Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBK4KDX0Q25RJCHA1NTXS2F

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Duration:
1m 5s
Cost:
$0.040500
Provider:
Alibaba

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked into place with a heavy, metallic thud. Aurora shoved her shoulder against the door, feeling the wood tremble under the pressure of the hallway air. She turned the key, locked the second, and reached for the first. A fist hammered against the wood. She froze. Her hand hovered over the final lock. The cat, Ptolemy, hissed from the corner of the room, his fur bristling like a rusty wire brush. "Open the door, Rory. You know I don't knock twice." The voice came through the grain, smooth and familiar, wrapped in a French accent that usually made her knees weak. Now it made her stomach tighten. She didn't move. "Go away, Lucien." "The night is dangerous for a woman alone in this part of London. Especially one with your particular scent." She unlocked the first bolt. Then the second. She hesitated at the third. If she opened it, he would be inside. If she didn't, he would break it down. She chose the door. She pulled it open. Lucien stood there, filling the narrow hallway. He wore a tailored charcoal suit that cost more than her monthly rent. His platinum hair was slicked back, not a strand out of place. The ivory handle of his cane gleamed under the flickering hallway light. One eye was amber, burning like a coal; the other was black, swallowing the light. "You look terrible," he said, stepping past her without waiting for an invitation. The smell of expensive cologne and old blood hit her before he did. It mixed with the stale curry fumes rising from the shop below. He moved with a predator's grace, his boots silent on the worn floorboards. "I was sleeping," she said, closing the door behind him. She threw the bolts again, her hands shaking slightly. "You have three seconds to explain why you're here before I call the police." "Police?" He laughed, a low, dark sound. He walked to the centre of the cramped room, surrounded by stacks of books and scrolls. "They are not the problem tonight, darling. They are the distraction." He turned to face her. The heterochromatic gaze pinned her against the wall. She crossed her arms, hiding the small crescent scar on her left wrist. "Distraction for what?" "For this." He reached into his jacket pocket. She flinched. He pulled out a silver cigarette case. Not a weapon. A case. He popped it open. Empty. "I lost my lighter," he said. "And I need a light." "You're not smoking in here." "I am not smoking." He snapped the case shut. "I am hiding something." He tossed the case onto the table. It landed with a clatter. Ptolemy jumped off the sofa and vanished under the bed. "Since when do you hide things from me?" she asked. Her voice sounded thin, brittle. "Since you stopped trusting me." He stepped closer. The air grew heavy, charged with static. "Since you ran to Cardiff. Since you took that name, that life, that *man*." "Evan is gone." "Is he?" Lucien tilted his head. "Gone or dead?" "Does it matter?" "It matters to me." He reached out, his fingers brushing the scar on her wrist. His touch was cold, burning like ice. "You left me in Marseille. You left me to deal with the Avaros delegation alone." "I had to save myself." "You always were a selfish creature." His voice dropped, rough with a hunger that had nothing to do with food. "But you are still mine to protect. Even when you are being an idiot." "I don't need your protection." "You do." He leaned in, his lips inches from her ear. "They know you are here. The ones who sent the fire to your flat in Cardiff. The ones who burned your father's office." Her breath hitched. "How did you find me?" "I have my ways." He pulled back, his expression hardening. "And I am not the only one." A thud shook the building. Not a knock. A heavy impact against the front door downstairs. The wood of the front door groaned. Lucien moved instantly. He drew the thin blade from his cane. The metal hissed as it slid from the ivory handle. "Stay behind me," he ordered. "No." She grabbed his arm. "I am not hiding." "You will die." "I will fight." The door downstairs splintered. A shout echoed up the stairwell. Heavy boots pounded on the wood. "Open it," Lucien said, his eyes narrowing. "Or they will break it down." "Who are they?" "Cleaners." He looked at her, the amber eye glowing faintly in the dim light. "They do not leave witnesses." Another crash. The front door gave way. Shouts erupted from the hallway below. "Upstairs," Lucien said, pushing her toward the bedroom. "No." She pulled away. "We run out the back." "There is no