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Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBK834K49VBDDA2848QTRP2
Run Details
Model:
Qwen 3.5 35B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
45.7s
Cost:
$0.012886
Provider:
Alibaba
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
96.24%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
36.04%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
0.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
99.78%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
36.17%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
24.88%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
91.84%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
79.2980%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The brass handle twisted under
pressure. Three deadbolts snapped back in a rhythm of cold steel against metal.
Aurora stood frozen, a heavy
iron poker gripped in her right hand.
The air in the flat
smelled of stale curry and old paper.
She had not heard the
footsteps
climbing the stairs. She never heard
footsteps
. The
silence
belonged to her. Lucien stepped through the gap.
He wore a tailored charcoal
suit that cost more than the building.
His platinum blond hair lay
slick against his skull. One amber eye fixed on her, the other black as oil.
The ivory handle of his
cane glinted in the dim corridor light that spilled into her home.
The door clicked shut behind
him.
Aurora did not lower the
poker. "Why are you here?"
Lucien placed a gloved hand
on the jamb.
He looked at the deadbolts
like they were a personal insult. "I came to ask a question." "Ask it." "Did Evan find you?"
The name hung in the
room. Heavy. Poisonous.
The tabby cat Ptolemy hissed
from the corner of the sofa, his fur standing on end. Lucien ignored the animal. He walked across the room, his boots quiet on the wood.
He stopped three feet from
Aurora.
He smelled of rain and
expensive cologne and something metallic. Blood? No. Ozone. "He is dead." Aurora exhaled. Her hand
trembled
, then stilled. She lowered the poker. "You do not know that." "I know the man who sent me knows everything. You know me." He leaned forward. The distance between them compressed until she
could feel
the heat radiating from his suit. "I want the file." "The file is gone." Lucien tilted his head. His expression remained
unreadable
. He did not blink. "The file is never gone. Files are objects. You can bury objects. You can burn objects." "I burnt the only copy." He smiled.
It did not reach his
eyes. "Fire destroys paper. It does not destroy data. You have a cloud backup. You have a server key." "I do not." Lucien took a step closer. Aurora stood her ground. She was five foot six. He was five foot eleven. But she did not step back. The flat felt smaller than the books piled on the shelves. The scrolls were everywhere. Tapes and tapes of research notes cluttered the table. This was her
sanctuary
. It was also her prison. "Give me the key." "I do not have it." "You have it because you are not stupid enough to leave it behind. You are not stupid enough to leave it anywhere."
He reached into his jacket
. Aurora tensed, fingers tightening around the poker.
He pulled out a silver
coin. He flipped it. It caught the light. "What is this?" "It is the key to the deposit box. You have the box, but you do not have the code." Aurora stared at the coin. It was heavy in his palm. "How do you know about the box?" "I know about everything that happens in this city. I am the information broker. You should know this." "I know you are a fixer." "Fixer. Broker. Names matter less than function." He held out the coin. It bounced once, then sat flat in his palm. "Hand it over. The coin. And I leave." "You will not leave." He did not answer immediately. He looked at the cat. Ptolemy
was crouching
low. The hair on his tail bristled. "You are afraid of me." "I am afraid of what you bring." "Bringing is simple. Taking is simple." Lucien stepped into her space. He smelled like ozone again. Static electricity made the hair on her arms stand up. She took a breath. "The box was stolen." Lucien's
