Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBJKJQARM0XS77QZBCF6E50

Run Details

Duration:
1m 6s
Cost:
$0.002543
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign buzzed above the door, casting a sickly glow over the pavement outside. Inside, The Raven's Nest smelled of stale gin, polish, and the leather upholstery that Silas had refused to replace. Rory sat at the corner table, nursing a lager that tasted like copper. She traced the rim of the glass with a finger, feeling the small crescent scar on her wrist. The glass felt cold, grounding her against the chill. Silas wiped the counter behind the bar with a rag, his movements slow and deliberate. He paused, watching the door. The bell above it jingled. A man walked in. Rain dripped from a wool coat he wore over a sharp, three-piece suit. He shook the water off his shoulders like a wet dog. Tom. Rory lifted her head. The man stopped in his tracks. Recognition hit his face hard, his shoulders dropping a fraction. He looked older. The sharp angles of his jaw had rounded. His eyes were tired, lined with the dark smudge of sleepless nights. He walked toward her. Silas watched them, stopping his wiping. He leaned against the bar, his limp shifting his weight to the right leg. Tom stopped in front of the table. He didn't hug her. He looked at her hands, then the scar on the wrist visible above the sleeve of her delivery jacket. Rory stood up. She pushed the chair back. It screeched against the floorboards. Tom smiled. It didn't reach his eyes. You look different. You look like a ghost. I work in delivery, Rory said. Keep the body moving. You used to hate running. He pulled out the chair opposite her and sat. He tapped the table with a manicured knuckle. The silver band on his ring finger caught the dim light. The same ring he wore when they played cricket in university. Or so he said. Rory wasn't sure anymore. I hate sitting still now, too. Silas moved from behind the bar, pouring a whiskey into a glass and sliding it across the polished wood toward Tom. No charge to you. On the house. Tom looked at the bottle. He looked at Silas. The man who owned the place. The ghost in the room. Right hand signet ring silver. He knew that ring. The nod was mutual. Rory watched the exchange. The knowledge hung heavy in the air between the three of them. She hadn't seen Tom since the summer break before he moved to the City. Five years. She hadn't seen him since he stopped returning her texts. Why London? Tom asked. He took the glass. Cardiff wasn't enough space. He looked around the bar. Maps on the walls. Black-and-white photos of places she didn't recognize. Prague. Berlin. Prague? Tom asked. I know the place, he said. He sat forward. I worked there for three years. Corporate security. Before I came down here. Security, Rory said. You always wanted to be a lawyer. You wanted to save the world with a pen. And you wanted to be a barrister. You said the law was a language you spoke better than English. Now you wear a helmet when you ride a bike. You deliver food so people don't have to pay to eat. Rory looked down. She didn't answer. The ice in Silas's glass melted with a sharp crack. She could feel the warmth of the room against the cold of the streets outside. I did save the world, Tom said. We kept the data servers running. We made money. We bought bigger houses in Chelsea. You look like you're carrying the weight of it. He put the glass down. He didn't drink. He looked at his hand. His fingers were clean. No calluses. You have scars, he said. On the wrist. Small thing. Childhood accident. She held up her left hand. Tom reached out. He touched the scar. He didn't flinch at the pain. He knew what that felt like. He knew what it was to have marks on the inside you wanted to cover up with fabric. I didn't come back to Cardiff. He sat back. I thought I had the world. I wanted to buy the world. You have the money. You don't look like you have that. Rory looked at the bar. The neon sign buzzed louder. She thought about the delivery app on her phone. The notification that pinged every time a restaurant order went out. It was just work. It wasn't a life. It was a way to keep moving. I have a flat, she said. Above the bar. Silas moved to the window. He watched the rain streak the glass. He didn't join them. He knew when to be invisible. Tom looked around the room. This is a good place. It works for the people who need it. We all find the people who fit the mold, Tom said. But sometimes the mold breaks. He reached into his pocket. He took out a small silver cigarette case. He flicked it open. Empty. I stopped smoking, he said. Five months. Before I got a job that required me to be sober. Rory pulled out her own phone. She looked at the screen. No missed calls. No messages from the past. You still see me, she said. I looked you up two months ago. Why? I needed to know if you were dead. My friends back in Cardiff said you ran away. They said Evan found you. Evan isn't there anymore. Tom nodded. He looked out the window. He saw his reflection in the glass. He looked older than the Tom she remembered. He looked like he had aged ten years in five. What are you doing now? he asked. I help delivery people get back to their bikes when they slip in the rain, she said. He laughed. It was a dry sound. He picked up the whiskey glass. He held it out. To Rory. You always were the one who kept the balance. I had to choose something, she said. I couldn't let him win. He knew that. He knew who Evan was. He knew the stories. He knew the scars. Tom stood up. He put his coat on. He didn't shake the rain off again. He walked toward Silas. The old man stopped his wiping. You know him, Tom said. I know the city, Silas said. They stood face to face. For a moment, the air in the room went still. The clock on the wall ticked. Rory watched them. She knew neither man was lying. They moved slowly. A dance of old men who had seen too much. The silence stretched. Tom turned back to the table. He picked up his glass. He drank the whiskey in one go. He didn't grimace at the burn. He set the glass down. Hard. I'm going back up stairs, he said. The hotel is down the road. I'll walk you? No. You have work, Tom said. He looked at Rory's jacket. You're wearing it right now. It fits. She stood up. She walked to the bar. Silas moved slightly to let her pass. He looked at the old operative. Rory walked to the door. The bell jingled. She stepped out into the rain. She didn't open an umbrella. She let the water hit her face. She turned back. The glass door was fogged up. She could see the outline of Tom's hand on the glass. She turned around and walked into the street. The bike was parked around the corner. She pulled her helmet out of her bag. She strapped it onto her head. She checked the lock on the bike. The engine was warm. She checked the delivery bag. It was full. She looked back at the bar. The lights were on. The neon sign buzzed. She started the engine. She pulled out into the wet street.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
92.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1310
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1310
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"could feel"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"flicked"
count1
6
word"dance"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"chill"
2"weight"
3"could feel"
4"warmth"
5"flicked"
6"dance"
7"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung heavy in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences219
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount6
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences219
filterMatches
0"look"
1"know"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences219
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen21
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1310
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions14
matches
0"I work in delivery, Rory said."
