| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.536 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.11% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1125 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 2.22% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1125 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "fleeting" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "reminder" | | 5 | "cascading" | | 6 | "gloom" | | 7 | "beacon" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "comforting" | | 11 | "chill" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "etched" | | 14 | "shimmered" | | 15 | "silence" | | 16 | "unreadable" | | 17 | "vibrated" | | 18 | "stark" | | 19 | "tension" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1123 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.35% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 59 | | wordCount | 943 | | uniqueNames | 19 | | maxNameDensity | 2.33 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Aurora | 22 | | London | 4 | | Isolde | 8 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | December | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Shard | 1 | | Gherkin | 1 | | Thames | 1 | | Seer | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Fae-touched | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Varga" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Blade" | | 6 | "Veil" | | 7 | "Seer" | | 8 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "December" | | 4 | "Thames" |
| | globalScore | 0.334 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 69.35% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite remember, but tonight it prickled with the same static electricity that made the hair on her arms stand up" | | 1 | "seemed woven from twilight itself" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 4.452 | | wordCount | 1123 | | matches | | 0 | "not an adventurer in a pocket dimension, but the pendant burned hotter now, a beacon in the cold" | | 1 | "not a door opening, but a pressure change" | | 2 | "not black, but a deep, bruised purple, streaked with ribbons of bioluminesc" | | 3 | "not the purple sky, but the London skyline she had left behind" | | 4 | "not a shadow like Nyx, but something solid, fleshy" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 32.09 | | std | 16.83 | | cv | 0.525 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 50 | | 2 | 57 | | 3 | 55 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 53 | | 6 | 37 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 66 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 52 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 39 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 53 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 35 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 39 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 41 | | 32 | 32 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 35 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 164 | | matches | | |
| 22.56% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 95 | | ratio | 0.042 | | matches | | 0 | "The wind in Richmond Park did not howl; it held its breath." | | 1 | "She did not walk so much as glide; the frost on the grass remained undisturbed beneath her bare feet." | | 2 | "They were vibrant, defiant things—bluebells and foxgloves blooming in a riot of color against the purple grass." | | 3 | "From the edge of the grove, a shape emerged—not a shadow like Nyx, but something solid, fleshy, and wrong." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 950 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.023157894736842106 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008421052631578947 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 95 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 95 | | mean | 11.82 | | std | 6.39 | | cv | 0.54 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 41.40% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.30526315789473685 | | totalSentences | 95 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 43.86% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, the unease shifted to" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 98.95% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the collar of" | | 1 | "It was a childhood mark," | | 2 | "She stood ten paces ahead," | | 3 | "She did not walk so" | | 4 | "They were taller than Aurora," | | 5 | "Their eyes, faintly glowing violet," | | 6 | "She was a delivery driver" | | 7 | "She stepped forward, following Isolde" | | 8 | "They were no longer in" | | 9 | "They were vibrant, defiant things—bluebells" | | 10 | "It felt spongy, alive." | | 11 | "She watched Isolde's feet again." | | 12 | "She checked her watch." | | 13 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 14 | "It pulsed faster now, reacting" | | 15 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 16 | "It was a mirror image," | | 17 | "She looked tired." | | 18 | "She gasped, stumbling back." | | 19 | "She raised a hand, palm" |
| | ratio | 0.303 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "The wind in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter stood at the" | | 2 | "Tonight, it hummed." | | 3 | "A faint, rhythmic thrumming traveled" | | 4 | "She adjusted the collar of" | | 5 | "It was a childhood mark," | | 6 | "Isolde Varga said" | | 7 | "She stood ten paces ahead," | | 8 | "She did not walk so" | | 9 | "Aurora glanced at the shadow" | | 10 | "Nyx hovered there, a humanoid" | | 11 | "They were taller than Aurora," | | 12 | "Their eyes, faintly glowing violet," | | 13 | "The voice didn't come from" | | 14 | "Aurora said, her voice steady" | | 15 | "She was a delivery driver" | | 16 | "Isolde turned, her pale lavender" | | 17 | "Aurora took a breath, the" | | 18 | "She stepped forward, following Isolde" | | 19 | "The transition was not a" |
| | ratio | 0.947 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 20.91% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stood at the base of the ancient oak standing stones, her breath pluming in the winter air, white and fleeting." | | 1 | "A faint, rhythmic thrumming traveled down the silver chain, warming the skin of her collarbone, syncing with the pulse in her throat." | | 2 | "She stood ten paces ahead, her silver hair cascading over shoulders draped in a cloak that seemed woven from twilight itself." | | 3 | "Isolde turned, her pale lavender eyes reflecting the moonlight that shouldn't have been visible through the London smog." | | 4 | "The cold of the London winter vanished, replaced by a humid warmth that smelled of blooming jasmine and wet earth." | | 5 | "The sky above was not black, but a deep, bruised purple, streaked with ribbons of bioluminescent moss that drifted like clouds." | | 6 | "The silence was heavy, broken only by the sound of their own breathing and the occasional chime of a wind that didn't blow." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora said, her voice steady despite the unease coiling in her gut" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured, the whisper brushing against Aurora's neck" | | 2 | "Aurora said, her voice cutting through the rising tension" |
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| 16.67% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 15 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" | | 3 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.536 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.267 | | effectiveRatio | 0.267 | |