eyes narrowed
. "Who stole it?" "The man who owns this city." A
silence
stretched. The cat stopped hissing. He watched them both. Lucien did not move. His breathing was shallow. He
calculated
angles. "Who owns the city?" "Silas." Lucien’s mouth opened
slightly
. He closed it. "Silas runs the bar below your flat. He is a demon. He runs the underworld." Lucien took a step back. His hand drifted to his cane. "He has no jurisdiction over East London." "Silas is above jurisdiction." Aurora set the poker down on the table. The metal screeched against wood. "He is the landlord." Lucien looked around the room. He looked at the books. He looked at the stacks of paper. He looked at her. "You live in a prison." "I live in a flat." "You live in a cage that has a demon as a guard." "It is safe." "It is a tomb." The lights
flickered
. Aurora looked up at the bulb. It buzzed, then dimmed. The room plunged into shadow. Lucien’s amber eye reflected the streetlight filtering through the dirty window. "Did you do that?" "No." A noise came from the corridor. Footsteps. Heavy. Deliberate. Lucien moved first. He blocked her view of the door. He held his cane horizontally like a sword. "Hide." Aurora did not move. "I am not hiding." "Hide." His voice was sharp. It commanded obedience. "I am done hiding." The
footsteps
stopped outside the door. A hand hit the wood. Hard. It shook the frame. "Rory." The voice was male. It was deep. It
vibrated
through the door. Lucien turned his head. His amber eye gleamed. "That is not your name." "It is." The door handle jiggled. The lock groaned. "Someone is trying to open it," Lucien said. "It is locked." "It is a deadbolt. It is a suggestion." The lock clicked. Lucien drew the blade from his cane. The steel slid out with a hiss. He stood between Aurora and the wood. "Who is that?" "I do not know." "The
footsteps
." "Human." "The smell." Aurora stepped forward. She could smell it too. Iron. Copper. Old sweat. It smelled like Evan. It
smelled like the past she had left behind
. "Go out the window." "I do not climb." "You live here." "I do not climb." "Then I leave." The door burst open. Lucien did not wait. He spun, his blade swinging. A shadow fell across the threshold. The shadow had a gun. The barrel was black. It glinted under the dim streetlight. "Drop it." Lucien did not drop it. He lunged. Aurora heard the gun cock. She heard the blade cut air. She heard the breath leave the intruder. She looked at the intruder. The man wore a dark coat. He wore a mask. "No," Lucien said. He was closer to Aurora than the man. "Behind you," the man said. Lucien looked over his shoulder. The amber eye was wide. Aurora felt the floor shift. The bookshelf behind her tipped. It crashed down. Dust filled the air. She coughed. She turned. The bookshelf
was gone
. The back door was open. "Go," Lucien shouted. She ran. She grabbed the poker. She swung it at the man. He caught her wrist. His hand was cold. Ice. He squeezed. Her wrist screamed. The scar on her left arm
throbbed
. She dropped the poker. He pulled her forward. He pulled her toward the door. He pushed her out into the corridor. Lucien stood in the doorway. He held the blade. He held the intruder back. "Go," he said. Aurora looked at the blade. She looked at Lucien. She looked at the man holding her. The intruder smiled. His teeth were sharp. Too sharp. "Run," Lucien said. Aurora ran. She ran down the corridor. She ran past the cat. She ran past the books. She ran until her feet hit the pavement. Lucien’s voice
echoed
behind her. "Wait for me." The street was empty. The lights
flickered
. The man
was gone
. Lucien
was gone
. Aurora turned back. The door opened. A man stood there. He had a gun. He had a blade. He had a smile. "Rory," he said. "Who are you?" "I am the man who stole the file." He raised the gun. He pointed it at her head. The sound of the trigger pulled.