back." He grabbed her waist, lifting her slightly off the ground. "The only exit is the fire escape. And it is blocked." "Then we fight." "We fight." He smiled, a cruel, beautiful thing. "But you will follow my lead." The footsteps on the stairs grew louder. Three sets. Heavy, rhythmic. "Where is the weapon?" he asked. "In the kitchen." "Bring it." She ran to the kitchen, grabbing the heavy cast iron skillet. She returned to find him standing in the doorway, the blade extended, his posture relaxed. "Give me the skillet," he said. "It is heavy." "Exactly." He took it from her hand. "Good weight. Good balance." The footsteps stopped at the top of the stairs. Silence filled the flat. "Come out," a voice called from the hallway. "We know you are in there." Lucien looked at her. "Ready?" "Ready." He kicked the door open. Three men stood in the hallway, dressed in black tactical gear. They raised their weapons. "Drop it," the leader said. Lucien smiled. "I think not." He moved faster than the eye could follow. The skillet flew from his hand, hitting the leader in the face. The man crumpled. Lucien lunged, his blade flashing in the light. Aurora grabbed the heavy book from the table. The second man fired. The bullet shattered the window behind them. Glass rained down on the floor. "Run!" Lucien shouted, shoving her toward the window. She didn't run. She swung the book at the third man. It connected with his temple. He staggered. Lucien spun, kicking the second man's leg. The man fell. The leader recovered. He pulled a knife. "Enough," he growled. He charged. Lucien parried. The blade met the knife with a spark. They locked eyes. "Your friend," the leader spat. "She is weak." "She is dangerous," Lucien corrected. The leader kicked Lucien in the chest. Lucien stumbled back, hitting the wall. Aurora grabbed the broken glass from the window. "Get down!" she yelled. She threw the glass. It hit the leader in the neck. He screamed, clutching his throat. Lucien finished him with a swift strike. Silence returned. They stood amidst the debris. Blood stained the carpet. The smell of copper filled the air. "Good throw," Lucien said, wiping his blade. "Shut up," she panted. He sheathed the blade. He looked at the window. "We need to move. Now." "Why?" "Because the police are coming. And they are not the ones we want to see." He grabbed her hand. His grip was firm, unyielding. "Where are we going?" "Somewhere safe." "There is no safe." "Then we make it." He pulled her toward the fire escape. The sirens wailed in the distance. "Jump," he said. "What?" "Jump. I will catch you." She looked at the drop. It was twenty feet. "Trust me." She looked into his eyes. The amber one burned. The black one held her. She jumped. He caught her. They hit the metal grating of the fire escape. The metal groaned. "Go," he said, pushing her up the ladder. She climbed. He followed. Behind them, the door to the flat burst open. Gunfire erupted. Bullets sparked against the metal railing. "Keep moving," he shouted over the noise. They climbed into the night. The city lights blurred below. "Where are we going?" she asked again. "Home," he said. "It is not safe." "It is now." He pulled her closer. His hand rested on her waist. "Stay close." "I am." "Good." They reached the roof. The wind whipped their hair. "Over there," he pointed to the next building. "Can we make it?" "We have to." He looked at her. "If we fall, I will catch you." "I know." He took her hand. They ran. The gap between the buildings was wide. "Jump," he said. She didn't hesitate. She jumped. He followed. They landed on the roof of the next building. They rolled. They stood up. "Safe," he said. "For now." He looked at her. "You did well." "I had help." "Always." He stepped closer. "We are not done." "No." "Tonight is just the beginning." "Then let it begin." He kissed her. Hard. Desperate. The sirens grew louder. They broke apart. "Run," he said. They ran into the dark. The city swallowed them whole.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags42
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"He pulled back [back]"
1"She pulled away [away]"
2"she asked again [again]"
dialogueSentences108
tagDensity0.389
leniency0.778
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.056
93.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1507
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1507
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"predator"
count1
3
word"charged"
count2
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count2
6
word"rhythmic"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"silence"
count2
9
word"shattered"
count1
10
