Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBJQJF9NKWQF3R35GZKCP5H

Run Details

Duration:
25.1s
Cost:
$0.012137
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid home with a heavy, metallic click that vibrated through the doorframe. Aurora Carter pressed her back against the wood, her breath hitching in the stale air of the hallway. She knew the sequence. Eva had drilled it into her head: check the peephole, engage the top bolt, the middle, then the bottom. Only then was Brick Lane safe. But the safety was an illusion, and the smell of cumin and turmeric rising from the curry house below did nothing to mask the sudden, sharp spike of adrenaline in her blood. She hadn't expected anyone. Not tonight. Not after the way she had vanished from his life three months ago, leaving nothing but a note on a barstool and a silence that screamed. Aurora moved to the peephole, her shoulder brushing the pile of scrolls stacked precariously against the doorframe. Her bright blue eyes narrowed against the distortion of the glass. She didn't need to see his face to know who it was. The silhouette was too tall, too rigid. The platinum hair caught the dim hallway light like a blade. She didn't move to open the door. She just stood there, her left hand resting against the wood. The small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist throbbed, a phantom echo of the childhood accident that had taught her how to bleed, and the adult mistakes that taught her how to hide. "Aurora," a voice came through the wood, smooth as poured velvet and just as dangerous. "You're blocking the light." She unlocked the bolts. One. Two. Three. She opened the door. Lucien Moreau stood there, filling the narrow frame. He wore a tailored charcoal suit that cost more than her monthly rent, the fabric sharp enough to cut. His ivory-handled cane rested against his leg, the metal tip clicking softly against the floorboards. He smelled of rain, expensive tobacco, and the ozone tang of something that wasn't quite human. "You're not supposed to be here," she said. Her voice was steady, cool-headed, the way she always forced herself to be when the world threatened to tilt off its axis. "And yet, here I am." Lucien didn't step inside. He didn't need to. His presence was invasive enough. His eyes, heterochromatic and unsettling, fixed on her. One iris was a burning amber, the other a void of black. "The security system on this flat is adequate, but the lock on the back window is rusted. I noticed it from the alley." Aurora felt the heat rise in her cheeks, a mix of anger and humiliation. "I know how to secure a perimeter, Lucien. I didn't ask for a safety audit." "You didn't ask for anything." He finally stepped over the threshold. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, wound himself around Lucien's polished shoes, purring with a lack of self-preservation that annoyed Aurora. "But the house is burning down, Rory. You can't hide in a library while the roof collapses." "This isn't a library. It's a flat." She closed the door and engaged the deadbolts again, her movements sharp. She turned to face him, crossing her arms over her chest. The room was cramped, every surface covered in books, research notes, and maps of the London underworld. "Why are you here? If you're looking for the ledger, it's not here. If you're looking for me, you found me." "I'm looking for the truth." Lucien set his cane down. He leaned forward, the movement fluid, predatory. "You left Cardiff. You left Evan. You came to London and vanished into the underground. I tracked you to a delivery route for a Chinese restaurant, and now I find you holed up in Eva's flat surrounded by demonology texts." "I'm working." "You're running." He took a step closer. The distance between them closed, charged with the static of old arguments and unsaid things. "You think I don't know what you're doing? You think I don't know why you're afraid?" "I'm not afraid of you." "Good." He stopped just out of reach. "Because I'm not the enemy. Not anymore." Aurora looked at him, really looked at him. The sharp line of his jaw, the slicked-back hair that hid the horns he kept sheathed, the way his suit strained slightly against his shoulders. He was half-demon, a creature of the realm of Avaros, and he had been the one person who made her feel safe enough to be reckless. Until he wasn't. Until the line blurred. "You told me to stay away," she said, the words tasting like ash. "You said if I got involved, I'd get burned." "I was trying to protect you." "From what? You?" She gestured to the cluttered room, the stacks of paper. "I'm not a damsel, Lucien. I'm a researcher. I'm a survivor." "You're a target." He reached out, his hand hovering near her arm. She flinched, the movement small but visible. He stopped, his expression hardening. "The people I work for... they know you're in London. They know you're close to the truth about the breach in the veil. If you stay here, they will find you." "Then I'll move." "No." The word was final. "You need a fixer. You need someone who knows how to navigate the shadows without getting caught." "I don't need you." "You do." Lucien's voice dropped, losing its professional edge, becoming something raw. "You think I came here to drag you back? I came because I couldn't sleep knowing you were walking into a war zone with no armor." Aurora looked down at her hands. She could feel the heat radiating from him, a physical pull that made her knees weak. It was the same pull that had brought them together in the first place, the magnetic attraction that had complicated everything. She wanted to hate him for leaving, for the things he hadn't told her, for the way he made her feel like she was the only real thing in his world of lies. "You should leave," she whispered. "If I leave, you're alone." "I've been alone before." "Not like this." He stepped in, closing the gap. He didn't touch her, but the air between them grew heavy. "Let me help you, Rory. Just this once. Let me fix it." Aurora looked at the scar on her wrist. She looked at the man who had promised to keep her safe and then had broken that promise without saying a word. She looked at the books, the scrolls, the life she had built in the safety of Eva's flat. It was fragile. It was temporary. She took a breath, the scent of his cologne and the curry from below filling her lungs. "If you help me," she said, her voice firm, "you don't get to leave again. Not until this is over." Lucien's amber eye flared, the black one staying dark. A faint smile touched his lips, grim and relieved. "Deal." "Good." Aurora turned toward the table, grabbing a stack of maps. "Then sit down. And don't touch my notes." Lucien picked up his cane and moved to the small chair, settling in as if he belonged there. "I wouldn't dream of it." Aurora watched him for a moment longer, the tension in her shoulders easing just a fraction. The door was locked. The cat was purring. And for the first time in months, she wasn't alone.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He stopped just [just]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.366
