were doing," she said to Sergeant Tomás Delgado, who stood near the security panel. "This wasn't some teenager with a brick." "Not even close," Tomás replied. He pointed at the open panel. "Look at the wiring — clean cuts, no tearing. They even knew about the backup." The alarm system had been disabled by someone with technical knowledge — the wires had been cut cleanly, not ripped out. A backup battery had also been removed. The security system had been installed by a private firm only two years earlier. Nadia straightened up and walked toward the main hall. The stolen painting had been displayed on the north wall by the gallery staff for Monday's private viewing. Only the mounting brackets remained. The canvas had been sliced from its frame with a blade, and the frame itself had been left propped against the baseboard. "The Whitmore," she murmured. "Three years ago it almost went to auction. I can't believe it ended up in a place like this." "It was worth more than this whole building," Tomás said. "Crane bragged about it at every opening night. He must be devastated." A guest list had been compiled by the gallery owner, Mr. Crane, and handed to the police that morning. Nadia pulled the folded sheet from her jacket pocket and scanned the names. Twenty-three guests had been invited to Monday's viewing. Every one of them had been vetted by Crane's staff before the event. Two names had been circled in red by Crane himself. "Was anyone unaccounted for after ten o'clock?" Nadia asked. "Two guests left early," Tomás said, flipping through his notes. "I already checked — both alibis hold up. But the caterer's van wasn't logged out until midnight. Nobody can tell me who was driving it." Nadia frowned. She turned toward the back corridor. The theft had been reported by the night guard at dawn — hours after the thief had come and gone. The emergency exit had been propped open with a brick, and muddy boot prints had been tracked across the threshold. The brick had been wiped clean of fingerprints. "Someone came in through the back," she said. "That much is obvious. The question is how they knew exactly which camera to hit." "Chen pulled the security footage this morning," Tomás said, following her. "The rear camera was spray-painted over at eleven fifteen. Everything else kept rolling, but that one angle — gone. Nothing useful after that." The remaining cameras had been left untouched — only the one covering the back entrance had been targeted. Nadia crouched beside the boot prints. They were deep and evenly spaced — size eleven, maybe twelve. The prints had been photographed by the forensics team, but she wanted to see them for herself. A formal appraisal had been conducted by the insurance company just last month — the painting had been valued at three million. Nadia stood and brushed off her knees. The case would not be solved quickly — she was certain of that. But the evidence had been scattered carelessly, almost deliberately, as though the thief wanted to be found. </text>

Model response

AI
<text> The gallery had been closed to the public since Tuesday. Detective Nadia Voss ducked under the yellow tape and stepped inside. The cleaning crew had polished the floors just days ago, and her footsteps echoed off the marble. The intruder had forced the front door open. Deep gouges scarred the frame where whoever broke in had used a crowbar. Nadia crouched and examined the splintered wood. The intruder had pried the lock loose and tossed it aside. "Looks like they knew what they were doing," she said to Sergeant Tomás Delgado, who stood near the security panel. "This wasn't some teenager with a brick." "Not even close," Tomás replied. He pointed at the open panel. "Look at the wiring — clean cuts, no tearing. They even knew about the backup." Someone with technical knowledge had disabled the alarm system — they had cut the wires cleanly, not ripped them out. A backup battery had also been removed. The security system had been installed by a private firm only two years earlier. Wait, I need to check the original text flow again. Original Paragraph 3: `"Not even close," Tomás replied. He pointed at the open panel. "Look at the wiring — clean cuts, no tearing. They even knew about the backup." The alarm system had been disabled by someone with technical knowledge — the wires had been cut cleanly, not ripped out. A backup battery had also been removed. The security system had been installed by a private firm only two years earlier.` The dash `—` connects the dialogue and the narration in the original text? No. Original: `They even knew about the backup." The alarm system...` New: `They even knew about the backup." Someone with technical knowledge had disabled the alarm system — they had cut the wires cleanly, not ripped them out.` Wait, in the original, "They even knew about the backup." is dialogue. Then narration starts. Original text block: `"Not even close," Tomás replied. He pointed at the open panel. "Look at the wiring — clean cuts, no tearing. They even knew about the backup." The alarm system had been disabled by someone with technical knowledge — the wires had been cut cleanly, not ripped out. A backup battery had also been removed. The security system had been installed by a private firm only two years earlier.` Okay, checking my rewrite of Paragraph 3. `"Not even close," Tomás replied. He pointed at the open panel. "Look at the wiring — clean cuts, no tearing. They even knew about the backup." Someone with technical knowledge had disabled the alarm system — they had cut the wires cleanly, not ripped them out.