Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBJDVAH7HBQ2J4MXM1TPND1

Run Details

Duration:
30.7s
Cost:
$0.001804
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones rose from the heather like broken teeth gnawing at the soil. Aurora stepped across the invisible threshold marked by the moss, her boot crunching on brittle leaves that didn't belong in Richmond Park. London night should have been wet, smelling of diesel and rain. This air tasted of copper and rotting sugar. She pulled the Heartstone from her coat. The gem sat against her sternum, a heavy weight that vibrated against her ribs. The silver chain was thin, easily snapping, but this thing held tight like a lover who refused to let go. The crimson stone flared warm, pulsing in rhythm with her own heartbeat. A signal. A beacon. Or a dinner bell. "Show yourself," Aurora said to the empty space between the ancient oak trunks. Her voice didn't echo. It died instantly, swallowed by the thick velvet dampness. Nothing answered except the wind moving through the leaves. The wind didn't carry the scent of the city anymore. It carried the scent of old blood and crushed violets. The flowers at her feet bloomed in the dead of winter. White and yellow petals unfurled under her gaze, pushing through frost that turned gray the moment the gem warmed. She took a step deeper. Her phone screen went black, even though she had twenty percent charge before she crossed. The clock on her wrist spun backward. A twig snapped to her left. Aurora stopped. She didn't turn. The hair on her arms stood up, prickling against the fabric of her hoodie. The sound hadn't been the dry crack of a breaking branch. It had been wet, like meat hitting a floorboard. She scanned the perimeter. The grove looked identical to where she had walked through. Same stones, same overgrown path, same patch of moonlight filtering through the canopy. But the shadows had moved. They stretched toward her from the trees, detaching themselves from the bark like thick oil. "Is this how you do it?" she asked the darkness. "You hide in the light until you can pull it in?" The trees groaned. The sound resonated in her chest, a low vibration that rattled her teeth. The Heartstone grew hot now, searing her skin. It wasn't just warmth anymore; it was a burn. She gripped the pendant harder, wanting it off, wanting it back in her pocket. It pulsed faster. The crimson light grew brighter, illuminating the space directly in front of her. Mist rolled up from the heather. It had a shape. It formed a column that blocked the path forward. The flowers at the base of the column grew larger, thorns unfurling like black needles. Aurora knew a portal when a gemstone said so. She had read the warnings. Fae borders bent time into spirals. She needed to close the connection, find the anchor, and leave. But the ground beneath her feet refused to feel solid. When she shifted her weight, the earth felt soft, spongy like a sponge soaked in water. She turned around. She needed to retrace her steps, find the other side of the stones. The stones were gone. She squinted into the gloom. In their place stood three massive slabs of rock. They looked like the stones at her back. The perimeter had inverted. She hadn't moved, but the world had folded. "That's not possible," Aurora said. The air grew colder. Her breath misted, hanging in front of her face like smoke. The Heartstone stopped pulsing. Instead, it held a cold, dead stillness. The light inside the gem vanished, leaving the stone dark, the gem no longer glowing with inner light. It felt heavy now, dragging against her jacket. A sound started up from deep in the trees. It was a low hum. A choir of voices whispering without mouths. The words weren't English. They were the sound of the wind through hollow bones. Aurora spun around, her hand flying to her belt knife. She held the blade in a reverse grip. The steel reflected the faint moonlight, catching nothing but her own dilated pupils. "Come here," she whispered. The whispering stopped. The silence was immediate, absolute, and violent. Then the movement started. Something shifted in the foliage ten feet to her right. No sound of feet crushing leaves. Just the fabric of the brush moving, dragged by something heavy that didn't want to be seen. A figure stepped out from between two trunks. It was tall, its limbs too long, joints bending in ways that made her stomach roll. It had no face, just smooth skin where features should be. Aurora didn't blink. She kept the knife leveled. The Heartstone remained dead in her chest. "I know you're here," she said, her voice steady despite the adrenaline flooding her veins. "Open a path or I break you." She wasn't stupid. She had seen the signs. This wasn't a normal encounter. The Fae didn't play by physics. They played by stories. The figure tilted its head. The smooth face rippled. A line appeared, then a mouth that split open horizontally across the chest plate of its tunic. Not a mouth for speaking. A wound. "I am looking for the door," Aurora said. She took a step forward, knife cutting the air. The ground beneath her feet sucked. She dropped instantly. Her fall was cut short by a root that shot up like an iron bar, catching