| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.577 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.067 | | effectiveRatio | 0.067 | |
| 96.10% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1282 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 41.50% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1282 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "comforting" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "resonance" | | 8 | "unreadable" | | 9 | "normalcy" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.57% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 111 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1281 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 38.89% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 75 | | wordCount | 1080 | | uniqueNames | 20 | | maxNameDensity | 2.22 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 24 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 2 | | Nyx | 10 | | Shade | 2 | | Grove | 5 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Isolde | 13 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Fae | 5 | | Dymas | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Hell | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Oracle | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Half-Fae" | | 4 | "Heartstone" | | 5 | "Isolde" | | 6 | "Evan" | | 7 | "Oracle" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.389 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 50.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "pools that seemed to look through Aurora rather than at her" | | 1 | "sounded like dry leaves skittering on pave" | | 2 | "felt like the scar was widening, openin" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.781 | | wordCount | 1281 | | matches | | 0 | "not to lie, but her eyes held a warning" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 34.62 | | std | 19.19 | | cv | 0.554 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 76 | | 1 | 43 | | 2 | 67 | | 3 | 53 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 36 | | 6 | 53 | | 7 | 57 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 70 | | 10 | 35 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 42 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 54 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 68 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 41 | | 22 | 38 | | 23 | 39 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 33 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 55 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 31 | | 33 | 49 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 39 | | 36 | 5 |
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| 98.17% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 193 | | matches | | 0 | "was standing" | | 1 | "was shifting" | | 2 | "was trying" | | 3 | "was spreading" | | 4 | "was itching" | | 5 | "was widening" | | 6 | "was pulsing" |
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| 39.90% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 111 | | ratio | 0.036 | | matches | | 0 | "They didn’t cast a shadow here; they *were* the shadow, and the shadows here were too bright." | | 1 | "The Half-Fae stood waiting in a clearing where the wildflowers bloomed in colors Aurora didn’t have names for—violets that hummed, white roses that wept silver dew." | | 2 | "It wasn’t empty; it was held breath." | | 3 | "It wasn’t just liquid; it was a window." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1033 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "damp, leaf-strewn path" | | 1 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.023233301064859633 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006776379477250726 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 111 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 111 | | mean | 11.54 | | std | 6.32 | | cv | 0.548 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 40.99% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.27927927927927926 | | totalSentences | 111 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 66.15% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped through the gap" | | 1 | "They didn’t cast a shadow" | | 2 | "It wasn’t the gentle warmth" | | 3 | "She kept her hand over" | | 4 | "Her eyes were pale lavender," | | 5 | "They were tall, approximately six" | | 6 | "She took a step forward," | | 7 | "She didn’t ask where." | | 8 | "She knew Isolde wouldn’t give" | | 9 | "It was a violation of" | | 10 | "She pulled the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 11 | "It wasn’t empty; it was" | | 12 | "It burned now, hot enough" | | 13 | "She looked at Nyx." | | 14 | "She recognized the smell." | | 15 | "It wasn’t the sweet rot" | | 16 | "It was sulfur and old" | | 17 | "She had spent years running" | | 18 | "She had built a life" | | 19 | "She hadn’t thought about it" |
| | ratio | 0.385 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 85 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed before the" | | 1 | "The next, the smell of" | | 2 | "She stepped through the gap" | | 3 | "The Shade’s form, usually a" | | 4 | "They didn’t cast a shadow" | | 5 | "Isolde’s voice drifted from ahead," | | 6 | "The Half-Fae stood waiting in" | | 7 | "Isolde’s silver hair cascaded down" | | 8 | "Aurora adjusted the strap of" | | 9 | "The Heartstone Pendant was warm." | | 10 | "It wasn’t the gentle warmth" | | 11 | "She kept her hand over" | | 12 | "Aurora asked, her voice sounding" | | 13 | "Her eyes were pale lavender," | | 14 | "Nyx materialized fully, stepping from" | | 15 | "They were tall, approximately six" | | 16 | "Nyx whispered, the sound carrying" | | 17 | "Aurora looked around." | | 18 | "The trees here were ancient," | | 19 | "She took a step forward," |
| | ratio | 0.934 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 12.99% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped through the gap between the ancient oak standing stones, her boots sinking into moss that felt too soft, too alive." | | 1 | "The Half-Fae stood waiting in a clearing where the wildflowers bloomed in colors Aurora didn’t have names for—violets that hummed, white roses that wept silver …" | | 2 | "She kept her hand over it, hiding the crimson glow that leaked through her fingers." | | 3 | "The trees here were ancient, their bark silver and smooth as glass, twisting upward to meet a canopy that filtered the light into a perpetual golden hour." | | 4 | "It was a violation of physics that made the back of Aurora’s neck prickle." | | 5 | "The Shade was shifting, their form becoming more solid, more desperate, as if the ambient magic was trying to anchor them." | | 6 | "Aurora felt the pendant burn against her chest, a sharp pain that made her gasp." | | 7 | "The Fae blade in her hand hummed, a high-pitched resonance that matched the flowers." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora asked, her voice sounding too loud in the silence" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered, the sound carrying without moving the air" | | 2 | "Aurora asked, her cool-headedness fracturing under the weight of the impossible" |
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| 34.62% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Nyx warned (warn)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.231 | | effectiveRatio | 0.231 | |