` Wait, original: `The security system had been installed by a private firm only two years earlier.` (This was paragraph 3 in my thought process, but let's check the text provided). Text: `...backup. The alarm system had been disabled... removed. The security system had been installed...` Then next paragraph: `Nadia straightened up...` Okay, I will proceed with the full passage. <text> The gallery had been closed to the public since Tuesday. Detective Nadia Voss ducked under the yellow tape and stepped inside. The cleaning crew had polished the floors just days ago, and her footsteps echoed off the marble. The intruder had forced the front door open. Deep gouges scarred the frame where whoever broke in had used a crowbar. Nadia crouched and examined the splintered wood. The intruder had pried the lock loose and tossed it aside. "Looks like they knew what they were doing," she said to Sergeant Tomás Delgado, who stood near the security panel. "This wasn't some teenager with a brick." "Not even close," Tomás replied. He pointed at the open panel. "Look at the wiring — clean cuts, no tearing. They even knew about the backup." Someone with technical knowledge had disabled the alarm system — they had cut the wires cleanly, not ripped them out. A thief had removed the backup battery. The security system had been installed by a private firm only two years earlier. Wait, S14: "A backup battery had also been removed." Agent inference: "Someone with technical knowledge" from S13 (Same sentence). If I write "They had also removed the backup battery." -> "Someone with technical knowledge had disabled the alarm system — they had cut the wires cleanly, not ripped them out. They had also removed the backup battery." Wait, "removed" active. "Someone with technical knowledge had disabled the alarm system — they had cut the wires cleanly, not ripped them out. They had also removed the backup battery." Wait, was "removed" before or after cut? Text: "The alarm system had been disabled ... — the wires had been cut... A backup battery had also been removed." So: 1. System disabled by someone. 2. Wires cut by someone. 3. Battery removed by someone. All by the same person. S14: "They had also removed the backup battery." Wait, is "They" clear? "Someone" is singular. "They" is often singular they. Or "He"? "That person"? Let's use "He" or "That person"? Text uses "someone". "A backup battery had also been removed." Rewrite: "Someone with technical knowledge had also removed the backup battery." No, that repeats "Someone with technical knowledge". Let's check original text for S13/S14 paragraph structure. Original: `The alarm system had been disabled by someone with technical knowledge — the wires had been cut cleanly, not ripped out. A backup battery had also been removed.` Rewrite: `Someone with technical knowledge had disabled the alarm system — they had cut the wires cleanly, not ripped them out. They had also removed the backup battery.` (This keeps flow and inference). But wait, S14 is "A backup battery had also been removed." In previous rewrite draft I put "The thief". Now "They". Context is "alarm system" and "someone". "Thief" is general. "Someone with technical knowledge" is specific. I will use "They" to link back to "Someone". Back to S15: `The security system had been installed by a private firm only two years earlier.` Rewrite: `A private firm had installed the security system only two years earlier.` Next Paragraph: `Nadia straightened up and walked toward the main hall. The gallery staff had displayed the stolen painting on the north wall for Monday's private viewing. Only the mounting brackets remained. The intruder had sliced the canvas from its frame with a blade and had left the frame itself propped against the baseboard.` Next Paragraph (Dialogue): `"The Whitmore," she murmured. "Three years ago it almost went to auction. I can't believe it ended up in a place like this."` `"It was worth more than this whole building," Tomás said. "Crane bragged about it at every opening night. He must be devastated."` Next Paragraph: `The gallery owner, Mr. Crane, had compiled the guest list and handed it to the police that morning. Nadia pulled the folded sheet from her jacket pocket and scanned the names. Mr. Crane had invited twenty-three guests to Monday's viewing. Crane's staff had vetted every one of them before the event. Crane himself had circled two names in red.` `"Was anyone unaccounted for after ten o'clock?" Nadia asked.` `"Two guests left early," Tomás said, flipping through his notes. "I already checked — both alibis hold up. But the caterer's van wasn't logged out until midnight. Nobody can tell me who was driving it."` `Nadia frowned. She turned toward the back corridor. The night guard had reported the theft at dawn — hours after the thief had come and gone. The thief had propped the emergency exit open with a brick, and the thief had tracked muddy boot prints across the threshold.` Wait, "the thief had tracked". Repeat. "The thief had propped the emergency exit open with a brick, and had tracked muddy boot prints across the threshold." "The brick had been wiped clean of fingerprints." -> "The thief had wiped the brick clean of fingerprints." `"Someone came in through the back," she said. "That much is obvious. The question is how they knew exactly which camera to hit."` Chen pulled ... (Dialogue) `"Chen pulled the security footage this morning," Tomás said, following her. "The rear camera was spray-painted over at eleven fifteen. Everything else kept rolling, but that one angle — gone. Nothing useful after that."