| 85.71% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said softly [softly]" | | 1 | "he said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.486 | | leniency | 0.971 | | rawRatio | 0.118 | | effectiveRatio | 0.114 | |
| 90.77% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1625 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 41.54% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1625 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "dancing" | | 1 | "echoed" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "vibrated" | | 4 | "reminder" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "measured" | | 7 | "familiar" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "gleaming" | | 11 | "calculating" | | 12 | "tension" | | 13 | "looming" | | 14 | "stark" | | 15 | "footsteps" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 117 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 117 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 135 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1622 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 1271 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.71 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | East | 1 | | London | 3 | | Pre-Law | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Marseille | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Lucien | 7 | | Rory | 9 | | Three | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Evan" | | 2 | "Ptolemy" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Three" |
| | places | | 0 | "East" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "Brick" | | 4 | "Lane" | | 5 | "Marseille" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 90.48% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like he had walked straight out of" | | 1 | "sounded like an accusation, or perhaps an" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.617 | | wordCount | 1622 | | matches | | 0 | "not to her, but letting it rest against the doorframe beside her shoulder" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 37.72 | | std | 24.37 | | cv | 0.646 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 96 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 80 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 94 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 36 | | 10 | 54 | | 11 | 45 | | 12 | 50 | | 13 | 76 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 65 | | 18 | 40 | | 19 | 70 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 51 | | 24 | 48 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 46 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 89 | | 30 | 28 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 61 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 45 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 46 | | 39 | 28 | | 40 | 42 | | 41 | 50 | | 42 | 23 |
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| 99.27% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "being pushed" | | 1 | "was buried" |
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| 79.34% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 221 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't inviting" | | 1 | "wasn't closing" | | 2 | "was sitting" | | 3 | "was holding" |
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| 79.37% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 135 | | ratio | 0.022 | | matches | | 0 | "Below, through the floorboards, the muffled clatter of the curry house kitchen echoed—a rhythmic, heavy thumping that vibrated through her heels and up her shins." | | 1 | "She wanted to know if the way he looked at her—intense, calculating, yet fixed with a singular focus—was professional or personal." | | 2 | "He was the weapon; she was the one holding it, pretending she knew how to use it." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1275 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.034509803921568626 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01019607843137255 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 135 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 135 | | mean | 12.01 | | std | 7.52 | | cv | 0.626 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 32 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 24 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 32 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 31.48% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 25 | | diversityRatio | 0.25925925925925924 | | totalSentences | 135 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 99.01% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "Only then did she let" | | 1 | "Just a fraction." | | 2 | "Just enough for the ink" |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a constant reminder" | | 1 | "She was three years late" | | 2 | "Her heart did that familiar" | | 3 | "She looked down at her" | | 4 | "She stood, the chair scraping" | | 5 | "Her fingers hovered over the" | | 6 | "She’d installed the middle one" | | 7 | "She slid the bolt back." | | 8 | "She didn't open the peephole" | | 9 | "She wasn't sure she could" | | 10 | "She simply unlatched the chain" | | 11 | "He looked like he had" | | 12 | "He was a striking figure" | | 13 | "He wore a tailored charcoal" | | 14 | "Her voice was steady, cool," | | 15 | "It was a small, dangerous" | | 16 | "He shifted his weight, leaning" | | 17 | "His eyes were the first" | | 18 | "His voice was low, smooth," | | 19 | "She didn't move to close" |
| | ratio | 0.594 | |
| 24.36% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 88 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "The dust motes dancing in" | | 1 | "Rory kept her eyes fixed" | | 2 | "It was a constant reminder" | | 3 | "She was three years late" | | 4 | "Time had become a fluid" | | 5 | "A knock at the door" | | 6 | "Rory’s hand tightened around her" | | 7 | "Her heart did that familiar" | | 8 | "She looked down at her" | | 9 | "The small crescent scar from" | | 10 | "She stood, the chair scraping" | | 11 | "Her fingers hovered over the" | | 12 | "She’d installed the middle one" | | 13 | "She slid the bolt back." | | 14 | "She didn't open the peephole" | | 15 | "She wasn't sure she could" | | 16 | "She simply unlatched the chain" | | 17 | "Lucien stood in the hallway." | | 18 | "He looked like he had" | | 19 | "He was a striking figure" |
| | ratio | 0.871 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 37.04% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Below, through the floorboards, the muffled clatter of the curry house kitchen echoed—a rhythmic, heavy thumping that vibrated through her heels and up her shin…" | | 1 | "She wasn't sure she could handle looking at him through the glass without her composure cracking." | | 2 | "He was a striking figure even in the dim light of the stairwell, his platinum blond hair slicked back with a precision that defied the humidity of the street." | | 3 | "The scar on her wrist ached, a phantom sensation that had no physical cause." | | 4 | "His voice was low, smooth, carrying the faintest trace of a Marseille accent that had worn off in the last decade but never quite vanished." | | 5 | "He stopped just inside the threshold, invading her personal space with the calm confidence of someone who knew he was welcome, or at least feared." | | 6 | "She felt the heat rising in her neck, a traitorous flush that betrayed her attempt at detachment." | | 7 | "The tether that kept her bound to him even when she thought she had cut it free." |
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| 95.59% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she asked, the question slipping out before she could stop it" |
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| 92.86% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Lucien corrected (correct)" | | 1 | "she lied (lie)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.371 | | leniency | 0.743 | | rawRatio | 0.154 | | effectiveRatio | 0.114 | |