Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBJPZVWJ8QFNED36BXT8590

Run Details

Duration:
28.2s
Cost:
$0.013623
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The lock clicked, a heavy mechanical sound that echoed in the narrow hallway. Aurora turned the key, feeling the familiar resistance of the deadbolt. She did not expect company. The bar below, Silas', had gone quiet an hour ago, leaving only the low hum of the ventilation and the distant wail of a siren from Brick Lane. She opened the door, hand still on the knob, and the breath caught in her throat. Lucien Moreau stood on the threshold. Rainwater dripped from the brim of his hat, pooling on the worn carpet. He wore a charcoal suit that cost more than her monthly rent, tailored to hide the line of a weapon at his hip. His cane, ivory-handled, rested against his shin. The streetlamp behind him cast his face in shadow, but the light caught his eyes. One burned amber, the other a void of black. They held her gaze without blinking. He did not smile. The corners of his mouth remained flat, pressed tight against the tension in his jaw. Aurora kept her hand on the door, the wood between them solid and cold. She did not step back. You have a lot of nerve showing up here, Lucien. Her voice sounded steady, though her pulse hammered against her ribs. She shifted her weight, the small crescent scar on her left wrist catching the light. She pulled her sleeve down to cover it. The rain picked up, drumming against the pavement outside. Lucien lifted the cane slightly, tapping the tip against the floorboards. The sound was deliberate. I did not come for a social call, Aurora. He moved forward, just an inch. The smell of wet wool and expensive cologne drifted into the hallway. It mixed with the stale scent of old wood and the faint aroma of curry drifting up from the restaurant below. Then why are you here? Safety. He said the word as if it tasted bitter. His black eye seemed to swallow the light, while the amber one reflected the hallway bulb. Safety? I left London because of the safety you offered. You left because you had to. Aurora stepped back, finally, holding the door open wider. She needed space. She needed air. Lucien crossed the threshold without waiting for an invitation. He closed the door behind him with a soft click, engaging the lock with a flick of his wrist. The sound of the lock sliding home felt like a gavel strike. He stood in the center of the entryway, tall and imposing. The hallway was narrow, lined with coats and shoes. He took up all the space. You think I wanted to leave? I think you did what you had to do to keep your hands clean. Lucien turned to face her. He ran a gloved hand through his platinum hair, slicking it back. The motion was sharp, agitated. My hands are never clean. You know that. Aurora walked past him, heading for the kitchen. She needed to pour a drink. Her hands shook, so she gripped the counter until the knuckles turned white. She grabbed a bottle of whiskey and two glasses. I know what you are. He followed her. The sound of his cane on the floorboards marked his pace. He leaned against the doorframe of the kitchen, arms crossed over his chest. And yet, you pour two. She filled the glasses, the amber liquid sloshing over the rim. She set one down on the counter in front of him. Drink. Or leave. Lucien picked up the glass. He did not drink. He swirled the liquid, watching the light refract through the crystal. There is a problem. A faction in the East End. They know about you. Aurora froze. The bottle hovered over the second glass. She set it down with a sharp clink. How do they know? It does not matter. What matters is that they are moving. Tonight. She turned to face him. The distance between them felt charged, electric. She remembered the last time they stood this close. The heat of his skin, the way his heterochromatic eyes softened when he looked at her. That was before the job in Marseille. Before the blood. Why tell me? You could have just walked away. I cannot walk away. He set the glass down on the counter. He did not drink. He looked at her, really looked at her, and the mask slipped. For a second, the cold fixer vanished, leaving only the man who had held her in the rain in Marseille. I told you to stay away from me, Lucien. You told me to survive. He pushed off the doorframe. He moved closer, stopping just outside her personal space. She could feel the heat radiating from him. I am not asking you to come with me. I am asking you to listen. I am listening. He reached out. His gloved hand hovered near her face. She did not flinch, but her breath hitched. He stopped, his fingers curling into a fist before he pulled back. They have a tracker on your phone. Aurora looked down at the device on the counter. She had not checked it since she got home. When? An hour ago. She picked up the phone. The screen was dark. She pressed the side button. Nothing. You took it out? I jammed the signal. For now. Aurora walked to the window. She looked out at the street below. The rain blurred the streetlights into streaks of gold and grey. She could see the silhouette of the curry house sign flickering. If they are tracking me, they are here. They are on the street. They will not come up yet. They want you to walk out. She turned back to him. And you? I am here to ensure you do not. He took a step toward her. The air in the kitchen felt thick, heavy with the weight of things unsaid. She wanted to push him away. She wanted to pull him closer. The history between them sat in the room like smoke. Why now? After all this time. Because I made a mistake. He said it quietly. The admission hung in the air, fragile and dangerous. What mistake? Leaving you. Aurora gripped the edge of the counter. The wood dug into her palms. You left me to protect me. I left you because I was afraid. The words landed like a physical blow. She stared at him, searching his face for the lie. She found none. The amber eye burned with a fierce intensity, the black one dark and unreadable. Afraid of what? Of what I am. Of what I bring. He reached into his jacket. Aurora tensed, her muscles coiling. He did not pull a weapon. He pulled a small envelope. He slid it across the counter. Names. Locations. Times. She looked at the envelope. It was sealed