Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBJWH17B2VGQMTHFZCY6V2C

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Duration:
32.3s
Cost:
$0.009860
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The dust motes dancing in the shaft of afternoon light were the only things moving in the flat. Rory kept her eyes fixed on the scroll in front of her, the ink still wet where her pen had paused. Below, through the floorboards, the muffled clatter of the curry house kitchen echoed—a rhythmic, heavy thumping that vibrated through her heels and up her shins. It was a constant reminder that she was in East London, in a building that smelled perpetually of cardamom and oil, a far cry from the quiet study of Pre-Law in Cardiff. She was three years late to finish this assignment. Or three weeks. Time had become a fluid concept since she arrived in London. A knock at the door broke the silence. Three raps, measured and precise. Rory’s hand tightened around her pen. Her heart did that familiar stutter, the one she’d spent five years trying to train out of her system, the one she associated with bad news or unexpected visitors. She looked down at her left wrist. The small crescent scar from the childhood accident was pale against her skin, a white hook marking where the door latch had once missed. She stood, the chair scraping harshly against the floor, and moved toward the entryway. Her fingers hovered over the deadbolts. Three of them. She’d installed the middle one last week. She slid the bolt back. She didn't open the peephole first. She wasn't sure she could handle looking at him through the glass without her composure cracking. She simply unlatched the chain and pulled the door open. Lucien stood in the hallway. He looked like he had walked straight out of a noir film and into the grime of Brick Lane, which was perhaps the point. He was a striking figure even in the dim light of the stairwell, his platinum blond hair slicked back with a precision that defied the humidity of the street. He wore a tailored charcoal suit, the fabric absorbing the light rather than reflecting it. In his right hand, he held his cane. Ivory handle. The blade hidden within the shaft was a promise of violence kept in check by etiquette. Rory leaned back against the doorframe, arms crossed over her chest. The scar on her wrist ached, a phantom sensation that had no physical cause. "You have terrible timing, Luc," she said. Her voice was steady, cool, exactly as Eva had taught her it should be in an emergency. "If this is about the information broker network, the meeting is Monday." Lucien smiled. It was a small, dangerous curve of the lips, devoid of warmth. He shifted his weight, leaning slightly on his cane. His eyes were the first thing that made the air in the hallway feel thin. One amber, one black, a jarring duality that made her remember why she had walked away. "It is not about the network, Aurora," he said. His voice was low, smooth, carrying the faintest trace of a Marseille accent that had worn off in the last decade but never quite vanished. "I am here because you stopped sending reports. That is irregular." "You are my contact, not my handler." She didn't move to close the door. She wasn't inviting him in, but she wasn't closing him out either. "And I haven't sent a report in six months. You're the one who sent me to this flat to hide from the supernatural fallout." "Because you needed to disappear," Lucien corrected. He took a step forward, his movement silent on the worn wood. He stopped just inside the threshold, invading her personal space with the calm confidence of someone who knew he was welcome, or at least feared. "Evan was not a supernatural threat, Rory. He was a human with a temper and a grudge. I was told to facilitate your relocation. I did not sign off on the silence." She felt the heat rising in her neck, a traitorous flush that betrayed her attempt at detachment. "I am taking a break, Lucien. I am studying. I am delivering food. I am living." "You are hiding," he said softly. He tilted his head, the black eye catching the light, the amber one gleaming like a coin in the dark. "And you are not doing it well." Rory glanced past him. The hallway was empty, just the peeling wallpaper of the building. "What do you want?" "I want to know if you are compromised." He reached into his pocket and withdrew a small, silver envelope. He held it out, not to her, but letting it rest against the doorframe beside her shoulder. "If you are in danger from the world you tried to leave behind, I need to know. If not... I assume you are simply ignoring the protocol we established." Rory looked at the envelope. She knew what was inside without opening it. The code for the next transfer. The money. The instructions. The tether that kept her bound to him even when she thought she had cut it free. She looked back up at him. His face was impassive, a mask of a fixer who did not feel things. She wanted to tear that mask off. She wanted to know if the way he looked at her—intense, calculating, yet fixed with a singular focus—was professional or personal. It was the same look that had followed her to London when she had fled Evan, the look that had saved her. "I am fine, Luc," she lied. "It is evident," he replied. His gaze dropped to her wrist where it rested against her bicep. "You are holding your breath." Rory exhaled. The air left her lungs in a rush, shaky. "I am tired." "I can see that." He pushed off the doorframe and stepped back, giving her a sliver of breathing room. "I will not stay. I am not here to drag you back to the office. But I am here to tell you that the silence has been noted by the wrong people." She stepped back from the door, into the living room where books and scrolls spilled onto every surface, the evidence of her life in the city. The cat, Ptolemy, a tabby with eyes like melted gold, was sitting on top of the bookshelf, watching them with