word"amidst"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"stomach"
2"predator"
3"charged"
4"echoed"
5"footsteps"
6"rhythmic"
7"weight"
8"silence"
9"shattered"
10"amidst"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences186
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences186
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences252
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1507
ratio0.001
matches
0"man"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions29
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1064
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.5
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy2
French1
Lucien16
Aurora3
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Lucien"
2"Aurora"
places
0"French"
globalScore0.748
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1507
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences252
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs152
mean9.91
std9.77
cv0.986
sampleLengths
041
16
227
310
429
53
619
733
84
959
1013
1138
1233
1334
1426
153
168
172
1817
1911
205
2113
2222
2315
2429
253
269
273
2837
295
3034
315
3234
338
3417
3523
3621
375
389
393
403
4116
4213
433
4419
4513
468
479
4825
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences186
matches
0"was slicked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs231
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences252
ratio0.004
matches
0"One eye was amber, burning like a coal; the other was black, swallowing the light."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1064
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.017857142857142856
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005639097744360902
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences252
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences252
mean5.98
std3.98
cv0.666
sampleLengths
011
118
212
36
42
57
618
710
820
96
103
113
1219
135
143
155
168
178
184
194
207
2113
2212
2312
2415
2513
2613
2712
2813
2910
309
3114
327
3316
3411
355
368
3713
383
398
402
417
423
432
444
451
466
475
485
499
45.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.3134920634920635
totalSentences252
uniqueOpeners79
22.22% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences150
matches
0"Then the second."
ratio0.007
4.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount81
totalSentences150
matches
0"She turned the key, locked"
1"Her hand hovered over the"
2"She didn't move."
3"She unlocked the first bolt."
4"She hesitated at the third."
5"She chose the door."
6"She pulled it open."
7"He wore a tailored charcoal"
8"His platinum hair was slicked"
9"he said, stepping past her"
10"It mixed with the stale"
11"He moved with a predator's"
12"she said, closing the door"
13"She threw the bolts again,"
14"He laughed, a low, dark"
15"He walked to the centre"
16"He turned to face her."
17"She crossed her arms, hiding"
18"He reached into his jacket"
19"He pulled out a silver"
ratio0.54
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount139
totalSentences150
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked into"
1"Aurora shoved her shoulder against"
2"She turned the key, locked"
3"A fist hammered against the"
4"Her hand hovered over the"
5"The cat, Ptolemy, hissed from"
6"The voice came through the"
7"She didn't move."
8"She unlocked the first bolt."
9"She hesitated at the third."
10"She chose the door."
11"She pulled it open."
12"Lucien stood there, filling the"
13"He wore a tailored charcoal"
14"His platinum hair was slicked"
15"The ivory handle of his"
16"he said, stepping past her"
17"The smell of expensive cologne"
18"It mixed with the stale"
19"He moved with a predator's"
ratio0.927
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences150
matches
0"Now it made her stomach"
1"If she opened it, he"
2"If she didn't, he would"
ratio0.02
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
77.38% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags42
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"He reached out, his fingers brushing the scar on her wrist"
1"He pulled back, his expression hardening"
2"Lucien said, his eyes narrowing"
3"He looked, the amber eye glowing faintly in the dim light"
57.41% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags28
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"He laughed (laugh)"
1"He snapped (snap)"
2"he ordered (order)"
3"Lucien shouted (shout)"
4"he growled (growl)"
5"the leader spat (spit)"
6"Lucien corrected (correct)"
7"she yelled (yell)"
8"she panted (pant)"
9"he shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences108
tagDensity0.259
leniency0.519
rawRatio0.357
effectiveRatio0.185
81.7941%