leniency0.732
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.049
87.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1221
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"really"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1221
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"vibrated"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"throbbed"
count1
3
word"echo"
count1
4
word"velvet"
count1
5
word"charged"
count1
6
word"navigate"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"magnetic"
count1
9
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"vibrated"
1"silence"
2"throbbed"
3"echo"
4"velvet"
5"charged"
6"navigate"
7"could feel"
8"magnetic"
9"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences79
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1221
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount860
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.05
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Brick1
Lane1
Moreau1
Ptolemy1
Lucien7
Aurora9
London1
Avaros1
Eva2
persons
0"Carter"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Aurora"
4"Eva"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
globalScore0.977
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite human"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.819
wordCount1221
matches
0"Not after the way she had vanished from his life three months ago, leaving nothing but a note on a barstool"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"broken that promise"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean32.13
std23.43
cv0.729
sampleLengths
094
132
258
350
419
511
658
730
861
929
1047
1168
1257
132
1438
155
1614
1766
1822
196
2024
2155
223
2322
244
2538
2676
275
285
294
3032
3154
3217
3320
3419
3519
3623
3734
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"was cramped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs151
matches
0"was purring"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences103
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount866
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.02771362586605081
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.009237875288683603
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean11.85
std8.08
cv0.682
sampleLengths
015
118
24
319
46
532
64
72
826
917
1011
1112
127
1311
147
1511
1632
1715
184
194
201
211
221
234
248
2519
2615
2716
288
2922
309
314
325
338
3412
3523
3614
3715
3811
3919
4017
4119
4211
4317
4421
4510
467
4740
482
497
40.45% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.30097087378640774
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners31
45.66% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"Only then was Brick Lane"
ratio0.014
11.78% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences73
matches
0"She knew the sequence."
1"She hadn't expected anyone."
2"Her bright blue eyes narrowed"
3"She didn't need to see"
4"She didn't move to open"
5"She just stood there, her"
6"She unlocked the bolts."
7"She opened the door."
8"He wore a tailored charcoal"
9"His ivory-handled cane rested against"
10"He smelled of rain, expensive"
11"Her voice was steady, cool-headed,"
12"He didn't need to."
13"His presence was invasive enough."
14"His eyes, heterochromatic and unsettling,"
15"He finally stepped over the"
16"She closed the door and"
17"She turned to face him,"
18"He leaned forward, the movement"
19"He took a step closer"
ratio0.521
7.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences73
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid home"
1"Aurora Carter pressed her back"
2"She knew the sequence."
3"Eva had drilled it into"
4"She hadn't expected anyone."
5"Aurora moved to the peephole,"
6"Her bright blue eyes narrowed"
7"She didn't need to see"
8"The silhouette was too tall,"
9"The platinum hair caught the"
10"She didn't move to open"
11"She just stood there, her"
12"The small crescent-shaped scar on"
13"a voice came through the"
14"She unlocked the bolts."
15"She opened the door."
16"Lucien Moreau stood there, filling"
17"He wore a tailored charcoal"
18"His ivory-handled cane rested against"
19"He smelled of rain, expensive"
ratio0.904
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist throbbed, a phantom echo of the childhood accident that had taught her how to bleed, and the adult mistakes that tau…"
1"He smelled of rain, expensive tobacco, and the ozone tang of something that wasn't quite human."
2"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, wound himself around Lucien's polished shoes, purring with a lack of self-preservation that annoyed Aurora."
3"The sharp line of his jaw, the slicked-back hair that hid the horns he kept sheathed, the way his suit strained slightly against his shoulders."
4"He was half-demon, a creature of the realm of Avaros, and he had been the one person who made her feel safe enough to be reckless."
5"She could feel the heat radiating from him, a physical pull that made her knees weak."
6"It was the same pull that had brought them together in the first place, the magnetic attraction that had complicated everything."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"She closed, her movements sharp"
1"She gestured, the stacks of paper"
2"He reached out, his hand hovering near her arm"
3"she said, her voice firm,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.098
leniency0.195
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.049
78.1427%