Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBJMDE8R602R5JM2FT0RC2S

Run Details

Duration:
1m 5s
Cost:
$0.013145
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain slicked the Soho pavement, reflecting the distinctive green neon sign above the entrance of The Raven’s Nest. Aurora Carter stepped out of the downpour, shaking her umbrella over the threshold. She pulled her coat tighter, the wet fabric clinging to her shoulders. Her shoulder-length black hair stuck to her neck, damp and heavy. She checked her watch, then looked at the clock above the bar. She was late for a drop-off from Yu-Fei Cheung’s kitchen, but the bar felt like the safest dry spot in the world right now. She pushed the door open. The bell chimed, a sharp sound cut short by the murmur of conversation inside. The walls were covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs that seemed to stare at her from the gloom. A few patrons sat in the shadows. In the center of the room, behind the polished mahogany, Silas Blackwood wiped a glass. His grey-streaked auburn hair caught the dim light. His neat beard framed a face that looked tired but alert. He spotted her through the haze of cigarette smoke and a nod passed between them. No smile. Just acknowledgment. Aurora moved to the back corner, usually her place. Her eyes scanned the room. Bright blue irises locked onto a figure sitting three stools down from the tap. The stranger held a glass of amber liquid, fingers wrapped tight around the crystal. Long hair, dyed a color that wasn't quite red, fell over a coat that cost more than Rory made in a week. Rory froze. She set her damp umbrella against the table leg. The scar on her left wrist throbbed, a dull ache from the childhood accident. She took a breath. The air smelled of gin and stale tobacco. The woman turned her head. Silence stretched between them, heavy and cold. "Rory," the woman said. Her voice was lower than she remembered. Raspy. "Eva," Aurora replied. She kept her hands in her pockets. Eva swirled the glass. The ice clinked against the crystal. "I thought you were dead. Or married." "Neither." Silas moved closer, a bottle of whiskey in hand. His slight limp in his left leg made his walk uneven but deliberate. He stopped at the counter where they sat, setting a glass of water in front of Eva without asking. "Refill?" he asked. Eva didn't look up. "Later." Silas glanced at Rory. "You two know each other?" "Long story," Rory said. "Long stories take time," Silas replied. He turned back to the taps, humming a low tune. Eva finally looked at her friend. The changes were sharp. The skin around Eva's eyes was lined with deep grooves. Her hands had changed too; the knuckles were swollen, the nails bitten down to the quick. "I heard you left Cardiff." "London was safer." "You ran away." "I moved forward." Eva laughed. It was a dry sound. She took a sip of her drink. "Safe doesn't look like this, Rory. You work delivery?" She pointed at the bag on the chair. The logo for Golden Empress stared back. "Part-time," Rory said. "Fits the schedule." "Schedule for what?" "To pay rent. To live." "Living," Eva tested the word. "You look thin." "Food is expensive." "So is hope." Silas leaned against the counter behind them. He polished his silver signet ring on his right hand. "Bar's open for business, Eva. Drink up or step out." "Quiet, Silas," Eva snapped. Silas raised a hand, palm out. "Just a suggestion." He walked away, the limp barely masked by his gait. Rory watched him go. The dimness of the room swallowed the light from the green sign. Shadows lengthened across the maps on the wall. "I haven't written in two years," Eva said, her eyes on the glass. "Mom asks. I tell her I'm traveling. I'm not." "You could have just called." "I didn't have the number." "I didn't have the energy." Eva turned her head slowly. The hazel eyes of the old Silas felt irrelevant here. This was about them. About the years that had vanished. "You look different, Rory. Not the face. The eyes." "Older?" "Sharper. Like a knife." Rory tapped her fingers on the table. The scar on her wrist peeked out of the cuff. "You look tired, Eva." "I've been running too." "Where?" "Everywhere." Silas returned with a fresh pour. He set the bottle down. "Last round's on the house before I lock the front." Eva didn't thank him. She just stared at the amber liquid. "I thought you were happy. You were the one with the plans. The barista. The law student." "I'm not anymore." "Who are you?" Rory looked at the green neon sign reflecting in the glass. The light flickered. "Someone who stays." "Stays?" "Here. Where the past is easy to see." Eva leaned in. The smell of her perfume was strong, cloying, masking something bitter underneath. "You left me in Cardiff. You left me alone." "I told you to come. You said you needed to finish your degree." "I needed a friend. Not a letter." Rory reached into her pocket. She pulled out a phone, the screen cracked. She turned it over. "I sent pictures. I sent messages." "You sent words," Eva said. "Words don't hold you up when you fall." Rory felt the weight of the silence. It pressed against her chest. The bar felt smaller. The maps on the wall seemed to shift. "I'm sorry." "Don't be." Rory looked at her hands. They were steady, but her heart hammered against her ribs. "I'm here now." "Are you?" "Yes." Eva set her glass down. The ice stopped clinking. She looked around the room, past Rory, past the maps, past the dim lights. "I'm leaving in the morning. I can't stay. It's too... familiar." "Go somewhere else." "There's nowhere else." Rory stood up. Her knees popped. She felt the urge to reach out, to touch Eva's arm, to bridge the distance. She pulled her hand back. "Silas can give you a room. If you need." "I can't afford a room," Eva said. "And I don't want a room." Rory sat back down. The wood felt rough under her palms. "I can lend you money." "I don't want money." "Then what do you want?" Eva looked at Rory. Her eyes were wet, but she didn't blink. "I want you to remember me. Before I changed. Before I became this." She gestured to her face. Rory searched her memory. A younger Eva. Laughing in a kitchen in Cardiff. No lines in her eyes. No scars on her knuckles. "I remember." "Prove it." "How?" Eva pointed to the photo on the wall behind them. A black-and-white shot of the bar from ten years ago. The map behind it showed a route through Prague. Silas stood in the corner, a younger version of himself. "Tell me about the photo," Eva said. Rory squinted. "We've never seen a photo of Silas like that." "Tell me about the map," Eva pressed. "Where it goes." "Rory," Silas's voice came from the shadows. He leaned on the