her ankle. The pain was sharp, biting through her sneaker boot. She kicked, her other foot finding purchase on mud that felt like tar. The figure advanced. It didn't walk. It glided, leaving no prints. The flowers around her ankle began to close in. Vines crept up her leg, cold and slimy. They didn't bite. They just held. "Let go," she hissed. The vines tightened. They didn't bruise. They pressed directly into the flesh, bypassing skin, seeking bone. The smell of ozone filled her nose. The figure stopped. It was close enough for her to feel the static charge radiating from it. The temperature dropped again. Her breath came in short gasps. The Heartstone pulsed once, a single violent throb. Aurora yanked on her knife. The steel bit into the vine. Sap hissed, black and sticky. She slashed downward, severing the root attached to her ankle. She fell to her knees, gasping. The figure loomed over her. It raised a hand. The fingers were long, translucent, showing dark veins running through the skin like a map of a river on a satellite. "You are not the one," a voice said. The voice came from everywhere. It vibrated in the mud at her ear, in the hollow of her skull. Aurora looked up, sweat running down her temple. "I am Aurora Carter. I have a debt to settle." The figure lowered its hand. It reached out, palm open. It didn't reach for the knife. It reached for the pendant. Aurora scrambled back, dragging her boots through the soil. The vines snapped, retracted into the earth. She stood, backing away until her spine hit a stone that shouldn't have been behind her. The heartstone began to hum again, a low, urgent buzz against her chest. The figure waited. It didn't move. It was a statue carved from nightmare. "The benefactor is dead," the voice said again. "He is not." Rory's voice cracked. The figure took a step closer. The light from the Heartstone flared, illuminating the smooth face. For a second, the smooth skin rippled and showed a face behind the mask. It was an old man. An old man she had seen in a photograph years ago. Brendan Carter hadn't known him. Jennifer had. The ground shook. It was a minor tremor, but it shifted the position of the stones. The time distortion was spiking. The mist swirled faster. "Tell me who you are," Aurora demanded. She pointed the knife. The steel shook in her hand. The figure smiled. It showed teeth that were too many, too sharp, stacked like keys in a lock. "Time is running out," the voice whispered. A shadow detached from the figure's chest. It dropped to the ground and crawled toward Aurora. It moved independently, skittering like an insect on legs that clicked. The shadow reached her boot. Aurora looked down. The shadow didn't cast an outline on the moonlit ground. It absorbed the light. The Heartstone burned bright enough to hurt her eyes. The crimson light blinded her vision at the edges. "Run," a voice behind her shouted. The voice belonged to a young boy. A boy who hadn't existed for twenty years. She turned. Eva stood there. She looked perfect, untouched by the rot. Her eyes were bright. She held a key made of bone. "You shouldn't have come back," Eva said. The figure stepped back, retreating into the trees. The vines retracted, leaving the mud churned and bloody where Aurora had fallen. Rory looked at the woman, then at the shadow on the ground. The shadow reached up, trying to grab her ankle. "Stay back," Rory gritted out. She kicked the shadow. It didn't recoil. It just dissolved into a puddle of black liquid that seeped into the heather. Eva took a step forward. The moonlight caught her face. There was blood on her collar. "It isn't her," Rory said, pointing the knife at the woman's chest. The Heartstone warmed, then cooled instantly. Eva tilted her head. "The Grove demands a trade. You brought it with you." She gestured to the pendant. Rory touched the chain. The metal had fused to her skin. She couldn't pull it loose. "Take it," Rory said. "No." Eva moved closer. The shadow rose up behind her, forming a shape like a man, like Evan. Like something from a nightmare she could never escape. "Pay the toll." A sound erupted from the sky. Rain began to fall, heavy and cold, smelling of ash. It burned her skin. The wind howled, tearing the leaves off the trees. The flowers withered instantly, turning to gray powders in the storm. Rory looked at the woman. She looked at the storm. She looked at the Heartstone. She realized then that the thing she was looking for had been inside the Grove all along. She stepped closer to Eva. The rain sizzled where it touched her coat. "If I don't trade," Rory said. Eva laughed. It was a sound like breaking glass. "You already did."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"the voice said again [again]"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.76
leniency1
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.053
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1725
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1725
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"vibrated"
count2
2
word"beacon"
count1
3
word"echo"
count1
4
word"velvet"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"resonated"
count1
7
