Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBJK5WZEHY14VN46R69DZ4H

Run Details

Duration:
38.5s
Cost:
$0.015736
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oak standing stones cut through the darkness of Richmond Park like jagged teeth. Aurora stepped past the boundary, the silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant burning against her collarbone. The air inside the Grove held a weight that pressed against her eardrums, thick and still. She paused, her boots sinking into soil that felt too soft, too spongy for the hard ground of London. Wildflowers bloomed in a riot of colour that defied the season, their petals glowing with a faint, bioluminescent pulse. She checked her watch. The hands spun lazily, refusing to settle. Rory pulled her jacket tighter. The wind died the moment she crossed the stones. No rustle of leaves, no distant hum of the city, no traffic from the A316. Just the sound of her own breathing and the crunch of gravel underfoot. The pendant grew warmer. It throbbed against her skin, a second heartbeat syncing with her own. She reached into her pocket and touched the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. The skin there prickled, a phantom itch that had nothing to do with the cold. She moved deeper into the clearing. The trees here stood too straight, their branches forming a perfect canopy that blocked out the moon. Shadows pooled between the roots, deeper than the night should allow. She stopped. A sound broke the silence. A snap of wood. She turned her head slowly, eyes scanning the perimeter. Nothing moved. The wildflowers swayed without wind. She took a step forward, then froze. The sound came again, closer. A footstep. Heavy. Deliberate. Rory held her breath. Her hand drifted to the pendant, fingers wrapping around the deep crimson gem. It pulsed faster, the heat seeping into her palm. She looked down at the stone. A faint inner glow brightened, casting long, distorted shadows against the bark of the nearest oak. The light revealed something on the ground. A patch of grass flattened in a circle, as if something heavy had stood there moments ago. She scanned the tree line. A shape shifted behind a trunk. Not a branch. A silhouette. Tall. Too tall for a man. It vanished when she blinked. Rory backed away, her heel catching on a root. She steadied herself, heart hammering against her ribs. She needed to leave. Now. She turned toward the entrance, the path she came from. The stones were still there, but they looked wrong. The distance between them seemed to stretch, the gap widening as she watched. The entrance receded into the gloom. She ran. Her boots slammed against the earth, but the ground felt like it moved beneath her. The trees blurred past, their trunks merging into a solid wall of bark. The pendant burned hot now, nearly scalding. She clutched it through her shirt, the silver chain tangling in her hair. The sound of the footsteps returned, faster this time. A rhythm matching her own run. She skidded to a halt, chest heaving. The path behind her was gone. Only a wall of thorns and briars blocked the way back to the stones. The thorns glowed with the same faint light as the flowers. They shifted, weaving together to seal the gap. Rory spun around. The clearing had shrunk. The trees leaned inward, their branches reaching out like skeletal arms. The silence returned, heavier than before. It pressed into her ears, filling the space with a low hum. She looked at the pendant. The glow intensified, turning the crimson gem into a beacon. She whispered into the dark. There is no way out. The words hung in the air, swallowed instantly by the stillness. No echo returned. She wiped sweat from her brow, her hand trembling. The scar on her wrist throbbed in time with the pendant. She looked up. The canopy above had closed completely. No stars. No moon. Just the dark wood pressing down. A rustle came from the right. She turned. A figure stood ten feet away. It wore a coat that looked like woven shadows, the fabric shifting as if alive. The face remained obscured by the hood. It did not move. It did not breathe. Rory stepped back, her heel finding the soft soil again. The figure raised a hand. The fingers were too long, the joints bent at impossible angles. It pointed at the pendant. The gem flared. A shockwave of heat blasted through her chest. She gasped, dropping to one knee. The ground vibrated. The flowers around her withered instantly, turning to grey ash that scattered in a sudden, unnatural breeze. The figure took a step forward. The sound of its footfall was silent, but the earth cracked beneath it. She scrambled to her feet, clutching the pendant. The silver chain bit into her skin. She needed to think. The time distortion. The lore. The pendant reacted to the Hel portal. This wasn't a portal. This was the Grove. Isolde's Grove. The figure stopped. It tilted its head. A sound emerged from the hood, a dry rattle like stones grinding together. Rory backed away, her eyes fixed on the creature. The pendant pulsed violently, the light strobing. The shadows around the creature lengthened, stretching toward her. They detached from the ground, rising like smoke. She reached into her pocket for her phone. The screen lit up, casting a harsh blue light. No signal. The time on the display read 00:00. The seconds did not move. The creature took another step. The thorns at the perimeter shifted, creating a cage around her. She looked at the stones. They were gone. Only the thorns remained. The air grew cold, biting through her jacket. Her breath misted in the light of the pendant. She looked at the scar on her wrist. The skin turned red, the flesh heating up. The pendant grew hot enough to burn. She pulled it from her shirt. The crimson stone glowed so bright it hurt to look at. The light revealed the creature's face. No face. Just a smooth surface of dark wood where features should be. The wood rattle came again. The creature raised both hands. The shadows on the ground surged forward, wrapping around her ankles. She kicked, but the darkness