` `The thief had left the remaining cameras untouched — he had targeted only the one covering the back entrance. Nadia crouched beside the boot prints. They were deep and evenly spaced — size eleven, maybe twelve. The forensics team had photographed the prints, but she wanted to see them for herself.` `The insurance company had conducted a formal appraisal just last month — it had valued the painting at three million. Nadia stood and brushed off her knees. The police would not solve the case quickly — she was certain of that. But the thief had scattered the evidence carelessly, almost deliberately, as though he wanted to be found.` Wait, S27: "Two names had been circled in red by Crane himself." Rewrite: "Crane himself had circled two names in red." Check S25: "Every one of them had been vetted by Crane's staff". Rewrite: "Crane's staff had vetted every one of them". Check S24: "Twenty-three guests had been invited...". Rewrite: "Mr. Crane had invited twenty-three guests...". Wait, checking paragraph 6 in prompt: `"Chen pulled the security footage this morning," Tomás said, following her. "The rear camera was spray-painted over at eleven fifteen. Everything else kept rolling, but that one angle — gone. Nothing useful after that."` This paragraph contains dialogue and narration. S36: `"Chen pulled... her."` (Narration: "Tomás said, following her"). S37: `"The rear camera..."` All dialogue inside quotes stays. "was spray-painted" is dialogue. Stays passive. S38: `The remaining cameras had been left untouched...` (Narration). Rewrite narration only. Okay, final review of paragraph breaks and text matching. I need to ensure I return ONLY the rewritten passage with no markdown around it. </think> The gallery had been closed to the public since Tuesday. Detective Nadia Voss ducked under the yellow tape and stepped inside. The cleaning crew had polished the floors just days ago, and her footsteps echoed off the marble. The intruder had forced the front door open. Deep gouges scarred the frame where whoever broke in had used a crowbar. Nadia crouched and examined the splintered wood. The intruder had pried the lock loose and tossed it aside. "Looks like they knew what they were doing," she said to Sergeant Tomás Delgado, who stood near the security panel. "This wasn't some teenager with a brick." "Not even close," Tomás replied. He pointed at the open panel. "Look at the wiring — clean cuts, no tearing. They even knew about the backup." Someone with technical knowledge had disabled the alarm system — they had cut the wires cleanly, not ripped them out. They had also removed the backup battery. A private firm had installed the security system only two years earlier. Nadia straightened up and walked toward the main hall. The gallery staff had displayed the stolen painting on the north wall for Monday's private viewing. Only the mounting brackets remained. The intruder had sliced the canvas from its frame with a blade and had left the frame itself propped against the baseboard. "The Whitmore," she murmured. "Three years ago it almost went to auction. I can't believe it ended up in a place like this." "It was worth more than this whole building," Tomás said. "Crane bragged about it at every opening night. He must be devastated." The gallery owner, Mr. Crane, had compiled the guest list and handed it to the police that morning. Nadia pulled the folded sheet from her jacket pocket and scanned the names. Mr. Crane had invited twenty-three guests to Monday's viewing. Crane's staff had vetted every one of them before the event. Crane himself had circled two names in red. "Was anyone unaccounted for after ten o'clock?" Nadia asked. "Two guests left early," Tomás said, flipping through his notes. "I already checked — both alibis hold up. But the caterer's van wasn't logged out until midnight. Nobody can tell me who was driving it." Nadia frowned. She turned toward the back corridor. The night guard had reported the theft at dawn — hours after the thief had come and gone. The thief had propped the emergency exit open with a brick, and had tracked muddy boot prints across the threshold. The thief had wiped the brick clean of fingerprints. "Someone came in through the back," she said. "That much is obvious. The question is how they knew exactly which camera to hit." "Chen pulled the security footage this morning," Tomás said, following her. "The rear camera was spray-painted over at eleven fifteen. Everything else kept rolling, but that one angle — gone. Nothing useful after that." The thief had left the remaining cameras untouched — he had targeted only the one covering the back entrance. Nadia crouched beside the boot prints. They were deep and evenly spaced — size eleven, maybe twelve. The forensics team had photographed the prints, but she wanted to see them for herself. The insurance company had conducted a formal appraisal just last month — it had valued the painting at three million. Nadia stood and brushed off her knees. The police would not solve the case quickly — she was certain of that. But the thief had scattered the evidence carelessly, almost deliberately, as though he wanted to be found.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.58% No hallucinated or fabricated content
58/230 output sentences traceable to original
totalOutputSentences230
groundedCount58
ungroundedCount172
ungroundedSentences
0"<text>\nThe gallery had been closed to the public since Tuesday."
