Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBJCGAWBVH4F2MNDC3BY9A6

Run Details

Duration:
32.0s
Cost:
$0.015317
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain slicked the cobblestones of Soho, turning the streetlamps into smudged halos of orange against the dark. The green neon sign above the entrance hummed, buzzing like an angry insect against the night. Aurora pushed the door open. A brass bell chimed, cutting through the low murmur of conversation and the clink of glass. She shook the water from her black hair, letting droplets fall onto the worn floorboards. Silas stood behind the bar, polishing a tumbler with a rag that had seen better days. His grey-streaked auburn hair caught the low light, matching the beard that framed a face carved by decades of secrets. He froze. The rag stopped moving. His hazel eyes locked onto hers, widening just a fraction before narrowing. He set the glass down on the mahogany counter. The wood absorbed the sound. Aurora kept her hands in the pockets of her coat. She scanned the room. Old maps covered the walls, pinned with black-and-white photographs of men in suits and women in hats. The air smelled of stale gin and woodsmoke. "Rory," Silas said. His voice held a gravelly weight. "Silas." He leaned forward, resting his elbows on the bar. A silver signet ring glinted on his right hand. He pushed off the counter and walked around the end of the bar. His left leg dragged slightly, the old knee injury flaring with the movement. He stopped a few feet from her. "You look different." Aurora touched the scar on her left wrist. The skin was pale, a small crescent shape hidden beneath the cuff of her sweater. She pulled the sleeve down. "You look older," she said. Silas let out a short breath that wasn't quite a laugh. He reached for a bottle of whiskey and poured two fingers into a fresh glass. He slid it across the wood. "I didn't think you'd come back to London." "I didn't think I would either." She wrapped her hands around the glass. The warmth seeped into her palms. She took a sip. The burn hit the back of her throat, sharp and familiar. "Cardiff?" Silas asked. "Cardiff. Then Bristol. Then nothing." "And now?" "Now I'm here." Silas turned his back to her. He picked up another rag and started wiping a spot on the counter that was already clean. His movements were precise, economical. The limp was more pronounced now, a subtle hitch in his step that hadn't been there before. "Five years," Silas said. "Something like that." "You left a note." "I left a lot of things." Aurora looked past him. The secret room behind the bookshelf remained closed, the spine of a heavy leather-bound atlas hiding the latch. She remembered the first time she saw the place. She remembered the feeling of safety she thought she found here. "Why did you come back?" Silas asked. He didn't turn around. "Work. A contract." "Delivery?" "Something like that." Silas turned back to face her. He held her gaze. His eyes searched her face, looking for the girl who used to sit in the corner booth with a law textbook, or the woman who ran in through the back door with blood on her coat. He found neither. He found a stranger wearing a familiar face. "You're not the same person." "I'm not the same person I was five years ago." "Are you still running?" Aurora took another drink. She set the glass down hard. The sound echoed in the quiet room. "Running implies a destination." "Where are you going?" "Somewhere quiet." Silas nodded slowly. He reached into his pocket and pulled out a small key. He tossed it onto the counter. It slid across the wood and stopped near her hand. "Top floor. The flat above the bar." "I don't need a room." "You need a place to sleep." "I have a hotel." "Hotels have cameras." Aurora looked at the key. It was heavy, brass, cold against her fingertips. She pushed it back toward him. "I'm not staying." "Then why are you here?" "To see if the ghost is still haunting the place." Silas smiled. It didn't reach his eyes. He picked up the key and dropped it into his pocket. "The ghost left years ago." "Did it?" Aurora stood up straighter. Her shoulders were tense. She scanned the room again. The shadows in the corners seemed deeper than she remembered. The maps on the wall looked like cages. "Did you hear from Eva?" Silas paused. He poured himself a drink. "Eva moved to Paris." "Did she say anything?" "She said you were safe." "Safe isn't the same as free." Silas drank his whiskey in one swallow. He set the glass down and wiped his mouth with the back of his hand. "You look tired, Rory." "I am." "Rest." "I can't." "Why not?" "Because I don't know what happens next." Silas leaned against the bar. The wood creaked under his weight. He looked at the scar on her wrist again. He knew what that scar meant. He knew the story of the accident, the story of the ex, the story of the flight. "You don't have to know." "I have to know." "Who told you that?" "Myself." Silas nodded. He picked up the bottle of whiskey and refilled her glass. She didn't stop him. She watched the amber liquid fill the glass, the level rising until it was almost full. "Drink," Silas said. She lifted the glass. She drank. The liquid burned again. "Did you ever find out who sent the letter?" "Found out who sent the letter?" "The one that made you leave." Silas looked at the maps on the wall. He traced a line with his finger over a city in Eastern Europe. Prague. "I found out." "Who was it?" "Someone who wanted you gone." "Did you find them?" "I found the trail." "Did you follow it?" Silas looked at her. His hazel