word"searing"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count2
10
word"gloom"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"stomach"
count1
13
word"encounter"
count1
14
word"throb"
count1
15
word"loomed"
count1
16
word"perfect"
count1
17
word"churned"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"vibrated"
2"beacon"
3"echo"
4"velvet"
5"scanned"
6"resonated"
7"searing"
8"warmth"
9"pulsed"
10"gloom"
11"silence"
12"stomach"
13"encounter"
14"throb"
15"loomed"
16"perfect"
17"churned"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences218
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences218
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences224
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1725
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1617
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.93
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone9
English1
Fae2
Rory8
Carter1
Aurora15
Eva7
Evan1
Grove1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Fae"
2"Rory"
3"Carter"
4"Aurora"
5"Eva"
6"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences121
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like the stones at her back"
1"felt like tar"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1725
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences224
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs69
mean25
std18.27
cv0.731
sampleLengths
055
161
226
359
427
56
686
721
863
934
1057
1116
124
1334
145
1552
1635
1731
184
1910
2072
2115
2222
2323
2433
2517
266
2754
2823
294
3023
3135
3232
3330
348
3519
3618
3721
3845
3913
408
416
4253
4325
4417
4518
467
4732
4817
4918
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences218
matches
0"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs316
matches
0"was spiking"
1"was looking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences224
ratio0.004
matches
0"It wasn't just warmth anymore; it was a burn."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1617
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.030303030303030304
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.0055658627087198514
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences224
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences224
mean7.7
std4.19
cv0.544
sampleLengths
014
122
211
38
47
514
620
712
82
92
104
1113
124
139
149
1510
1610
1711
1819
195
2015
217
226
232
243
2514
2611
279
284
2910
3013
315
3215
3310
3411
353
3613
378
389
3914
403
4113
426
434
449
4515
469
475
486
4911
35.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats32
diversityRatio0.22767857142857142
totalSentences224
uniqueOpeners51
49.26% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences203
matches
0"Instead, it held a cold,"
1"Then the movement started."
2"Just the fabric of the"
ratio0.015
66.31% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount78
totalSentences203
matches
0"She pulled the Heartstone from"
1"Her voice didn't echo."
2"It died instantly, swallowed by"
3"It carried the scent of"
4"She took a step deeper."
5"Her phone screen went black,"
6"She didn't turn."
7"It had been wet, like"
8"She scanned the perimeter."
9"They stretched toward her from"
10"she asked the darkness"
11"It wasn't just warmth anymore;"
12"She gripped the pendant harder,"
13"It pulsed faster."
14"It had a shape."
15"It formed a column that"
16"She had read the warnings."
17"She needed to close the"
18"She turned around."
19"She needed to retrace her"
ratio0.384
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount188
totalSentences203
matches
0"The standing stones rose from"
1"Aurora stepped across the invisible"
2"London night should have been"
3"This air tasted of copper"
4"She pulled the Heartstone from"
5"The gem sat against her"
6"The silver chain was thin,"
7"The crimson stone flared warm,"
8"Aurora said to the empty"
9"Her voice didn't echo."
10"It died instantly, swallowed by"
11"Nothing answered except the wind"
12"The wind didn't carry the"
13"It carried the scent of"
14"The flowers at her feet"
15"She took a step deeper."
16"Her phone screen went black,"
17"The clock on her wrist"
18"A twig snapped to her"
19"She didn't turn."
ratio0.926
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences203
matches(empty)
ratio0
67.67% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The gem sat against her sternum, a heavy weight that vibrated against her ribs."
1"The silver chain was thin, easily snapping, but this thing held tight like a lover who refused to let go."
2"The sound resonated in her chest, a low vibration that rattled her teeth."
3"It was tall, its limbs too long, joints bending in ways that made her stomach roll."
4"Her fall was cut short by a root that shot up like an iron bar, catching her ankle."
5"She kicked, her other foot finding purchase on mud that felt like tar."
98.68% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, her voice steady despite the adrenaline flooding her veins"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she hissed (hiss)"
2"Aurora demanded (demand)"
3"the voice whispered (whisper)"
4"behind her shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.64
leniency1
rawRatio0.313
effectiveRatio0.313
80.7810%