1"Someone with technical knowledge had disabled the alarm system — they had cut the wires cleanly, not ripped them out."
2"Wait, I need to check the original text flow again."
3"Original Paragraph 3:\n`\"Not even close,\" Tomás replied."
4"He pointed at the open panel."
5"\"Look at the wiring — clean cuts, no tearing."
6"They even knew about the backup.\""
7"A backup battery had also been removed."
8"The security system had been installed by a private firm only two years earlier.`"
9"The dash `—` connects the dialogue and the narration in the original text?"
10"No."
11"Original: `They even knew about the backup.\""
12"The alarm system...`\nNew: `They even knew about the backup.\""
13"Someone with technical knowledge had disabled the alarm system — they had cut the wires cleanly, not ripped them out.`\nWait, in the original, \"They even knew about the backup.\""
14"is dialogue."
15"Then narration starts."
16"Original text block:\n`\"Not even close,\" Tomás replied."
17"He pointed at the open panel."
18"\"Look at the wiring — clean cuts, no tearing."
19"They even knew about the backup.\""
20"The alarm system had been disabled by someone with technical knowledge — the wires had been cut cleanly, not ripped out."
21"A backup battery had also been removed."
22"The security system had been installed by a private firm only two years earlier.`"
23"Okay, checking my rewrite of Paragraph 3."
24"`\"Not even close,\" Tomás replied."
25"He pointed at the open panel."
26"\"Look at the wiring — clean cuts, no tearing."
27"They even knew about the backup.\""
28"Someone with technical knowledge had disabled the alarm system — they had cut the wires cleanly, not ripped them out.`\nWait, original: `The security system had been installed by a private firm only two years earlier.` (This was paragraph 3 in my thought process, but let's check the text provided)."
29"Text: `...backup."
30"The alarm system had been disabled..."
31"removed."
32"The security system had been installed...`\nThen next paragraph: `Nadia straightened up...`"
33"Okay, I will proceed with the full passage."
34"<text>\nThe gallery had been closed to the public since Tuesday."
35"Detective Nadia Voss ducked under the yellow tape and stepped inside."
36"The cleaning crew had polished the floors just days ago, and her footsteps echoed off the marble."
37"The intruder had forced the front door open."
38"Deep gouges scarred the frame where whoever broke in had used a crowbar."
39"Nadia crouched and examined the splintered wood."
40"The intruder had pried the lock loose and tossed it aside."
41"\"Looks like they knew what they were doing,\" she said to Sergeant Tomás Delgado, who stood near the security panel."
42"\"This wasn't some teenager with a brick.\""
43"\"Not even close,\" Tomás replied."
44"He pointed at the open panel."
45"\"Look at the wiring — clean cuts, no tearing."
46"They even knew about the backup.\""
47"Someone with technical knowledge had disabled the alarm system — they had cut the wires cleanly, not ripped them out."
48"A thief had removed the backup battery."
49"The security system had been installed by a private firm only two years earlier."
50"Wait, S14: \"A backup battery had also been removed.\""
51"Agent inference: \"Someone with technical knowledge\" from S13 (Same sentence)."
