| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 39 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 60 | | tagDensity | 0.65 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.026 | | effectiveRatio | 0.026 | |
| 77.14% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1750 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "very" | | 4 | "perfectly" | | 5 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.71% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1750 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "shattered" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "resolving" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "gloom" | | 7 | "predator" | | 8 | "structure" | | 9 | "velvet" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "throbbed" | | 12 | "porcelain" | | 13 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 195 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 195 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 216 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1750 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 34 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 89 | | wordCount | 1515 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 2.11 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Veil | 1 | | London | 1 | | Aurora | 32 | | Shade | 1 | | Isolde | 22 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Nyx | 18 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Fae | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Heartstone" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.444 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 65.25% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 118 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a stone amphitheater, carved" | | 1 | "felt like velvet, but soft like a throa" | | 2 | "as if bowing" | | 3 | "felt like a drum" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.571 | | wordCount | 1750 | | matches | | 0 | "not to cut, but to balance it" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 216 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 81 | | mean | 21.6 | | std | 16.43 | | cv | 0.761 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 54 | | 3 | 64 | | 4 | 54 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 55 | | 7 | 40 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 41 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 32 | | 13 | 59 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 55 | | 18 | 47 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 37 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 46 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 35 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 35 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 39 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 28 | | 38 | 41 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 28 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 40 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 34 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 195 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 293 | | matches | | 0 | "was haunting" | | 1 | "was shifting" | | 2 | "was bleeding" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 216 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1521 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.027613412228796843 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011834319526627219 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 216 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 216 | | mean | 8.1 | | std | 4.87 | | cv | 0.601 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 29 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 41.20% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 19 | | diversityRatio | 0.25925925925925924 | | totalSentences | 216 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 157 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 90.06% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 157 | | matches | | 0 | "It did not shift or" | | 1 | "It simply held." | | 2 | "Her heart stone pendant hung" | | 3 | "She felt the rhythm of" | | 4 | "She looked past the glowing" | | 5 | "They wove like fingers of" | | 6 | "She walked between blades of" | | 7 | "Her silver hair fell to" | | 8 | "It looked like a stone" | | 9 | "She kept the tip pointing" | | 10 | "they said, head tilted to" | | 11 | "She stopped to touch a" | | 12 | "They pulsed red and warm." | | 13 | "She frowned, wiping a smear" | | 14 | "Her left wrist stung." | | 15 | "She needed to reach the" | | 16 | "She followed the pull." | | 17 | "She could taste salt and" | | 18 | "It wasn't bread." | | 19 | "It was skin wrapped in" |
| | ratio | 0.325 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 149 | | totalSentences | 157 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shattered through the" | | 1 | "The amber sky hovered above," | | 2 | "It did not shift or" | | 3 | "It simply held." | | 4 | "Aurora adjusted the leather strap" | | 5 | "Her heart stone pendant hung" | | 6 | "She felt the rhythm of" | | 7 | "The gemstone glowed faint crimson" | | 8 | "She looked past the glowing" | | 9 | "They wove like fingers of" | | 10 | "Leaves shimmered silver under the" | | 11 | "The shadow beside her flickered," | | 12 | "Nyx stood six feet tall," | | 13 | "Shadows did not usually behave" | | 14 | "The ambient light bent around" | | 15 | "Nyx said, voice whispering like" | | 16 | "The Half-Fae woman did not" | | 17 | "She walked between blades of" | | 18 | "Her silver hair fell to" | | 19 | "Isolde pointed a slender finger" |
| | ratio | 0.949 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 157 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The moonsilver leaf-shaped dagger hummed with a cold vibration that traveled up her forearm." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 39 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx said, voice whispering like wind through dry grass" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 39 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde added (add)" | | 1 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" | | 2 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 60 | | tagDensity | 0.65 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.077 | |