created_at
"2026-02-25T23:48:16.668Z"
2/25/2026, 11:48:16 PM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
11
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
73
tagDensity
0.151
leniency
0.301
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
96.24%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1329
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
highlights
0
"slightly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
36.04%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1329
totalAiIsms
17
found
0
word
"footsteps"
count
5
1
word
"silence"
count
2
2
word
"trembled"
count
1
3
word
"could feel"
count
1
4
word
"unreadable"
count
1
5
word
"sanctuary"
count
1
6
word
"calculated"
count
1
7
word
"flickered"
count
2
8
word
"vibrated"
count
1
9
word
"throbbed"
count
1
10
word
"echoed"
count
1
highlights
0
"footsteps"
1
"silence"
2
"trembled"
3
"could feel"
4
"unreadable"
5
"sanctuary"
6
"calculated"
7
"flickered"
8
"vibrated"
9
"throbbed"
10
"echoed"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
192
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
192
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
253
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
27
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1329
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
9
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
0.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
47
wordCount
952
uniqueNames
4
maxNameDensity
2.73
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
5
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy
2
Aurora
18
Evan
1
Lucien
26
persons
0
"Ptolemy"
1
"Aurora"
2
"Evan"
3
"Lucien"
places
(empty)
globalScore
0.134
windowScore
0
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
56
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"smelled like the past she had left behind"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1329
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
253
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
118
mean
11.26
std
12.01
cv
1.066
sampleLengths
0
60
1
5
2
49
3
6
4
6
5
4
6
19
7
6
8
2
9
4
10
58
11
3
12
11
13
5
14
12
15
18
16
4
17
4
18
28
19
5
20
8
21
18
22
3
23
58
24
4
25
5
26
47
27
3
28
19
29
11
30
7
31
18
32
6
33
29
34
4
35
20
36
5
37
7
38
30
39
4
40
6
41
6
42
22
43
4
44
1
45
7
46
15
47
18
48
21
49
21
99.78%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
3
totalSentences
192
matches
0
"was gone"
1
"was gone"
2
"was gone"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
202
matches
0
"was crouching"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
253
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
952
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"lay slick against his"
adverbCount
19
adverbRatio
0.01995798319327731
lyAdverbCount
3
lyAdverbRatio
0.0031512605042016808
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
253
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
253
mean
5.25
std
3.49
cv
0.665
sampleLengths
0
6
1
12
2
12
3
12
4
9
5
4
6
5
7
5
8
12
9
9
10
11
11
17
12
6
13
6
14
4
15
8
16
11
17
6
18
2
19
4
20
6
21
1
22
1
23
16
24
4
25
11
26
6
27
10
28
1
29
1
30
1
31
3
32
2
33
5
34
4
35
5
36
12
37
3
38
15
39
4
40
4
41
4
42
4
43
4
44
16
45
5
46
2
47
6
48
18
49
3
36.17%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
35
diversityRatio
0.21739130434782608
totalSentences
253
uniqueOpeners
55
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
164
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
24.88%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
80
totalSentences
164
matches
0
"She had not heard the"
1
"She never heard footsteps."
2
"He wore a tailored charcoal"
3
"His platinum blond hair lay"
4
"He looked at the deadbolts"
5
"He walked across the room,"
6
"He stopped three feet from"
7
"He smelled of rain and"
8
"Her hand trembled, then stilled."
9
"She lowered the poker."
10
"He leaned forward."
11
"His expression remained unreadable."
12
"He did not blink."
13
"It did not reach his"
14
"She was five foot six."
15
"He was five foot eleven."
16
"It was also her prison."
17
"He reached into his jacket"
18
"He pulled out a silver"
19
"He flipped it."
ratio
0.488
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
161
totalSentences
164
matches
0
"The brass handle twisted under"
1
"Aurora stood frozen, a heavy"
2
"The air in the flat"
3
"She had not heard the"
4
"She never heard footsteps."
5
"The silence belonged to her."
6
"Lucien stepped through the gap."
7
"He wore a tailored charcoal"
8
"His platinum blond hair lay"
9
"The ivory handle of his"
10
"The door clicked shut behind"
11
"Aurora did not lower the"
12
"Lucien placed a gloved hand"
13
"He looked at the deadbolts"
14
"The name hung in the"
15
"The tabby cat Ptolemy hissed"
16
"Lucien ignored the animal."
17
"He walked across the room,"
18
"He stopped three feet from"
19
"He smelled of rain and"
ratio
0.982
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
164
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
91.84%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
14
technicalSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"The ivory handle of his cane glinted in the dim corridor light that spilled into her home."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
11
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
7
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"Lucien shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences
73
tagDensity
0.096
leniency
0.192
rawRatio
0.143
effectiveRatio
0.027
79.2980%