held firm. It felt like cold water, heavy and suffocating. Rory looked down at the pendant. It was the only source of light left. The creature stepped closer, the wood of its face creaking. The shadows pulled her down. She dug her fingers into the soil, nails breaking against the roots. The pendant flared one last time, a blinding pulse that washed out the darkness. When her vision cleared, the creature stood directly over her. The wood face was inches from her own. She could smell ozone and rotting leaves. The pendant stopped glowing. The darkness rushed back in, absolute and suffocating. The creature's hand reached out, fingers extending toward the pendant at her throat. She gripped the stone. It remained warm. The shadows tightened around her legs, dragging her down into the earth. She looked up. The canopy of trees had vanished. The sky above was a swirling vortex of grey mist. The creature did not blink. It did not breathe. It simply waited. Rory pulled her hand back, the pendant swinging on its chain. The light returned, dim now. The creature recoiled from the glow. It hissed, a sound like steam escaping a pipe. The shadows loosened their grip. She scrambled backward, crab-walking through the dirt. The creature did not follow. It stood its ground, the wood face turning toward the vortex above. The mist swirled faster. A sound rose from the earth, a deep groan that vibrated through her bones. The pendant grew cold. The warmth vanished. The light died. Rory sat in the dark. The only sound was the groan of the earth and the shifting of the thorns. She felt the pendant against her chest. It was dead weight now. The silence returned, heavier than before. She reached out into the blackness, her hand brushing against something rough. Bark. She pulled her hand back. The bark felt warm. It pulsed. The groan stopped. The wind picked up, carrying the scent of ozone. The thorns around her began to glow again, a soft, sickly green. The creature remained in the distance, a silhouette against the swirling mist. Rory stood up. Her legs shook. She looked at the pendant. The gemstone was dark. No glow. No heat. Just a dull red stone on a silver chain. She touched the scar on her wrist. It felt numb. She took a step forward. The ground felt solid again. The thorns parted, creating a path. The creature did not move. It watched her. Rory walked. The path led deeper into the Grove, away from the entrance. The trees closed in on either side. The flowers bloomed again, brighter than before. The light from the petals illuminated the path ahead. She stopped. The path ended at a wall of roots. A door was carved into the wood. It was made of the same dark material as the creature. The handle was a silver ring. Rory reached out. Her fingers hovered over the metal. The pendant grew warm again. A faint pulse returned. The ring hummed. She looked back. The creature was gone. The mist had cleared. The entrance to the Grove stood open, the ancient oak stones visible in the distance. The path behind her was clear. She looked at the door. The pendant pulsed faster. The heat returned to her skin. The ring vibrated against her fingertips. Rory gripped the handle. She turned it. The wood creaked. The door opened inward, revealing a darkness that swallowed the light from the flowers. She stepped through. The door slammed shut behind her. The light from the flowers vanished. The silence returned. She stood in the dark, the pendant glowing softly in her hand. A sound came from the darkness ahead. A footstep. Heavy. Deliberate. She held the pendant up. The light revealed a long corridor lined with mirrors. Her reflection stared back. But the reflection did not move when she did. It stood still, watching her with bright blue eyes that were not her own. The reflection smiled. Rory dropped the pendant. It hit the floor with a clatter. The light died. The darkness rushed in. The reflection stepped out of the mirror, into the corridor. It wore her clothes. It had her scar. It held the pendant. Rory backed away, her breath catching in her throat. The reflection walked toward her, the pendant glowing in its hand. The light illuminated the corridor, revealing the walls were made of faces. Screaming mouths pressed against the wood. The reflection stopped. It raised the pendant. The light flared. Rory turned to run. The corridor stretched out before her, endless. The doors on either side slammed shut. The reflection did not follow. It stood in the center of the hall, watching her. Rory ran. Her boots echoed on the stone floor. The walls closed in. The faces on the wood whispered. She could not understand the words, but she felt the intent. Fear. Hunger. She reached the end of the corridor. A single door stood there. The same dark wood as the creature. The silver ring handle. She grabbed the handle. It was cold. She turned it. The door opened. She stepped through. She fell. The ground caught her. She lay on her back, staring up at the sky. The stars were there. The moon was there. The air smelled of rain and exhaust. She was back in the park. The stones were gone. The thorns were gone. She sat up. The pendant lay in her hand. It was cold. The gemstone was dark. She looked at her wrist. The scar was gone. The skin was smooth. She stood up. The park was empty. The silence was absolute. A sound came from the trees. A footstep. Heavy. Deliberate. She turned. The creature stood at the edge of the light. The wood face was gone. It had her face. The creature raised the pendant. It glowed. Rory backed away. The creature did not move. It simply watched. The pendant flared. The light blinded her. When she opened her eyes, the creature was gone. The pendant was in her hand. The gemstone was dark. She looked around. The park was empty. The silence was absolute. She walked toward the exit. The trees parted. The path was clear. She reached the gate. She stopped. The gate was locked. She looked back. The trees were gone. The park was gone. She stood in the Grove. The stones were there. The flowers were there. The creature was there. It stood at the edge of the light. It raised the pendant. The light flared. Rory closed her eyes. The darkness returned. The silence returned. She waited.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
