| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 93.34% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1501 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 13.39% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1501 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "gloom" | | 1 | "footsteps" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "lilt" | | 4 | "could feel" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "chill" | | 7 | "velvet" | | 8 | "scanning" | | 9 | "calculate" | | 10 | "navigate" | | 11 | "pulsed" | | 12 | "warmth" | | 13 | "shimmered" | | 14 | "sense of" | | 15 | "echoing" | | 16 | "perfect" | | 17 | "unreadable" | | 18 | "measured" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 138 | | matches | | |
| 60.04% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 138 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 138 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1498 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Time moves differently inside, Isolde said." | | 1 | "The shadows in here are wrong, Nyx murmured." | | 2 | "We are close, Isolde said, her voice echoing without traveling through the air." | | 3 | "That is the Veil looking back, Isolde said." | | 4 | "too much, Aurora said." | | 5 | "Dymas, Nyx whispered." | | 6 | "We are at the boundary, Isolde said, her voice devoid of fear." | | 7 | "We leave, Isolde said." |
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| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 77 | | wordCount | 1498 | | uniqueNames | 21 | | maxNameDensity | 1.27 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 9 | | Isolde | 12 | | Half-Fae | 2 | | Aurora | 19 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Grove | 6 | | Seer | 2 | | Veil | 4 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Fae | 7 | | Shade | 3 | | November | 1 | | Rory | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Half-Fae" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Blade" | | 5 | "Grove" | | 6 | "Seer" | | 7 | "Veil" | | 8 | "Fae" | | 9 | "Shade" | | 10 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 0.866 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 76.47% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 102 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "expression that seemed to weigh their souls rather than their bodies" | | 1 | "quite reach those lavender eyes" | | 2 | "felt like it was generated inside their" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.668 | | wordCount | 1498 | | matches | | 0 | "not in hours, but in the weight of the secrets they took with them" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 37.45 | | std | 24.35 | | cv | 0.65 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 94 | | 1 | 38 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 69 | | 4 | 38 | | 5 | 61 | | 6 | 50 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 59 | | 10 | 56 | | 11 | 77 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 47 | | 15 | 98 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 45 | | 19 | 53 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 34 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 97 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 44 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 54 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 38 |
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| 97.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | 0 | "were lost" | | 1 | "was generated" | | 2 | "was displaced" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 262 | | matches | | 0 | "were standing" | | 1 | "was burning" |
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| 80.75% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 138 | | ratio | 0.022 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers that should have died in November bloomed in riotous bursts of color—crimson, gold, and violet—pulsating faintly with light." | | 1 | "The boundary between Earth and the Fae realm was not just a line; it was a bridge, and they were standing on it." | | 2 | "The water in the pool settled, showing Aurora’s face once more—human, tired, blue-eyed." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1509 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "heavier, pressing against Aurora’s" |
| | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.027833001988071572 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007952286282306162 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 138 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 138 | | mean | 10.86 | | std | 6.83 | | cv | 0.629 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 29 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 36.96% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 18 | | diversityRatio | 0.26811594202898553 | | totalSentences | 138 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 99.50% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | | 0 | "too much, Aurora said." | | 1 | "Sometimes it opens." | | 2 | "Sometimes it closes." | | 3 | "Then we finish this walk." |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 85.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 45 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | | 0 | "They existed in a silhouette" | | 1 | "Their eyes held a faint," | | 2 | "She wore no footsteps, only" | | 3 | "You’re thinking too loud for" | | 4 | "It is a breath held" | | 5 | "She could feel the weight" | | 6 | "It hummed faintly, a vibration" | | 7 | "I can taste the old" | | 8 | "It tastes like copper and" | | 9 | "Their tops were lost in" | | 10 | "It yielded without resistance, soft" | | 11 | "I feel like I’m walking" | | 12 | "She turned, her pale lavender" | | 13 | "It moved a hundred years," | | 14 | "She suppressed it." | | 15 | "She was a cool-headed woman," | | 16 | "It was order, ancient and" | | 17 | "She touched the chain around" | | 18 | "It hadn't warmed up near" | | 19 | "They leaned closer to Isolde." |
| | ratio | 0.336 | |
| 42.09% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 112 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the tree" | | 1 | "Aurora drew her coat tighter" | | 2 | "They existed in a silhouette" | | 3 | "Their eyes held a faint," | | 4 | "The Half-Fae’s silver hair flowed" | | 5 | "She wore no footsteps, only" | | 6 | "You’re thinking too loud for" | | 7 | "The boundary here is not" | | 8 | "It is a breath held" | | 9 | "Aurora checked the small crescent" | | 10 | "She could feel the weight" | | 11 | "The moonsilver was always cold" | | 12 | "It hummed faintly, a vibration" | | 13 | "The sound seemed to come" | | 14 | "I can taste the old" | | 15 | "It tastes like copper and" | | 16 | "This is the Grove." | | 17 | "The Seer stopped in front" | | 18 | "Their tops were lost in" | | 19 | "This is where the Veil" |
| | ratio | 0.836 | |
| 74.63% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | | 0 | "If you are a part" | | 1 | "If you are not, they" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | technicalSentenceCount | 17 | | matches | | 0 | "They existed in a silhouette of living shadow, shifting subtly at the edges like smoke caught in a draft, their height towering at over six feet even in their s…" | | 1 | "You’re thinking too loud for the trees to listen, Aurora, Isolde said, her voice carrying the melodic lilt of a riddle." | | 2 | "It hummed faintly, a vibration in the bone that whispered of wards and things that needed cutting." | | 3 | "The amber sunlight filtering through the branches of Richmond Park outside seemed to drain away, replaced by a pale, ethereal luminescence that didn't cast a sh…" | | 4 | "I feel like I’m walking through a memory, she said, her voice dropping to match the quiet." | | 5 | "She turned, her pale lavender eyes scanning them with an expression that seemed to weigh their souls rather than their bodies." | | 6 | "She was a cool-headed woman, a delivery girl from London who had escaped abuse and learned to navigate chaos with her brain." | | 7 | "Nyx stood slightly to her right, casting a long, jagged shadow that pooled on the ground even though no single light source illuminated it clearly." | | 8 | "The Shade shifted, their solid form hardening and softening in a rhythm that made Aurora’s eyes water." | | 9 | "The air hummed with a low frequency, a sound that felt like it was generated inside their skulls." | | 10 | "It shimmered, a visible distortion in the air like heat haze off asphalt, but with a color that was too rich, too deep." | | 11 | "We are close, Isolde said, her voice echoing without traveling through the air." | | 12 | "Behind them, Nyx trailed, their form dissolving into a thin wisp of grey vapor before coalescing into their humanoid shape again to catch up." | | 13 | "It reflected Aurora’s own face, but distorted, as if viewed through oil or water that had not yet settled." | | 14 | "The water rippled without cause, showing a version of her eyes that were bright blue, but the hair behind her was white." | | 15 | "The Heartstone on her chest pulsed with a rhythm that matched the heartbeat of the pool." | | 16 | "The air shimmered violently for a second, a tear opening in the corner of her vision, revealing a glimpse of a sky that was burning amber." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |