Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBK0WCM1636C5809YCVTNC4

Run Details

Duration:
37.6s
Cost:
$0.002181
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Neon sign buzzed above the door, casting a sickly verdant glow onto the wet Soho pavement. Inside, the Raven’s Nest smelled of stale gin and old paper. Shadows stretched across the walls where black-and-white photographs of London’s skyline once hung. Silas sat in the back room, the heavy oak door ajar just enough to let a sliver of light cut across the map spread before him. He rubbed his left knee, the joint stiff from the cold draft that slipped through the room’s foundation. Aurora pushed through the main entrance. She shook rain from her black hair, strands plastered to her forehead. The bell above the door chimed, sharp and sudden. She scanned the room, eyes scanning the bar top, moving past the empty stools to the back where the air tasted of damp wool. Silas didn’t look up immediately. He kept his pen moving across the coordinates of a grid he couldn’t explain. His right hand, silver signet ring catching the low light, hovered over a file. He heard the floorboard groan under her weight. His hazel eyes lifted, tracking the movement. Rory stood framed in the doorway. The air shifted with the sudden pressure of a storm. He leaned back, the chair legs scraping against the floorboards. “You shouldn’t be here, Laila,” Silas said. The nickname hung between them, heavy. He hadn’t used it in a decade. He hadn’t seen her in that long either. “I needed smoke,” she replied. She pulled a package from her pocket, fingers trembling slightly. A cigarette. She lit it, her bright blue eyes fixed on the flame first, then on him. The ash burned her finger. She didn’t flinch. Silas reached for a bottle of whiskey. He poured two glasses, the liquid amber and thick. He set one on the table in front of her. The table was cluttered with ledgers and a dead cigar. “I asked for a drink,” she said. He slid the glass across the wood. Condensation beaded and trickled down the stem. “You got it.” She didn’t touch it. She leaned against the bookshelf, her spine pressing into the leather-bound spines. The fabric of her jacket was thin, offering little protection against the cold radiating from the walls. She looked older. The girl who fled Cardiff with a backpack and a headband was gone. This woman carried a weight in her shoulders that hadn’t been there before. “Evan,” Silas said. “Done.” “Did you kill him?” She exhaled a stream of grey smoke. The fire glinted in her irises. “No. He’s in prison. I didn’t need to break my hands to do that.” She tapped ash onto the floor, avoiding his gaze. Silas took a sip. The liquid burned his throat. He set the glass down. The silver ring turned on his right hand. “The police called.” “I know.” “They asked if you were still around here.” Rory looked at the scar on her left wrist. The crescent shape was pale, hidden under the sleeve of her coat. She pulled the sleeve down, exposing the flesh. “I told them I was dead.” The room went quiet. The neon outside flickered. Somewhere down the hall, a tap dripped water onto a bucket. Silas rubbed his knee again. The sound was audible over the hum of the fridge. “You’re not dead, Rory.” “Not to them. Maybe not to you.” Silas stood, the slight limp dragging his left leg across the tiles. He walked around the table. The map under his feet rustled. He stopped two feet from her. “You left without a word. No note. No signal.” He looked at her hands. They looked calloused now. “I thought you ended up worse off.” “A few years ago, maybe,” she said. “Now I’m just here.” “Here? The Nest?” “I live above you, Silas. I didn’t have to come down to find you.” He froze. The history of a relationship shifted in the silence. The years between them collapsed. He had known she was in the building, he just hadn’t seen her face. “I’ve been waiting for you to show,” he said. “I was tired.” He looked at the floor. The carpet was patterned with a labyrinth that didn’t match the maps on the wall. “Eva didn’t tell me you were gone either.” “She was busy living the life you taught her to survive.” Silas touched the rim of his glass. “You work for Yu-Fei? Yu-Fei Cheung?” “Part-time. Delivery.” Silas nodded. He turned away, picking up a pen. He capped and uncapped it. The mechanical click echoed. “He paid the rent?” “Yeah.” She took a sip of the whiskey. She grimaced, then swallowed. The liquid went down too fast. “Good for him.” Rory watched him. The back of his head showed the grey-streaked auburn hair. He looked less imposing now, more like a man who carried tired weight than a spy. “I didn’t know you were still here, Silas.” He turned, placing the pen against the file. “I never leave.” She walked forward. She ran a hand over the edge of the bookshelf. The books felt hard, bound in leather that had cracked with age. “I thought you were dead,” she said softly. “The Prague operation. The one that put this in your leg.” Silas flexed his left knee. He didn’t respond. He stepped back, the chair scraping again. “I should leave,” she said. “No. Sit.” “I don’t drink during the day.” “It’s night.” Rory looked at her watch. The face was scratched. The hands read past four. The light outside remained bright despite the hour. “It’s early morning.” Silas sat. He gestured to the chair opposite him. She remained standing. “You look like yourself,” she said. “Do I?” “You look like the man who told me to be careful of mirrors.” He rubbed his chin. The beard was neat, trimmed every week. “I said you need to watch what you reflect. You become what you project.” She laughed. It was a dry sound. She picked up the glass again. The condensation had soaked her fingertips. She wiped them on her trousers. “You changed,” Silas said. “Did I?” “The color of your eyes didn’t change. The hair grew out, then cut short. You have scars now. I didn’t see these ones.” “Life does that.” Silas leaned forward, resting his elbows on the table. The signet ring glared in the dim light. “Why did you come back? You were doing fine in the city.” “I wasn’t fine. I was hiding.” Silas sat back. He looked at the map spread across the wood. He ran a finger over a street in Prague. “Time moves, Rory. You move too. The city stays the same, but the people change.” She leaned against the shelf, crossing her arms. She looked at the ceiling, ignoring the dust settling on her eyelashes. “People disappear, Silas. I’m tired of finding new ones.” He picked up his glass. “You found me.” She took a breath. Her shoulders dropped. “I needed to know if you were still here to check on me.” “I always check.” “Why?” Silas looked at her, his expression unreadable. The hazel eyes held a depth she hadn’t seen in years. “Because I lost you once. I didn’t lose you forever.” Rory looked down at the floor. She saw her own reflection in the polished wood of the table. She looked tired. The blue of her eyes seemed darker now. She touched the scar on her wrist again. “Evan’s family still calls,” she said. Silas didn’t look up. He opened the file drawer and put the pen inside. “Let them die.” “I can’t do that.” “Then you aren’t dead either.” Rory sat down. The chair creaked under her weight. She placed the glass on the table. The whiskey sloshed. “I don’t know who I am anymore, Silas.” Silas closed his eyes for a moment. The silence stretched across the room, thin as a wire. He opened his eyes and stared at the map. “You know who you are,” he said. “You’re the one who survived.” Rory rubbed her wrist. The leather of her sleeve felt dry against her skin. She looked at him, searching for a lie. She didn’t find one. “I came back to ask for help,” she said. Silas nodded. He reached for the bottle and poured more whiskey. “I’m listening.” She didn’t reach for the glass. She stared at the liquid swirling in the bottom of the bowl. “The police want to talk to me again.” Silas stopped pouring. The bottle hovered in the air. His hand didn’t shake, but the sound of the pour stopped. He set the bottle back down. “Why?” “I think they found something.” Silas stood. He moved to the bookshelf. He ran his hand over the spines as if reading them backwards. “Where are they?” “Not yet.” Silas turned. His coat was unbuttoned, the shirt beneath crisp. The grey hair caught the light from the window. “Then don’t let them catch you.” “I can’t run forever, Silas.” He walked back to the table. He leaned against it, close to her. He smelled of tobacco and old paper. “You don’t run. You hide. You survive. Then you come back.” Rory looked at his hands. They were stained with ink and age. He wasn’t the same man he was ten years ago. He was the same man he was ten years ago. “I don’t think I can hide anymore,” she said. Silas looked at the signet ring. “Then you fight.” She shook her head. “I don’t know how.” He moved the glass in front of her. He didn’t move his eyes from her face. “Start with that.” Rory reached for the glass. The ice clinked. She lifted it. Her hand was steady. She drank. It tasted like the smoke on her tongue. Silas sat. He waited for her to finish. The room remained dark. The light from the window remained bright. The bar outside continued. The noise of the street filtered through the glass, a distant roar. She set the glass down. She wiped her mouth with the back of her hand. “I have to go.” Silas didn’t stop her. He watched her stand. Her shoes scuffed the floor. “Wait,” Silas said. She paused. He pointed to the door. “Don’t look back.” The neon sign flickered again. The sound was louder this time. Rory nodded. She turned. She walked past the table. She paused at the door, hand on the handle. “Is it true?” Silas didn’t answer. He picked up the pen again. He uncapped it. He wrote a single line on the map. Rory opened the door. The cool air from the hallway washed over her. She stepped out. The door clicked shut behind her. Silas didn’t look up. He didn’t write anything else. He just stared at the ink drying on the paper.