with wax. Why give this to me? Because you are smarter than them. Aurora picked up the envelope. It was heavy. She felt the weight of the paper, the secrets inside. And if I don't take it? Then you walk out that door. He pointed to the entrance. And you? I stay. She looked at the door, then at him. The silence stretched, taut as a wire. The bar below erupted with a sudden burst of laughter, a muffled sound that vibrated through the floorboards. You cannot stay here, Lucien. They will find you. Let them try. He straightened his cuffs. The movement was precise, practiced. You have ten minutes to pack. I am not going anywhere. You are. He walked toward her. He stopped inches away. She could smell the rain on his coat, the sharp scent of gun oil. He looked down at her, his expression unreadable. Please, Rory. The use of her name broke something inside her. She had not heard him say it in two years. She looked at the envelope in her hand, then at the man who had ruined her life and saved it in the same breath. Ten minutes? Ten. He turned and walked back to the living room. He leaned against the wall, cane in hand, watching the door. Aurora stood still for a moment, the envelope burning in her grip. She looked at the scar on her wrist, the mark of a childhood accident that felt insignificant now. She took a breath, held it, and let it out. She moved to the bedroom.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
92.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1406
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1406
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"mechanical"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"tension"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"weight"
count3
6
word"imposing"
count1
7
word"crystal"
count1
8
word"charged"
count1
9
word"electric"
count1
10
word"could feel"
count1
11
word"ensure"
count1
12
word"intensity"
count1
13
word"unreadable"
count2
14
word"silence"
count1
15
word"vibrated"
count1
highlights
0"mechanical"
1"echoed"
2"familiar"
3"tension"
4"pulse"
5"weight"
6"imposing"
7"crystal"
8"charged"
9"electric"
10"could feel"
11"ensure"
12"intensity"
13"unreadable"
14"silence"
15"vibrated"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences194
matches
0"was afraid"
91.31% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount6
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences194
filterMatches
0"think"
1"know"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences194
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1406
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1381
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.87
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Lucien8
Aurora12
London1
East1
End1
Marseille2
Rory1
You11
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Aurora"
3"Rory"
4"You"
places
0"London"
1"East"
2"End"
3"Marseille"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences108
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a gavel strike"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.711
wordCount1406
matches
0"not flinch, but her breath hitched"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences194
matches
0"is that they"
1"out that door"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs93
mean15.12
std15.24
cv1.008
sampleLengths
073
179
219
319
410
534
624
79
839
95
101
1125
1210
136
1455
1526
166
1714
1822
198
2036
215
2227
235
2422
253
2620
2714
2817
294
3012
3147
329
334
3444
359
365
3722
3815
393
4030
417
4218
431
443
4515
464
476
4834
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences194
matches
0"was sealed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs266
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences194
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount32
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount0
adverbRatio0
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences194
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences194
mean7.25
std4.65
cv0.642
sampleLengths
013
111
25
328
416
56
613
723
87
915
109
116
124
1315
1414
155
1610
1711
1815
198
209
2111
224
239
246
2512
2621
275
281
299
3016
311
329
336
349
353
363
379
3819
3912
4011
419
426
436
4414
455
4612
475
485
493
38.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats23
diversityRatio0.22164948453608246
totalSentences194
uniqueOpeners43
38.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences172
matches
0"Then why are you here?"
1"Then you walk out that"
ratio0.012
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount107
totalSentences172
matches
0"She did not expect company."
1"She opened the door, hand"
2"He wore a charcoal suit"
3"His cane, ivory-handled, rested against"
4"They held her gaze without"
5"He did not smile."
6"She did not step back."
7"You have a lot of"
8"Her voice sounded steady, though"
9"She shifted her weight, the"
10"She pulled her sleeve down"
11"I did not come for"
12"He moved forward, just an"
13"It mixed with the stale"
14"He said the word as"
15"His black eye seemed to"
16"I left London because of"
17"You left because you had"
18"She needed space."
19"She needed air."
ratio0.622
18.14% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount152
totalSentences172
matches
0"The lock clicked, a heavy"
1"Aurora turned the key, feeling"
2"She did not expect company."
3"The bar below,"
4"She opened the door, hand"
5"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
6"Rainwater dripped from the brim"
7"He wore a charcoal suit"
8"His cane, ivory-handled, rested against"
9"The streetlamp behind him cast"
10"They held her gaze without"
11"He did not smile."
12"The corners of his mouth"
13"Aurora kept her hand on"
14"She did not step back."
15"You have a lot of"
16"Her voice sounded steady, though"
17"She shifted her weight, the"
18"She pulled her sleeve down"
19"The rain picked up, drumming"
ratio0.884
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount4
totalSentences172
matches
0"Before the blood."
1"If they are tracking me,"
2"Because I made a mistake."
3"Because you are smarter than"
ratio0.023
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The lock clicked, a heavy mechanical sound that echoed in the narrow hallway."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.9447%