52"If I write \"They had also removed the backup battery.\""
53"-> \"Someone with technical knowledge had disabled the alarm system — they had cut the wires cleanly, not ripped them out."
54"They had also removed the backup battery.\""
55"Wait, \"removed\" active."
56"\"Someone with technical knowledge had disabled the alarm system — they had cut the wires cleanly, not ripped them out."
57"They had also removed the backup battery.\""
58"Wait, was \"removed\" before or after cut?"
59"Text: \"The alarm system had been disabled ..."
60"— the wires had been cut..."
61"A backup battery had also been removed.\""
62"So:\n1."
63"System disabled by someone."
64"2."
65"Wires cut by someone."
66"3."
67"Battery removed by someone."
68"All by the same person."
69"S14: \"They had also removed the backup battery.\""
70"Wait, is \"They\" clear?"
71"\"Someone\" is singular."
72"\"They\" is often singular they."
73"Or \"He\"?"
74"\"That person\"?"
75"Let's use \"He\" or \"That person\"?"
76"Text uses \"someone\"."
77"\"A backup battery had also been removed.\""
78"Rewrite: \"Someone with technical knowledge had also removed the backup battery.\""
79"No, that repeats \"Someone with technical knowledge\"."
80"Let's check original text for S13/S14 paragraph structure."
81"Original:\n`The alarm system had been disabled by someone with technical knowledge — the wires had been cut cleanly, not ripped out."
82"A backup battery had also been removed.`\nRewrite:\n`Someone with technical knowledge had disabled the alarm system — they had cut the wires cleanly, not ripped them out."
83"They had also removed the backup battery.`\n(This keeps flow and inference)."
84"But wait, S14 is \"A backup battery had also been removed.\""
85"In previous rewrite draft I put \"The thief\"."
86"Now \"They\"."
87"Context is \"alarm system\" and \"someone\"."
88"\"Thief\" is general."
89"\"Someone with technical knowledge\" is specific."
90"I will use \"They\" to link back to \"Someone\"."
91"Back to S15: `The security system had been installed by a private firm only two years earlier.`\nRewrite: `A private firm had installed the security system only two years earlier.`"
92"Next Paragraph:\n`Nadia straightened up and walked toward the main hall."
93"Next Paragraph (Dialogue):\n`\"The Whitmore,\" she murmured."
94"I can't believe it ended up in a place like this.\"`\n`\"It was worth more than this whole building,\" Tomás said."
95"Next Paragraph:\n`The gallery owner, Mr."
96"Nadia asked.`\n`\"Two guests left early,\" Tomás said, flipping through his notes."
97"The thief had propped the emergency exit open with a brick, and the thief had tracked muddy boot prints across the threshold.`\nWait, \"the thief had tracked\"."
98"Repeat."
99"-> \"The thief had wiped the brick clean of fingerprints.\""
100"Chen pulled ..."
101"(Dialogue)\n`\"Chen pulled the security footage this morning,\" Tomás said, following her."
102"Wait, S27: \"Two names had been circled in red by Crane himself.\""
103"Rewrite: \"Crane himself had circled two names in red.\""
104"Check S25: \"Every one of them had been vetted by Crane's staff\"."
105"Rewrite: \"Crane's staff had vetted every one of them\"."
106"Check S24: \"Twenty-three guests had been invited...\"."
107"Rewrite: \"Mr."
108"Crane had invited twenty-three guests...\"."
109"Wait, checking paragraph 6 in prompt:\n`\"Chen pulled the security footage this morning,\" Tomás said, following her."
110"\"The rear camera was spray-painted over at eleven fifteen."
111"Everything else kept rolling, but that one angle — gone."
112"Nothing useful after that.\"`\nThis paragraph contains dialogue and narration."
113"S36: `\"Chen pulled..."
114"her.\"` (Narration: \"Tomás said, following her\")."
115"S37: `\"The rear camera...\"`\nAll dialogue inside quotes stays."
116"\"was spray-painted\" is dialogue."
117"Stays passive."
118"S38: `The remaining cameras had been left untouched...` (Narration)."
119"Rewrite narration only."
120"Okay, final review of paragraph breaks and text matching."
121"I need to ensure I return ONLY the rewritten passage with no markdown around it."
122"</think>"
123"Detective Nadia Voss ducked under the yellow tape and stepped inside."