1"I know the place, he said."
2"Security, Rory said."
3"I did save the world, Tom said."
4"You have scars, he said."
5"I have a flat, she said."
6"We all find the people who fit the mold, Tom said."
7"I stopped smoking, he said."
8"You still see me, she said."
9"I help delivery people get back to their bikes when they slip in the rain, she said."
10"I had to choose something, she said."
11"You know him, Tom said."
12"I know the city, Silas said."
13"You have work, Tom said."
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions71
wordCount1310
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.45
worstName"Tom"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Silas10
Rory14
Tom19
City1
London1
English1
Chelsea1
Cardiff3
Evan3
You16
persons
0"Nest"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
3"Tom"
4"Chelsea"
5"Evan"
6"You"
places
0"Raven"
1"City"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0.775
windowScore0.667
72.68% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences97
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"tasted like copper"
1"felt like"
2"looked like he had aged ten years in five"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1310
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences219
matches
0"knew that ring"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean20.15
std14.54
cv0.721
sampleLengths
075
153
21
343
424
530
613
715
810
952
106
1128
1233
1342
148
154
1621
1722
1819
1940
2031
2122
229
2319
245
2513
2637
2721
284
297
3045
319
3222
3310
348
3516
3618
3718
3819
396
407
411
4222
434
4432
457
4617
4719
489
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences219
matches
0"was fogged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs278
matches
0"was lying"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences219
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1313
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.01904036557501904
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.002284843869002285
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences219
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences219
mean5.98
std3.59
cv0.601
sampleLengths
016
119
213
318
49
515
65
75
84
913
1011
111
124
136
1410
153
168
1712
184
196
2014
217
224
2319
243
255
265
272
285
293
305
316
324
335
349
358
3611
3711
384
394
406
4121
424
433
445
454
466
475
485
494
29.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats44
diversityRatio0.2054794520547945
totalSentences219
uniqueOpeners45
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences196
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount124
totalSentences196
matches
0"She traced the rim of"
1"He paused, watching the door."
2"He shook the water off"
3"He looked older."
4"His eyes were tired, lined"
5"He walked toward her."
6"He leaned against the bar,"
7"He didn't hug her."
8"He looked at her hands,"
9"She pushed the chair back."
10"It screeched against the floorboards."
11"It didn't reach his eyes."
12"You look different."
13"You look like a ghost."
14"I work in delivery, Rory"
15"You used to hate running."
16"He pulled out the chair"
17"He tapped the table with"
18"I hate sitting still now,"
19"He looked at Silas."
ratio0.633
5.92% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount178
totalSentences196
matches
0"The green neon sign buzzed"
1"Rory sat at the corner"
2"She traced the rim of"
3"The glass felt cold, grounding"
4"Silas wiped the counter behind"
5"He paused, watching the door."
6"The bell above it jingled."
7"A man walked in."
8"Rain dripped from a wool"
9"He shook the water off"
10"Rory lifted her head."
11"The man stopped in his"
12"Recognition hit his face hard,"
13"He looked older."
14"The sharp angles of his"
15"His eyes were tired, lined"
16"He walked toward her."
17"Silas watched them, stopping his"
18"He leaned against the bar,"
19"Tom stopped in front of"
ratio0.908
76.53% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences196
matches
0"Before I came down here."
1"Now you wear a helmet"
2"Before I got a job"
ratio0.015
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"We all find the people who fit the mold, Tom said."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.3240%