Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBJZFDGX0YY4ZMJ4GQ3CY9H

Run Details

Duration:
41.6s
Cost:
$0.012890
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The brass knocker on the heavy oak door thudded against the wood like a heartbeat in the quiet room. Rory froze, the stack of scrolls she held slipping slightly in her grip. Sunlight cut through the dust motes dancing above the piles of books that choked the living room floor. Every surface groaned under the weight of research notes, ancient texts, and loose papers that seemed to have migrated from the desk to the floor and back again. Ptolemy, the tabby, sat on the window sill. He didn’t meow. The cat just lifted his chin, tail flicking once against the frame. Rory set the scrolls down. She didn’t turn around immediately. She walked toward the door, her sneakers silent on the floorboards that had been worn smooth by Ptolemy’s claws over the years. She paused, hand hovering over the top deadbolt. Three locks usually kept intruders out. She turned the bolt. Metal scraped against metal. Then the middle one. Then the latch. She cracked the door open just enough to see. Lucien Moreau stood in the hallway. Rain dampened the shoulders of his charcoal suit. Water dripped from the brim of his hat onto the welcome mat. The platinum blond hair slicked back against his skull. His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers without blinking. He leaned on an ivory-handled cane, the tip tapping a steady rhythm against the tile. You look ridiculous, Lucien. The corner of his mouth twitched. He didn’t step inside. He didn’t speak. The silence stretched, filled only by the low rumble of the curry house below and the distant traffic on Brick Lane. The smell of cardamom and sizzling oil drifted up through the floor vents. I was told you’d be harder to reach. Lucien. Rory gripped the edge of the door. Her left wrist ached where the crescent scar pulled against the skin when she tensed. She didn’t move out of the way. I’m not open for business today, Luc. He shifted his weight. The cane scraped against the doorframe. A bead of rain rolled down the ivory handle to stop at his gloved fingers. He wore a pair of black driving gloves. I don’t want a deal. I want to talk. Rory narrowed her eyes. The blue of her irises clashed with the grey of the hallway light. He stood too close for comfort, his presence filling the space where the deadbolts used to be. Talk about what? About the package. About the last time I saw you. The cat on the window sill let out a sharp mrrp. He stood up, hair bristled along his spine. Ptolemy jumped down, claws clicking on the hardwood. The animal moved toward Lucien, sniffing the hem of his trousers. He smells like ozone and wet wool. Rory stepped back, the door swinging wider. The heat of the room hit Lucien’s suit, creating a thin layer of steam where his shoulders met the collar. You broke your promise. You said you wouldn’t come here. I said I wouldn’t come during the day. He took a step forward. Rory didn’t retreat. Her heels dug into the floorboards. The books on the floor shifted under her foot. A paperback slid open to a dog-eared page. The air shifted. It smelled different. Expensive cologne fighting with the curry below. Why are you here, Luc? Really. He reached into his jacket pocket. Rory’s hand tightened on the doorknob. Lucien paused. Slowly, he withdrew a sealed envelope. The paper was thick, cream-colored, stamped with wax. This changes things. Rory didn’t take it. She kept her stance. The scar on her wrist throbbed. I’m not taking it. Lucien held the envelope out. His arm extended, but he didn’t force it. He waited. His expression remained cool, unreadable. The black eye caught the light. The amber one reflected the stacks of books behind her. If you don’t want it, I can leave it on the floor. Rory glanced at the envelope, then back at his eyes. She looked at the cane again. The blade concealed within. She knew what it was capable of. Put it there. Then get out. Lucien smirked. A flash of teeth. He bent slightly, lowering the envelope to the rug. He straightened, his movements fluid, practiced. He didn’t retreat. He just stood there, waiting for her to acknowledge the threat. You haven’t changed, Rory. You still run. I stayed safe. You stayed hiding. The cat purred. A low vibration in the quiet room. Ptolemy rubbed against Lucien’s shin. He looked down at the animal, then back up at Rory. He’s not a demon, Lucien. He’s just a cat. He’s a familiar. Rory stepped aside. She opened the door fully. The hallway light flickered above her head. The brass knocker dangled, swaying with the vibration of the curry house below. Get in, then get out. Lucien crossed the threshold. His shoes made a wet mark on the dry floor. He didn’t take his coat off. He moved into the room with the grace of a predator entering a den. His eyes scanned the room. They lingered on the stacks of books, the