created_at"2026-02-25T23:44:20.378Z" 2/25/2026, 11:44:20 PM
model"qwen/qwen3.5-flash-20260224"
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cancelledfalse
latency536
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generation_time37463
tokens_prompt1094
tokens_completion5589
native_tokens_prompt1061
native_tokens_completion5187
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native_tokens_reasoning2685
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
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is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
usage0.0021809
router(null)
provider_responses
0
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latency536
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences80
tagDensity0.213
leniency0.425
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.45% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1801
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1801
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"weight"
count4
3
word"flickered"
count2
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"mechanical"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"imposing"
count1
8
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"scanning"
2"weight"
3"flickered"
4"silence"
5"mechanical"
6"echoed"
7"imposing"
8"unreadable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"room fell silent"
count1
highlights
0"The room went quiet"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences202
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences202
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences264
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1801
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
46.91% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1358
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.06
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
London1
Cardiff1
Silas28
Rory11
Prague1
persons
0"Nest"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
4"Prague"
globalScore0.469
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences112
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if reading them backwards"
1"tasted like the smoke on her tongue"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1801
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences264
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs111
mean16.23
std14.13
cv0.871
sampleLengths
084
151
248
326
47
521
640
736
87
917
1062
113
121
134
1436
1525
162
178
1835
1934
204
217
2229
2325
2411
253
2614
2730
289
293
3020
318
3211
3313
342
3522
3618
373
3829
398
4011
4125
4219
4315
445
452
466
472
4825
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences202
matches
0"was gone"
1"was patterned"
2"was unbuttoned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs260
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences264
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1362
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.021292217327459617
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.002936857562408223
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences264
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences264
mean6.82
std4.09
cv0.6
sampleLengths
016
111
213
326
418
56
612
79
824
95
1014
1114
128
137
146
1510
1610
177
186
197
208
215
2210
232
2415
255
263
277
289
2910
3010
317
327
337
343
354
3612
3717
383
3913
4013
413
421
434
447
456
4623
474
485
495
37.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats34
diversityRatio0.16287878787878787
totalSentences264
uniqueOpeners43
19.05% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences175
matches
0"Somewhere down the hall, a"
ratio0.006
2.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount95
totalSentences175
matches
0"He rubbed his left knee,"
1"She shook rain from her"
2"She scanned the room, eyes"
3"He kept his pen moving"
4"His right hand, silver signet"
5"He heard the floorboard groan"
6"His hazel eyes lifted, tracking"
7"He leaned back, the chair"
8"He hadn’t used it in"
9"He hadn’t seen her in"
10"She pulled a package from"
11"She lit it, her bright"
12"She didn’t flinch."
13"He poured two glasses, the"
14"He set one on the"
15"He slid the glass across"
16"She didn’t touch it."
17"She leaned against the bookshelf,"
18"She looked older."
19"She exhaled a stream of"
ratio0.543
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount173
totalSentences175
matches
0"Neon sign buzzed above the"
1"Shadows stretched across the walls"
2"Silas sat in the back"
3"He rubbed his left knee,"
4"Aurora pushed through the main"
5"She shook rain from her"
6"The bell above the door"
7"She scanned the room, eyes"
8"Silas didn’t look up immediately."
9"He kept his pen moving"
10"His right hand, silver signet"
11"He heard the floorboard groan"
12"His hazel eyes lifted, tracking"
13"Rory stood framed in the"
14"The air shifted with the"
15"He leaned back, the chair"
16"The nickname hung between them,"
17"He hadn’t used it in"
18"He hadn’t seen her in"
19"She pulled a package from"
ratio0.989
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences175
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He ran his hand over the spines as if reading them backwards."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences80
tagDensity0.175
leniency0.35
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.0504%