eyes were hard, unreadable. "I followed it." "And?" "And I stopped." "Why?" "Because some things stay buried." Aurora set the glass down. She looked at the key he had tossed earlier. She looked at the door. The rain hammered against the windowpane, a relentless rhythm. "I can't stay buried." "Then you better be ready to dig." "I am." "Are you?" Silas pushed off the bar. He walked to the door and unlocked it. The wind howled into the room, carrying the scent of wet pavement and exhaust. He held the door open. "Go home, Rory." "I don't have one." "Then go somewhere else." Aurora stood up. She pulled her coat tighter around her body. She looked at Silas one last time. He looked smaller than she remembered. The grey in his hair looked like frost. The limp looked like a weight he carried every day. "Goodbye, Silas." "Goodbye, Aurora." She walked out into the rain. The door clicked shut behind her. Silas stood in the doorway for a moment, watching her disappear into the dark. He turned back to the bar. He picked up the glass she had left behind. He poured the rest of the whiskey down the sink. He wiped the counter again. He picked up the rag and kept wiping. The neon sign buzzed. The rain fell. The maps on the wall watched in silence.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences73
tagDensity0.082
leniency0.164
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1207
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.29% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1207
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"scanned"
count2
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count2
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"weight"
2"warmth"
3"familiar"
4"echoed"
5"traced"
6"unreadable"
7"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences116
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences183
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1207
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount924
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity2.16
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Silas20
Aurora9
Eastern1
Europe1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Aurora"
places
0"Soho"
1"Eastern"
2"Europe"
globalScore0.418
windowScore0.333
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"quite a laugh"
1"seemed deeper than she remembered"
2"looked like cages"
3"looked like frost"
4"looked like a weight he carried every day"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1207
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences183
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs100
mean12.07
std15.97
cv1.323
sampleLengths
069
154
214
339
49
51
651
73
828
95
1032
118
126
1328
143
155
162
173
1845
194
203
214
226
2342
2411
253
261
273
2857
295
3010
314
3217
334
344
352
3630
377
385
396
404
413
4219
433
445
4510
4618
475
482
4931
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs172
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences183
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount928
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"heavy leather-bound atlas"
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.021551724137931036
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003232758620689655
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences183
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences183
mean6.6
std4.65
cv0.704
sampleLengths
017
116
25
316
415
516
620
72
84
912
109
115
1210
134
1417
158
163
176
181
199
209
2113
2213
237
243
258
2615
275
285
2911
3015
316
328
336
347
356
364
3711
383
395
402
413
426
4317
445
4517
464
473
484
496
37.98% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.23497267759562843
totalSentences183
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount58
totalSentences104
matches
0"She shook the water from"
1"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
2"His hazel eyes locked onto"
3"He set the glass down"
4"She scanned the room."
5"His voice held a gravelly"
6"He leaned forward, resting his"
7"He pushed off the counter"
8"His left leg dragged slightly,"
9"He stopped a few feet"
10"She pulled the sleeve down."
11"He reached for a bottle"
12"He slid it across the"
13"She wrapped her hands around"
14"She took a sip."
15"He picked up another rag"
16"His movements were precise, economical."
17"She remembered the first time"
18"She remembered the feeling of"
19"He didn't turn around."
ratio0.558
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount103
totalSentences104
matches
0"Rain slicked the cobblestones of"
1"The green neon sign above"
2"Aurora pushed the door open."
3"A brass bell chimed, cutting"
4"She shook the water from"
5"Silas stood behind the bar,"
6"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
7"The rag stopped moving."
8"His hazel eyes locked onto"
9"He set the glass down"
10"The wood absorbed the sound."
11"Aurora kept her hands in"
12"She scanned the room."
13"The air smelled of stale"
14"His voice held a gravelly"
15"He leaned forward, resting his"
16"A silver signet ring glinted"
17"He pushed off the counter"
18"His left leg dragged slightly,"
19"He stopped a few feet"
ratio0.99
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Silas stood behind the bar, polishing a tumbler with a rag that had seen better days."
1"He picked up another rag and started wiping a spot on the counter that was already clean."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences73
tagDensity0.082
leniency0.164
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.8961%