table. He looked tired. "We're closing in ten minutes." Eva didn't look at Silas. She kept her eyes on Rory. "Tell me the story. Tell me who we were. Before the life took over." Rory opened her mouth. She looked at the scar on her wrist. She looked at the green neon sign. The light flickered again. She thought about Cardiff. The rain that felt like cold water. The silence of the flat above the bar. "I don't know the story anymore," Rory said. Eva nodded slowly. She picked up her glass. "Then I'm gone." She stood up. The coat dragged on the floor. She looked at Silas. "Keep the tab." "Who's paying?" Silas asked. "I'll send it." She walked to the door. She didn't look back. She pushed it open. The rain sounded louder outside than inside. The door clicked shut. The bell chimed once more. Silas looked at Rory. The silence returned. He turned on the taps. The beer foamed. He looked at the empty stool. Then he looked at Rory's face. "He was never here?" Silas asked. Rory stared at the spot where Eva had sat. The wood was cool. "No." Silas picked up the glass. He sniffed it. "Smells like gin. And regret." Rory looked at her watch. Late. She should leave. She should work. "Stay a minute," Silas said. He poured a small amount of whiskey into a glass. He slid it across the bar to Rory. "You need it." Rory pushed the glass back. "I have a job." "Drink it." Rory looked at the liquid. It swirled. The smell of the bar, the maps, the silence, the rain outside. She reached out. "Tell me about the photo," Eva had said. Rory gripped the glass. "I don't remember." Silas nodded. He looked at the door. The green neon buzzed outside. The night was dark. "Drink," Silas said again. Rory raised the glass. Her hand shook.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Silas said again [again]"
dialogueSentences90
tagDensity0.244
leniency0.489
rawRatio0.045
effectiveRatio0.022
93.29% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1491
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1491
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"crystal"
count2
3
word"throbbed"
count1
4
word"silence"
count5
5
word"flickered"
count2
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"scanned"
2"crystal"
3"throbbed"
4"silence"
5"flickered"
6"weight"
7"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of the silence"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences170
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences170
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences238
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1491
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions88
wordCount1094
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity2.65
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Silas19
Blackwood1
Rory29
Eva25
Golden1
Empress1
Cardiff2
Prague1
Aurora3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Yu-Fei"
3"Cheung"
4"Silas"
5"Blackwood"
6"Rory"
7"Eva"
8"Empress"
9"Aurora"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"Prague"
globalScore0.175
windowScore0
51.32% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like the safest dry spot in the wo"
1"photographs that seemed to stare at her from the gloom"
2"felt like cold water"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1491
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences238
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs97
mean15.37
std16.8
cv1.093
sampleLengths
090
198
264
342
47
512
610
717
81
944
105
119
124
1316
1441
153
163
173
1823
1915
206
213
225
238
243
253
2627
274
2819
2924
3022
315
325
335
3434
351
364
3721
384
391
401
4121
4228
433
443
4517
461
478
4824
4913
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences170
matches
0"was lined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs202
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences238
ratio0.004
matches
0"Her hands had changed too; the knuckles were swollen, the nails bitten down to the quick."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1102
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.020871143375680582
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004537205081669692
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences238
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences238
mean6.26
std4.07
cv0.649
sampleLengths
018
113
212
311
412
524
65
714
819
97
1015
118
1211
1315
142
152
169
175
1814
1914
2022
212
229
2314
244
258
265
277
284
297
301
313
327
334
346
357
361
379
3813
3919
403
414
421
434
445
454
466
4710
486
494
39.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats25
diversityRatio0.2815126050420168
totalSentences238
uniqueOpeners67
45.35% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences147
matches
0"Bright blue irises locked onto"
1"Then he looked at Rory's"
ratio0.014
67.62% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount56
totalSentences147
matches
0"She pulled her coat tighter,"
1"Her shoulder-length black hair stuck"
2"She checked her watch, then"
3"She was late for a"
4"She pushed the door open."
5"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
6"His neat beard framed a"
7"He spotted her through the"
8"Her eyes scanned the room."
9"She set her damp umbrella"
10"She took a breath."
11"Her voice was lower than"
12"She kept her hands in"
13"His slight limp in his"
14"He stopped at the counter"
15"He turned back to the"
16"Her hands had changed too;"
17"It was a dry sound."
18"She took a sip of"
19"She pointed at the bag"
ratio0.381
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount138
totalSentences147
matches
0"Rain slicked the Soho pavement,"
1"Aurora Carter stepped out of"
2"She pulled her coat tighter,"
3"Her shoulder-length black hair stuck"
4"She checked her watch, then"
5"She was late for a"
6"She pushed the door open."
7"The bell chimed, a sharp"
8"The walls were covered with"
9"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
10"His neat beard framed a"
11"He spotted her through the"
12"Aurora moved to the back"
13"Her eyes scanned the room."
14"The stranger held a glass"
15"She set her damp umbrella"
16"The scar on her left"
17"She took a breath."
18"The air smelled of gin"
19"The woman turned her head."
ratio0.939
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences147
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The walls were covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs that seemed to stare at her from the gloom."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Eva snapped (snap)"
1"Eva pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences90
tagDensity0.189
leniency0.378
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.044
81.6709%