scrolls on the table, the security cameras in the corners. You still read. I still work. He stopped in front of the desk. He placed a hand on the edge of the wood. The room was cramped. Every surface was covered with books, scrolls, and research notes. It looked like a library had collapsed. This is dangerous territory. I manage. Lucien turned to her. The amber eye glinted. I need you to sign something. Rory walked toward the desk. She picked up a pen from the scattered clutter. It was a heavy silver fountain pen. She uncapped it. I need to see the contract first. Lucien reached into his pocket again. He pulled out a stack of papers. He slid them across the wood. They landed near Rory’s elbow. The paper slid into the dust. Read it. Rory bent down. Her shoulder-length black hair fell over her face. She didn’t read it immediately. She looked at the paper, then at his boots. The leather was scuffed. Mud from the streets. This isn’t right. What isn’t? The terms. The location. The payment. Lucien leaned on his cane. He huffed a laugh. The sound was dry, devoid of humor. It’s the only way, Rory. The cat jumped onto the chair behind her. He watched Lucien’s hands. The fingers were long, pale. Tell me why. Tell you why what? Why are you here, Luc. Not for the paper. For me. Silence. The rain outside picked up. It drummed against the windowpane where the cat had been moments ago. The curtains swayed. Because Evan’s coming. The pen dropped from Rory’s fingers. It clattered on the wood. She didn’t bend to pick it up. Who? Evan. The ex. Rory’s chest tightened. The scar on her wrist flared with phantom pain. She took a breath. The air was thick with tension. He’s alive. He found the trail. Rory backed up. Her hip hit the chair leg. She didn’t sit down. She leaned against the edge of the desk, putting distance between them. I told you I was gone. He didn’t listen. He’s in London. Lucien stepped closer. The cane tip dug into the rug. He smelled like wet rain and expensive tobacco. He’s not the only one, Rory. She narrowed her eyes. I’m not scared of him. You should be. Lucien looked at the door. The locks were still undone. The hallway light hummed. He brought something with him. Something old. Rory didn’t speak. She reached for the pen again. She picked it up. Her hand shook. Just a little. Show me the contract. Lucien didn’t move. He just watched her. The air in the room grew heavier. The books on the floor seemed to lean in closer. We need to leave. Now. Leave? Here? You can’t stay. I’m not going anywhere. Lucien sighed. He straightened his coat. The charcoal fabric rippled. Then I leave you to the wolves. The door creaked. A draft moved through the room. Dust motes swirled around Lucien’s ankles. Why can’t I stay? Because Evan isn’t human. Lucien’s voice dropped to a whisper. His amber eye flashed. Rory froze. The pen hovered over the paper. Tell me you’re joking. I don’t joke about this. The cat hissed. Ptolemy bared his teeth, ears flattening against his skull. He backed away from Lucien, claws scrabbling on the wood. Lucien watched the cat. Familiars smell the scent. Rory looked at the envelope on the floor. Then at Lucien. The rain outside hammered against the glass. Why come now? Because the trail leads back to this place. Rory grabbed the envelope. She tore it open with a rough tug. The paper crinkled. She scanned the lines. Her eyes darted across the text. This isn’t a contract. It’s a trap. It’s a protection. Rory laughed. A sharp, brittle sound. I don’t need protection. You need survival. Lucien reached out. His hand hovered over hers. He didn’t touch her. He just let the space between them burn. Give it to me. No. I can’t help you if you don’t trust me. Rory looked at his eyes. One gold. One void. You always say the right things. I always tell the truth. The door rattled. A knock from the hallway. Rory’s head snapped toward the entrance. Her grip on the envelope tightened. Who’s that? Lucien turned his head. His cane tapped once. It’s too late. Rory moved toward the back exit. She grabbed her bag. She didn’t pick up the scrolls. Go, Rory. Not you. Lucien stayed still. He watched her. If you run, you’ll never come back. I have to. Rory moved to the back. She unlocked the window. The rain blew in, dampening her face. Lucien stepped in front of the desk. He didn’t block the door. He just stood there. If you leave, I won’t find you next time. Rory paused. Her hand on the window frame. Her fingernails dug into the wood. If I leave, you can’t save me. I don’t need to. Lucien smiled. It was cold. I just need to know you’re gone. Rory pulled the window up. The glass squealed. Rain washed over her hand. I’m gone. She climbed out. Lucien watched her go. He didn’t move. He didn’t turn around. The window closed behind her. Lucien turned back to the room. He looked at the envelope on the floor. He picked it up. He walked to the door. He checked the deadbolts. One by one. Then he left.