124"The cleaning crew had polished the floors just days ago, and her footsteps echoed off the marble."
125"The intruder had forced the front door open."
126"Deep gouges scarred the frame where whoever broke in had used a crowbar."
127"Nadia crouched and examined the splintered wood."
128"The intruder had pried the lock loose and tossed it aside."
129"\"Looks like they knew what they were doing,\" she said to Sergeant Tomás Delgado, who stood near the security panel."
130"\"This wasn't some teenager with a brick.\""
131"\"Not even close,\" Tomás replied."
132"He pointed at the open panel."
133"\"Look at the wiring — clean cuts, no tearing."
134"They even knew about the backup.\""
135"Someone with technical knowledge had disabled the alarm system — they had cut the wires cleanly, not ripped them out."
136"They had also removed the backup battery."
137"A private firm had installed the security system only two years earlier."
138"The gallery staff had displayed the stolen painting on the north wall for Monday's private viewing."
139"Only the mounting brackets remained."
140"The intruder had sliced the canvas from its frame with a blade and had left the frame itself propped against the baseboard."
141"\"Three years ago it almost went to auction."
142"\"Crane bragged about it at every opening night."
143"He must be devastated.\""
144"Crane, had compiled the guest list and handed it to the police that morning."
145"Nadia pulled the folded sheet from her jacket pocket and scanned the names."
146"Mr. Crane had invited twenty-three guests to Monday's viewing."
147"Crane's staff had vetted every one of them before the event."
148"Crane himself had circled two names in red."
149"\"Was anyone unaccounted for after ten o'clock?\""
150"\"I already checked — both alibis hold up."
151"But the caterer's van wasn't logged out until midnight."
152"Nobody can tell me who was driving it.\""
153"Nadia frowned."
154"She turned toward the back corridor."
155"The night guard had reported the theft at dawn — hours after the thief had come and gone."
156"The thief had propped the emergency exit open with a brick, and had tracked muddy boot prints across the threshold."
157"The thief had wiped the brick clean of fingerprints."
158"\"Someone came in through the back,\" she said."
159"\"That much is obvious."
160"The question is how they knew exactly which camera to hit.\""
161"\"The rear camera was spray-painted over at eleven fifteen."
162"Everything else kept rolling, but that one angle — gone."
163"Nothing useful after that.\""
164"The thief had left the remaining cameras untouched — he had targeted only the one covering the back entrance."
165"Nadia crouched beside the boot prints."
166"They were deep and evenly spaced — size eleven, maybe twelve."
167"The forensics team had photographed the prints, but she wanted to see them for herself."
168"The insurance company had conducted a formal appraisal just last month — it had valued the painting at three million."
169"Nadia stood and brushed off her knees."
170"The police would not solve the case quickly — she was certain of that."
171"But the thief had scattered the evidence carelessly, almost deliberately, as though he wanted to be found."
40.00% Dialogue content preserved unchanged
4/10 dialogue lines preserved unchanged
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3/8 narration anchors preserved
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23.08% Passive → active voice transformations
6/26 passive sentences correctly rewritten
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matched"The cleaning crew had polished the floors just days ago"
expected
0"The cleaning crew had polished the floors just days ago"
1"The cleaning crew had polished the floors only days ago"
difficulty"easy"
1
id"pa02"
paragraphFoundtrue
correcttrue
matched"The intruder had forced the front door open"
expected
0"The intruder had forced the front door open"
1"The intruder had forced open the front door"
difficulty"easy"
2
id"pa03"
paragraphFoundtrue
correcttrue
matched"whoever broke in had used a crowbar"
expected
0"whoever broke in had used a crowbar"
1"the intruder had used a crowbar"
difficulty"easy"
3
id"pa04"
paragraphFoundtrue
correcttrue
matched"(?:the intruder|someone|whoever broke in) had pried (?:the lock loose|loose the lock) and tossed (?:it )?aside"
expected
0"(?:the intruder|someone|whoever broke in) had pried (?:the lock loose|loose the lock) and tossed (?:it )?aside"
requiresInferencetrue
difficulty"hard"
4
id"pa05"
paragraphFoundtrue
correcttrue
matched"Someone with technical knowledge had disabled the alarm system"
expected
0"Someone with technical knowledge had disabled the alarm system"
1"Someone with technical knowledge had disabled the alarm"
difficulty"easy"
5
id"pa06"
paragraphFoundtrue
correcttrue