indifferent boredom. "Who knows I am here?" she asked, turning back to him. "Rumor travels faster than delivery vans," Lucien said. He glanced around the cramped room, his eyes taking in the clutter, the books, the research notes pinned to the walls with tacks. "Eva is a good friend, Aurora. But she cannot protect you from what is coming." "I don't need protection from you right now." "You never did," he said. It sounded like an accusation, or perhaps an admission. The silence stretched between them, heavy with the history of the last three years. The history of the night she had left his car in the rain. The history of the deal they had made that had ended with neither of them keeping the other's secrets safe. There was a tension in the room that had nothing to do with the curry smell wafting up from below. It was the static of two magnets trying to find a pole to connect, but being pushed apart by force of habit. Lucien tapped the ivory handle of his cane against the floor once. The sound was sharp. "I have to go. If I stay, they will see me enter." "Who will see you?" Rory asked, moving closer to the door but not touching the handle. "Enemies," Lucien said. "They do not like me being seen with people who do not pay me. It looks like sympathy." "Good thing you are a fixer." "Good thing you are stubborn." He pushed himself up to his full height, 5'11" looming over her 5'6". The difference in their stances was stark. He was the weapon; she was the one holding it, pretending she knew how to use it. "I will send a runner on Sunday. If you are not in the flat, I will assume the worst." "And if you are not in the flat?" she asked, the question slipping out before she could stop it. Lucien paused. He looked at her, really looked at her, his heterochromatic gaze searching the space behind her eyes. For a second, the mask slipped. He looked tired. The exhaustion was buried deep, behind the tailored suit and the polished cane, but it was there. "I am always in the flat, Aurora," he said quietly. "I am just not always in your life." He turned away. He didn't wait for a reply. He walked back into the hallway, his cane clicking rhythmically against the wood. Rory watched him go. She didn't close the door immediately. She let him walk until the sound of his footsteps faded down the stairwell. Only then did she let out the breath she didn't realize she was holding. She reached out and closed the deadbolt. Three locks. Three locks against the world. She looked down at the silver envelope he had left. She picked it up. It was heavier than it looked. She placed it on the table next to the scroll, her pen still wet with ink. She didn't open it. Not yet. The cat, Ptolemy, hopped down from the shelf, walking to her feet and rubbing his head against her ankle. Rory reached down and scratched him behind the ears. She knew what she had to do. She knew the rules of the game, even if the player had changed his stance. But as she picked up her pen, her hand shook. Just a fraction. Just enough for the ink to bleed onto the paper.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
85.71% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said softly [softly]"
1"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.486
leniency0.971
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.114
90.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1625
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.54% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1625
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"dancing"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"rhythmic"
count1
3
word"vibrated"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"silence"
count4
6
word"measured"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"gleaming"
count1
11
word"calculating"
count1
12
word"tension"
count1
13
word"looming"
count1
14
word"stark"
count1
15
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"dancing"
1"echoed"
2"rhythmic"
3"vibrated"
4"reminder"
5"silence"
6"measured"
7"familiar"
8"warmth"
9"weight"
10"gleaming"
11"calculating"
12"tension"
13"looming"
14"stark"
15"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences117
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences135
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1622
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1271
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.71
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
East1
London3
Pre-Law1
Cardiff1
Brick1
Lane1
Eva1
Marseille1
Evan1
Ptolemy2
Lucien7
Rory9
Three4
persons
0"Eva"
1"Evan"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
4"Rory"
5"Three"
places
0"East"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"Brick"
4"Lane"
5"Marseille"
globalScore1
windowScore1
90.48% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like he had walked straight out of"
1"sounded like an accusation, or perhaps an"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.617
wordCount1622
matches
0"not to her, but letting it rest against the doorframe beside her shoulder"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences135
matches
0"tear that mask"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean37.72
std24.37
cv0.646
sampleLengths
096
123
213
380
421
532
65
794
825
936
1054
1145
1250
1376
1433
1533
1619
1765
1840
1970
206
2122
2214
2351
2448
2511
2646
278
2814
2989
3028
3116
3221
336
3461
3519
3645
3718
3846
3928
4042
4150
4223
99.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences117
matches
0"being pushed"
1"was buried"
79.34% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs221
matches
0"wasn't inviting"
1"wasn't closing"
2"was sitting"
3"was holding"
79.37% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences135
ratio0.022
matches
0"Below, through the floorboards, the muffled clatter of the curry house kitchen echoed—a rhythmic, heavy thumping that vibrated through her heels and up her shins."