90.64% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2136
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"completely"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"slowly"
2"completely"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
27.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2136
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count3
2
word"throbbed"
count2
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"silence"
count7
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count4
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"gloom"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
10
word"beacon"
count1
11
word"echo"
count1
12
word"vibrated"
count3
13
word"footfall"
count1
14
word"warmth"
count1
15
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"pulse"
2"throbbed"
3"perfect"
4"silence"
5"scanning"
6"pulsed"
7"scanned"
8"gloom"
9"footsteps"
10"beacon"
11"echo"
12"vibrated"
13"footfall"
14"warmth"
15"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences341
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences341
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences341
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen19
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2136
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount2136
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.89
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Grove6
London1
Hel1
Rory19
Heavy3
Deliberate3
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Rory"
2"Heavy"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Grove"
3"London"
4"Hel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences158
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like it moved beneath her"
1"looked like woven shadows, the fabric shi"
2"felt like cold water, heavy and suffoca"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2136
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences341
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs74
mean28.86
std20.03
cv0.694
sampleLengths
085
111
288
345
432
572
627
760
82
963
1046
1151
125
135
1453
1544
1631
1756
1841
1920
2033
2131
2245
2346
2413
2536
2655
2750
2850
2936
3042
3110
3251
3311
3436
3538
3624
3736
3834
3921
4032
4121
4224
4341
4441
453
4640
4738
4810
4933
91.89% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount13
totalSentences341
matches
0"was gone"
1"were gone"
2"was carved"
3"was made"
4"was gone"
5"were made"
6"were gone"
7"were gone"
8"was gone"
9"was gone"
10"was gone"
11"were gone"
12"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs401
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences341
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2138
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount55
adverbRatio0.025724976613657625
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.007483629560336763
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences341
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences341
mean6.26
std3.77
cv0.602
sampleLengths
015
116
216
319
419
54
67
75
89
915
1013
114
1212
1315
1415
156
1617
1711
182
195
204
219
222
235
247
255
262
271
281
294
3013
319
326
3316
347
3517
365
376
383
392
401
415
425
439
448
454
461
4710
489
4913
27.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats78
diversityRatio0.08504398826979472
totalSentences341
uniqueOpeners29
76.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount7
totalSentences305
matches
0"Just the sound of her"
1"Too tall for a man."
2"Only a wall of thorns"
3"Just the dark wood pressing"
4"Only the thorns remained."
5"Just a smooth surface of"
6"Just a dull red stone"
ratio0.023
88.85% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount100
totalSentences305
matches
0"She paused, her boots sinking"
1"She checked her watch."
2"It throbbed against her skin,"
3"She reached into her pocket"
4"She moved deeper into the"
5"She turned her head slowly,"
6"She took a step forward,"
7"Her hand drifted to the"
8"It pulsed faster, the heat"
9"She looked down at the"
10"She scanned the tree line."
11"It vanished when she blinked."
12"She steadied herself, heart hammering"
13"She needed to leave."
14"She turned toward the entrance,"
15"Her boots slammed against the"
16"She clutched it through her"
17"She skidded to a halt,"
18"They shifted, weaving together to"
19"It pressed into her ears,"
ratio0.328
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount290
totalSentences305
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones"
1"Aurora stepped past the boundary,"
2"The air inside the Grove"
3"She paused, her boots sinking"
4"Wildflowers bloomed in a riot"
5"She checked her watch."
6"The hands spun lazily, refusing"
7"Rory pulled her jacket tighter."
8"The wind died the moment"
9"The pendant grew warmer."
10"It throbbed against her skin,"
11"She reached into her pocket"
12"The skin there prickled, a"
13"She moved deeper into the"
14"The trees here stood too"
15"Shadows pooled between the roots,"
16"A sound broke the silence."
17"A snap of wood."
18"She turned her head slowly,"
19"The wildflowers swayed without wind."
ratio0.951
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences305
matches(empty)
ratio0
86.17% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences63
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She paused, her boots sinking into soil that felt too soft, too spongy for the hard ground of London."
1"Wildflowers bloomed in a riot of colour that defied the season, their petals glowing with a faint, bioluminescent pulse."
2"The skin there prickled, a phantom itch that had nothing to do with the cold."
3"The flowers around her withered instantly, turning to grey ash that scattered in a sudden, unnatural breeze."
4"A sound rose from the earth, a deep groan that vibrated through her bones."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.0869%