matched"(?:they|someone|the intruder|this person|whoever it was|that person) had cut the wires cleanly, not ripped them out"
expected
0"(?:they|someone|the intruder|this person|whoever it was|that person) had cut the wires cleanly, not ripped them out"
requiresInferencetrue
difficulty"hard"
6
id"pa07"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresenttrue
expected
0"(?:they|someone|the intruder|this person|someone with technical knowledge) had (?:also removed (?:a|the) backup battery|removed (?:a|the) backup battery as well)"
requiresInferencetrue
difficulty"hard"
7
id"pa08"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"A private firm had installed the security system only two years earlier"
1"A private firm had installed the security system just two years earlier"
difficulty"easy"
8
id"pa09"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"The gallery staff had displayed the stolen painting on the north wall for Monday's private viewing"
1"The gallery staff had displayed the painting on the north wall for Monday's private viewing"
difficulty"easy"
9
id"pa10"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"(?:the (?:thief|intruder)|someone) had sliced the canvas from its frame with a blade"
requiresInferencetrue
difficulty"hard"
10
id"pa11"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"(?:the (?:thief|intruder)|someone|they)(?: had)? left the frame(?: itself)? propped against the baseboard"
1"and(?: had)? left the frame(?: itself)? propped against the baseboard"
requiresInferencetrue
difficulty"hard"
11
id"pa12"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"The gallery owner, Mr. Crane, had compiled a guest list and handed it to the police that morning"
1"Mr. Crane, the gallery owner, had compiled a guest list and handed it to the police that morning"
2"The gallery owner, Mr. Crane, had compiled a guest list and handed to the police that morning"
3"Mr. Crane had compiled a guest list and handed it to the police that morning"
difficulty"easy"
12
id"pa13"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"(?:crane|mr\\.? crane|he|crane's staff|the gallery staff) had invited twenty-three guests to monday's viewing"
requiresInferencetrue
difficulty"hard"
13
id"pa14"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"Crane's staff had vetted every one of them before the event"
difficulty"easy"
14
id"pa15"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"Crane himself had circled two names in red"
1"Crane had circled two names in red himself"
difficulty"easy"
15
id"pa16"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"The night guard had reported the theft at dawn"
difficulty"easy"
16
id"pa17"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"(?:someone|the (?:thief|intruder)) had propped (?:the emergency exit open|open the emergency exit) with a brick"
requiresInferencetrue
difficulty"hard"
17
id"pa18"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"(?:someone|the (?:intruder|thief)|they|and)(?: had)? tracked muddy boot prints across the threshold"
requiresInferencetrue
difficulty"hard"
18
id"pa19"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"(?:someone|the (?:thief|intruder)) had wiped the brick clean of fingerprints"
requiresInferencetrue
difficulty"hard"
19
id"pa20"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"(?:the (?:thief|intruder)|someone|they) had left the remaining cameras untouched"
requiresInferencetrue
difficulty"hard"
20
id"pa21"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"(?:the (?:thief|intruder)|someone|they) had (?:targeted only|only targeted) the one covering the back entrance"
requiresInferencetrue
difficulty"hard"
21
id"pa22"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"The forensics team had photographed the prints"
1"The forensic team had photographed the prints"
difficulty"easy"
22
id"pa23"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"The insurance company had conducted a formal appraisal just last month"
difficulty"easy"
23
id"pa24"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"(?:the insurance company|they|it) had valued the painting at three million"
requiresInferencetrue
difficulty"hard"
24
id"pa25"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"(?:no one|nobody) would solve the case quickly"
1"(?:they|she) would not solve the case quickly"
requiresInferencetrue
difficulty"hard"
25
id"pa26"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"(?:the (?:thief|intruder)|someone) had scattered the evidence carelessly"
requiresInferencetrue
difficulty"hard"
easyMatched4
easyTotal12
hardMatched2
hardTotal14
inferenceMatched2
inferenceTotal14
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Words: 0%, Paragraphs: 0%, Sentences: 0%
wordCountScore0
paragraphCountScore0
sentenceCountScore0
originalWords606
outputWords2235
originalParagraphs15
outputParagraphs44
originalSentences58
outputSentences249
20.2310%