Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBJK2W85N7KZSVVN9T1VNFD

Run Details

Duration:
49.0s
Cost:
$0.010537
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a heavy metallic grind that echoed through the cramped hallway. Aurora gripped the doorknob, her knuckles white against the dark paint. She expected a delivery or a neighbor, not the man standing in the threshold wearing a charcoal suit that cost more than her monthly rent. Lucien Moreau filled the frame. His platinum hair lay slicked back against his skull, catching the dim light from the corridor. One eye burned amber, the other swallowed by black. He held an ivory-handled cane in his left hand, the tip tapping once against the floorboards. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, arched his back from the pile of scrolls on the sofa and hissed. Aurora didn't step back. She kept her body angled to block the entryway, though the three deadbolts were already undone. "You forgot to lock the bottom one," Lucien said. His voice carried a smooth, French cadence that cut through the smell of curry drifting up from the street below. "I don't care who gets in." "Yet you stand in the way." He shifted his weight, the cane resting against his shoulder. "I am not a burglar, Rory." The use of her nickname hit her like a physical blow. She tightened her grip on the door. "Then why are you here?" "Business." He offered a thin smile that didn't reach his eyes. "And perhaps a desire to ensure you haven't been eaten by the things that hunt in this city." "I'm not a child." "No. You are a delivery girl with a crescent scar on her wrist and a habit of walking into trouble." His gaze dropped to her left arm, exposed by the sleeve of her hoodie. He stepped forward, forcing her to retreat into the room. The flat smelled of old paper and dust. Books covered every surface, stacked precariously on the floor and piled on the narrow desk. Lucien navigated the clutter without looking down, his movements precise. He stopped near the sofa where Ptolemy watched him with narrowed green eyes. "You should leave." "I cannot." He leaned on the cane, the blade hidden within the shaft gleaming faintly in the shadows. "Someone is looking for you." Aurora crossed her arms over her chest. "Who?" "Someone who knows about Evan." The name hung in the air, heavy and toxic. She felt the old heat rise in her throat, the memory of the bruises and the shouting. She had fled Cardiff to escape him, and now his shadow followed her to London. "Did he send you?" Lucien shook his head slowly. "No. He is a fool who thinks with his fists. This is a different kind of threat." He reached into his jacket pocket. Aurora flinched, her hand moving toward the knife she kept in her boot. Lucien pulled out a folded piece of paper and held it up. "A name. A location. They are tracking your movements." She didn't move to take it. "Why give this to me?" "Because you are useful." He took a step closer, invading her personal space. The scent of him, expensive cologne and ozone, filled her senses. "And because I told you once that I would not let you die in the gutter." "You left me in the gutter, Luc." The silence stretched between them, tight as a wire. Ptolemy jumped down from the sofa and rubbed against Lucien's leg, purring loudly. Lucien ignored the cat. "I left because staying would have killed you." "Maybe." She kept her eyes on his face, searching for the lie. "Or maybe you just got tired of the mess." "I got tired of watching you make mistakes." He thrust the paper toward her again. "Take it." She snatched the paper from his hand. Her fingers brushed his. His skin was cold, unnatural. She pulled back immediately. "What is this place?" He gestured around the room. "It looks like a library exploded here." "Eva's place." "Eva is not here." "She works nights." Lucien walked to the window and peered through the gap in the curtains. The streetlights of Brick Lane flickered below. "This building is a beacon. The supernatural community knows where you hide." "Then I'll move." "You cannot move." He turned back to face her. The amber eye seemed to glow in the dim light. "The trail is too hot. They know you are here." Aurora crumpled the paper in her fist. "You said you were a fixer. Fix this." "I am trying." "Don't try." She stepped around the desk, closing the distance between them. "You always try. You never commit." Lucien's jaw tightened. He set the cane down against the wall, freeing both hands. "Commitment gets people killed, Aurora." "Maybe." She stopped inches from him. "But running gets you alone." He looked down at her. The height difference forced her to tilt her head back. His expression remained unreadable, but his hands twitched at his sides. "I am not alone." "Are you?" He reached out, his fingers hovering near the scar on her wrist. He didn't touch it, but the heat of his hand warmed her skin. "You remember the night in Marseille." "I remember the fire." "I remember the choice." Aurora pulled her arm back, breaking the connection. The air in the room grew heavy. She walked to the door and checked the deadbolts again, sliding them into place with sharp clicks. "Lock it," Lucien said. "It's locked." "Then close the curtains." She turned to the window and pulled the fabric tight. The room plunged into shadow. Only the streetlights filtered through the gaps. "Why are you really here?" She faced him again. "It isn't just about Evan." Lucien picked up his cane. He tapped the floor once, twice. "I need your help." "My help." "You have a mind that works where mine does not. You see the gaps." "I see the mess." "Exactly." He walked to the door and placed a hand on the frame. "There is a meeting tonight. At the docks." "I'm not going." "You will." He turned, his heterochromatic eyes locking onto hers. "Because if you don't, they will come here. They will take Eva. They will take the cat." Aurora's breath hitched. She looked at Ptolemy, who sat on the rug, grooming a paw. "You wouldn't." "I would." Lucien's voice dropped to a whisper. "I would burn the world to keep you safe. But I cannot do it alone." He moved toward the door. His hand hovered over the knob. "Wait." He paused. "Time is a luxury we do not have." "If I go, you tell me everything." Lucien looked at her for a long moment. The tension in his shoulders eased slightly. "Deal." He turned the knob. "Lucien." He stopped, his back to her. "Why did you come back?" He didn't turn around. "Because the fire is spreading." He opened the door and stepped out into the hallway. The click of the deadbolt followed him as he locked it from the outside. Aurora stood in the silence of the flat. The paper in her hand felt heavy. She walked to the window and pressed her face against the glass. The street below was empty, save for a shadow moving in the alleyway across the road. She turned back to the room. Ptolemy meowed. She picked up her jacket from the chair.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"He gestured around [around]"
1"He turned back [back]"
2"She stepped around [around]"
dialogueSentences71
tagDensity0.254
leniency0.507
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.085
87.67% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1217
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
46.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1217
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"desire"
count1
3
word"ensure"
count1
4
word"navigated"
count1
5
word"gleaming"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"beacon"
count1
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"weight"
2"desire"
3"ensure"
4"navigated"
5"gleaming"
6"silence"
7"flickered"
8"beacon"
9"unreadable"
10"whisper"
11"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences90
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences143
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1217
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount820
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.59
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
French1
Ptolemy5
Aurora8
Cardiff1
London1
Lucien13
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Aurora"
3"Lucien"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
globalScore0.707
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1217
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences143
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs76
mean16.01
std12.89
cv0.805
sampleLengths
052
146
217
320
429
56
622
723
829
94
1044
1146
123
1323
148
155
1641
174
1828
1913
2021
2111
2240
237
2426
258
2621
2717
2820
2916
302
314
323
3332
343
3529
3615
373
3818
3919
4011
4130
422
4331
444
454
4632
474
482
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs146
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences143
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount821
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.030450669914738125
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.0097442143727162
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences143
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences143
mean8.51
std5.31
cv0.624
sampleLengths
016
111
225
35
416
59
616
717
84
916
109
1120
126
1316
146
1511
167
175
1811
1918
204
2134
2210
238
2415
2510
2613
273
2818
295
307
311
325
339
3417
3515
364
375
3823
3913
4012
419
426
435
4413
4511
4616
477
489
4913
45.92% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3006993006993007
totalSentences143
uniqueOpeners43
38.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"Only the streetlights filtered through"
ratio0.012
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences86
matches
0"She expected a delivery or"
1"His platinum hair lay slicked"
2"He held an ivory-handled cane"
3"She kept her body angled"
4"His voice carried a smooth,"
5"He shifted his weight, the"
6"She tightened her grip on"
7"He offered a thin smile"
8"His gaze dropped to her"
9"He stepped forward, forcing her"
10"He stopped near the sofa"
11"He leaned on the cane,"
12"She felt the old heat"
13"She had fled Cardiff to"
14"He reached into his jacket"
15"She didn't move to take"
16"He took a step closer,"
17"She kept her eyes on"
18"He thrust the paper toward"
19"She snatched the paper from"
ratio0.558
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences86
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"Aurora gripped the doorknob, her"
2"She expected a delivery or"
3"Lucien Moreau filled the frame."
4"His platinum hair lay slicked"
5"He held an ivory-handled cane"
6"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, arched"
7"Aurora didn't step back."
8"She kept her body angled"
9"His voice carried a smooth,"
10"He shifted his weight, the"
11"The use of her nickname"
12"She tightened her grip on"
13"He offered a thin smile"
14"His gaze dropped to her"
15"He stepped forward, forcing her"
16"The flat smelled of old"
17"Books covered every surface, stacked"
18"Lucien navigated the clutter without"
19"He stopped near the sofa"
ratio0.977
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She expected a delivery or a neighbor, not the man standing in the threshold wearing a charcoal suit that cost more than her monthly rent."
97.22% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He turned, his heterochromatic eyes locking onto hers"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Lucien's voice (lucien voice)"
dialogueSentences71
tagDensity0.042
leniency0.085
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.028
82.7611%