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cancelledfalse
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tokens_completion6466
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native_tokens_reasoning3805
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num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
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finish_reason"stop"
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provider_responses
0
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
88.65% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1762
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1762
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"dancing"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"throbbed"
count1
4
word"unreadable"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"predator"
count1
8
word"scanned"
count2
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"dancing"
1"weight"
2"silence"
3"throbbed"
4"unreadable"
5"familiar"
6"flickered"
7"predator"
8"scanned"
9"tension"
10"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences313
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences313
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences313
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1760
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions95
wordCount1760
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.82
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy5
Moreau1
Lucien31
Brick1
Lane1
Luc3
Rory32
Evan3
London1
You11
Tell3
One3
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Luc"
4"Rory"
5"Evan"
6"You"
7"One"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
globalScore0.591
windowScore0.333
90.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences125
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"papers that seemed to have migrated from the desk to the floor and back again"
1"looked like a library had collapsed"
2"smelled like wet rain and expensive tobacc"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1760
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences313
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs142
mean12.39
std13.16
cv1.062
sampleLengths
078
123
261
39
460
54
647
79
829
97
1033
119
1234
133
1410
1538
167
1727
1810
198
2031
2113
226
2328
243
2514
264
2736
2812
2927
306
3135
327
333
343
3526
369
373
3828
395
4057
413
423
4338
444
452
468
476
4824
497
99.66% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences313
matches
0"been worn"
1"was told"
2"was scuffed"
3"was gone"
4"gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs345
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences313
ratio0.003
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers without blinking."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1766
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount57
adverbRatio0.03227633069082673
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.00622876557191393
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences313
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences313
mean5.62
std3.66
cv0.652
sampleLengths
019
113
218
328
48
53
612
75
85
922
108
116
124
134
144
153
169
176
188
1912
209
2110
2215
234
246
254
263
2721
2813
298
301
317
3215
337
347
354
366
3715
388
395
404
414
4213
4317
443
453
467
4711
488
498
36.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats41
diversityRatio0.16932907348242812
totalSentences313
uniqueOpeners53
95.24% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount8
totalSentences280
matches
0"Then the middle one."
1"Then the latch."
2"Slowly, he withdrew a sealed"
3"Then get out."
4"Just a little."
5"Then I leave you to"
6"Then at Lucien."
7"Then he left."
ratio0.029
27.14% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount135
totalSentences280
matches
0"He didn’t meow."
1"She didn’t turn around immediately."
2"She walked toward the door,"
3"She paused, hand hovering over"
4"She turned the bolt."
5"She cracked the door open"
6"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
7"He leaned on an ivory-handled"
8"You look ridiculous, Lucien."
9"He didn’t step inside."
10"He didn’t speak."
11"I was told you’d be"
12"Her left wrist ached where"
13"She didn’t move out of"
14"I’m not open for business"
15"He shifted his weight."
16"He wore a pair of"
17"I don’t want a deal."
18"I want to talk."
19"He stood too close for"
ratio0.482
22.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount245
totalSentences280
matches
0"The brass knocker on the"
1"Rory froze, the stack of"
2"Sunlight cut through the dust"
3"Every surface groaned under the"
4"Ptolemy, the tabby, sat on"
5"He didn’t meow."
6"The cat just lifted his"
7"Rory set the scrolls down."
8"She didn’t turn around immediately."
9"She walked toward the door,"
10"She paused, hand hovering over"
11"She turned the bolt."
12"Metal scraped against metal."
13"She cracked the door open"
14"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
15"Water dripped from the brim"
16"The platinum blond hair slicked"
17"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
18"He leaned on an ivory-handled"
19"You look ridiculous, Lucien."
ratio0.875
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount7
totalSentences280
matches
0"If you don’t want it,"
1"Because Evan’s coming."
2"Because Evan isn’t human."
3"Because the trail leads back"
4"If you run, you’ll never"
5"If you leave, I won’t"
6"If I leave, you can’t"
ratio0.025
99.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Sunlight cut through the dust motes dancing above the piles of books that choked the living room floor."
1"She walked toward the door, her sneakers silent on the floorboards that had been worn smooth by Ptolemy’s claws over the years."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
88.4421%