1"She wanted to know if the way he looked at her—intense, calculating, yet fixed with a singular focus—was professional or personal."
2"He was the weapon; she was the one holding it, pretending she knew how to use it."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1275
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.034509803921568626
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.01019607843137255
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences135
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences135
mean12.01
std7.52
cv0.626
sampleLengths
018
121
225
332
49
53
611
78
85
96
1029
117
1224
1314
146
153
167
175
186
1916
2010
215
2224
2329
2415
258
262
2716
2811
2914
307
3117
3212
332
3412
359
3615
3716
389
3925
4011
4114
4212
4324
447
4512
4625
4732
4817
4916
31.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats25
diversityRatio0.25925925925925924
totalSentences135
uniqueOpeners35
99.01% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences101
matches
0"Only then did she let"
1"Just a fraction."
2"Just enough for the ink"
ratio0.03
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount60
totalSentences101
matches
0"It was a constant reminder"
1"She was three years late"
2"Her heart did that familiar"
3"She looked down at her"
4"She stood, the chair scraping"
5"Her fingers hovered over the"
6"She’d installed the middle one"
7"She slid the bolt back."
8"She didn't open the peephole"
9"She wasn't sure she could"
10"She simply unlatched the chain"
11"He looked like he had"
12"He was a striking figure"
13"He wore a tailored charcoal"
14"Her voice was steady, cool,"
15"It was a small, dangerous"
16"He shifted his weight, leaning"
17"His eyes were the first"
18"His voice was low, smooth,"
19"She didn't move to close"
ratio0.594
24.36% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences101
matches
0"The dust motes dancing in"
1"Rory kept her eyes fixed"
2"It was a constant reminder"
3"She was three years late"
4"Time had become a fluid"
5"A knock at the door"
6"Rory’s hand tightened around her"
7"Her heart did that familiar"
8"She looked down at her"
9"The small crescent scar from"
10"She stood, the chair scraping"
11"Her fingers hovered over the"
12"She’d installed the middle one"
13"She slid the bolt back."
14"She didn't open the peephole"
15"She wasn't sure she could"
16"She simply unlatched the chain"
17"Lucien stood in the hallway."
18"He looked like he had"
19"He was a striking figure"
ratio0.871
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
ratio0
37.04% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Below, through the floorboards, the muffled clatter of the curry house kitchen echoed—a rhythmic, heavy thumping that vibrated through her heels and up her shin…"
1"She wasn't sure she could handle looking at him through the glass without her composure cracking."
2"He was a striking figure even in the dim light of the stairwell, his platinum blond hair slicked back with a precision that defied the humidity of the street."
3"The scar on her wrist ached, a phantom sensation that had no physical cause."
4"His voice was low, smooth, carrying the faintest trace of a Marseille accent that had worn off in the last decade but never quite vanished."
5"He stopped just inside the threshold, invading her personal space with the calm confidence of someone who knew he was welcome, or at least feared."
6"She felt the heat rising in her neck, a traitorous flush that betrayed her attempt at detachment."
7"The tether that kept her bound to him even when she thought she had cut it free."
95.59% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she asked, the question slipping out before she could stop it"
92.86% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Lucien corrected (correct)"
1"she lied (lie)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.371
leniency0.743
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.114
81.5598%